MG-FF- Ch7+LstCh-Pg26(29/05/15)-Learn True Meaning Of Luv| COMPLETED |

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Posted: 14 years ago
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What is love?

What happens when love just become a simple word? devoid of any emotion.

"Pyar, is zyada koi bhi khoobsurat ehsaas nahi hai hai" that is what often a girl says.

"Pyar, uh oh, yeh to roz ka kaam hai" that is what often a boy says.

LEARN TRUE MEANING OF LUV

Prologue


To be continued if I receive good response

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Kashish
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Posted: 14 years ago
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cont soon plz sounds interesting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice prolorgue plz update soon.,...nd add me to ur PM list...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i says u to continue soon😉😉😃
nice one dear...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting prologue! update soon! waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PROLOGUE

It was morning time, Mumbai city was waking up, for going to their work or simply their activity. Mumbay a city that never slept.

But there were exceptions...

There was a huge house and in this huge house there was huge room where wall were covered by girls half nu** posters and race cars' posters. There was a shelf, where all the family pictures had been placed. All the pics were of the men, precisely 3 men, no girls were present in them. There was a huge four poster bed, but nobody was there.

Maybe in the bathroom? no, nobody there as well.

Somebody entered in the room and sighed helplessly "I am fed up with him, he is always out of house all the time, now I am going to tell dad."

Another man spoke "what do you want to tell me Rahul?" he was in his late 50.

"see dad Maan is not at home again, why don't you stop him?"

"I think, you are right now he is all the time out of the house, I'll talk to him whenever he comes in front of me. Now come for the breakfast."

Rahul nodded and joined his father on the breakfast table. While eating his dad asked "Where are u planing to go for the holidays?"

"dad i don't know, first I have to discuss with Maani" replied Rahul

"oh well when he comes u ask him about that too."

"yes dad"

...

12 AM

In a hotel of Mumbai, room n203, two bodies were entangled in one sheet. The girl opened her eyes and looked toward the guy. The guy too opened his eyes.

"good morning honey" said the girl

"good morning shalini, now get up, gather your stuff and make your way out"

he told her this in one breath, took her hands away. Shalini was confused "It's sheena and I thought you love me Maan." said the girl on the verge of crying.

"love that was love which I made all the night, now u can go your way and I can go in my way." said Maan with a smirk on his face. Sheena was shocked and wasn't able to believe her ears.

"DIDN'T YOU HEAR ME TAKE YOUR STUFF AND GET OUT," Shouted Maan which frightened Sheena ans tears form in her eyes, she covered herself with the sheet, took her dress and made her way to the bathroom. she came out, pick her bag, walked toward the door.

"wait sheena" Maan stopped her. Sheena turned, she thought maybe he came back in sense, she had a smile.

"you forget your mobile" Maan grinned evilly. She took her mobile then moved toward the door. Stopping on the edge of the door, she turned toward him.

"Maan you know when you'll get to know the real meaning of love you'll regret what you have done in the past."

"Maan never regret anything he has done." he laughed

"we'll see that" she challenged him and left the room, slamming the door.

"girls are too silly and especially this one, she was tough, I was with her whole month, and finally she was convinced I love her."he chuckled. "Once again I win the bet, have to meet Abhi. Stupid woman."

He smiled widely and entered in the bathroom. After a few minutes. Making his way out of his room, in the lobby, he saw a very cute girl.

"time to show your charm, Mr Maan Singh Khurana" He went in front of the girl "hi" said Maan.

The girl check him out meanwhile Maan did the same, Maan waved his hand once he finished checking her out

Maan repeated with his charming dimple smile "'hi' what's your name, pretty girl?"

"Hi my name is Tanya and your's good name?" smiled Tanya

"nice name and my name is Maan" Maan kept smiling

"Maan is a very good name" added Tanya

They shook hand, then after some talking Maan, took her for the lunch. They finished eating and it was time to say 'bye bye'.

"are you free tonight?" Asked Maan

"yes" Replied Tanya

"so would you mind to join me for dinner at 8pm at this restaurant?"

"Of course, I'll be there, bye" Maan hugged her. Tanya smiled and left.

"Maan Singh Khurana your charm can never reduce, you are the best." He complimented himself

...

IN FRANCE-10 am

In a small town, there were lots of house, with modern designs these houses belonged to rich peoples. There a was a huge house,of cream color, where unknown of anything, there was a girl sleeping on her bed. She was smiling as she was dreaming about her prince charming.

Someone entered in her room, and tried to wake her up by calling her name "Geet beta wake up Thierry is waiting for you outside"

She jumped from the bed and opened her eyes, green eyes "Thierry??? Oh my god, he is gonna kill me, mom please tell him to wait for me just ten minutes" requested her mother.

