Meeta ki kashmakash - Page 3

Originally posted by: chucklebuddy

beautifully written... cant control my tears...😍 😭 gr8 work... 👏

Originally posted by: navyaalex8

Really lovely Urmi...You write so beautifully and the words you use are so lyrical... mehfuz, kashmakash , shikanj, faasle, zillat...I had no idea what they meant but I'm glad I know now coz their meanings (and sounds) are so beautiful...

You should consider putting your poems and writings in a separate post like Manoj's too...

PS:Can you explain what you meant by this:

Anjanne fasle bhi, bina izzat hamare bich aagaye hai,

What did you mean when you wrote "bina izzat"?Did you mean the distance between them has occured without dignity because of a "shameful" reason ie love?

Originally posted by: laddoo598

Urmi di you got me all emotional..The following lines especially were very moving:

"Apni gudiya ke chehre par nahi, dil par ghaav diya hai maine;

Us chot ke nishan hamare rishte se kaise mita paungi,

Aur aaj maine khud un dooriyon ko aur zyada badha diya..

Uska mujh tak pahunchne ka raasta, aur bhi mushkil bana diya"

My words of compliment will not do justice to your creativity..But I will say it nonetheless- Beautifully written as always!! Please keep writing :)

@Nisha: I think "izzat" was a typo.. Urmi di meant Bina Ijazat, as in without permission..That's how I read it anyway, Urmi di correct me if I am wrong..😊

Originally posted by: Preet078

Hi Urmi...Very well written...U express each emotions of meeta ..Her guilt to slap...,fear dat this slap increase d distance between her and navya ..and her anger wid for all dis situation...Awesum work...👏 ...👏

Originally posted by: ashakd

Hey Urmi, gr8 work as always👏. Beautifully written and beautifully expressed.⭐️ Wish I had this to learn in college, I would have scored full marks and not kabir ke dohe, coz i always messed it up. 😊

Keep writting, we r there to support u. Glad u r being vocal about u r fealings, and hope many other forum members who silently read may get the courage to come out and share their veiws.

and yes kabir ke dohe...i had completely forgottem abt them...I was not good at it either

Originally posted by: Cool_priya

heya urmi di...!! 😃very well written...!!👏 luvd it sooo much...!😳😳!

u r reli a g8 writter...!!👏just portrayed meetha's emotions soo soo soo well...!👏😃! luvd it...!!😳 g8 work...!👏!

Originally posted by: spdp

so touching Urmi,

I am sure you'll have many more additions to this, especially in coming week!

Keep writing & keep 'Navya' spirit alive :)