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Posted: 14 years ago

Bravo Kinzu 👏👏👏you have touched a very realistic concept of arrange marriage and compromises in it.

Amazing update

Starting part was cute Nupur having mood swing and asking for hug she is such a cutee

Mayank teases her and all she got shy about it.

Mayank is realistic character he cant be all time lovey dovey, he was angry and stressed about his work and Nupur being over sensitive cries thinking too much about it.

Both need to understand eachother and then adjust with their weekness and strength

His last line disappointed me

I hope in next update he mends his mistake.

Update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
mayank's behaviour is soo not acceptable...such negligence shouldnt take place in a conjugal relationship...everytime i find hard to cope up with mayank's complexity and state of mind..specially his temper and mood swings r really very disheartening...feeling miserable 4 nupur...
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Posted: 14 years ago
So finally the real phase of marriage is started now
I know in starting its give so much pain but with the passing time both will adjust with each other personality and this is the true beauty of this relation
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Another brilliant update Kinza
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Whoopss ! how silly of me, sorry Kinza :( and once again a brilliant update, loveee it that ur not portraying tis marriage as a rsy pinted picture, marriage is all about adjustments and nupur sould openly confess continue soon soon soon hun
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part dear 😳
bt mayanks attitude 😲
bt any ways thats wt the story abt
understanding each other i hope
mayank understands nupurs
unsaid words n fear 😔
nupur understands his
changing behavior
n thanks for the pm🤗
~Amrita😎
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u so much people .. 🤗
Chapter # 12:

She cried silently for a long time, making sure she doesn't lets out any single audible sigh because mayank was so close to her, and there was no way she would want him to wake up, not because she didn't want him to see her crying, but because he was tired and she didn't want to disturb his sleep.

She thought about his statement for a long while, but there was nothing she could conclude, was he teasing, or was he serious. She closed her eyes and stopped thinking about it.

She shifted her position a bit and started stroking his hair, she loved this calm and innocent look on this face, it used to melt her heart in an instant and she hated that frown which was in the morning.

She looked at him for a long while, indeed he was the most special part of her life, there wasn't a problem if he didn't behave normally one day, she couldn't forget so many days where he had treated her like a princess, she smiled and kissed his cheek, without doubt he was the bestest husband of the world. There relation was not for limited time where they both should crib about these small things, it was a relation for a lifetime. *TOUCHWOOD*

"wish all the problems of his office are solved", she sighed and snuggled close to him and a content filled her heart when he pulled her close.

**

That silent vow of nupur made her strong and ready to accept what was in the next days. It was similar routine and similar behavior. She wanted mayank to share and tell what was going on, but he was just so silent about everything, and because nupur was so scared of his mood, she never initiated the talk, just silently did whatever he wanted.

Not once during all these days did he call her form his office and her vow was falling weak.

"he is just busy", she sighed going through magazines but tears brimmed in her eyes, "but atleast one call!", they rolled down her eyes and switching off the TV, she went to Pallavi Sharma to distract herself.

**

It was after a few days that one morning, she woke up to a burning sensation on her neck and also the hypnotizing rub of toes on the lower side of her feet.

Shivers went through all her body as she slowly opened her eyes to find that mayank was rubbing his toes over her feet and was softly kissing her neck and inspite of everything a sigh escaped her mouth.

"good morning beautiful", he whispered in her ear and nupur slowly turned her neck and her eyes brimmed with tears listening to that warm morning wish again!. Sigh! . It had been 5 days.

"good morning", she smiled back with teary eyes and he tucked a few entangling strands of her hair behind her ear and brushed his lips over the skin beneath those strands.

She held his shirt tight in her fists and moaned, "aj office nahi jana?", she asked as now he was playing with the strap of her dress, threatening to pull it down any moment.

"jana hai, but thora late jaon ga, I just woke up and you look so beautiful", he sighed and finally dishelved the strap off of her dress.

"office main kiya problem thi k ap itney ghusey main rehtey they"?, she asked entwining their fingers and he raised his head, "please nupur, office ki batein rehne do", he frowned and again bent down to nip her neck and inspite of all the moaning, she was still adamant on asking, "per phir bhi aisa kiya ..

"I think I should better go to office, bcz tum ne wohi baat karni hai tu I better go"

"acha sorry", she immediately pulled him back, as he was about to get up and he almost fell over him,

"ap ko nahi psnd tu nahi baat karte", she said slowly looking in his eyes and he smiled, "it's not I don't like talking about my work to you, bus mera mood nahi hai", smiling he kissed her and she responded back, with all the love and passion.

