Phir Mohabbat - Maaneet ff link to nxt thd pg 152 - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
Added u dear in my buddy list
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Hinal

Thank u sooo much
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Hinal

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ... loved part 3


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

sorry 4 d late comment , was out of town ...

Thank u sooo much
n no problem dont say sorry yaar
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sorry guys for not updating
will update today
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Edited by hinal_maaneet - 13 years ago
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just read the rest, beautiful!
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awesome start Hinal...totally loved it
waiting for more
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awesomee luved ittt
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Awhhh!!! What a Sweet Story! Glad I Took Some Time to read it 😳
Amazing!
Please Add More MaanEet Scenes! :D
And update Soon x
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NICEE ONE HINAL I LOVED ITTT IT IS GOOD
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PART FOUR

After breakfast,Dadi n Geet went for a walk n they talked about many things.Then Geet asked "Dadi aapki family ke bare mein kuch batao na" n so Dadi replied "Beta meri family khandaani family hai the Khurana Family.Mere pati Amar Singh Khurana ne Khurana Constructions ki neev raki thi aur usse bulandi yoh pe chadaya tha.Phir mera beta Veer ne company join kiya aur 2 saal baad woh chal baase aur tab humari beti Bani ki pati ka bhi dehant hogaya tha toh hum Bani aur Shilpa unki ko hum yaha Khurana Mansion mein leke aye.Shilpa ko 2 bhai ka pyaar mila aur Maan aur Vicky ko ek behen mili.Par humari khushi kisi se bardast nahi huvi.Jab Maan 15 saal ke the aur Vicky 10 saale ke tab Veer aur Madhuri ka car accident hogaya aur Veer chal baase par Madhuri bach gayi par woh abhi bhi coma mein hai.Iss hadse ke baad humara Maan pura badal gaya.Jo humesha muskurata aur sabko khush rakh tha woh ab sab ko daanta tha unki galati yoh ke upar.Hume business ko sambhalana pada toh hum Vicky aur Shilpa ko time nahi de paye par Bani ne unko sambhala.Par 1 saal baad pata chala ke Bani ko cancer hai n uska treatment shuru karwaya par woh 3 mahino mein chal baasi tab hum puri tarah toot gaye par Maan ne hosla nahi hara aur usne Vicky aur Shilpa ki zimedaari li aur 2 saal baad office ki bhi aur phir usne Vicky ko London bheja padhai complete kar ne ke liye" While telling this Dadi had tears in her eyes n even Geet had listening to all this n she had more respect for Dadi n her family who had gone through so much but were still strong.

Like this 2 weeks go by.The next morning Geet wakes up n is surprised to see servants running around the house doing the works.She went to Dadi n asked her "Dadi kya ho raha hai yeh sab???" n so Dadi replied "Beta aaj Raksha Bandhan hai toh Shilpa aur Armaan arahe hai aur Vicky bhi araha hai" n so Geet excited n nervous to meet Dadi's grandchildren started helping in the works.

Later as all the works were finished Dadi told Geet to get ready n gave her a beautiful anarkali to wear which she had purchased for Geet when they had gone shopping last week.

Geet's Dress

After she got ready when she was coming down,she saw Dadi talking to a girl in a Pink Ghargra n a guy in sherwani n when she reached down she saw Armaan n was shocked n happy also.

Shilpa n Armaan

As Armaan turned n saw Geet he just hugged her tight.Dadi n Shilpa both were confused as what was Armaan doing.As Armaan left Geet he asked her "Chutki tu yaha kya kar rahi hai???Aur Karan kaha hai???Kaisa hai aur baaki sab kaise hai???" n till then Vicky had come down after getting ready.
[He had come when Geet was getting ready]

Geet "Arre Bhaiya shant ho jao itne sawal phele bhabhi se toh milo.Sorry bhaiya aapki shaadi mein nahi asaki exams thi na so."

