Mystery Girl updated Note on 148 - Page 16

Originally posted by: Speechless

Maan's funeral at India ik dukh kafi nhi tha k he is in comma [half dead] k bechare ka funeral e karva diyaAll because of that dev n his Mother...

Nahee rey ,,Uff ithna nafrath ,, Pamela is so busy seeking another guy for her next night and Dev is trying his new combination of drugs ,,, they are stupid souls ..lol ..he just asked what he felt ... and that i liekd otherwise Maan will be treated in some highfigh hospital surrounded by all specialists how can he be a *shh * victim of geet wink wink ..lol😉

Poor soul he cant even express his love to Geet [His lady love] What type of expression of love you want . lol .Remember Maan already expressed his love..that night it was not just geet ...ahem ahem ..😳...... Kahien maan k accident mein bhi tu dev ka hath nahi haijese os ki soch hai

No No Dev and his Moms hands are so clean as if they just washed by detol... they are simply characterless ...ignore kar ignore kar ..

Originally posted by: abina03

7,8,9 brilliantly well written updates

thanks for the update &pm

waiting for maaneet scens😍

Part 10 :  Drama Queen

02 August 2011

23:01

Intro:

Geet , soon to be a Nun,which she don't like at all , she is not forced but because of her obligation towards church and  Maasi who save d her (details in ff )  , presently she is Maan's home nurse from 18.30 to 8.. maan is in a "coma  vigil " state .she works to find means for her study MBBS .Her course is over waiting for convocation and soon she is going to return back her orphanage to undertake "novitiate" ( i dont know much details about the process of making nuns .pardon me for errors and help if you know it so that  i can correct ). One night , she do a beautiful sin for which maan was dying for . Is it enough guys ..please please press like button that gives me a count how many like it and motivates me to write further ..

  hey ..its so cute Right ..Not deleting