"I missed you", she said slowly as they pulled back and mayank broke in a small laugh, "missed me?, per main tu yahin tha", he winked and before nupur could say anything he got up, "now can we have that tasty coffee", he smiled and went off for the shower while nupur also went in the kitchen - shutting her mind for any further thinking.

Mayank was sipping coffee and going through the newspaper, when nupur patted his shoulder, "ap newpaper se bahir a jao,. It's 10!", she said and mayank looked at the watch, "OH GOD!":, he gasped and rushed towards the door,

"suniye .", nupur said softly and mayank stopped, "haan?"

"ap k pass 2 minute hain"?, she asked walking towards him

"haan, kyun kiya baat hai?", he asked plainly and nupur came close to him and pecked his cheek, "have great day, good bye", she smiled mayank smiled back, "thank you, you too have a great day, although i know it's impossible without me, but still you can try", he winked and pecked her lips and went away.

"see, you just need to take the initiative", she smiled to herself and went back to her household.

**

Mayank was driving back home, with a smile. His wife was a darling. He read somewhere that a man who looks forward going home is a lucky man, and well he had to accept that he was a lucky man. His wife always tried to make him smile and happy, and the famous arrogant Mayank Sharma, didn't get angry on nupur for once. SIGH!. That is a great achievement Sharma, she hasn't made you angry even once!.

He pressed the bell and heard footfalls advancing and as nupur opened the door, her face showed clearly that she was shocked, "ap!", she gasped and giggling, mayank entered, "gi main, ap kisi aur ko expect kar rahi thin?"

"nahi wo, ap darwaza khud khol letey ho tu.",s he said

"haan, per ab nahi kholon ga, bcz you are always awake, tu there is no need", he smiled and went inside and nupur smiled, he finally knows you wait.

As always mayank didn't mention about dinner and as nupur came in after her kitchen work, he found him frowning.

"stupid program!", he placed the remote away and lied down and smiling nupur got by his side, "kiya hua?", she asked as he pulled her close.

"there was a stupid programme, where husbands had to tell things about their wives to prove that they knew them well", he huffed and nupur smiled, "haan ap ko tu bura hi lagey ga, bcz you don't know anything about me", she opened her eyes wide and mayank glared.

"don't glare, even mujhe ap k bare main itna kuch nahi pata, and it's okay, abhi itna thora time hua hai hamari shaddi ko"

"maadam, tumhain nahi pata hoga, but I know many things about you", he bragged and snuggled closer, "acha g!, how about to name some of them!", she teased and mayank opened his eyes,

"sure!", he cleared his throat "so starting form chronological order, firstly, you are extremely beautiful", he said and inhaled her fragrance and she blushed, "secondly, you love dark colors and look absolutely gorgeous in them, thirdly, you hate cooking, but still you cook for me ' which I don't know why, but I love it", he winked and Nupur felt her blood rise.

"next, you love your dad and you love gunjan, you have your life in in these two people, wasie loving dad is understandable, but the relation you share with gunjan is commendable, I have never seen such a friendship, and I wish it remains till the end of time", he said normally and she remembered all the discussions she and gunjan used to have that there jijus will always support their friendship.

"next, you need hugs and a lot of special treatment during your PMS", he again said normally and nupur closed her eyes and opened them immediately when he heard his giggle.

"okay then next you hate being questioned and scolded when you are sick, you love your books, you don't have bookmarks, you love rains, you hate summers, you write the date on the book when u buy it, you love romantic songs, you hate loud music, you love your hair only when they are wet, but trust me they look gorgeous even when dry, ", he winked again but nupur just stared him, "you love sketching and singing, but you can't do both of them, you hate ironing clothes, you love cleaning and dusting and ..

"and I love you ,,"

Nupur said, cutting his statement and now it was mayank's turn to get speechless.

Chapter 13 - Page 62

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hayeee!!!!!!!!!! wht an amazing update kinzuuu!!!!!!!1 <3 completely out of this world!! sache!!!!!!!1 👏👏👏

the crying Nupur is not at all my favrt but the reflecting Nupur and teh determined Nupur rocked!!!! <3

There relation was not for limited time where they both should crib about these small things, it was a relation for a lifetime. *TOUCHWOOD*


another *touchwood* from my side!!!! 🤗

i loved Nupur's silent vow and the way she made sure that she wont break but face wht came in teh next few dasy!!1 <3

now comes my favrt two parts of the update!! <3


It was after a few days that one morning, she woke up to a burning sensation on her neck and also the hypnotizing rub of toes on the lower side of her feet.


