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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOST IN HER"BEAUTY"

He was moving through...n all of a sudden..he just stopped as he just couldnt take a step forward anymore...he looked into her room..n found her sitting there bruhing her beautiful hair...

she seemed like a FAIRY...
he just frooze there...he couldnt move ahead...n stepped back..n stood there..

she was getting ready for TEIJ CELEBRATIONS...

it was like his heart was saying that:

YES...

SHE IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL LADY MADE BY GOD ON THIS EARTH...

WHO ONLY BELONGS TO ME...

seeing her sparkling eyes, rosy lips...n tht earing...the sound of her bangles made him crazy...

he was lost in her...in her beauty...

he was adoring her from tht distance..his eyes were filled with tht attraction towards her..as he didnt even wanted to blink them for a moment...so tht he cant miss glance of her beauty..

it was the moment he couldnt ignore her n her beauty at all...coz he was confident knowing tht she didnt know about his presence around her...

then she held the photo frame of her WEDDING PIC...she hugged tht frame as of like hugging him...

holding him in her arms with a desire in her heart

"HOLD ME IN UR ARMS...TONIGHT..EVERDAY.. every moment of life...keep me closer to ur heart.."

as she wanted him to see her then she kissed him on the frame...

he was watching all this n he somewhere made this point to himself tht:

YES...HER FEELINGS TOWARDS ME ARE TRUE & PURE...

she has devoted herself to me only...

she felt SHY..somewhere deep down in her heart..remembering those MAGICAL MOMENTS when he admired her n her beauty...

the nature gave her a hint or a singnal by tht cool breeze...she saw His REFLECTION on tht PHOTO FRAME...

she couldnt believe on her eyes..she thought may be its just a DREAM...she turned around n saw him standing there ...may be it was a dream for her just a moment back..but it was a REAL MOMENT...now...

he was so so completely LOST in her BEAUTY tht he couldnt get tht feel of her truning around..n seeing him..

she saw him...n she was on the 7TH SKY...she was so happy...seeing him there...as yet again her wish was fulfilled by GOD...she had tht warmth in her eyes,smile on her face, attraction...which cant be ignored by him at all...her eyes sent him a signal with a smile the endearing smile of hers...telling him tht:

yes maan...yes

YES, I CAUGHT U...

he felt uncomfortable seeing tht she caught me...she saw me...

the eyes which didnt blinked for last few seconds or minutes..now were blinked...

in tht disturbance..he left from there...

she wanted tht moment to last for some more time..but she wasnt disappoined at all..

she was happy n hugged the photo frame again..

hope u all will like it..
the last 5:30 mins of today's epi were just mind blowing..loved tht so so much..hv waatched them so many times already..
n the precap too...
i normally leave u all with a song with my post..
so here is one..which i love
KHOOBSURAT HAI WOH ITNA..
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yBanrFo_3dE&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]
hugz RABI
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wooow Rabz ... really Wow .. well written .. y don't u start writing FFs if u get some ideas ? I'm sure they'll be awesome ..

You when Geet took their photo. Maan's expression changed na ? OMG I was so dead .. the way he looked at her .. was just killing

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sia89

Wooow Rabz ... really Wow .. well written .. y don't u start writing FFs if u get some ideas ? I'm sure they'll be awesome ..

You when Geet took their photo. Maan's expression changed na ? OMG I was so dead .. the way he looked at her .. was just killing

thx sia...
thts v sweet of u to suggest..i feel thts ur kindness for me...
i really dont think i can write FF's...i m not tht gud...
yeh...i loved MSK's expressions there too..although i loved all his expressions of tht 5:30 mins slot of today's epi...
i felt like he had this feeling as geet is not holding the frame...se is actually holding him next to her tht close...
i loved it...
they rocked the screen today..after a gap of many days..got to see them like tht...
it was like he is the same MSK before ML...his gentle expressions today which were filled with love n harmony...peace...there was no anger even at the far corner of his heart today...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb post.. just lost in it ,the way u narrate scene ,emotions n expressions is very comprehensive n beautiful..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: geetlover1

superb post.. just lost in it ,the way u narrate scene ,emotions n expressions is very comprehensive n beautiful..

thank u so much..
ur appreciation means alot to me..
hugz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LLLOOOVVVEELYYY POST... MAAN ALL TIME LOST...IN GEET...Just Lovely...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely Rabia ..just wonderful...amazingly beautiful interpretation of the beautiful scene...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful rabia love your post. You should try your hand at writing FFs
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow- mind blowing post - you hit the nail right on the head with your scene by scene description and emotional narration- Brilliant gal- just brilliant !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya2000

LLLOOOVVVEELYYY POST... MAAN ALL TIME LOST...IN GEET...Just Lovely...

thank u so much...

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