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i would like to congratulate you for successfully getting me to like mayank...i loved this update...for mayank's sensitivity...because the most important thing for a guy to do is to NOTICE 😊
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MERA DIL TERA TAMANNAON KA JAANBAQSH DAYAAR.
MERA SEENA TERI HURMAT KA HAI SANGEEN HISSAAR.
MERE MEHBOOB WATAN TUJH PAY AGAR JAAN HO NISAAR
MAIN YEH SAMJHOONGA THIKAANE LAGA SARMAYA-E-TAN.

I love my home .. God bless my country!! ..

A very happy independence to every Pakistani who is blessed enough to breath in a free air!! ..

Chapter # 6

Nupur was still in the trance of his hold as they reached home. He had left her hand just when they reached the car, but during this whole journey back home , she was just holding her left hand in her right hand, very tightly and looking outside.

"I am no more holding that hand", he said, with a smirk, and nupur smiled further, controlling her heart, she finally gained strength to pass a remark, "by the way I am not afraid of crossing roads", she said still looking outside and mayank had to slow down car to look at her, did she really answer?

"hmm, that is good to know, but with me you are always careless, you just stare at me", he said, rather in a plain voice and nupur had to take a deep breath. There was no way she could fight her blush and answer him anymore.

**

According to Pallavi Sharma, Sashi Bhsuhan , Gunjan and Samrat, time was flying, but for nupur, it felt as if time used to go still. Whenever she used to meet Mayank, she felt the world around her going still in those deep brown eyes of his'.

"nupur!!", he called her for the third time and nupur closed back the blankets she was choosing, "gi", she replied, yet again fumbling .

"why are you taking so much time in choosing blankets, I mean it's so simple, koi bhi le lo na", he replied irritated and indicating the pile on the top most row as final to the shopkeeper.

Actually nupur just wanted her room to be perfect and a dream, so whatever thing she was buying for her room, made her go in a trance, leading her cheeks to boil and a desire to buy to the best thing, so today yet again buying all for her room made her shy and hesitant.

"by the way these blankets are the first thing of my choice", he chuckled as they we paying the bill, and nupur knew that no other blanket would look good in their room ' these were perfect - because it was HIS CHOICE.

**

Mayank was already getting irritated by all the shopping, I mean it was just not coming to an end!!, so many things in just a three bed room apartment, GOSH where will they put all this!.

"listen nupur, aur kitna kaam reh gaya hai?", mayank asked as they were going out for the kitchen appliances shopping, "umm, aj kitchen ki chezain leni hai, then furniture and then other appliances as fridge and Televisions, that's it!, three more days", she replied with a smile and mayank breathed a sigh of relief, "thank God, it's getting on my nerves", he sighed and took a sharp turn and nupur although wanting to do something for his anxiety, couldn't.

**

Mayank was very happy that today finally was the last day of the shopping, today they just had to go to showrooms, for LCD and fridges and dispensers, and according to him , it wouldn't take much time.

He dialed nupur's number in the same jubilance and was waiting for through the tones when the recording declared NO ANSWER.

It was the first time in these so many days that she didn't attend the call. Feeling a strange wave of curiosity running through, he dialed the number again, and this time after a number of bells, the call was attended,

'hello .."

Mayank was about to declare how happy he was by almost shouting that yay!, it's the last day nupur, but couldn't because her voice didn't sound normal, it was so weak.

'nupur, are u okay?", he asked with concern and nupur slowly came out of the blanket, she was suffering from a sudden attack of shivering maybe because of the rain she decided to enjoy by opening the window with her hair open and wet.

"gi . main.. thek hon ..', she tried hard to reply in a normal tone but couldn't hold back the tremble.

"God!, are you shivering?, mayank gasped and nupur took a deep breath, she had no power to argue so she just agreed, "yes, slight fever, I just went in rain with wet hair", she replied slowly , controlling her tremble.

"wow!, going in rain in this changing weather, that too in wet hair, what were you trying to do?, imitate kajol?', he said angrily and nupur instead of feeling flutters that he was worried, got disheartened, "I said sorry, I never do that but today I just wanted to go in rain, but everybody is just scolding me, gunjan, dad, and now you also", she replied with choking voice and mayank was again amazed. Nupur can also get angry!.

