My Poetry Zone - All added in 2nd Post on PG 1

The poem is lovely, but considering the mood I am in, this line

wow! what a lovely poem Shruti! HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY😃

hey SHRUTI dear...

Wowww lovely poem shruti its Amaging Superb... Great work...

Originally posted by: Shruti_HR

Many days have passed

Ever since the final day had approached

When a gloomy figure stood for me

Waiting with a concerned pale face

No one ever was this concerned

My delight and depression were known to her

Many days have passed

Since the last time I recalled

The golden moments vanished long ago

The silent yet smiling childhood under a warm dusk

Which is alive in my heart till now

And will light up my life forever

Many days have passed

Since the last time feelings were spoken

Now everything is in a deep stillness

The stillness which coils around me

No one ever tried to value the ache

And all the emotions departed in vain

Many days have passed

Since the last time I fall sick

And a pale face enquired about me

I still remember the concerned stare

But just memories are to be recalled now

As the last stage of an existence may meet it's end

JEETI raho aur hamesha KHUSHYUN kay saayey mein raho BACCHA...😊
SHRUTI... ye saari LINES jo main nay mention ki hay...
is ka WORDS kay BEECH KA GAP bhi us DARD aur TAKLEEF ko show ker raha hay...😭
magar baccha... is POEM mein HOPE nahi...🤢
kyun baccha... GHALAT hay na ye baat...😭
DIL ko UDAASYUN kay beech na aany do😭
warna UMEED ki her ROSHNI wapis ho jayey gi...😭
DARD PYARA hota hay... aur QEEMTI bhi😭
magar kya hum us DARD ko KHUSHI ka hawala nahi bana saktay😭
tumhari POEM mujhay buhat DARD day gayey...😭
magar phir bhi main main PUR UMEED hun😭
is ka NXT PART yaqeenun HOPE per hoga...😃

Thank you all for appreciating, I'll reply to all.

Beautiful n Lovely Poem Shruti 👏⭐️
Keep It Up 👍🏼

Wow Shruti di.👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

nice poem😊
bt few lines made me😭