Victory of Life ~One Shot~

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Just as the wave cannot exist for itself, but is ever a part of the heaving surface of the ocean, so must I never live my life for itself, but always in the experience which is going on around me.

For some people, things are easy to reach. Almost effortless, almost look like its written in their destiny, and they are just born to a thing so easily.and for some life is not easy at all and i can say roller coaster ride or so much unexpected

The lonely wanderer, who watches by the seashore the waves that roll between him and his home, talks of cruel facts, material barriers that, just because they are material, and not ideal, shall be the irresistible foes of his longing heart.

evening covered with darkness of clouds ,and sun setting behind the edge without brightness, winds blew fast and on beach standing one person his heart and mind fighting with emotions and it can hear clash of both but couldn't understand the battle inside him

there were thoughts in Dr. subhash's mind who was seeing sun setting and disappearing from edge , thinking life always tested him with each and every experience ,he saw his life to stand to get happiness to sadness , moving on as always ,he saw seashore ,and sea , its destiny of sea , on seeing it ,it looks so beautiful and peaceful but in inner side of sea filled with mystery , we don't know what 's in its inner side and can't predict as well , sea has a heat inner side but we can't see as well but we can feel only when we touch its inside we can feel it and his life became same way with in his life best moments to worst and with rising his life again

he was blessed with everything best in his life , wonderful and successful career , one best wife he got in his life , best daughter he got but they were like one soothing air in his life which blossomed his life and then spreading their fragrance they went too far where he never reached to them

one silent drop of tears came in his eyes with this thought , but with his daughter's memory he felt proudly glow in his eyes HIS daughter his strength his power and his inspiration Ria who came in his life just like one angel and made his life so beautiful with her presence, he always wanted one princess in his life as daughter and his wife gifted him their symbol of love Ria , Dr . shubhash's life his dream Ria ,

his lips played beautiful smile with this memories when he saw his daughter Ria , when she called him first time "papa" he was on cloud 9 as if he got his life's best moment no doubt for any father it would be best moment , Ria and his bonding growing day by day , her support her love for him increasing day by day and their cute nok zok with Ria's mother rupa making her left out and that father and daughter's coaxing trick to make rupa happy , he was feeling out of world with his life he was pleased and feeling blessed for getting wonderful life with his small family and one day his life shattered when god snatched his happiness snatching away his life Rupa from them she left them leaving sobbing one angel and one beloved husband bidding them last bye with one accident , where he first time felt helpless he was Dr but he himself couldn't do anything to save her , but he gathered courage to be father and mother of their love their daughter Ria , and she same way supported his father in those days father and daughter made their own family with memories of their complete family with Ria's mother

Dr. subhash's chain of thoughts broke with sound of waves and soothing air he felt weak with those memories , he again sink in memories with his daughter , their days passed she stepped into teenage and making his father proud with numbers of awards in his school days making his father proud with fact she will make him proud in future achieving wonderful opportunity but again destiny betrayed him when first time they came to know Ria having Leukemia his world shattered in piece with this news he felt one force of burden on his heart one shock which he never imagined or thought or not in his widest dream he thought , he was helpless ,but Ria emerged supportive and strong daughter , she made him assure she won't leave him alone so easily she will def fight with life not for her but for his father ,she grew mature in small teenage , he was so surprised in only few days she got changed and became more mature ,his angel his princess grew up he thought and he smiled recalling that days when in this tension she gave him strength to bear and tolerate that situation

one wave of sound again broke his thoughts and he saw surrounding him as if looking for someone and then he again drawn in thoughts of memories where on operation bad her daughter give him strength to be positive and give him proud when she practically told his father if i will die and if this operation won't work i have my last wish papa , will u fulfill it please , he had only tears in his eyes he was not that much strong who can tolerate such a pain and see his daughter dieing infront of his eyes she was brave but not he , she asked his hand for promise and he took his hands on her , and when she shared her last wish he burst into tears not controlling himself and hugged her, papa will u fulfill my wish na ? it was she asked him while crying and he only could speak ,i will beta

life is so strange na he again thought b4 10 years on same day he lost his beloved daughter Ria , years passed everything changed with her demise , he lost hopes , and wish to live when he came to know abt it but he had promised her beloved daughter how could he rebuff with his promise to her , in her small life only for first time she demanded from him and he had to for her daughter's last wish , one wish which totally changed his life once again who gave him one hope one angel once again in his life in form of Priya , Ria's blind only 7 year old friend in that hospital , one little angel who always spend time with Ria till her last breath and it was Ria's last wish to donate her eyes to her if she will die so that with Priya her eyes will see this whole world which she would not see after her death, and Subhash also got her daughter in Priya , just like Ria taking care of him the way Ria did , one replica of Ria not from face but from heart and soul