"hey!, okay I am sorry, I know shouldn't have scolded you, but okay are u well now?", he asked sweetly and nupur sniffed, "no , I am not okay, I am shivering", she said in between sobs and mayank;s heart melted at the cuteness!. SIGH!. He is going to enjoy relation with this girl with so many shades in her character.

"awww, acha are are the fans off, are you in blanket/ and did you have something warm to eat?", he asked on a spree, but then biting his tongue, you shouldn't ask so many questions from a sick person!!.

"mujhe nahi pata", she replied frustrated and disconnected the phone, while mayank sighed."Ghalti ho gayi hai, she was already cranky and I started behaving like an investigator"

**

Nupur hid herself completely under the blanket and started crying. This was the only thing she hated, - being questioned and scolded while she was sick, and no one understood that. She was crying, and wiping tears which were compensated by new ones in a few seconds when her cell phone beeped.

She held and it and still inside the blanket it said

"One NEW message from Mayank".

In any other situation her heart would have fluttered but because she was sick and in a very bad mood, blush was no where near and thus she read the message , still crying.

"hey!!, okay I m sorry, I know this was no way to behave with a sick person .. but why do I feel that you are crying? .Please don't cry .. you'll get more sick, just go to sleep and we'll talk later when you feel better, and if it helps then you can imagine a small gesture from my side, *stroking your forehead* ..

Did it help? .. I am sure it did .. so now go to sleep .. 😊 .

Inspite of everything, this message brought a smile on her face and unconsciously she felt that same protective hold of his hand, which she felt that day on dinner, on her forehead. She made a note in her mind to reply but suddenly everything felt so peaceful, that she didn't realize that she slept holding her cell phone.

It was in the evening that she woke up, only to find that the shivering was replaced by sweating. She had slept under two blankets with all the fans off and feeling suffocated, she threw away the blanket.

An afternoon nap combined with sickness ' nothing could worse for nupur. She felt miserable and weak. Moreover there was no one at home, she couldn't even call gunjan, she was at her in laws. There was no one ..

ONE NEW MESSAGE FROM MAYANK

Her cell phone flashed, and she suddenly remembered she had someone now.

"Awake? 😊

She smiled at the smile icon, and replied.,

"Yes, sorry didn't reply to your previous message, I just slept.

"oh it's alright!, tell me how are u feeling now? Better?

"no!, earlier I was shivering, now I am sweating .. 😒

She just closed her eyes after replying thinking he will take a minute to reply but immediately her cell phone rang, flashing - Mayank.

"Hello!", she replied weakly , attending the call.'

Oho, kia ho gaya hai nupur?, I am not at all liking this weak voice of yours', that blush wali voice was perfect!", he sighed and nupur giggled, "I am sorry, I can't help"

"acha did you eat something?", he asked, this time sweetly, unlike the last time.

"no, I don't feel like eating anything, and besides cooking is the last thing I will want to do in this sickness", she huffed and mayank giggled, "don't tell me you don't like cooking?

"no I don't, I hate it, I despise it!, I just can't stand near the stove", she replied, holding all the bitterness in her voice and mayank was amazed, 'OMG!, and here i was thinking that maybe you are a perfect cook, just skillfull in kitchen, you seem so homely types na!", he said and nupur sighed, "i am homely, but I don't like cooking".

"acha now if u don't like cooking, then do you plan to remain hungry?", he asked, skeptically.

"no I will eat something, but I don't have the power to cook and I also don't want to leave my bed", she replied sternly and mayak giggled, "hmm, okay then you rest, we'll talk later okay", he smiled and although the urge rose in nupur that she wanted to talk but then she let go, "okay, bye, and thank you".

"anytime",

He disconnected the phone and nupur snuggled to herself again, she wasn't over her mood completely, but still that call made her better, she smiled and got out of her bed, and decided for a shower first. She was sweating.

After a shower with mild water, she came downstairs, frowning on thinking what should she eat, when a door bell interrupted.

