Phir Mohabbat - Maaneet ff link to nxt thd pg 152 - Page 20

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ASMI95

loved it

it ws too gud dear
very very nice update
thnx fr da pm
plz cont soon n dun gv da update sooo l8

asmi kaan pakad ke sorry for updating late again
thank u soo much
love,
Hinal

thank u sooo much
love,
Hinal

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Hiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved ArSh
Loved da bond between geet nd armaan
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm

thank u sooo much
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bangalores

nice update...great song yaar...

thank u sooo much
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Hinal

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, beautiful update
loved it
emotional start

armaan and vicky entry
loved it
loved geet's dress
loved the dance sequence
precap is interesting
continue soon

thank u sooo much di
love,
Hinal

Originally posted by: piya-

Hey dear my like button is not working

I loved the update rakhabandhan special and the initial dadi n geet convo was sweet as well as emotional
hai ye kya geet ne faisla liya k she won't work with maan
no no aisa nahi ho saktha geet chali gayi toh love story aage kaise badegi
continue soon
love-Piya

thank u sooo much piya
love,
Hinal
Edited by hinal_maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u sooo much
love,
Hinal

Originally posted by: Sunnipwincessx

Awsome kashz the besttt xx

thank u sooo much
love,
Hinal

Originally posted by: Ramhari

Very nice part
Poor Maaneet have gone through so much.
Maan lost most of his family one by one
Whereas Geet lost her whole family.
Good that she met Daadi.
Armaan Shilpa and Vicky's entry was very good.
So Geet is not alone she has her brother's friend Armaan.
Loved Geet Vicky's bonding.
Maaneet confrontation was awesome.
Maan was completely lost in Geet while Geet recognized him.
Uh Oh
she wants to go away
Wonder what will happen now
Continue soon.

thank u sooo much di for such a long comment
even me wondering what will happen next
love,
Hinal
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jasan22

Wow awesome part
Waiting for the next one

thank u sooo much
love,
Hinal

Originally posted by: ansah

That was awesome update...really beautiful

thank u sooo much
love,
Hinal

Originally posted by: angel_smily

wowww yaar nice story

plz add me in ur pm list

thank u sooo much
added u in my buddy list
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Hinal
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anamika2010

hey hinal,read all parts,its a superb ss...happy to see shilpa and arman,but both families have faced so many troubles.waiting for maaneet love...love u...

punam

thank u sooo much punam
even im waiting for maaneet's love
love,
Hinal

Originally posted by: Abhakaran

awesome updates hinal

its for lates updates
take care of urself first
health is important
update sooon hinal
i cant to read what will hapeen next ?

thank u sooo much for commenting n understanding my condition
will update soon dont worry
love,
Hinal
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART FIVE

As soon as Geet said that Maan n Dadi were shocked n turned their face towards her.Geet realising what she said started laughing.After a while she stopped n told Dadi "Dadi aapka chera dekhne layek tha" n again burst out laughing.After she stopped Dadi said "Geet beta aapne hume toh dara hi diya tha" n so Geet replied "Arre mein kaise aapni itni pyari Dadi ko chod kar ja sakti hu.Dont worry Dadi itni jaldi aapka picha nahi chodungi" n hugged Dadi.

Then Shilpa broughther pooja ki thali n did Maan's arti n tied rakhi on his hand n then he gave her a S pendant.
After this all returned to their rooms but Geet went to the terrace to get some fresh air as she was not sleepy.There when she was thinking about the evening she was surprised herself that she didnt say anything to Maan n then she thought that maybe bcoz of him she met Dadi n she got to meet her Armaan Bhai again n so she didnt say anything.

After sometime when she was going back to her room she heard some noise from the gym n so she went to see who was there this late in the night.As she entered the gym she saw a man in black track pants n shirtless doing excerise with his back towards the door.She wanted to know who it was n so she entered the room quietly n as she entered the person turned n she saw that it was Maan but she hid herself before he could see her.As she saw his muscles flexing she couldnt stop but stare.