Armaan "Koi baat nahi chutki.Shilpa yeh hai Geet mera dost Karan tha na uski choti behen n Geet yeh hai Shilpa" n then Shilpa came n hugged her.

Shilpa "Hi Geet"

Dadi "Arre Geet beta aapne bataya kyu nahi ke aap Armaan ko janti ho???"

Geet "Dadi mujhe nahi pata tha ke Armaan bhaiya hi aapke damad hai.Par Dadi yeh kaun hai???" Pointing towards Vicky.

Vicky "Hi mein Vicky hu"
Still image of Sushant Rajput
Vicky

Geet "Hiii mein Geet hu"

Armaan who was getting very restless now asked "Geet bata na tu yaha kya kar rahi hai???"

So Geet told "Armaan Bhaiya last month jo terrorist attack huve the Mumbai mein toh woh Karan Bhaiya ke office ke kareeb hi huve the aur Bhaiya office se nikal rahe the ke kissi terrorist ne unhe shoot kar diya aur phir police ghar par bhaiya ki lash par Mama aur Papa yeh sagma seh nahi saake aur woh raat ko neendh mein hi chal baase aur mujhe Mumbai chod ke ana pada" n she started crying n hugged Armaan.

Vicky told Nakul to bring water n then he gave it to Geet.After calming down she told "Im sorry Dadi meine aap sab ka mood kharab kar diya"
n so Armaan replied "Chup pagal tune mujhe call kyu nahi kiya yeh sab huva toh kya mein tera Bhai nahi hu???"

Shilpa kept her hand on Armaan's shoulder to calm him down n then Geet told "Nahi bhaiya aisi baat nahi hai woh sab huva toh yaad hi nahi raha aapko bolna.Sorry bhaiya " n held her ears. Armaan seeing her holding her ears very cutely said "Thik hai chalo ab mujhe rakhi nahi bando gi kya???" Geet nodded n then Shilpa tied Rakhi to Vicky n Geet tied to Armaan.

After everything was over Vicky came to Geet n said "Hi Geet sorry about ur loss.Par agar kabhi bhi tumhe kisi se baat karni ho toh feel free to come n talk to me" n then forwarded his hands n said "Friends???" n Geet nodded her head n shook hands with him n said "Friends".

After sometime Shilpa asked Dadi "Dadi aaj Maan bhai ane wale hai na toh kaun gaya hai airport???" n Dadi replied "Beta tum toh janti ho na ke woh kisi ko ane nahi dete bas gadi bej dene ko bola hai"

After dinner all were sitting n Vicky played the song. Shilpa pulled Armaan n they started dancing.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bo9MEM-LsX0[/YOUTUBE]
quien eres tu?
donde has astado?
he removido cielo y tierra y no te encontre

Shilpa started dancing with Armaan

Y llegas hoy,
tan de repente,
y das sentido a toda mi vida con tu querer

Armaan twirled Shilpa n then Vicky came n sang

na main samjha...na main jaana...jo bhi tum ne mujhse kaha hai Senorita
magar phir bhi...na jaane kyun...mujhe sunke accha laga hai Senorita

N then the 3 started dancing together

no desvies la mirada
quedate cerca de mi

Then Armaan pulled Geet n she began dancing by interwining her arms with his.

mujhko baahon mein tum ghero, samjheen na Senorita
Then Vicky came to Geet n forwarded his hand n Geet accepted n they began dancing along with Armaan n Shilpa.

chaahat ke do pal bhi mil paayein
duniya mein yeh bhi kam hai kya
do pal ko to aao kho jaayein
bhoolein hum hota ghum hai kya
Senorita, suno suno, Senorita kehte hain hum kya

Geet came towards Armaan n twirled him n then went towards Vicky n then he twirled her.

jamas podre
interpretar
el sentido de las palabras que me dedicas

Shilpa twirled with Armaan n Geet twirled with Vicky.

pero el calor
de tu mirar
me hace sentir como la mas bella senorita

They changed partners n Geet twirled with Armaan n Shilpa with Vicky.