She went to the door and it was a delivery boy, "Nupur Bhsuhan?", the boy asked respectfully and nupur nodded, "yes"

"ma'am you have this order", he handed her a box and nupur was hesitant, "but I didn't order", she stated as a matter of face,

"but someone did it for you", he was insisting and nupur held the box, and read the note attached on it's top.

"So, nupur gii, lunch for my would be wife .. Enjoy! 😊 .. and get well soon! 😊

A pink blotch appeared on her cheeks but suddenly remembering that the delivery boy must be giving her weird looks, she straightened her face, "umm, thank you", she replied and closed the door .

It was a pizza. She was just gazing at the box, holding the note in her hand. It was just so unbelievable; everything was turning out to be a dream. She was even blushing gazing at the pizza when her cell phone rang,

"khana shoro kiya hai ya you are still gazing at it and blushing?",

It was mayank and nupur fumbled , "umm, nahi wo ..

"YAY!!", mayank cut her and shouted while nupur was amazed, 'kia hua"?,she asked,

"you fumbled, which meant you were blushing, which means you are back", he said joyfully and nupur blushed further, "nahi wo ..

"acha okay now eat, thanda ho raha hai, and I'll see you tomorrow, we need to finish shopping tomorrow please", he pleaded and nupur giggled, "okay , sure, bye and thank you", she replied shyly.

That was the tastiest lunch she ever had in her life.

**

Next day she was blushing unusually more, remembering all that happened yesterday, she was wondering how will she face him.

Today she wore a brown shalwar suit and was pacing in her garden, when his car stopped, she went and sat in it quietly, "good afternoon, ab kaisi tabiyat hai", he asked with a full genuine smile and nupur returned back the gesture.

Mayank was genuinely happy that from today was the last day, he will not have to roam in markets, SIGH!.

"finally shopping over", nupur smiled as they came out of the mall and mayank sighed, "yes finally, from tomorrow, no roaming in markets! And no..", suddenly his words stopped seeing nupur.

From tomorrow he'll not meet nupur!.

"and from tommrow we'l not meet!, aunty called me yesterday saying as it's just a week left for wedding, so meetings now", nupur chuckled and mayank smiled, somewhere he felt something amiss.

They started driving back home and Mayank wanted to talk a couple of times but let it go because he knew she won't answer ' just fumble and go red. Although he enjoyed the effect he had on girls, all that nervousness and flutter, but with nupur, he wanted her to talk but she never did that. SIGH! . Maybe she is too shy or maybe she is too quiet, but whatever, she was a mystery for him. According to him such nervousness was a bit too much for being real. So, umm, was she pretending? .. OH COME ON! . She is so sweet, she cannot pretend, then what is it that has made me so curious?. Her acceptance to everything, her sweetness or WHAT IS IT?.

He pressed the breaks and the car stopped with a halt, thank fully they had reached her home and he didn't lose his sense in the middle of the road.

"good night nupur, sleep well and well ummm .. good bye , for a week!", he led her out of the car and said naughtily, but yet those black eyes staring at him made him feel strange. They had something which used cut him through, maybe the love and hope she looked at him was suffocating him.

"You stare at me so intently nupur", he finally said, he had never kept things in heart and nupur lowered her eyes, "it's not that I don't like it, but well it's strange, there is so much hope and so many dreams I see", he said, leaning on the car door and nupur looked back in his eyes, "I am glad you read my eyes, that is the only thing I'll ever demand and expect", she said, in a low voice and before mayank could react, she ran away inside leaving a rather startled mayank.

"Alright Sharma, you have sapno ka rajkumar type girl!, GREAT!",

he couldn't decide that was he smiling or frowning, but whatever he was ' he wasn't angry, and that was enough for him to carry on ' afterall it was his wedding in a week!.

Chapter 7 - Page 31


Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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happy Independence Day to u too kinzuuu!!!!!!!! 🤗

coming to the update!! i meant when i said i felt helpless reading about Nupur!!! somewhere i know how much she needs Mayank but it still feels bad to know the extent specially when u cant help!!! but no worries Mayank jiju is here na!!! 😳

Nupur was still in the trance of his hold as they reached home. He had left her hand just when they reached the car, but during this whole journey back home , she was just holding her left hand in her right hand, very tightly and looking outside.

