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nice updates...

Interesting part!
plz do pm me after updating the 2 parts!

Originally posted by: Dilsay

Thanks for the lovely update dear...

sorry could not comment on ur last update...😭

Great going dear...

Now Maan's past is also disclosed so there is no confusion no suspense left as far the characters r concerned...

lets see how you would take this track with Maan on bed Majboor and Geet is incharge of ahem ahem 😉😳😆

continue soon

Originally posted by: magicia

aap kyun nahee samajthey hum besabaree se aapka comments ka intezaar meim rahtha hi ..u bedard dil ...

upadting next part in half an hour

Originally posted by: Dilsay

Heyeee main marjawan ghur kha kay

main aur bedard dil...puppy face

Me waiting with my open arms..🤗🤗

Originally posted by: alamuabi

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Part 8. Fiddling Riddles

02 August 2011

13:12

Intro:

Geet , soon to be a Nun,which she don't like at all , she is not forced but because of her obligation towards church and  Maasi who save d her (details in ff )  , presently she is Maan's home nurse from 18.30 to 8.. maan is in a "coma  vigil " state .she works to find means for her study MBBS .Her course is over waiting for convocation and soon she is going to return back her orphanage to undertake "novitiate" ( i dont know much details about the process of making nuns .pardon me for errors and help if you know it so that  i can correct ). One night , she do a beautiful sin for which maan was dying for . Is it enough guys ..please please press like button that gives me a count how many like it and motivates me to write further ..

me loving the flow

Part 9:Royal malfeasance

02 August 2011

19:13

Intro:

Geet , soon to be a Nun,which she don't like at all , she is not forced but because of her obligation towards church and  Maasi who save d her (details in ff )  , presently she is Maan's home nurse from 18.30 to 8.. maan is in a "coma  vigil " state .she works to find means for her study MBBS .Her course is over waiting for convocation and soon she is going to return back her orphanage to undertake "novitiate" ( i dont know much details about the process of making nuns .pardon me for errors and help if you know it so that  i can correct ). One night , she do a beautiful sin for which maan was dying for . Is it enough guys ..please please press like button that gives me a count how many like it and motivates me to write further ..