She jumped from her bed and went to the bathroom, quickly came out from the bathroom in towel, threw her towel and the bed, quickly wore pink strapless top and blue jean till knee, apply light make up, like doing eyelashes and apply pink pale lip gloss, checked herself in the mirror. Makes her way toward the kitchen, grab an apple.

"mom I am going, I'll come by 9pm and don't forget you have to go at uncle Mishra's house, his wife is again sick." Informed Geet

"ok Geet, Your dad and I will go together and if we are not home by 9PM then go at Thierry's house, now go otherwise, you know how is Thierry right?" Said her mom

"yes mom, bye" she quickly hugged her mom and exited. Now we see a guy, laying relaxingly on his car, with eyes closed and humming a french song, he knew she is there, so he stopped humming, opens his eyes, dark brown eyed guy, and stood up from the car.

"Oh! La belle au bois dormant est reveill , au ma plaisir." said Thierry with sarcasm (oh the sleeping beauty woke up!, oh my pleasure!)

"je suis desole Thierry" she apologized but he was still angry so she pouts her lips "desole." ("I am sorry Thierry" (...) "sorry")

"Oh mon dieu, pourquoi je ne peux pas reste enerve avec elle des quel fais cette genre de truc?" he muttered (Oh my god, why can't I stay angry with her as soon as she does thinks like that)

She went to him and hugged him "parce que tes mon meilleurs amis (because you are my best friend), ou sont julie et william? (where are julie and william?)"

"william avec julie et julie avec willian (william with julie and julie with william)" Thierry grinned

Geet rolled her eyes then glared at him and said with sarcasm "tres drole (very funny)"

"c'est pour ca que tu ne rigoles pas (that's why u r not laughing)" Said Thierry with smile, he loved to tease her, it's his favorite hobby.

And then he burst out laughing on his own sentence and Geet too join him, they sometimes began laughing without reasons, they were inseparable. They knew each other from childhood, he lived two house away than hers. When they stopped laughing.

"donc ou sont-ils? (so where are they?)" She asked again

"Qui?william et julie? (who? william and julie)" Asked Thierry with a naughty smile. Geet nodded.

"Ils ne viennent pas avec nous ils vont nous rejoindre directement aur parc axterix (they won't come with us, they'll join us directly at parc axterix)" Thierry replied

"ok"

"maintenant viens et assis dans ma voiture, sexy (now come and sit in my car sexy)" Said Thierry more like ordered her

Geet liked whenever he calls her sexy. She went in the passenger seat and sat down. 'You know what Thierry is a damn fan of bollywood movies, it's an other fact he doesn't understand everything, but u know he is completely a romantic guy, even if he doesn't understand everything he will drawn completely in the film. And watching devdas, he was crying at the end. He is big fan of SRK, he also knows some of SRK's dialogues'

They both are sitting in the car, Thierry turned on the CD player, and it's from rab ne bana di jodi film's song going on- 'haule haule'

(Hey guys from now on I'll write in English even the french dialogues, very rarely you'll find a french dialogue, as It take me more time to write in the both language, so Thierry and Geet chat in french but I'll write in English)

"Thierry I want to listen tujh mein rab dikhta hai"

"so wait, first I want to listen this song, then I'll play what u want"

"u r so...so..."Geet said annoyingly but she wasn't able to find a proper word

Thierry laughed "what happened? Can't find the word? I'll help youu, hot, sexy, handsome" said thierry with a smirk

"SHUT UP" yelled Geet

"ok, sexy just relax" but she is still angry "Ok,ok I'll play it," He forward four track before tujh mein rab dikhta hai "now happy?" Asked Thierry

She nodded happily and give him a side hug, by seeing that he too smiled, then she sat back on her sit "you are the best thierry"

"you are the best sexy"

They burst out laughing, they kept chatting in the way, after 20 mins, the song which is played is "marjani marjani" from billo barber, Thierry start singing in the same way,not all the song only marjani marjani "marjani marjani kasman nu khani marjani"

Geet burst out laughing, she was holding her stomach tightly, Thierry turn off the player, Geet stopped laughing

"did I sang bad?" Frowned Thierry

"no" Replied seriously Geet and she pulled his cheek "you were looking so cute when you was singing and man you are a better singer than me"

"I know that" Said Thierry and set his collar

Geet stared at him and was angry once again "you are so full of yourself"

"sexy you know I was joking right?" Said Thierry with a cute smile

"right" Geet grinned

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sensational Start

Maan is a Casanova and for him winning the bets is much more important he deceives girls by telling them he loves them and once he gets them to bed he leaves them.
on the other hand Geet is enjoying her life

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Maan is a Casanova.and geet is ful of life
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing pro maan is such a casanova he treated sheena so badly just to win the bet n looks like he doesnt like woman n geet is so sweet n her friend also he loves srk movie wow lovely concept plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Maan is Casanova n he go to any extent for the bet. First seens n now Tanya . Geet is jolly n ful of life.

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