"I am no more holding that hand", he said, with a smirk, and nupur smiled further, controlling her heart, she finally gained strength to pass a remark, "by the way I am not afraid of crossing roads", she said still looking outside and mayank had to slow down car to look at her, did she really answer?

"hmm, that is good to know, but with me you are always careless, you just stare at me", he said, rather in a plain voice and nupur had to take a deep breath. There was no way she could fight her blush and answer him anymore.


hayeee!!!!!!!!! 😍 not only can i imagine this scene so well, but also i feel like its all going in a dream!!!! <3 a dream that should come true!!!


lols!! the taunting Mayank is just too good!! hayeee!!! Nupur answered?? yayyy!!! Mayank have yet to knwo alot abt her!!!!!! 😎 but i like the start!! and i gguess Nupur doesnt want to win form in in arguments!!! she prefer blushinG!!!! 😉


but wht and amaizng part!! GOSH!!!!!!!!!!


Actually nupur just wanted her room to be perfect and a dream, so whatever thing she was buying for her room, made her go in a trance, leading her cheeks to boil and a desire to buy to the best thing, so today yet again buying all for her room made her shy and hesitant.



knowing Nupur , anyone can so understadn how much she loves her home, and this would be home is even more special!!! <3

so i guess time lena jaiz hai Mayank!! :p


"by the way these blankets are the first thing of my choice", he chuckled as they we paying the bill, and nupur knew that no other blanket would look good in their room ' these were perfect - because it was HIS CHOICE.


the last line left me in awe!!! how can someone be so cute and amazing!! but thats where my Nupur comes in!!! ❤️


i got scolded for this so i must explain wht i meant!!! :p


It was the first time in these so many days that she didn't attend the call. Feeling a strange wave of curiosity running through, he dialed the number again, and this time after a number of bells, the call was attended,


i love the anxious Mayank!!!!! 😳

'hello .."

Mayank was about to declare how happy he was by almost shouting that yay!, it's the last day nupur, but couldn't because her voice didn't sound normal, it was so weak.

'nupur, are u okay?", he asked with concern and nupur slowly came out of the blanket, she was suffering from a sudden attack of shivering maybe because of the rain she decided to enjoy by opening the window with her hair open and wet.

"gi . main.. thek hon ..', she tried hard to reply in a normal tone but couldn't hold back the tremble.

"God!, are you shivering?, mayank gasped and nupur took a deep breath, she had no power to argue so she just agreed, "yes, slight fever, I just went in rain with wet hair", she replied slowly , controlling her tremble.

"wow!, going in rain in this changing weather, that too in wet hair, what were you trying to do?, imitate kajol?', he said angrily and nupur instead of feeling flutters that he was worried, got disheartened, "I said sorry, I never do that but today I just wanted to go in rain, but everybody is just scolding me, gunjan, dad, and now you also", she replied with choking voice and mayank was again amazed. Nupur can also get angry!.


this part is veryy special kinzu!! its as if i saw it all happen and u very well know why!!! each oand every dialogue was beautiuflly writtn and so close to the reality!! <3

Gunjan didnt scold if i remember rightly but well, she could have done that!! 😳

so finalllyy mAYank have been treated with teh angry Nupr side!! u should wait and watch Mayank!! this is going to be soo frequent!! 😆


"hey!, okay I am sorry, I know shouldn't have scolded you, but okay are u well now?", he asked sweetly and nupur sniffed, "no , I am not okay, I am shivering", she said in between sobs and mayank;s heart melted at the cuteness!. SIGH!. He is going to enjoy relation with this girl with so many shades in her character.


OMG!!! Gosh he is already falling for her!! yayyy!!!!!!!! i likes it!!!! 😳 but the best part is the way he changed his tactics!! simple too good!!! as if made just for her!!! <3

"awww, acha are are the fans off, are you in blanket/ and did you have something warm to eat?", he asked on a spree, but then biting his tongue, you shouldn't ask so many questions from a sick person!!.