papa where were u i was searching for u from last few mins this words broke Dr. shubash's chain of thoughts once again and saw one angel coming towards him , same looking like Ria for Dr. subhash , papa she again called him and he came back into reality , its been four years with Priya she always there for Dr. subhash becoming his strength after Ria's demise , she gave meaning to his life once again one reason to live his life once again ,becoming his daughter whom he lost but she was there for him always , he couldn't speak anything and hugged her daughter lovingly as if thanking her and god to give him one beautiful gift no doubt god tested him so much but he also gave him lovable and pure hearted and selfless daughters like Ria and Priya , he knew why Ria choose Priya to give gift to his father after her demise ,she knew it his father won't live without her and to give meaning to his life to live she took promise and gave one orphan and blind child a meaning to live with family and father and today Dr. shubhash silently thanking Ria for making his life so so beautiful when she was with him and today when she is not with him but from her soul she is always with him , they always shared soul relation and no doubt Priya never disappointed Ria's soul bcz she was replica of her soul , who always cared and loved his father just like she did

Priya broke hug and wiped his tears saying papa u were recalling Ria di na , please don't cry otherwise me too will cry i can't see u crying papa and Subhash smiled with her cuteness no doubt same cuteness he too wiped her tears saying beta u r already crying on seeing him smiling she too smiled ,she hold his father's hand and told papa i will be always with u and fulfill ur dream with blood cancer hospital , serving patient when i will be Doctor , Dr. subhash saw one charm and light in her eyes and felt so much proud getting her in his life , he too hold her hand back giving him motivation u will beta for sure i know u will fulfill my dream and complete my life always , both father and daughter with hope went back to their home which both made after all this hurdles in life just like victory of life

darkness of clouds was fading away and sun sets in edge but with one ray of hope of tomorrow's rise


P.S :- this OS is very close to my heart do read it and share ur views 😳
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my lik button isnt working :(

but di its amazinggg gosh i just adore n adore ur os's they r soo fresh n unique nnn seriously speaking one of my favs
aashi di u just rock ..*hugggiiiess*
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awh u brought tears in my eyes aashi... one of the finest OS's i have read...
i have no words to say what i felt, i still have goosebumps ...
well written aashi 👏 ... thanks for the PM...do PM me when u write more...
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Awesome Aashi, really touching... Nothing more to say but...👏 👏
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Aashi, what a beautiful post👏! I don't have enough words to express what I felt after reading Victory of Life!
It is so touchy, very intense and full of depth! It did bring tears😭 in my eyes!
I have always told you and still tell you that you have a Magic pen that always comes up with thoughts that are beyond my imagination and it is WORTH to read.
My dear Aashi, please keep on making such a magnificent post! Your friends are eagerly waiting and looking forward to reading what you write.
I would say I am a BIG fan of your creative writing!
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Awesome Aashi,,Dis One's is Just to Adore..<3
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hi ashizn api🤗
i am realy glad to see a pm of u n os wooww...😃
then daughter father bonding OMG...😛
might be its my personal very favourite relation as i love my father a lot..❤️
its so true daughters are always near to their fathers...😊
the os is really masterpiece..touching n so much emotional
truly it brings tears in my eyes...😭
i dont know how to say it was just fablous n fantastic os i ever read...
really it was too touchy just loved it from core of heart...❤️
daughters are always lyk this loves their parents selflessly and always determined to gave the each comfort to their parents..they love their dad the most as i do😉
daughters are realy lyk angels and their fathers are the best man they used to have in their lyf..
awww...i realy cant help stoping myself admiring daughter father relation coz it is realy worth of admirtaion n magical...the one which is beyond any relation..n when we all are sharing it with our father then how can we stop admire the BEST MAN who is A GREAT BLESSING for daughters...omg!!i am realy missing my dad😭i hope this week passess soon and we can spent speical tym with him.MAY ALLAH BLESS OUR FATHERS A LONG HEALTHY WEALTHY LIFE WITH PEACE OF CONTENTMENT..N BLESS US TO SERVE THEM AMEEN...❤️
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this is one of the finest ...n i realy loves it...❤️
a big thanks to write it n pm me thank u so much...❤️


soory comment thoda lamba hogya😛..i was overwhelmed of my emotions...sory for making u bored.😆...
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do unres soon hon 😳
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Originally posted by: -nautankidollz-

my lik button isnt working :(

but di its amazinggg gosh i just adore n adore ur os's they r soo fresh n unique nnn seriously speaking one of my favs
aashi di u just rock ..*hugggiiiess*

thank u so much dolly sweetheart for reading it ,it means lot to me 🤗
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Originally posted by: rapunzel_angel

awh u brought tears in my eyes aashi... one of the finest OS's i have read...

i have no words to say what i felt, i still have goosebumps ...
well written aashi 👏 ... thanks for the PM...do PM me when u write more...
God bless you, take care 🤗

oww ria i m seriously glad u liked it 🤗its seriously encouraging for me thanks a tone 🤗🤗

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