What hurts the most. [[One-Shot.]] - Page 2

Originally posted by: chweetu

Nirmoohi...good way of telling d story..😳loved it..😊but kesu died..🥺

nirmohi dont do this to us its like ek tha raja ek thi raani mar gaya raaja khatam kahani...bring him back to life...plz continue sounds so interesting even my FF is liked by 12-15 ppl but still i didnt gave up...just continue with ur OS...its such painful and heartbreaking story...and if u want to kill anyone kill vasant or talli see cv has killed him i have killed him he wont mind if u kill him third time...plz continue

Originally posted by: Gulaalfreak

Thank you Rimjhim! =D and now you know im amazing. :'] I can do anything. 😳 lmfao. okay. OTT there. I killed him off because the tone of the One Shot is meant to be sad and depressing. And to make it even more ":O" I killed him off. ahaha. Awww, the love for Kesar is amazing to see. How am I meant to bring him back in a one shot? part 1 and then 2? :S maybe. :P ahhaa. I don't want it to be a typical indian soap. Ohhh he comes back alive. and everyone rolls their eyes. ;)

Oh and do you like my dp now? ;)

neil= HOT

Originally posted by: arti07

nirmohi dont do this to us its like ek tha raja ek thi raani mar gaya raaja khatam kahani...bring him back to life...plz continue sounds so interesting even my FF is liked by 12-15 ppl but still i didnt gave up...just continue with ur OS...its such painful and heartbreaking story...and if u want to kill anyone kill vasant or talli see cv has killed him i have killed him he wont mind if u kill him third time...plz continue

Originally posted by: rsk16

Rocking update.😉

Just felt bad that Kesar died.Great OS

Raunika

Originally posted by: rimjhim1

oh yes ur actually multi talented😆. hmm yeah part 1 and 2 sounds good maybe when you have some free time or something.

hahaha dp is much better now,

neil= HOT 😳

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

oh nirmohi it was fantastic fantastic 👏 but y killed kesar 😕 n y such a short FF? write more na plz plz, i really liked it 😃