nigahon ne nigahon se kahi armaanon ki daastaan hai Senorita
ke chaahat ki, mohabbat ki saari duniya mein ek hi zubaan hai Senorita
mujhse ab nazar na phero, aao paas tum mere
mujhko baahon mein tum ghero, samjheen na Senorita

Armaan started singing the song n he started moving towards Shilpa n then pulled her n they began dancing.

chaahat ke do pal bhi mil paayein
duniya mein yeh bhi kam hai kya
do pal ko to aao kho jaayein
bhoolein hum hota ghum hai kya
Senorita, suno suno, Senorita kehte hain hum kya

Vicky started dancing with Geet n he started twirling her around but when the music she was about to fall n then she felt two strong hands steady her.

Meanwhile Maan had arrived home n was surprised to see all dancing n when he was about to move he saw Geet who was about to fall n went n held her.Geet's hairs were flying as she had left it open n they were teasing his face n he got lost in her scent n began dancing as he heard the song.

jo bhi pal beeta hey Senorita
har pal tumne hai dil jeeta bas itni si to baat hai

He turned her so that she was facing him n he got lost in her eyes.Geet was surprised as this person began dancing with her but when she saw his eyes she was lost in those deep black eyes n followed him as he danced.

no desvies la mirada
quedate cerca de mi

And then as she came out of the trance she pushed a bit n he left her n then she went and joined Shilpa.

mujhko baahon mein tum ghero, samjheen na Senorita

Then Vicky n Armaan pulled Maan n the 3 began dancing.

chaahat ke do pal bhi mil paayein
duniya mein yeh bhi kam hai kya
do pal ko to aao kho jaayein
bhoolein hum hota ghum hai kya

Then Shilpa n Geet pulled Dadi to join them n all of them started soing random steps.

chaahat ke do pal bhi mil paayein
duniya mein yeh bhi kam hai kya
do pal ko to aao kho jaayein
bhoolein hum hota ghum hai kya

As the song finished Maan went to Dadi n bowed down n took her blessings n then hugged her.Then he went n hugged Vicky n then he went to Shilpa who was showing her anger on him n so he held his ears n said "Sorry Shilpu plz maaf karde todha late hogaya" n as Shilpa melted n hugged him he winked to Armaan.

Then he asked Dadi "Dadi yeh kaun hai???" pointing towards Geet n so Dadi replied "Beta yeh Geet hai Armaan ki behen aur humari care taker."

It then hit Geet that Maan was the same person who had spoiled her dress that day n so she started getting angry n so when Dadi was going to introduce Maan to her she interrupted Dadi n said "Dadi mein inse mil chuki hu aur ab mein yaha kaam nahi karne wali Dadi.Im sorry mein iss ghar mein kaam nahi kar sakti jaha pe yeh rehte ho" pointing towards Maan.

Precap-
What will Geet do now???????

Im so sorry guys I updated so late actually I was not well n so couldnt n to compensate ur waiting i have given a long update n now i want long comments.
Thank u of u for liking the part n commenting.

Love,
Hinal
~Prev~ Part 3 ~Next~ Part 5
Edited by hinal_maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res
oye...mujhe pata tha i'll be 1st...😃
to yay..me 1st!!!!!

aur yeh kya???
maan and geet ki family pe koi
curse hain kya
jo ek ke baad ek members marr rahe hain????😆

ok ok mazak nahi...
on a serious note...
the 1st part was soo sad!!!😕
both hve lost so many things!!!!!

and luved armaan and vickey's entry
and senorita dance...😳
wow...girl...
super cool!!!👍🏼
i like tht song!!
and maan dancing too..
haiye mar javan gud kha ke!!!!!😍

and maaneet met...
again she is in his arms...😆
hehehehe...geet doesn't want to work in KM now
wonder wht will be maan's reaction!!!!😉


shabash meri behen...for the long update!!! *pat pat on ur back*😉

continue soon!

Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww itz kool
waiting for the update tmr

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