"mujhe nahi pata", she replied frustrated and disconnected the phone, while mayank sighed."Ghalti ho gayi hai, she was already cranky and I started behaving like an investigator"


ahem ahem!! how typical if u ask me!!! 😕 but yet again m in awe with the way he is understanding!!!!!! 😍

**

Nupur hid herself completely under the blanket and started crying. This was the only thing she hated, - being questioned and scolded while she was sick, and no one understood that. She was crying, and wiping tears which were compensated by new ones in a few seconds when her cell phone beeped.

errrmmm... 😭

She held and it and still inside the blanket it said

"One NEW message from Mayank".


Saviour is here!!!!! *phew*

In any other situation her heart would have fluttered but because she was sick and in a very bad mood, blush was no where near and thus she read the message , still crying.

"hey!!, okay I m sorry, I know this was no way to behave with a sick person .. but why do I feel that you are crying? .Please don't cry .. you'll get more sick, just go to sleep and we'll talk later when you feel better, and if it helps then you can imagine a small gesture from my side, *stroking your forehead* .. OMG!!! wow!!! just too good!!!!! going into Mayur dream land!!!!! 😍

Did it help? .. I am sure it did .. so now go to sleep .. 😊 .

Inspite of everything, this message brought a smile on her face ( as expected!😃) and unconsciously she felt that same protective hold of his hand, which she felt that day on dinner, on her forehead. She made a note in her mind to reply but suddenly everything felt so peaceful, that she didn't realize that she slept holding her cell phone.

It was in the evening that she woke up, only to find that the shivering was replaced by sweating. She had slept under two blankets with all the fans off and feeling suffocated, she threw away the blanket.

An afternoon nap combined with sickness ' nothing could worse for nupur. She felt miserable and weak. Moreover there was no one at home, she couldn't even call gunjan, she was at her in laws. There was no one .. (this line brought tears to my eeys!! 😭)

ONE NEW MESSAGE FROM MAYANK

Her cell phone flashed, and she suddenly remembered she had someone now. (*sighs* THANKS TO GOD!!! )

"Awake? 😊

She smiled at the smile icon, and replied.,

"Yes, sorry didn't reply to your previous message, I just slept.

"oh it's alright!, tell me how are u feeling now? Better?

"no!, earlier I was shivering, now I am sweating .. 😒

She just closed her eyes after replying thinking he will take a minute to reply but immediately her cell phone rang, flashing - Mayank.

*how could anybody doubt this perfect Maynk jiju*!!!! 😳

"Hello!", she replied weakly , attending the call.'

Oho, kia ho gaya hai nupur?, I am not at all liking this weak voice of yours', that blush wali voice was perfect!",(aha!! i agree!!! ) he sighed and nupur giggled, "I am sorry, I can't help"

"acha did you eat something?", he asked, this time sweetly, unlike the last time.

"no, I don't feel like eating anything, and besides cooking is the last thing I will want to do in this sickness", she huffed and mayank giggled, "don't tell me you don't like cooking?

"no I don't, I hate it, I despise it!, I just can't stand near the stove", she replied, holding all the bitterness in her voice and mayank was amazed, 'OMG!, and here i was thinking that maybe you are a perfect cook, just skillfull in kitchen, you seem so homely types na!", he said and nupur sighed, "i am homely, but I don't like cooking".

hayeee !! this scene was cute but as i sadi i hate the underlying helplessness!!!!

"acha now if u don't like cooking, then do you plan to remain hungry?", he asked, skeptically.

"no I will eat something, but I don't have the power to cook and I also don't want to leave my bed", she replied sternly and mayak giggled, "hmm, okay then you rest, we'll talk later okay", he smiled and although the urge rose in nupur that she wanted to talk but then she let go, "okay, bye, and thank you".

"anytime",

He disconnected the phone and nupur snuggled to herself again, she wasn't over her mood completely, but still that call made her better, she smiled and got out of her bed, and decided for a shower first. She was sweating.

After a shower with mild water, she came downstairs, frowning on thinking what should she eat, when a door bell interrupted.

She went to the door and it was a delivery boy, "Nupur Bhsuhan?", the boy asked respectfully and nupur nodded, "yes"

"ma'am you have this order", he handed her a box and nupur was hesitant, "but I didn't order", she stated as a matter of face,

"but someone did it for you", he was insisting and nupur held the box, and read the note attached on it's top.

