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A Poem from Maan's PerspectiveI stood by the window looking at the dark nightI was surrounded by nothing but darkness and silenceI felt lonely, alone, guilty and ashamedI had nothing more to look forward tooAll I had was gone within a few momentsHow could I?How could I do this to her and my family?How could I?I was so happy and with herShe was my life and I hersOur heartbeats were always in sync with each otherShe looked at the world through my eyes and I through hersI was waiting for the day when she would be lawfully mineBut alas! That dream of mine will no longer come trueHow could I?How could I do this to her?How could I betray her and our love?How could I make this terrible mistake?I do not deserve her anymore,She is no longer mineI cannot even think of being with her ever againWhat if I hurt her again?I cannot trust myself anymoreI am flawed, unworthy and unforgivableI do not deserve her, never again.I wait for death to come over meBut I realize that dying would be an easier way outSo here I am, standing by the window looking at the dark nightAlone, lonely, guilty and ashamedThis is my punishment being here all aloneWithout her love and her presence!--Rachana--
Oh My God Rachna….That is so beautiful. Thanks a lot for penning down these amazing lines which describe Maan and his feelings perfectly.
I am glad that you like this track and you encouragement means a lot to me. This poem is a proof for me that somewhere you are affected by Maan's pain.
Thanks a lot again for this rendition. If you don't mind, I will like to use it in my next update.
Thank you friends for such encouraging comments. I am overwhelmed with your love and your affection. There is not enough thanks. I am really happy I joine IF as this place has made me meet people who can love you and support you without even knowing you well.
Special thanks to Rachna (Water.) for her poem and comments.
Eva – I respect your POV and yes maybe I showed quite an extreme reaction. My
POV was to show how shattered a man can be too with such accusations. Keep on giving your feedback and hopefully you will like this track more going further.
Also a special mention for mystique_girl who gave me a detailed feedback and told me precisely where to improve. I have started reading all my chapters already written and started changing them according to your feedback. Thanks a lot as this tells me exactly where I was lacking. Hopefully now you will find the upcoming chapters depicting more emotional reasoning and thoughts making them complete. Let me know if you still feel anything lacking at the end of any chapter. Your feedback has helped me immensely in improving my writing.
Now without further ado, here is the next chapter….Enjoy!!!
Chapter 58 – Spill the Beans
Adi's words played like a recording in Geet's mind. She frowned and kept on trying to understand them whole night. Nothing made sense to her. Her trust in Maan was trying to tell her something but it was getting very difficult to undo the knots. She drifted in a restless sleep still thinking about Adi's words.
Next Day Morning
Geet's heart was wringing itself thinking about pain and suffering Maan was going thru. She knew that his soul was so pure that this accusation was burning his inside. She closed her eyes and his thoughts resonated in her being.
A Poem from Maan's Perspective
I stood by the window looking at the dark night
I was surrounded by nothing but darkness and silence
I felt lonely, alone, guilty and ashamed
I had nothing more to look forward too
All I had was gone within a few moments
How could I?
How could I do this to her and my family?
How could I?
I was so happy and with her
She was my life and I hers
Our heartbeats were always in sync with each other
She looked at the world through my eyes and I through hers
I was waiting for the day when she would be lawfully mine
But alas! That dream of mine will no longer come true
How could I?
How could I do this to her?
How could I betray her and our love?
How could I make this terrible mistake?
I do not deserve her anymore,
She is no longer mine
I cannot even think of being with her ever again
What if I hurt her again?
I cannot trust myself anymore
I am flawed, unworthy and unforgivable
I do not deserve her, never again.
I wait for death to come over me
But I realize that dying would be an easier way out
So here I am, standing by the window looking at the dark night
Alone, lonely, guilty and ashamed
This is my punishment being here all alone
Without her love and her presence!
--Rachana--
(Thank you Rachna for such a wonderful poem depicting Maan's emotions)
Geet decided she had enough of thinking and waiting. She made a plan and put it in motion.
