My first FF: Ecstasy [Note on 19] - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Fahiz

Lovely updates... I enjoyed it

Thanks for the translation 😊


Thanks...and no problem about the translation!
Any time!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
Dream mein hi sahi Khusi Kumari Guptha ne ASR ko nachaya apne dhun par😆...
Loved that sequence...
ArHi are awesome...
Cntnu on😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Eowyn

Dream mein hi sahi Khusi Kumari Guptha ne ASR ko nachaya apne dhun par😆...

Loved that sequence...
ArHi are awesome...
Cntnu on😊


😆I was actually dyeing to see a sequence where their roles will be interchanged..., I actually liked this update myself😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
just read you ss what a start , loved it .. do pm me..
i was confused how she again went to ASR office...
thx god it was a dream
kuch kuch hota ha ASR ko as he can't stop her ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
sanchi muchy 😲

chaptr 2? 🥳

khusi dreams arnav wrking fr her? 🤣

snce you hve exams I wnt cmplain bt next one pls wrte longer!!

thre r intrcacies in ths ff you can def expnd on! you hve laid the ground vry well! 👏 i cnt wait... possblities r endlss!

its a brlliant start. 👍🏼

i want t knw what happns nd whre they go!!! 😍

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i updted my frst commnt also!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Murphy !!!

I like the idea of ASR smiling, since that rarely happens!!! or should i say never !!! but i thot i must write and congratulate you on your First ever FF !!!!

ASR's reaction to Khushi was bitter-sweet!!! 😊

I almost thought you were writing another story in part 2 when i realised she was dreaming !! would love to see her dream happen on the show !!!

All the best !! dont be so under confident about your work sweetheart !! you have done a good job with your writing ... so keep writing ..!! and comments will keep pouring in... I dont read FF's ... but saw ur name, and the familiarity kinda pulled me in ...

May your writing bring smiles on everyone's faces and may you give many more pleasant surprises such as these ... (ASR ka smile and K2G ka role reversal)👏

Originally posted by: murphy369

Hi guys


Actually I am a huge fan of IPKKND
So I am huge fan of FFs here as well
Well one of my friends 'butterflies' inspired me to write something
I actually don't quite like it
So I will have to think if I will continue or not

So here it is!!




Chapter One: Our so called 'last' meeting.

Khusi was dancing around since early morning. It was evident that she was happy from the core of her heart. The reason behind this beaming happiness was one such thing she wanted from the last 15 days. Today was the last day of the contract she had signed 15 days ago. Yes, it was her last day at the Raizada's . She hurriedly got ready and went to office. Obviously, she can't wait to attain her freedom!

She reached his cabin, and softly tapped the door. 'May I come in Sir?'

'Yes'. He replied

She composed herself and walked in.

'Congratulations Miss Khusi Kumari Gupta!'

'Thank you Sir'

'Please take your seat. I have a few things to hand over'

Khusi felt she was in heaven. She was so happy and thought that her Devi Mayya had given her the thing she wanted.

'Yes Sir'.

'So Miss Gupta, where's your resignation letter?'

It was as if she waiting to hear that, her hands sprang across the table and there it was , her freedom packed in that small envelope.

'Here it is, Sir'

'Oh, you seem to be prepared!'

She was smiling broadly.

It was the first time Arnav complimented her and she smiled to him.

'So, now you are independent and free from the contract. You need not to pay me anything as you have completed the contract as per required . I hope you had good time with us.', he smirked.

'Sir, what to say now, I had such a good time. I just loved to work here, to look after the cars under the rain, to take the measurements of the male models, to type your papers all the night, to work on the report of the dilapidated building. In fact Sir I believe that only few people extremely lucky get to have such an experience. I am , you see, one of them.'

'Yes you are.' He smiled at her.

She was shocked, as if she had seen a star in the day sky. Arnav Singh Raizada ' smiling!!

Arnav understood that the girl in front of him was shocked beyond imagination.

