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Posted: 13 years ago
dear,thanks to response on our comment...
we,all just love ur update...
ur ideas r superb....the way u r going ahead with ur new and different ideas, really impresses us...u r maintaining affords to keep our excitement same ...and i must say u have succeeded...
now,give us an awesome update like always as soon as possible...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

I want to shoe Maan's pain and Geet's strength...hopefully that will be reflected



Im sure it will be reflected:D
i mean your amazing talent for writing will pay off:D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Let us keep our fingers crossed

ya dear i too hope so...but iske liye tumhe jaldi se update karna padega na thats why...plzzz update fasttt...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Even if Geet ovehears it doesn't help Eva...she is her cousin sister...how will she convince the family?
Maan has already spent a day brooding and is probably in no state of mind to think staright
I know it is hard but I believe that Men are more strong physically but that makes them like a brittle strong rod. It breaks when you put emotional pressure on it. Women on the other hand are weaker physically. They are malleable and bend flexibly when the same pressure applies to them
Maan is strong but his pride, ego, dignity are going to play against him not for him...Let us see how they come out of misery...Hope you will like my POV

I completely agree.
Men are more stronger physically whereas women shine out much more emotionally and mentally.
If you remember the movie HUM TUM...
Abhishek Bachaan told Saif Ali Khan...
" Aurtoon ko hamari zaroot kam aur humein zyada hai"
"Woh humsein yahan (physically) kitni bhi kamzoor kyon na ho, Lekin hum yahan (emotionally) bahut kamzoor hain unsein"
If a man's ego is hurt, it is basically like he has lost everything...
If a man feels ashamed of himself...meaning if his self-esteem is hurt...than it is almost like he is at the deep end of the well...and only him meaning only the man can do something to bring him up...cus men than take it personally and they will do anything and everything to make it right...
But while they are doing this...they will brood, sulk, be ashamed...feel guilty...basically torture themselves...
Edited by Water. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

You are pretty much bang on with analysis. I have added my comments to clarify or add

Thank you so much for the reply.
Muahhh🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting eagerly for the next update dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you friends for all the awesome comments. You made it really worth to try my hand at this sequence.

I also got a comment that I am dragging this FF too much. From my side I have tried to introduce different aspects and move the story forward. But I need your sincere opinion. I have already typed out next two tracks so nothing can be done for that. But if you feel the same, I can stop adding more things going forward and close this FF in a month's time or so. I don't mean it in a wrong way. Your sincere feedback will help as at the end I want to write only if you guys enjoy reading. Don't worry I will close this track properly as it is already typed out.

So do let me know your thoughts. Without further ado here is the next chapter.

Chapter 57 – Love and Pain

Maan had receded in his old shell again. He hadn't spoken another word since then to anyone in family. Geet had called him couple of times but he never picked up her phone. He was worried about her health and has asked Adi to take care and involve Dr Mathur if required. He spent almost his whole time in office and came home only to change.

Geet had tried talking to him but he would not pick up his phone. One day she went to hospital but he refused to meet her saying he was busy.

Two Days later

Geet got a call from Adi.

Adi – "Geet…please come quickly to my cabin in hospital urgently…I need to speak with you"

Geet – "But Adi…"

Adi – "It is about Maan Geet. Please come"

Geet agreed and reached hospital with a pounding heart. Lot of thoughts twirled in her brain. "Is something wrong…has he hurt himself…does he want to talk to me?"With all these questions she knocked and entered Adi's cabin to find Adi sitting alone with a brooding expression on his face.

Adi got up and hugged Geet.

Geet looked at him worryingly – "Kya hua Adi"

Adi said thoughtfully "I don't know Geet that how you feel about what happened. I can understand your anger and I am thankful that you came"

Geet – "Aise mat bolo Adi…I love him and that is a fact. Off course I am hurt but that doesn't and can't alter the facts. I love him and somewhere I still trust him. I don't know what happened back there. But I am sure my Maan can not hurt me knowingly. I can not be wrong about the love I saw in his eyes all these days. And I can't be wrong about the pain I see in his eyes now."

"You give me too much credit Geet. I don't deserve it. It is better for you that you forget everything. Forget I even exist"

Geet and Adi were startled by Maan's voice but before they could react he walked away.

Geet sighed in defeat – "Why did you call me Adi?"

Adi "I saw a bottle of cetrozone in Maan's pocket (Guys again it is a fictitious name as I have zero medical knowledge)."

Geet looked with a question on his face.

