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Posted: 13 years ago
superb
well written
Dreamyyy...
enjoyed Maaneet's moments
thanks for the the update&pm
Edited by abina03 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb
awesome
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just love this new Maan Wink kitna shararati ban gaya hai...
Precap making me restless, so next update plzz...
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART -30

Geet observing him by eye corner. She know he is angry. But she is helpless. How can she leave all the guest and go with maan. her mind is now with maan. she couldn't enjoy the party any more. When she moved to upstairs anni stopped her. " geet , where are you going .still so many guests are there. how ever maan bhai left the party. If you also leave the party what they will think. "She smiled weekly. Now she is scaring to face maan.

Its almost 10'o clock. still she is with anni and vicky. Ani is not letting her to any where. Her gaze moved to her room window. Maan splitting fire in his eyes and watching her. geet again try to move from anni . but she didn't leave her.

"geet ..pls be with me..." actually anni is interested with arjun. hole family is sitting in launch and sharing their feelings . after a long time geet is chatting with them . all they are happy about geet health. They want to finish their five months talk at a time.

Maan closed the window angrily. How can she stay with them. I am waiting from long time still she didn't come to meet me. he banged the wall with angry. He needed geet very badly right now. He came out and searched for her. still she is with dadima, vicky , anni. What she is doing. Again he went to room. Some where it is hurting that she didn't obey him. he went to wash room. He stand under the shower. When cold water flowing on him force fully still his mind is not cooled.

He finished his shower and came out. Still geet didn't come to room. He throw the towel on couch and went to bed.

It is almost 11'0clock dadima observe the time and shocked. " anni its already 11'0clock. its too late .lets go to sleep. " Geet rush to her room thanking to dadima.

When she enter the room already maan covered him self by duvet and sleeping. Actually maan didn't sleep. He is observing her by under the duvet it self. She stood near the bed some time. Then she thought he might already slept. She went to dressing table. She started to remove her jewelers and makeup. Inside the duvet he is boiling with angrily. How dare she is removing all her jewelries her self. It is my right. Already she is late?still she didn't bother to wake me or speak to me. he gritted his teeth.

Geet didn't have the mood to change her sari. She just lied on bed. Again her gaze moved to maan. still he covered duvet on him. she don't know that he is observing. She couldn't sleep alone. She moved to close to him. she joined him under the duvet. Still he is sleeping. Slowly she placed her for head on his chest. Maan he couldn't control the anger. He pushed her roughly and turned other side. Now she realized he didn't slept. He is still angry with me. she called him softly touching his shoulder. "maan...sorry...pls" her voice almost begging him. he didn't bother to turn and see her. just he pull the duvet and covered him self. Again she used her code word" maan sir...maan sir..."trying to wrapping him from backside. He roared on her" don't disturb me..." geet shocked. Why he is so much angry with me. her eyes filled with tears. She turned other side.

Actually maan melting inside . he know today he is acting like kid, stupid, foolish...still he didn't take her protest on him. how dare she is...she neglected me in party hall and chatting with others...other side his mind is blaming him. " you are not ready to love her and why you are so much possessive on her... she is just chatting with your family members not with other guys still you are so much jealous on her.. I don't know all those things she is mine . I am not ready to share her love with anybody. finally he declared. Still other mind is teasing him. " ... selfish...silly ...". His ego is not letting him to accept his foolishness. his ego is not cooling from her surrendering.

It is 1'0 clock still both are not slept. geet changing her position again and again. Maan still glued to bed . he is not even moving. Finally geet sat on bed. She decided she can not sleep any more. She on the bed lamp and went to near the dressing table. Maan observing her by his eye corner. She open the drawer and she taken something in her hand. She came to near the cot . once again she observed maan , she is taken water jug , when she about to swallowed the pills maan hold her wrist tightly. "what are you doing?" he is angry. These pills she used to take when she is disturbed mentally to sleep well. Now again... he hugged her tightly. "what are you doing geet?"

She couldn't control her sobbing. She started to cry bitterly. "then what I should do. You are not letting me to..." he sealed her lips by his. He is trying to suck all her pain from his lips. " sorry geet.. "he whispered on her lips. "I behaved like fool, stupid...sorry...very sorry...pls..." how rood I am with her...how silly I behaved with her. that day I have taken oath I won't let her to cry but today ...shame on you maan singh khurana...he dipped his head down with shame.

Still she didn't stop to cry. Her non stop tears making him restless. He kissed on her eyes. he drunked her tears. "sorry geet...pls stop it...look at me..." no still she didn't stop. He grabbed her to his chest. He kissed all over face. His hided desires again burst. His non stop kissing made her to stop tears. Finally when she responded to his kiss. He hugged her tightly not letting her to move from his grip.