Shivers went through all her body as she slowly opened her eyes to find that mayank was rubbing his toes over her feet and was softly kissing her neck and inspite of everything a sigh escaped her mouth.

"good morning beautiful", he whispered in her ear and nupur slowly turned her neck and her eyes brimmed with tears listening to that warm morning wish again!. Sigh! . It had been 5 days.

"good morning", she smiled back with teary eyes and he tucked a few entangling strands of her hair behind her ear and brushed his lips over the skin beneath those strands.

She held his shirt tight in her fists and moaned, "aj office nahi jana?", she asked as now he was playing with the strap of her dress, threatening to pull it down any moment.

"jana hai, but thora late jaon ga, I just woke up and you look so beautiful", he sighed and finally dishelved the strap off of her dress.

"office main kiya problem thi k ap itney ghusey main rehtey they"?, she asked entwining their fingers and he raised his head, "please nupur, office ki batein rehne do", he frowned and again bent down to nip her neck and inspite of all the moaning, she was still adamant on asking, "per phir bhi aisa kiya ..

"I think I should better go to office, bcz tum ne wohi baat karni hai tu I better go"

"acha sorry", she immediately pulled him back, as he was about to get up and he almost fell over him,

"ap ko nahi psnd tu nahi baat karte", she said slowly looking in his eyes and he smiled,"it's not I don't like talking about my work to you, bus mera mood nahi hai", smiling he kissed her and she responded back, with all the love and passion.

"I missed you", she said slowly as they pulled back and mayank broke in a small laugh,"missed me?, per main tu yahin tha", he winked and before nupur could say anything he got up, "now can we have that tasty coffee", he smiled and went off for the shower while nupur also went in the kitchen - shutting her mind for any further thinking.

Mayank was sipping coffee and going through the newspaper, when nupur patted his shoulder, "ap newpaper se bahir a jao,. It's 10!", she said and mayank looked at the watch, "OH GOD!":, he gasped and rushed towards the door,

"suniye .", nupur said softly and mayank stopped, "haan?"

"ap k pass 2 minute hain"?, she asked walking towards him

"haan, kyun kiya baat hai?", he asked plainly and nupur came close to him and pecked his cheek, "have great day, good bye", she smiled mayank smiled back, "thank you, you too have a great day, although i know it's impossible without me, but still you can try", he winked and pecked her lips and went away.

"see, you just need to take the initiative", she smiled to herself and went back to her household.



this was simply too good for words kinzuuu!! specially the way it was written!! hayeee!!!!! 😍

the beauty of the morning scene adn thn the way Nupur took the initiative!! it was beyond beautiful kinzu1! it was havenly!!! not to forget i m in love with this side of Nupur!!!!!!1 <3



**

Mayank was driving back home, with a smile. His wife was a darling. He read somewhere that a man who looks forward going home is a lucky man, and well he had to accept that he was a lucky man. His wife always tried to make him smile and happy, and the famous arrogant Mayank Sharma, didn't get angry on nupur for once. SIGH!. That is a great achievement Sharma, she hasn't made you angry even once!.


these lines said it all to those who were worried about Mayank!! including Nupur!! he is simply too good adn already fallen for his beautiful adn loving wife!!!!! <3


He pressed the bell and heard footfalls advancing and as nupur opened the door, her face showed clearly that she was shocked, "ap!", she gasped and giggling, mayank entered, "gi main, ap kisi aur ko expect kar rahi thin?"

"nahi wo, ap darwaza khud khol letey ho tu.",s he said

"haan, per ab nahi kholon ga, bcz you are always awake, tu there is no need", he smiled and went inside and nupur smiled, he finally knows you wait.


OMG!!! kinzu u knw each and everyscene leaves me speechless!! each and every feeling, dialogue adn the sense of belonging that is slowly coming!!! <3


"sure!", he cleared his throat "so starting form chronological order, firstly, you are extremely beautiful", he said and inhaled her fragrance and she blushed, "secondly, you love dark colors and look absolutely gorgeous in them, thirdly, you hate cooking, but still you cook for me ' which I don't know why, but I love it", he winked and Nupur felt her blood rise.


"next, you need hugs and a lot of special treatment during your PMS", he again said normally and nupur closed her eyes and opened them immediately when he heard his giggle.