"So, nupur gii, lunch for my would be wife .. Enjoy! 😊 .. and get well soon! 😊


i read this line and i was finally able to get over that choking feeling!!!! 😳 GOSH!!! she needed him!! and he is just perfect for her!!!! 😍

A pink blotch appeared on her cheeks but suddenly remembering that the delivery boy must be giving her weird looks, she straightened her face, "umm, thank you", she replied and closed the door .

It was a pizza. She was just gazing at the box, holding the note in her hand. It was just so unbelievable; everything was turning out to be a dream. She was even blushing gazing at the pizza when her cell phone rang,

"khana shoro kiya hai ya you are still gazing at it and blushing?", hahahaah!!! he already knows her so welll!!!!!!!!

It was mayank and nupur fumbled , "umm, nahi wo ..

"YAY!!", mayank cut her and shouted while nupur was amazed, 'kia hua"?,she asked,

"you fumbled, which meant you were blushing, which means you are back", he said joyfully and nupur blushed further, "nahi wo ..


*sighs!!!* m breathing again!!!!!! ❤️

"acha okay now eat, thanda ho raha hai, and I'll see you tomorrow, we need to finish shopping tomorrow please", he pleaded and nupur giggled, "okay , sure, bye and thank you", she replied shyly.

That was the tastiest lunch she ever had in her life.

**

Next day she was blushing unusually more, remembering all that happened yesterday, she was wondering how will she face him.

Today she wore a brown shalwar suit and was pacing in her garden, when his car stopped, she went and sat in it quietly, "good afternoon, ab kaisi tabiyat hai", he asked with a full genuine smile and nupur returned back the gesture.

Mayank was genuinely happy that from today was the last day, he will not have to roam in markets, SIGH!.

"finally shopping over", nupur smiled as they came out of the mall and mayank sighed, "yes finally, from tomorrow, no roaming in markets! And no..", suddenly his words stopped seeing nupur.

From tomorrow he'll not meet nupur!.


i simply love the way feelings have already started showinga dn being felt! he is already going to miss her!! 😍

"and from tommrow we'l not meet!, aunty called me yesterday saying as it's just a week left for wedding, so meetings now", nupur chuckled and mayank smiled, somewhere he felt something amiss.

They started driving back home and Mayank wanted to talk a couple of times but let it go because he knew she won't answer ' just fumble and go red. Although he enjoyed the effect he had on girls, all that nervousness and flutter, but with nupur, he wanted her to talk but she never did that. SIGH! . Maybe she is too shy or maybe she is too quiet, but whatever, she was a mystery for him. According to him such nervousness was a bit too much for being real. So, umm, was she pretending? .. OH COME ON! . She is so sweet, she cannot pretend, then what is it that has made me so curious?. Her acceptance to everything, her sweetness or WHAT IS IT?.


OMG!!! m in love with this character analysis!!!!!! <3

He pressed the breaks and the car stopped with a halt, thank fully they had reached her home and he didn't lose his sense in the middle of the road.

"good night nupur, sleep well and well ummm .. good bye , for a week!", (AWWW!!!!😳)

he led her out of the car and said naughtily, but yet those black eyes staring at him made him feel strange. They had something which used cut him through, maybe the love and hope she looked at him was suffocating him.

"You stare at me so intently nupur", he finally said, he had never kept things in heart and nupur lowered her eyes, "it's not that I don't like it, but well it's strange, there is so much hope and so many dreams I see", he said, leaning on the car door and nupur looked back in his eyes, "I am glad you read my eyes, that is the only thing I'll ever demand and expect", she said, in a low voice and before mayank could react, she ran away inside leaving a rather startled mayank.



ok m changing the color becasue thsi is the most important and special part!!!! this is where for the first time the shy nervous girl says what she feels and wants!!!! adn as expected, it isnt much! she just need someone to be thr!! and tto know that she belongs to that someone!!! 😍


"Alright Sharma, you have sapno ka rajkumar type girl!, GREAT!",


hehehe!!!!!1 u are still in for many shocks Mr Mayank SHarma!!! 😆 but i love the way he is making the effort to understand her!!! 😳



beautiful party Kinzuuu!!!!!!!!!!!! just the way i expect!! perfect !!! as u always right!!!!!! ❤️

it had everything!! the insight to Nupur's character, the insight to Mayank's developing feelings, the insight to the new relation taht is about to begin in a week!!!!!!