"geet...how dare...you.." geet again scared. What happened to him. he take her to near dressing table. Again he rubbed her tears from napkin. Again he dressed her like before. Still she didn't understood his intension. He stand to next to her and hold her arm and show the image. "geet this is all mine. How can you take make right from me..." he groaned on her lips. He kissed on her fore head hardly. Again her sindur spread on her fore head. he locked her lips with his . her lipstick smashed with in a second. Now he moved to all over her face. within a few seconds all her make up spoiled by him.

he removed all her jewelers one by one. While removing her earring he slightly bite her ear elbow. When his hand moves to her neck chain he bite her nape . " geet.." geet closed her eyes with pressure. Now she is blushing,She felt no of butterflies flying on her tummy. When his hand moved to her tummy she hold his hand tightly. Her breath is getting hard. He removed her sari pallu. He inserted his hand on her fleets to remove. Oh my god it's a feeling of soft velvet doll .she is melting like a butter. She leaned back on him support. Already her knees lost their strength to stand on own feet. Maan lifted her from his arms.

He placed her very softly on bed. Next movement he is next to her. geet her self moved and placed her cheek on his chest. "kya hua geet?" he tugged her hairs back.

Geet kissed his chest once" this is my place till my lost breath...pls don't leave me alone..." her eyes are again teary. Maan hugged her tightly. He didn't know his small neglect can give her so much pain to her. he cupped her face. He stared on her eyes. its glowing with love and purity. Always her eyes stands for love and purity. He made her to lean on him . her lips touched to him. slowly he enjoyed her kiss. When he made her to lean on him her cleavage clearly visible to his eyes. again his wildness waked in him. he try to bite her on cleavage. But he didn't get proper access. Now he is in top her. he buried his face on her cleavage tasting her soft skin . geet bite her lower lip with pressure. His figures hurried to un dress her completely. Her creamy white mixed pink strawberry color skin made him mad. He captured her hardly." Geet..pls forgive me if I hurt u..."he whispered in her ear. us usual she buried her face in his chest with shy.

clouds. Maan desires not fulfilling with her. he need some more..some more..both are not getting enough from each other. Both are driving crazily each other. with out time sense, count less time they made love. At lost when she slept on him it is almost morning.

At morning when maan waked geet still sleeping peacefully in his arms. He caressed her cheeks with lovingly. He found many love marks on her body. he felt guilt . yesterday he is too rough with her. but she didn't complain once. She surrendered her self every thing . she gave full of love and full filled his desires. Don't know how much she hurt?.he try to replace her head to pillow. Geet hugged tightly" maan pls...don't disturb me..." in sleepy voice.

Maan:" geet if you tempt me , I couldn't control my self.."

PRE CAP: SANGEETHA SHADOW.

Happy Rakshbandhan for all my friends.

Hi friends once again I request you all ,as this is my first ff I might have done lots of spelling mistakes, grammar mistake, and etc If you want me to continue this ,please leave your comments

Edited by varsha-sharma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i apologize for not commenting on chapter 28.

i liked how Maan was being considerate about Geet's attachment to Manali and stayed back there for the rest of his honeymoon.

n it was awesome to see Geet also slowly reciprocating to Maan's overtures.
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Posted: 13 years ago
chapter 29
i want to title this chapter as " THE AWAKENING OF MAAN ".

this chapter has shown the growth of Maan's feeling towards Geet. its illustrates clearly how Maan himself has realized his possessive and one dimensional attitude in regards to his emotional attachment to Geet.

also heart warming to see dadi , annie, vicky n arjun getting together again.

thank you for giving daily updates.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hhhmmm maan is behaving very silly...
he can't even share geet wid his family members...😆😉😆😉
precap is confusing...
continue...
chao
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...how maan is feeling all possessive and protective towards her.

The precap is confusing though...why Snageeta again now...I don;t want geet to be Sangeeta's shadow...I mean whatever the "GREAT LOVE" Maan and Sangeeta had can it be purer and more intense than Maaneet relationship...what more does Maan want that he is not willing to love her...still thinks about his "GREAT LOVE" with Sangeeta...too much now...I never wanted him to forget Sangeeta in the beginning but now I do. I really want him to do justice to Geet's love...

Every love is differnet why does he keep thinking about his love with Sangeeta. I cannot think of a greater relationship than what Maan and Geet now have so don't like whenever Sangeeta name is mentioned or Maan think about his love for her. Although she was Geet's sister but no girl wants to be a "SECOND WOMAN" in their lover/husband's life even if the first woman was their sister.

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Posted: 13 years ago
dear
my collge started may be i cant comment regularly
u send me the link
and sure that i press like but cant promise when
so send me the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
when r u going to update... waiting waiting!

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