"okay then next you hate being questioned and scolded when you are sick, you love your books, you don't have bookmarks, you love rains, you hate summers, you write the date on the book when u buy it, you love romantic songs, you hate loud music, you love your hair only when they are wet, but trust me they look gorgeous even when dry, ", he winked again but nupur just stared him, "you love sketching and singing, but you can't do both of them, you hate ironing clothes, you love cleaning and dusting and ..

*sighss!!!!!!!!!!* i have no words to describe thsi scene kinzuuu!!!!!! this was simply to special adn it showed wht i always beleievd in, MAYANK LOVES HIS NUPUR!!!!! <3


hayeee!!!!!!!! he knws it all na? and he is sucha good observer!!!


but its the first observation with which i totally agree and knw that my Nupur beleieves in too!! atleast by now she should man!! Myank adn Gunjan are tired! *hmph*


i m comenting on this part separately and i guess u knw the reason:

"next, you love your dad and you love gunjan, you have your life in in these two people, wasie loving dad is understandable, but the relation you share with gunjan is commendable, I have never seen such a friendship, and I wish it remains till the end of time", he said normally and she remembered all the discussions she and gunjan used to have that there jijus will always support their friendship.


awww... this was too beautiful kinzuuu!!!!!!! 🤗and how i wish wht Mayank said remains true forever! <3

bcz its not a hidden truth taht Gunjan loves her princess beyond anything!!! <3

"and I love you ,,"

Nupur said, cutting his statement and now it was mayank's turn to get speechless.

sighs!!! as usual a simple but amazing confession! eagerly waiting for next art kinzuuu!!!!!!!!!!!
love u !!!!!!!1 *hugs*
Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Kinzuuu thank u so much for ur update dear😃

She cried silently for a long time, making sure she doesn't lets out any single audible sigh

i felt bad for nups- she is very soft and delicate and cant take any ignorance attitude towards her.. i hope mayu will notice it and give a special attention to NUpur.

She thought about his statement for a long while, but there was nothing she could conclude, was he teasing, or was he serious. She closed her eyes and stopped thinking about it.

She was in dilemma- she couldnt understand whats wrong with mayank??


She looked at him for a long while, indeed he was the most special part of her life, there wasn't a problem if he didn't behave normally one day, she couldn't forget so many days where he had treated her like a princess, she smiled and kissed his cheek, without doubt he was the bestest husband of the world. There relation was not for limited time where they both should crib about these small things, it was a relation for a lifetime. *TOUCHWOOD*


Awww i just loved this girl- she was suc a sweet heart. she was trying to consider d whole thing positively.. she was trying to console herself by memorizing their sweet cute moment

That silent vow of nupur made her strong and ready to accept what was in the next days. It was similar routine and similar behavior. She wanted mayank to share and tell what was going on, but he was just so silent about everything, and because nupur was so scared of his mood, she never initiated the talk, just silently did whatever he wanted.

Not once during all these days did he call her form his office and her vow was falling weak.

"he is just busy", she sighed going through magazines but tears brimmed in her eyes, "but atleast one call!", they rolled down her eyes and switching off the TV, she went to Pallavi Sharma to distract herself.

sighhh whats wrong with mayank.. how could he do dis with nups... poor nupur she was waiting for just a single phn call frm maynk. but maynk didnt bother to do it.. i know may be he was busy with his ofice work- may b it was sumthng very imp- but nothingcan be imp then nups na... dont he know - only sweet, small gesture of him will give her immense happy...

Omg Kinzu i've finished d whole update- but frankly speaking- mayank was totally unbelievable..I couldn't get mayank yaar- ye pura ki purah mystry man hai...Gosh the way he said nups likes and dislikes- It was just amazed me'...now i just loved this mystery man...lol


By GOD- pata nehi ye story kaha ja rahi hai?????😕

but its going interesting day by day...

wonderful update dear

loved it a lot

Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

ok i wud say this was the BEST part tll now...Till yday i found mayank weird..but yday it was changed n i started finding Nupur weird (sorry) i mean the way she wasnt understanding him at all... but today,, gosh that was WONDERFUL! really..i LOVED the update..n i love MN both ..❤️...now finally, their lovestory will start with the adjustmnts n all.. awww...they r adorable..😳😃..

n i loved the ob servation he had made abt nupur..aww...❤️...n i loved the observations too..she is seriously a DARLING! 🤗 ❤️...
do cont soon..i cant wait for nxt..tc..love u..🤗
u toh rock! the way u write is just commendable...seriously..it takes ur reader to another world, the world of ur characters!! love u writer Angel...🤗..keep writng ❤️...Godbless ya always!🤗
ps- u like blue na..😆😳
Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 14 years ago

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