Adi continued – "I was trying to get a pen from his jacket's pocket. Cetrozone is used to slow down heart beats incase of a stroke. In a normal person, it can stop a person's heartbeat in less than 5 minutes"

Geet's eyes widened with fear "What!!! What are you trying to say…He could have it for a patient?"

Adi shook his head – "I don't think so. You don't carry this type of a drug in your pocket as it is highly controlled. I asked him about it but he did not answer me. I am very worried Geet about his state of mind. He has gone back in a shell and hardly speaks. He is showing all classic signs of depression. I tried talking to him Geet. Only one who could drill some sense into him right now is you Geet. That's why I called you"

Geet was very worried – "But he is not even talking to me. He has been avoiding me like plague"

Adi replied trying to convince her – "I know Geet. He is ashamed and feeling very guilty of what happened. But you have to try."

Geet nodded her head. She thought for a while. "Only place he can not walk away without creating scene is his clinic. Can you get me access without an appointment?"

Adi nodded and they both went to his office. Adi spoke to Maan's secretary and then walked into his room along with Geet.

Maan presses his lips in a thin line as soon as he saw Geet. Tension was clearly visible on his face.

Maan – "Geet, please leave. There is nothing I have to say and there is nothing you can tell me"

Geet - "Adi can you please give us some privacy?"

Adi nodded and left them alone. Maan looked at her skeptically.

Geet – "Please Maan…why are you pushing me away? What is my fault?"

Maan – "Geet I don't deserve your attention"

Geet "Don't I get to choose Maan…as a matter of fact there is nothing to choose…my heart has already made that choice"

She came close and cupped his face. "Maan, I love you. I trust you. Please don't do this to me Maan. I will die…maybe I can borrow that cetrozone from you"

Maan looked shockingly at the sobbing Geet. Tears rolled down her eyes. She hugged him and cried hard. All her pain and anguish just poured out of her soaking his shirt. Maan stood straight and did not hug her. But he didn't push her back either.

After her tears subsided, Maan spoke coldly "You should leave Geet. That cetrozone was a weak moment. I can't take easy option after what I have done. I also know that you are brave and caring enough to not put your parents thru this. So nobody is dying Geet"

Saying this Maan opened his door and asked Mrs. Raashi to send the next patient in. Geet knew that was her sign to walk out.

A week passed as if time was suspended in eternity. Rishab did not even see face of his son let alone talk to him. Maan stopped coming home altogether.

Geet found out from Adi that Maan rented a studio apartment and spent few hours there in place of coming home. Maan had no strength left to face anyone. Luckily Dr Sood and other hospital staff did not get wind off his personal problems. Other than his seriousness and long hours at hospital there were no outward signs which were more to their liking if anything else.

Geet's resolve to get her Maan back strengthened as time passed.

A week later

Geet sat at caf with Adi and Pinky.

Adi – "I tried my best Geet to talk to him. All he said was that he had come home to find Naintara at home. He wanted to leave but she said you are going to come soon. He wanted to talk to Uncleji about you so he thought of waiting. He was nervous so he took one beer. Just one beer and that too bud light. But he felt dizzy after the drink and though he tried to go his body did not hear what his brain was telling. Last think he remembers is Naintara taking him inside the room as he told her to call uncleji. Her last words were – I am going to take care of you or something like that. That's it. He doesn't remember anything else…nothing."

"I have spoken to him couple of times. I don't think he is lying. Though it is very odd but maybe he got drunk with one beer as he was empty stomach. Maybe his mind is trying to suppress bad memories. I don't know Geet but I don't think he is hiding anything"

Precap – Spill the Beans

Edited by ritzy09 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yipee..me first after such a long time
Ok Di I really love Geet she is so understanding ...she still believes in her love
Adi is such a great friend
Uff...thank god maan ne suicide ka plan cancel kar diya...good to hear no one is dying
Fine atleast Adi knows exactly uss din maan k behosh hone se pehle kya hua tha... now I feel very soon the truth will b out
Di aap chahe kuch bhi kaho I m sure uss din maan n NT k beech mein kuch nahi hua...
Precap se lagtha hai k mayb the truth will b out very soon
n regarding ur question Di I love ur FF n I want u to continue it ... ii is not at all boring so pls don't wind up this FF
love-Piya
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow..amazizng update.
poor geet n maan
cant wait for the nxt update.
thx
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey really painful yaar...
i wanna jovial maan back...plz tell me everything is lie n nothing happened b/w maan & nt 😡...plz...n hey don't end this FF yaar...looking fwd...

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