My first FF: Ecstasy [Note on 19]

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ECSTASY

Chapter One: Our so called 'last' meeting.

Khusi was dancing around since early morning. It was evident that she was happy from the core of her heart. The reason behind this beaming happiness was one such thing she wanted from the last 15 days. Today was the last day of the contract she had signed 15 days ago. Yes, it was her last day at the Raizada's . She hurriedly got ready and went to office. Obviously, she can't wait to attain her freedom!

She reached his cabin, and softly tapped the door. 'May I come in Sir?'

'Yes'. He replied

She composed herself and walked in.

'Congratulations Miss Khusi Kumari Gupta!'

'Thank you Sir'

'Please take your seat. I have a few things to hand over'

Khusi felt she was in heaven. She was so happy and thought that her Devi Mayya had given her the thing she wanted.

'Yes Sir'.

'So Miss Gupta, where's your resignation letter?'

It was as if she waiting to hear that, her hands sprang across the table and there it was , her freedom packed in that small envelope.

'Here it is, Sir'

'Oh, you seem to be prepared!'

She was smiling broadly.

It was the first time Arnav complimented her and she smiled to him.

'So, now you are independent and free from the contract. You need not to pay me anything as you have completed the contract as per required . I hope you had good time with us.', he smirked.

'Sir, what to say now, I had such a good time. I just loved to work here, to look after the cars under the rain, to take the measurements of the male models, to type your papers all the night, to work on the report of the dilapidated building. In fact Sir I believe that only few people extremely lucky get to have such an experience. I am , you see, one of them.'

'Yes you are.' He smiled at her.

She was shocked, as if she had seen a star in the day sky. Arnav Singh Raizada ' smiling!!

Arnav understood that the girl in front of him was shocked beyond imagination.

'Actually, with your resignation letter, I, too, is celebrating my Independence Day.

As from this day I am free from you as well!!'

He smiled even wider.

'So this Laad Governor is happy as well!' she thought to herself.

'May I go now, Sir'.

'Oh sure, I can't stop you now.'

The last line meant something else. Though Khusi was not able to understand what it was.

Both sat silently for few minutes, then she slowly got up and turned to leave. The last line hit her somewhere.

'Thank you, Sir'

He would usually say 'My Pleasure' but it did not seem to be the right word.

He just smiled at her.

'Mention not.'

And there she was , standing outside the office. She looked up to see the building for the last time.

No, she was never going to come here, even for once. But deep down her heart, it hit her again. She was never going to see him again.

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ECSTASY - Index


Chapter One: Our so called last meeting

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Chapter two: Wish Dreams Came true

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Chapter Three: Doings

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Chapter Four: On the Right Track

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Posted: 14 years ago
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reserved!! edit:
Ooh fabulous start Sancho!!🤗
Love it!!
Especially Khushi's sarcasm as she described her experience at Raizada's...😆
LOL And Arnav's independence day...but I think he hasn't becoming independent, rather he has become reliant on her😆
super update and you do have to continue as soon as your exams are over😳⭐️
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res - for whn I can explain more details.

edt:

I thnk nw I can wrte bettr thn yestrday.

This part made me emtional. thre were many thngs!

thre was sarcsm in arnav whn he retored to khusi's commnt abt hw lucky she ws! he said "yes you r"! tht sarcsm meant smething! 😲

he smled bt he ws hurtng nd he dint knw why! he dnt say my pleasure! he said mention not! 😭

he said I cnt stop you nw! why did he say tht? did he wnt to stop her? 😕

thre wre emtions flowing all ovr the place!

i looved it!❤️ thre was rstlessnss, uneasinss, pain, and hope!

knwing tht a strong bond, feelng ws brewing... it ws the beginng of smething brnd new!

it was sad but excitng. they wll meet again vry soon!

excellnt ground wrk! cnt wait till sept 6th! ths cn only get bettr. 👏

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I m vry happy you posted this sanchi muchy! ths one deserves recognition!

I m in loove! you hve to continue!


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sancho🤗...I guess you recognized me...Must say awesome start...you are a talented writer dear...I enjoyed Khushi's sarcastic reply the most😆...Cntnu on dear
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Great start please continue and pm me when you do xX
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love it, please do continue!!! wonder what's going to happen again. :) good job!
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Hi

murphy i came here to reciprocate my encouragement...do write..it is an exhilarating feeling...

Good luck i am sure you will give us a fab story to read..

cheers
Vrushali
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fabulous start and good concept to start off where they will probably meet on equal footing great work..murphy!!

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Oh wow , I really like this opening chapter . Khushi's sarcastic nature , was fun to read. Please continue , soon .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks a bunch for liking it

@Suvi- you liked it, that's so nice of you
@bf- surely will continue!! thanks again
@Eowyn - how can I forget you...I am talented😳 thanks
@ayesha - thank you so much, surely will pm you!!
@sanaa - even I have also not planned what to write😆,thanks a bunch for liking it!!
@Vrushali - that's so sweet of you!!! thanks!😊
@priya - thanks priya...even I liked Khusi's nature😃

I never expected that this will be liked by all of you!😲

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