Afternoon 2:00 PM
Geet – "Mr. Rathod, has it been taken care of. I don't want any problems"
Mr. Rathod – "Yes Madam….everything is set as per your requirements"
Evening 5:00 PM
Rahul was still in office. On Geet's insistence Pari had taken Juhi and Chayiji out for Diwali shopping. Bauji, Beeji and Annie seldom came to KM now. So it was only Geet and Naintara at home.
Geet entered the living room where Naintara was busy watching television.
Geet st – "She is so cool…as if nothing happened…she is not a tad worried about what is going on around her"
Geet coughed to get her attention – "Kya dekh rahi ho Naina"
NT – "Kuch khaas nahin"
Geet said trying to lighten her mood – "Uf o Naina…tum bhi na…acha will you take some wine…bahut din ho gaye humne aise baatein nahin ki"
Geet poured some wine for both of them and settled beside her. After some general chatting she asked her hesitantly – "Naina, main ek baat puchoon….woh you are my sister isiliye can I trust you?"
NT smirked to herself – "Isko meri aaj kaise zaroorat pad gayi". She spoke – "Off course Geet puch"
Geet – "Woh actually I like someone but he is just not taking my hints. Please tell me na what you used for Maan. Can you please give some to me as well?"
Geet waited with abated breath to see if her gamble pays off. She saw shock playing at Naintara's face.
NT was furious – "What do you mean Geet…I don't know what you are talking about?"
Geet replied coolly – "Oh come on Naina…don't worry your secret is safe with me."
NT tried to protest – "But Geet…"
Geet – "Please Naina…dekho tum nahin help karogi to kaun karega…if I wanted to tell anything to anyone I would have already done it…haina….ab yeh to mujhe bhi pata hai that no one gets that drunk with one bud light…moreover I have been with Maan for a long time…I have seen him drinking and he can hold his liquor quite well. So please batao na…what did you give him and can you get some for me"
NT – "Tum kya keh rahi ho Geet….I have seriously no idea"
Geet was little crestfallen and it showed on her face but she started thinking of another way to confirm her suspicion. She knew she was on right path and Maan will never do anything so horrendous with his will.
NT st – "Sab log ise itna pyaar karte hain….ab dekh….how I spoil your innocent image in front of your own family"
NT asked – "Kya hua Geet….waise who is he jo tumhein yeh sab sochna pad raha hai…hmmm"
Geet saw ray of hope. She knew very well about Naintara's insecurities and decided to play against it. She replied in the same sad voice – "Woh….please don't tell anybody….he is a business associate"
NT – "So, what is the need for such drastic step?"
Geet said hesitantly to convince - "He is married"
Naintara thought for some seconds. – "Wow!!! This is even better….But no one is going to believe me if I just say this. I need to trap her. If I juts giver her name and source I can catch her red handed"
NT – "Ok I know a guy….I will call him and he will give you a pouch of xyz….that will work"
Geet's eyes widened as the name of the popular rape drug. Her trust in Maan was unshakable and now she was sure it was a clear cut case of assault.
Geet acted scared – "But Naina, I don't even know how it works. Have you used it before? Oh I get it…this is what you used for Maan….no point denying Naina…I am not that a fool…Please tell me is it safe…please…you gotta help me…I swear I won't tell a soul"
Naintara knew that Geet was quite intelligent and she definitely did not want her knowing everything. But at the same time temptation to destroy her image was too much. She finally relented.
NT – "ok Geet…yes I did use it for Maan. It is quite safe and you need to only use a pinch as it can be very potent."
Geet's heart wretched in pain as she thought of asking her next question. Only thing got her going now was the knowledge that her trust in his Maan was never misplaced.
Irrespective of Naintara's answer, she knew she was the only one…ever at least in the way it mattered. She blanched at the thought that this was nothing more than an assault…yes an assault.
She covered her disgust and probed further – "Oh my god Naina…wow…you are so damn resourceful…you guys must have had fun." Geet giggled and patted her in sisterly fashion. She winked at her – "Batao na…how was he?"