m so looking forward to it!!!! <3


ok no idea why m getting emo!! 😲 maybe its teh feling of teh wedding!! 😳


ok no scoldings!! :p

u know i love u na kinzuuu!!!!!!!!!!!1 *tight hugs*


Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago
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i loved it...😊
loved it to d core...😃
awesome update...👏👏

wow...😉
Nupur answered Mayank so well ya...😲😲
awww Mayank is so sweet...😳
i love d way he care for her...😉
n his liltle gesture...god m blushing...☺️☺️
god...Nupur directly said she hate cooking...😲😆
i was amazed...😲
Mayank sent pizza for his ""WOULD BE WIFE""😍
n d way Mayank was happy knowing her blushing m sooo happy...😃😃
ofcourse Mayank started loving her...bt he is nt realising dat...😳

YYYAAAYYY 1 week for MAYUR WEEDING...😍😍
m so excited...🥳
today's part showed different sides of our NUPUR...👍🏼
d same Nupur we all know...😉
loved d part lodsss😊👏


love u lodsss🤗
u updated dis part so early...😊
thank u sooo much...🤗🤗

bt now i hv to again wait for d next update...😕🥱


love u lodsss 😃
do continue very soon...😊
coz u know hw desparate i m for ur updates...😉😉
may ALLAH bless u...🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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OMG! I cant believe i forgot to unres my comment... im so sorry kinzu, i remembered just now...

ok first of all, HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY 😊
secondly, very well written... i liked mayank's concern here for nupur 😊 the shoppin part also was good, but what i liked the most is his concern for her... n then the way he screams a "yay" when she fumbles 😆
the SMS part was cute... hmm, i dont know i still cant trust mayank, atleast not completely... 😕 he's different 😕
anyway, brilliant writing as always kinzu ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ... thanks for the PM... 😊
Love ya, God bless 🤗
Edited by rapunzel_angel - 14 years ago
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RES

*Edited*

Wow! I didn't actually expect an update so early .. 😃
Thanks a lot Kinzu .. 😳 🤗
Coming to the update, it was MIND-BLOWING .. ⭐️ 👏
Finally we are getting to know Mayank more, yet I'm finding him too complicated man .. He's not as easy as he seems .. 🤔
& Nupur .. well she's a sweetie pie, totally cuteness personified .. I so wanna adore her .. 😳
I loved Mayank's curiousness for Nupur's character and his comment on her "Sapno ki rajkumari" .. 😊
The text chatting with emoticons between MN was tooo damn cute .. I was smiling all the way in that parts .. 😃
The concern depicting while Mayank scolded Nupur and the next day he sent a pizza packet at her place was something beyond amazing .. Awww .. he is so caring, and seriously i felt goosebumps at this words - "lunch for my would be wife" .. ❤️
& Umm.. Mayank seems to be a proud guy .. I mean, i think that he's overconfident about himself and i fear if it doesn't come in between his married life with Nupur .. 😒 😕
Mayank's thought about "enjoying relationship with Nupur" sounded weird to me .. i mean, i really don't know but i felt kind of different feeling reading that, not good though .. 🤔
Enjoying relationship and committed to relationship with all ur heart & soul are pole opposite things, i really think so ..
OMG, he is such a complex guy, yet his sweet gestures are making me blush in each update .. ☺️ .. But i really wanna know him MORE .. 😍

Overall, A MAGICAL UPDATE .. 👏 👏
How really do u manage to make everyone SPEECHLESS? 😆

Anyways, update soon .. 😛
Love
Bidushy ❤️

PS- Happy Independence Day .. ⭐️
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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edited my comment on pg 26 :)
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Thanks a lot it was a lovely chapter!
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aww its beautiful !!
loved every part of it !!
Please update soon 😳
cant wait untill they finally marry eachother 😍
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Awww lovely update...So sweetly mayank gave her comfort and sent her the pizza...And atleast he can read her eyes...Im sure one day he'll fulfill her every desire with lots of love...
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