MN |Romantic Antiques| - Page 13

Wow,

This is such a brilliant read, Kankshita. I truly, wholeheartedly adore this piece of writing.

Flowed flawlessly, captured amazingly, and presented with grace. ⭐️

Loved it. 😃

Love,
You-Know-Who

aww.. Kanks (u changd ur username all of a sudden?😕 awesum name thou..😆)
cumin 2 d update..
it ws Fab... i really luv d scene.. whr mayu cheers her...n take 2 her beach... both wr more open 2 each other.. 4 d 1st tym...😃
😍so... sumthgs hav been changed... cant wait 4 d next update!
continue soon!
luv ya!🤗

Kankyyy- i just read 2 parts on one go
kankyyy brilliant update dear
simply beautiful- i loved ur writing style .. i was quite different(i think ive already told u.lol)
the way u describe our mayur- in one word i cn just say awesomeee

good piece of work...
do cont. it

Pardon me for such a delayed reply. I read this update a while ago, but I never got the time to get on the website afterwards. Also, I'm going inactive for another 3 weeks. Decided that I'd let you know first. I'll pm you for the reasoning at a later time.

Kankshita,

I am truly saddened to learn that you have left IF. Truly you have a unique writing style that I loved. However I will hope that this is not goodbye and just farewell, in that fare thee well, I wish you and your wondrous words well as they set out to beguile, bewilder and bemuse but mainly amuse you, yourself. I wish you much happiness and success upon success.

Since this is the last, I am going to really savour this last bite of crisp delight.

Episode Four

streaks of dismay Finely captured. There is something about the actual seeing of a person whom just a moment before you have built up all this latent anger, hostility and resentment for that just melts away. It is though suddenly we are reminded about their good aspects too, that twinkle in their eyes. Though that twinkle is in actual fact their pupils dilating, trying to let more light in so that they can fully appreciate the radiance of that which they secretly desire, even if to their own selves. So guess there is more to it than the eye sees.

Oddity that Nupur had conjured was her entitlement to Mumbai I really liked the composition of this line. Beginning with the substance and ending with the sentiment, a reversal of common composition and so I looked again and sure enough I found another grain. You tweak it so that though Nupur is the outsider, the oddity, it is her entitlement that affects the city and NOT the other way around as one would expect. Finely done.

lack of respect she showed to his right to speech I liked this line. The manner you bring in not just constitutional rights, or basic human rights but his own personal prerogative to express himself as and when he so wishes. Nicely done!

Then that beautiful and gentle paragraph, as the The constant momentum of the beach waters
soothing us too. Then that wondrous middle section that just melted my heart. They spoke and did not fight. She noticed how he did smile, Lovely. For, Mayank and Nupur never did and never will agree with each other. Ah! That up and down of the wave that brings them both ashore. Beautiful.

I loved how you penned the musical interlude portion of this piece, wondrously done. Then this excellent line and image, Tones of deep orange and mustard tried to illuminate their shadowy figures under the setting sun. Beautifully written.

life had only scarcely changed. I loved this chorus that you composed for this piece of choreographed melody. Dheere, dheere two people set in stone fuse together towards a determined decree of destiny.

Kankshita, I will miss your words, you wondrous notions and your wonderful writing style. IF is the less, for this loss. With much love, Sabah