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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Wow Nice updates...Can you continues soon? 😊

P.S. Please post only English not Hindi...

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

A wonderful start to the FF. Continue soon and PM me when you do!

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Sanchari

@.hea.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

@Fahiz...I will surely post it in English,😃

But I will be having exams from 23 sept, but I dunno I can also post the next part tomorrow...but I am not sure!😲

Thanks so much for liking it!!

Love your icon!!

@shailusri - thanks a lot for liking it

I will definitely pm you when I will post the next part!😃

Edited by murphy369 - 14 years ago

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Miya_Malik

@Miya_Malik

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Tujhe belan se maarne ka mann kar raha hai 🤣 Why didn't you start writing earlier??! This is such a cute concept and quite well written too! 😛 Khushi's been stuck with this rakshas for 15 years, he kept her contract for that long?! 🤣 bechara, wanted her near him for as long as possible. Is this the double meaning to the last line he said to Khushi?? Like he indirectly was asking her not to go?! OMG! He doesn't want her to leave, he's grown attached to her 😳 Khushi's like 'good riddance' to the ASR chapter of her life, but she's getting happy for no reason! ASR is never ever going to leave her side, uski kismat hi phooti hai 🤣 Now where, when they'll meet, I have no clue .. only you can tell! Waiting for the next chapter, hum readers ko kab surprise karne ka iraada hai?! 😆

PS: I just read you are going to post the dialogues in english, but please don't erase the hindi entirely! Hindi multiplies the effect of every ArHi scene, for me that is. 😳

PPS: I didn't know Hindi before, learnt it from bollywood and all the saas bahu soap operas over the years hence my hindi diction may be a lil filmy but don't mind me haan! Vaise i'm Miya 😃

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

@Miya

😆belan se maar...bohut dukhe ga naa??

Waise I wanted to discontinue it because I thought that nobody will like , because it's kinda boring compared to the super duper FFs here

Actually I love the way you give a detailed reply for any of the posts

Love you for that🤗

Okies...I will also keep Hindi...though my mother tongue is Bengali

I love to speak Hindi...it can express the emotions better

jaise ki abhi tumne kaha...belan se marna ka man ho raha hai!!🤣

Surprise...I can give it anyday!!

Nobody knows!😆

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Miya_Malik

@Miya_Malik

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: murphy369
@Miya
😆belan se maar...bohut dukhe ga naa??
Waise I wanted to discontinue it because I thought that nobody will like , because it's kinda boring compared to the super duper FFs here
Actually I love the way you give a detailed reply for any of the posts
Love you for that🤗
Okies...I will also keep Hindi...though my mother tongue is Bengali
I love to speak Hindi...it can express the emotions better
jaise ki abhi tumne kaha...belan se marna ka man ho raha hai!!🤣

Surprise...I can give it anyday!!
Nobody knows!😆

haan tujhe belan se maarne ka mann kiya, hummein itna intezaar jo karwaaya 😔 Pehle likhna tha na!
Boring?! Don't call it boring, look it's got me and so many others hooked! You MUST continue this FF, it's as amazing as all the other FFs on the forum!
Accha tujhe meri nonsense achhi lagti hai?! Lmao most of the time i'm either bashing a character or laughing at one. In your ff, i'll most probably be commenting a lot on Khushi's phooti kismat, she seems to have a LOT of unwanted ASR in her life and this ain't gonna change until the day she dies which will also be in Arnav's arms 😛
Yep totes! I could never write belan se marne ka mann kar raha hai in english, it just wouldn't sound as funny 😒 My mother tongue is actually findi (fiji-hindi) which is REALLY modified hindi it's not even funny! Kitne papad belne pade to get my hindi diction right, but i'm so happy I can speak it now as I emote wayy better! 😃
Surprise to tujhe dena hi hoga .. jaldi se! Nahi to tere sapnon mein aake tujhe daraongi 😈🤣
PS: Have you thought of a name for your story yet??

Edited by Miya_Malik - 14 years ago

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

@Miya
As I was pretty sure that no body is going to like it

So no name has been decide

Can you suggest me one

It would be a great favor

Surprise will be coming up on _____________!!!!

I will be thinking the next part , maybe today

or tomorrow, I am specially known for my laziness😆

Par neend badi pyaari hai, so yeh koshish karungi ki jaldi update karoon taaki tum mijhe sapno mein aake na daraon😉

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Guys...I have started to write the second chapter

I dunno when I will post it😉

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Updating in two minutes.

Surprise🥳

Edited by murphy369 - 14 years ago

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

So I am in seventh heaven because you guys liked my work

Thanks a bunch for that

here is the second chapter

Chapter Two: Wish Dream came true

'Arnav Singh Raizada, what do you think of yourself, that you will keep on troubling me and I will leave you just like that. Listen, every girl has her day. And today is mine. So you better start working or you have to pay me twice the money you asked me, you get that. Now go, what are you staring at? Get to work.'

'Yes Mam .' and Arnav hurriedly rushed to work. He seemed to be scared to death of "Khusi Mam".

Khusi watched it with utter happiness. She had a list of all the works she had planned to give to that Akdoo .

She was really enjoining herself seeing the poor creature mailing the important papers at a lightening speed as if his train was going to leave the platform in 2 seconds.

'ARNAV SIGH RAIZADA'..haun ki nahi or you are late as usual .'

'Yes Mam'.nearly done!!!'

'Fast'don't you know that I don't like to wait.'

While coming to her cabin Arnav nearly tripped. Khusi chuckled to herself.

'Ek kaam bhi dhang se nahi kar sakte kya'.

'Ji Mam'here are the papers.' God , he was shivering

'Yeh kya hai'.what is this?'

'Kya mam'kuch bhi toh nahi hai.' he looked utterly confused

'Kya, tum mujhe bataoge'..KHUSI KUMARI GUPTA ko? Ki kya sahi hai aur galat?'

(Trans: What? You will tell me what is right or wrong)

'Kya Khusi'itne zor zor se aapna naam kyun bol rahi ho, saare moholle ko pata hai tumhare yeh naam.'

(Trans: What , why are you shouting out your name so loudly? Everybody knows your name her)