Maan felt as though someone was watching him n so he turned but found no one n so continued his excerise.Geet began going out of the room as she knew that she wouldnt be able to stop staring at him n she didnt want him to catch her sneaking in the room n so as she was about to leave she felt his chest touching her back n his breathe fanning her ears.She started breathing heavily n then he wishpered huskily "Geet tum yaha kya kar rahi ho???" but she couldnt answer as her mind couldnt think of anything but his breath.Maan smirked seeing his effect on her n then he slowly moved in front of her n then suddenly he snapped his fingers in front of her n she came back to reality.

He again asked her "Geet tum yaha kya kar rahi ho???" n so she answered him without looking into his eyes "Woh...woh meine yaha se kuch awaaz suni toh mein dekhne agayi ke yaha kaun hai" n started twisting her dupatta in her hands.Maan smiled seeing her twisting her dupatta n then said "Ok Geet Good night" n before she knew he kissed on her cheek n went to his room.

Geet was shocked when Maan kissed her cheek n kept staring there n after few mins she realised what happened but saw that Maan was no where there n so she went to her room n first she took a warm shower to cool her senses n then slept as soon as her head hit the pillow.

Maan was confused as to why he kissed Geet n then he thought "She looked so cute when she was twisting the dupatta that I couldnt resist the urge to kiss her" n then he smiled n went to sleep dreaming about Geet.

The next morning,Geet woke up n went to walk with Dadi n Vicky joined them.As they entered the house after their walk they saw Maan coming down the stairs in his business attire n seeing this Dadi asked Maan "Maan bete aap kaha ja rahe ho???" n so Maan replied "Dadi woh office ja raha hu.Kal ek jaroori meeting hai aur uski taiyari baaki hai" n so Dadi said "Lekin beta aaj toh sunday hai aur aap kal hi toh aaye hai London se todha toh araam kar lijye"

Maan"Nahi Dadi abhi sara kaam baaki hai" n so Dadi replied "Theek hai beta aap jaiye aapko humari phikar kaha" n sat on the sofa with a grumpy face.Maan smiled seeing Dadi act like a small baby n so he knelt in front of her n said "Thik hai Dadi hum nahi jate office theek hai par hum sab log aaj bahar jayege agar ghar mein hi bhethna hai toh mein office chala jaunga" n Dadi smiled hearing it n said "Theek hai beta hum sab aaj picnic pe jate hai.Kitne din huye hum sab ek saath kahi nahi gaye.Geet beta aap aur Shilpa jaldi se khane ka intezaam kijye aur Vicky tum aur Armaan gadi nikal waye hum todhi der mein nikalenge"

All got busy doing preparations for the picnic.As Maan was going to the kitchen to drink water he saw a strand of hair teasing Geet n she was trying to push it back but her hands had a bit of flour n he was mesmerised seeing this n he walked towards her n put the strand behind her ear.Geet was startled by Maan's touch n so she turned around quickly n the flour plate which was in her hand flew n then they were covered by the flour.Maan was lost looking at Geet as she was trying to remove the flour from her hair n then he held her hand n removed a bit of flour which was on her face.At this Geet realised that she was standing very close to Maan n she moved a bit back n by then Dadi,Shilpa,Armaan n Vicky came into the kitchen hearing the noise n started laughing seeing both covered in flour.

Geet then ran away from there feeling embrrassed n Maan also went to his room n changed n came down n then they left to go fot the picnic.

Precap-
Picnic n more fun

sorry guys for updating late
Hope u all r happy after reading that geet has not left the job.
Thank u of u for liking the part n commenting.

Love,
Hinal
~Prev~ Part 4 ~Next~ Part 6
Edited by hinal_maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update!
thanks for the pm

precap looks good =]
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely Update
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great story...i would love to read the whole story...
will be doing that just now...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
sooo cute
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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