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Episode One [Part One] - Page One
Episode One [Part Two] - Page Seven
Episode Two - Page Seven
Episode Three - Page Fourteen
Episode Four - Page Eighteen
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Folks, hello. I am Kankshita and I am a Mayank-Nupur die-hard. I am writing my favorite love story, which obviously is theirs on my own right from the beginning till their confession in episodes. The segregation of episodes will bare no apparent similarity with the original serial episodes but of course, the story's identical. I have realized that in order to keep my sanity intact, I will have to pen this down. Hence, this is officially a me-myself attempt, I miss Mayank and Nupur very miserably. So I am gonna write them every weekend and how! 😳



The story may be tapering in the beginning and you may find it boring and aged, but I'll catch hold of the flow shortly and that'd be when I am through and through writing sheer coolness, all Mayank and Nupur. Uh, I sound so corny.



The title of my flick is 'Romantic Antiques' and I dunno why I chose this. Somehow, maybe - MN have been classics to me, one and only kind of and they were antique, they were crisp and new in approach but they were still choicest of olden pretexts - they had the fighting, and then the academic meet and also the drama - pretty antique but it was all breathtaking, even to me. So err, never mind. Here is Romantic Antiques for you. I hope I am able to rejuvenate the same aura and develop a decent atmosphere for you, readers. We all love and miss MN dearly, and this is my attempt to stay close to them, sanity counts.



Thank you, drop in your comments and feedback and I exclusively appreciate the Like thing as well.



Period.



-Kankshita
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Episode One (Part One)

A female of nineteen, her eyes open so wide, they could have displaced off their sockets. Her lips were laced with two distinctive shades of red, scarlet and crimson and on the edges ' they were stretched enough to even get the spectator's jaw hurting. However, she shined and she had come there to conquer. It did not matter how alien the manner of people might have been to her at first, she believed always she was as much bewitching, as much the same substance to blend in seamlessly. She was Nupur Bhushan, and she'd come there to have the speed in which she ran after her dreams increased.



Apprehended by jitter and amazement, the latter no different from that which shined in her elder sister's almond-shaped eyes, Gunjan Bhushan hadn't come there to conquer or to run after any dream that occurred to her. She had come there, counting on her father's decision to have her live in a city. She'd come there, banking upon her sister with whom she was in perennial contact, by no means she once loosened her grip on Nupur's knuckles.



The lady on the left was paranoid whereas her elder sister on the right believed she had fetched everything she'd ever needed. She was where she belonged, and her apprehension was minute enough to be engulfed by her optimism and hope and joys and got absolutely forgotten. However, Gunjan's presence mattered, she hadn't lived a day without her, she believed herself enough but making an entrance into Excel College without Gunjan by her side was a circumstance of no entity.



The sisters shall be together in everything. And so they were, always.



The view was no different from the recent views to which out in the real Mumbai they were being exposed. Unlike their Morena, people who hailed from this city were dissociated and busy so much, it startled the sisters; they inferred in the people's businesses, they may lose themselves sooner or later. They valued relations and togetherness was their strength, in the city ' nobody gave a shit to the very institution.


Gunjan had already started considering that thought, Nupur decided not to rush ' maybe it was just the exterior to which they were subjected, maybe the city wasn't as hollow as it's apparent accounts showed. Anyhow, today was not the day of making calculations about the new-found atmosphere, today was a day to make peace with the college, get to know people and give rise to hopes in order to make their respective stands in the detached society into which they'd just gotten admitted.



Their hands had been interlocked for long, they sweated. Nupur, being the second-year pupil and Gunjan, a year junior struggled and decided to look for their respective classes, alone. Parting was difficult even if it was going to be soon a schedule, even though it was momentary basically.





She leaped, she traced a few people on her heels ' definitely plotting a mischief but Nupur did not pay heed and her eyes continued to wander. For what felt like an ultra kind of fraction of a second, she had grief knotting her stomach and she sighed. However, she started afresh and when she calculated a bit, she realized something was stuck on the back of her dress.



Now, the grief was consistent and the positivity was fading a bit. She carefully traced other people's footsteps straight ahead. Creatures had started to notice, and instantly anger regulated through her and it outshined her every emotion she'd felt before that day. The duppatta of her dress, she draped around her back and knotted its corner on her pinky finger. She was one lady who could beat the living daylights out of bullies and she was doing that, first thing post she got rid of only her lord knew what was written on the sheet of paper stuck on her back. She was infuriated but the embarrassment paved way for its exit. Her emotion changed once again, and she was red-cheeked this time.



She did not realize when the knot on her pinky finger opened and her duppatta flew at her back. She rushed, and made no careful steps now. Looking for the women's restroom, she took quick and massive steps; not worrying if her footwear's heal broke into two. She was hasty and she climbed down the four stairs joining two different corridors of the building in one point five steps. As she ran faster, her satin-duppatta of faded-blue with shades of lighter green lifted higher up in the air and messed with a fellow right on his face midway.



She turned around and glanced quickly at the boy who was blinded by a piece of her clothing and she pulled it away from him. She apologized and did not even look back at him and continued. For once, the aura developed her romantic antiques and classics but she ignored them miserably. Apparently, she had even more serious issues to fix.



She pushed the door of the women's restroom with all her might and it hung open and when she entered, she frenzied beings unlikely to be females who rushed out of the restroom in their towels, sport uniforms and a few more towels, stained ones on that in defense of their dignities. She shouted along with them, it was through and through reminiscence. But she liked to believe they were not joking around with her. She ran into one of the compartments and got herself locked.



Before anger took over again, helplessness prevailed. She called for help as loud as she could but nobody answered, she knew they had all left. But she continued to shout and call people for help. When her hope got to tapering, somebody came to her rescue, she asked them to make no queries and open the door quick. On not receiving another word in reply, she thought he'd left too and inquired. That was when he mentioned to her his first full-fledged sentence, main maidan chhoodkar bhaagne waloon mein se nahi hun.



Force and pressure, class eight, physics. He pushed, she pulled and she landed out of the compartment on his chest. Her face, hidden in her palms joint together and the courteous young man, looking down at her ' considering ideas of whether to pull her away or to comfort her or to make a quiet exit. He decided to stand still and let her choose, suit herself.




She move away and looked up, her eyes were glistening with all the tears welded to them. She was certain of her inability to confront him, thank him or to speak at all at the time. Hence, she disappeared from the spot and the lad just followed. On inspecting just enough, he realized his not very efficient and definitely not bright classmates were at their pull-a-prank-best.


For the day, Nupur was an official magnet attracting troubles and the fellow had come to terms with it already.

Edited by Savage - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one kanky...
plz do continue...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is amazing Kanks! :D I love how you have written. The most versatile MN writer IMHO. :) Please do continue writing, 'coz you are really good :))

Love,
Nidheya
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Kanky nice one ...thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this is a superb start to an outstanding journey and i'd be very glad to go on it with you.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one kanky...
n pls pm me nxt time
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow...!!!! its fab...!!!😍

pls cont soon...

thnx 4 pm..

payal_
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Kanky
awesome start dear
i alwz adore ur style it was really very different and nice
awww me too miss my mayur loads
ur update reminds me mayur first meeting at men's loo...
beautiful update
keep it up do update next part soon


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