NT sighed – "That's why I am asking you to use little. I used a little too much and by the time I had put him in bed he passed out. So instead of having fun I had to remove his clothes and mine to make him fall for the ruse. But main kya karti Geet. If I hadn't and he had spilled beans about my intentions toh? I really love him and want him. Thank God that he did not realize something was fishy even though he is a doctor. Guys can get real dumb sometimes"
Geet nodded her head in agreement. She was appalled at the thought of how this woman had no guilt even after trying to attempt a rape. Geet asked curiously – "waise Naina…tumhara to proposal tha uske liye to phir yeh sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi?"
NT smirked – "You are so nave Geet, Did you see how he was buffing my advances. Now he will be mine…line, hook, and sinker. Uske parents use majboor kar denge haan kehne ke liye"
Evening 8:00 PM
Geet met Mr. Rathod taking the packageof DVDs from him. She paid him appropriately and thanked for the good work.
Night 10:00 PM
Everyone had finished dinner and were relaxing in the lounge. Rishab, Juhi and Annie had joined them today as Geet had specifically called them. As usual there was a tense silence.
Geet made a sound to get everyone's attention. "I have something to show you all" Without any frills, she switched on the TV and put a DVD in. There were sounds of gasp and widening of eyes in horror as the discussion between her and Naintara filled the room.
Raj hung his head in shame at the mention of Geet in love with a married guy. Geet saw with pain as her family looked at her in utter disbelief.
Naintara took the chance to grab the remote. She stopped the tv and took out the CD scratching it with her nail.
Naintara – "Seriously Geet….you are the most brash person I have met. I scolded you and even after that you have audacity to tell everyone about your attraction…shame on you."
Nisha was sobbing uncontrollably and came closer to Geet – "Why? Beta….How?"
Geet held her hand to stop her. She coldly walked to the DVD player. She took out another CD from her bag and placed it and switched on the TV using panel button.
She forwarded the conversation to the point it had stopped and the discussion kept on booming as Naintara looked upon with horrified expression.
As the DVD finished room was filled with shocked faces. No one dared to move or say anything.
Naintara fumed in the corner and her face was red with embarrassment. Geet noticed that there was still not an ounce of remorse on her face. Naintara finally closed the distance and spat at her– "I should have known…you are such a self proclaimed s**t….I love him …do you understand….whatever I did was to get my love and my biggest mistake was to trust a bit** like you".Saying this Naintara raised her hand but Geet held it before it could make contact with her.
Geet spoke calmly – "You never loved him…you wanted a prize for yourself but love…never…if you had even a small amount of care for him, your heart would have bled seeing him die thousand deaths every day"
With that Geet pushed her hand away with a jerk.
Geet – "I am happy to be a s**t….and you are right…you shouldn't have trusted me…my parents gave me life which I have lived…this life belongs to the man who has cried because of you…from where I stand there is only one who is and has acted like a damn s**t"
Naintara came close to Chaiyiji and sobbed– "mumma….main maanti hoon meri galti hai but Geet kya bakwaas kar rahi hai….Dekho…aap log khud hi dekho…I love him mumma…nahin to main yeh sab kyon karti"
Preeto slapped Naintara hard couple of times– "Yeh sab mere laad pyaar ka natija hai…how could you do something like this…tere papa ke jaane ke baad I tried to fulfill his loss but I was so wrong."
Raj was too stunned to react. He spoke after few minutes – "Preeto, I think for now you and Naintara should leave. I will talk to Rishab and Maan and try to explain to him what happened and why. Now it is entirely up to them if they want to take this forward and how"
Naintara did a drama of sobbing uncontrollably but her mom just dragged her into the room. Raj took the DVD and asked Rishab to text Maan and call him home urgently saying Juhi was really unwell. He didn't want to lie but this was the only way to get him home.
Precap – Melting Ice
"Maan beta…kahan ja rahe ho…please wapas aa jao"
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