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Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: ananya95
awesome updt
wow geet & dadi instantly connected wid each oder & talked freely
bechara maan lost in geet although there was bump & catch i fear a fight as her clothes were now spoiled
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm

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Originally posted by: wajiha-1
good one

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Originally posted by: Sunnipwincessx
Nyceee xx

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Shruti Jain

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

finally read them all

quite interesting

when will you continue

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Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: jasan22
wow awesome
waiting for the next part

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Hinal

Originally posted by: sharmake11
brilliant part
love it

cont soonnn

ty 4 pm

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Originally posted by: jyoti_l
lovely...

wow dadi n geet...good ...

again they met..n got lost...😆

hope she gets the job..i know she will...😉

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

Thankkk u sooo much Jyo

about job u will have to wait n see 😉

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Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
Loved the update! Can't wait to read more!

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Hinal

Originally posted by: khushboo22
nice update

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Originally posted by: Ramhari
Very nice update.
Maaneet meeting was so beautiful.
Maan once again totally impressed by Geet.
Daadi and Geet's bonding was beautiful.
Geet will defo get the job.
Maan is so lost in her totally fallen.
Waiting to know Geet's POV too.
Continue soon.

Thankkk u sooo much di

geet will get job or not u will have to wait n see

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Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Neetu2825
Great update!

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Hinal

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Nice SS
Liked the updates
Geet is shant n sweet
Evn Maan was shweet
Lets c wats ahead

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Hinal

Originally posted by: drashsree100

Wow ! Maan already lost in her 😆
Even Dadi sees Geet as her bahu 😳
Me too 😛 😆

Wonderful update 👏
Thanks for pm .

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Hinal

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly
Beautiful part,continue soon

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Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: pickachu
Nice update!
Loveee maneet scenes.
Continue soonnn.
Thanx for the pm.

Fatima

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Hinal

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever
awesome update...lolz...our Maan is a Romeo deeply in L-O-V-E...it's great to see in this kind of role...
and Dadi and Geet seem to have hit it off well..
looking forward to more...

Thankkk u sooo much reya

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Hinal

Originally posted by: Abhakaran
Wow nice start hinal
Sorry replying late

U should continue soon plz want to read more since I never read FF of maan and geet

Part 1 and 2
Both part Were awesome I just can't belive that maan is in love wow
Great start

Continue soon

Thankkk u sooo much

i feel so happy that u r reading my maaneet ff though u dont read their ffs

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Hinal

Originally posted by: smj1977
finally read them all
quite interesting
when will you continue

Thankkk u sooo much di

will update today

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Hinal

Edited by hinal_maaneet - 14 years ago

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Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#107

PART THREE

As Geet realised her hand was burning she got very angry n started in her Express Speed "Excuse me aap andhe ho kya dikhai nahi deta hai kya???" n then not allowing him to answer again started " Hey babaji mere saare kapade kharab kar diye ab mein kya karu???Mera interview" n made a baby face seeing up.Maan seeing Geet seeing the ceiling n talking started laughing n then he stopped when he saw Geet glaring at him.Maan thought of saying SORRY to Geet but before he could say anything she again started " Hello mister mein aapse hi baat kar rahi hu Sunai nahi deta hai kya???" Before Maan could tell anything she stomped away.

Maan in his mind "Bhagawan isne toh mujhe kuch bolne hinahi diya" n gets angry that Yash was not prepared the project presentation properly n he had cancelled the deal.

At Indian Paints,

Geet's dress was already spoiled n by the time she could clean n come she was late for the interview n she was rejected.Geet was very angry on the guy who had dashed n bcoz of him she had to lose the last chance for her.

After half an hour she went to the Krishna Mandir n was sitting on the bench where she n dadi were sitting n she remembered her parents n tears started flowing from her eyes.

Geet's Mom "Geet puttar aram se chal beta warna gir jayegi" n as she was running she nearly fell when her brother Karan stopped her from falling n then her mom n dad rushed to her n checked whether she was hurt or not n then Karan told "Tujhe kitni baar bola hai ke bhaag mat par tu sunti kaha hai" n so Geet replied " Arre bhaiya mein kyu daru jab aap sab hai na mujhe sabhal ne ke liye" n hugged her brother.

Someone wiped her tears n that is when she realised that she was crying n looked up to see Dadi had wiped her tears.As soon as she saw Dadi she wiped her tears n smiled at Dadi. Dadi sensing that something was wrong asked Geet "Beta kya huva???Aap ro kyu rahi thi???" n so Geet replied "Kuch nahi Dadi woh bas ghar ki yaad agayi toh asu agaye"

Then Dadi to divert her mind asked her "Acha Geet beta aapko woh job milgayi jis ke liye aaj aapka interview tha???"

Geet sadly replied "Nahi Dadi mujhe woh job nahi mila aur mein kal delhi chod ke ja rahi hu" n hugged Dadi.