'Actually, with your resignation letter, I, too, is celebrating my Independence Day.

As from this day I am free from you as well!!'

He smiled even wider.

'So this Laad Governor is happy as well!' she thought to herself.

'May I go now, Sir'.

'Oh sure, I can't stop you now.'

The last line meant something else. Though Khusi was not able to understand what it was.

Both sat silently for few minutes, then she slowly got up and turned to leave. The last line hit her somewhere.

'Thank you, Sir'

He would usually say 'My Pleasure' but it did not seem to be the right word.

He just smiled at her.

'Mention not.'

And there she was , standing outside the office. She looked up to see the building for the last time.

No, she was never going to come here, even for once. But deep down her heart, it hit her again. She was never going to see him again.


~~~~the end of chapter one~~~

How was it??😲

Link for chapter one!!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1761372/my-first-ff-ecstasy-note-on-19?pn=3�

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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
Hiya Murphy!!
I loved the first 2 chapters.
Its a really interesting start.
I look forward to the next part.
Please PM when you update dear!!
😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
Great update
i enjoyed reading it
thanks for the translation
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
what a chapter! main to abhi bhi has rahi hoon 🤣🤣🤣 What's that?! KKG imagining herself ordering around ASR? 🤣 lmaoo maybe after marriage with ASR under her control she can do something like this, but abhi ke liye there's going to still be a lot of ASR ordering KKG around .. i'm not saying that's a bad thing, not for us that is, but KKG ke liye this is like a nightmare! May god give her the strength to face this rakshas until he falls head over heels in love with everything about her. 😳 Mujhe to ASR and KKG ke milne ka intezaar hai, jab bhi ye mite hai kuch na kuch unexpected hota hai lmao last time they met ASR wasn't behaving his normal self, as if he didn't want her to leave. I wonder what these two monkeys will do when they next meet. I love how you surprise us so often, god bless you and may you continue giving us all these surprises 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
reserved for morphinator!! 😳

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Last day of hatred, first day of love! 😍 I thank butterflies for inspiring you because I am very happy with your first 2 chapters morphu. you know you haven't titled the ff yet but your chapter titles are intriguing.

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her freedom packed in that small envelope." was my favorite line in this chapter! I always enjoy these little comparisons you make! 😳

it was when she was about to leave that Arnav first compliments her? 😲 he was torturing her all this while. Ab achanak, why so sweet? All in all, I just love the buildup of that stomach churning feeling you have beautifully established in the first chapter itself.

He said I hope you had a good time with us and she went on to describe all the atrocious things he had done to her. A much needed reminder. However, I am a super weirdo. I hated him every time he was cruel to her. Whether it was when he threw her from his cabin, or when he tortured her at work asking her to stay late at night to hold some bimbo model's fur coat. But today, when he mellowed towards her, my heart said, now's the time to give the dude a chance! not remind him of his atrocities. Those gestures in the name of self respect, make matters only worse. If ASR is to fall in love, it is when he sees love reciprocated for his atrocities. But then again, this would all matter if she cared, or should I say, if she knew she cared!

But most importantly, his reaction just stirred me! He didn't react 😕 wait, he reacted with a smile? 😲 is that explanatory of his inner turmoil? I only want to see a star twinkling its best at night! I would never want ASR to smile as he hides his agony. I would only want him to smile when he is truly happy!

😆 LOL @ Arnu celebrating his independence day! Cute, very cute! 😳

In this episode, the wider arnu's smile gets, the sadder it makes me. When he said he couldn't stop her now, it indeed meant something else. By the time we get to this line, the heaviness becomes so much a part of existence that one doesn't know what to do. Even the protagonists themselves sit there silently before moving on and realizing this was it😭.

Well started morphu! 👏 It can only get better from here!

i hope all your readers continue inspiring you and you keep spreading your magic over our hearts morphz. ❤️🤗


Edited by mohini4u - 14 years ago

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