Dadi was shocked to hear that Geet was leaving Delhi n so she said "Geet beta aapko job chaiye toh hum aapko job dete hai.Aap hamari caretaker ban jaye.Humari tabiyat abhi kuch thik nahi rehti aur agar aap humare saath hogi toh humara bhi koi mil jayega jo humare saath rehenge"

Geet replied "Lekin Dadi mein kaise" but Dadi interupted n said "Geet aap hume Dadi manti hai na toh plz humare liye aap maan jaye na" n finally Geet agreed. Dadi in her mind "Acha hu ke Geet maan gayi varna hum usko kaha dhoondh te" n then she n Geet left for Khurana Mansion after finishing the evening prayers.

As they entered Khurana Mansion Geet was shocked to see a palace like house.

Dadi then told Nakul to clean the guest room n gave Geet's house address to the driver n also sent a servant n told them to bring all the luggage to KM. Till then she told Geet to come with her n she showed her the whole mansion.Geet loved it very much specially the terrace n the garden.

Dadi then told Geet to rest for a while n then they would have dinner together.

After finishing dinner Geet was helping Nakul clear the table n at that time the phone rang n Dadi picked up the call.Maan had called to inform Dadi that he has to leave to London tonight only so could she pack his bag n send to the airport n he would go there directly as he still had a meeting to attend n Dadi said "Thik hai beta" n kept the phone back.Maan was shocked that Dadi didnt throw any fit that he is going for a trip n informed her at the last minute n she didnt complain that he doesnt spend more time with her n so on n then shrugged it off.

Dadi told Nakul to pack Maan's bag n send it to the airport with the driver.

Dadi then went to her room with Geet n as she entered she tuned her radio but the songs where not at all nice n so after sometime she offed it and at that time Geet started singing for Dadi as she saw that Dadi was not liking the songs played at all n while singing she remembered her family only.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TiSYyg8k8ks[/YOUTUBE]

As she finished this song she remembered singing this song every year on her birthday n tears were flowing from her eyes remembering it n she ran to her room n locked it from inside n cried holding her family's pic the whole night.

The next morning Geet woke up n freshened up n then when she went out of her room she saw that Dadi was worrying about something n so she went n asked "Dadi kya huva???Aap itna ghabrai huvi kyu hai???" n then Dadi seeing Geet alright sighed in relief n hugged her.

Then she told "Beta kal aap rote huve gayi thi tu hume ghabrahat ho rahi thi" n then she told the servants to serve breakfast n they had breakfast.

Precap-

Will Maan know that Geet stays in his house???

Will Geet leave the job???

Guys the part in Blue is flashback

Thank u of u for liking the part n commenting.

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Edited by hinal_maaneet - 12 years ago

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punam

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Posted: 14 years ago

#108

hey hinal,so sorry mai bahut dino tak IF par nahi aa saki aur na hi koi ud padh saki...actually mai buri tarah personal problem mein fansi hui hai...bhagwan jaane kab chutkara milega!...anyways nice ud ...very well written...aur maha aarti evening ke time hoti hai not morning...but its ok, loved the videos and pics...cont soon dear...

punam

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MystiqueDew

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Posted: 14 years ago

#109

Part - 1

Ye rae ...itna chota update ...not fair hinal😆

Brilliant start!!!

Love sparkles @ first sight ...bechara lost his conscious @ first sight itself😆

nice update.

Part - 2

Beautiful ..but Hinal ..one suggestion ...in that bhajan there is Male voice too ...U might have come up with Maan signing it ...loosed in her ...which ll make Daadi's to plan some thing which ll make her wish turns to reality more soon.(If U didn't like it just ignore it)

So Maan - Yash meeting means that Maan took over Indian paints???

wonderful update!!!

cont. soon

PS: Sorry sweetheart for very very late comment

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Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: anamika2010
hey hinal,so sorry mai bahut dino tak IF par nahi aa saki aur na hi koi ud padh saki...actually mai buri tarah personal problem mein fansi hui hai...bhagwan jaane kab chutkara milega!...anyways nice ud ...very well written...aur maha aarti evening ke time hoti hai not morning...but its ok, loved the videos and pics...cont soon dear...
punam

sorry to hear that u r in some problem which is not ending soon but dont worry it will soon end

thank u for telling me that maha aarti happens in evening will make a note of it but for this time it is ok

thank u sooo much

love,

Hinal

Originally posted by: amzu32
Loved the updates!!!

thank u sooo much

love,

Hinal

Originally posted by: -dia-
Part - 1

Ye rae ...itna chota update ...not fair hinal😆

Brilliant start!!!

Love sparkles @ first sight ...bechara lost his conscious @ first sight itself😆

nice update.

Part - 2

Beautiful ..but Hinal ..one suggestion ...in that bhajan there is Male voice too ...U might have come up with Maan signing it ...loosed in her ...which ll make Daadi's to plan some thing which ll make her wish turns to reality more soon.(If U didn't like it just ignore it)

So Maan - Yash meeting means that Maan took over Indian paints???

wonderful update!!!

cont. soon

PS: Sorry sweetheart for very very late comment

thank u dia for ur suggestion

i wanted to do like that but geet has not seen maan till the end when she bangs into him so i changed it

but dadi's reason to select geet as his bahu was the way maan was looking at her n geet touched dadi's heart by taking her blessings even though she is a stranger

n dont say sorry yaar u commented na that enough for me

n reason for maan yash meeting given in part 3

love,

Hinal