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CHAPTER 6


Geet sat in the taxi with tears spilling out, she really wanted to hug him and said that she loves him back but she wasn't ready to believe him once more. She wiped her tears as she promised Thierry she would be alright.

Maan stood up and told to himself "I know Geet, I have hurt you a lot, I will prove you that I really love you. And if I am not able then I only want to see you happy that's all" he left to his home.

The first thing Geet did going out home was to call Thierry and she told him about Kashish and Rahul. And she also told him about Maan, he was Rahul brother and took a promise that he won't do anything and Thierry had to agree helplessly as he couldn't say no to Geet.

The only reason Geet didn't create ruckus because she knew it was not Rahul's mistake that his brother was this way. She could not punish her brother. Just the way a man had no right to judge a woman by her sister, just the same way, she had no way to judge Rahul because of Maan. Besides that Kashish knew about Rahul and the rest the parents would handle.

As Kashish entered in the house, she saw all her family member there. As she gave one glance toward Geet, she knew looking at her naughty face that she had told them. Kashish had eyes wide open, she didn't knew what to do. "Dad...I..."she said fumbling on her word

"I what? When were you planning to tell us" Asked Omi angrily

Kashish gulped down as she was scared "I tried but I wasn't able to say" she said in low voice but all were able to hear it.

Everybody burst out laughing making her frown, she finally understood that they were teasing her "dad that's not fair, and bhai bhabhi you too joined them. I understand Geet didn't let any chance to tease me but you too guys" she said and then she pouted with her arms crossed against her chest.

All went to her and gave her a big hug. She instantly melted. "So tell Rahul to come here and ask your hand."

Kashish and blushed and ran to her room, leaving everybody their laughing. Reaching in her room she closed the door and sat on the couch then she called Rahul.

"Hi Rahul"

"Hi jaan, how are you?"

"I am fine, you tell?"

"I am also fine"

"actually Rahul, my family know about us as Geet told them and they want you to come here with your family to ask my hand"

Rahul knew Kashish was blushing badly "Ok we'll come tomorrow in the evening and by the way you look beautiful and so sweet when you blush"

Kashish looked around the room and said "Rahul, have you by any chance fitted a camera in my room?"

Rahul chuckled and said "no...It's just I know you very well"

Kashish smiled at this.

After saying bye to Kashish, he went to his dad's room and told him about Kashish. Well his dad knew about Kashish. "Dad we have to go at their house tomorrow in the evening to ask her Kashish's hand for me"

Rahul's dad chuckled seeing his impatience "Oh someone is getting impatient regarding his marriage"

Listening that Rahul blushed a bit. After that he went in Maan's room he saw him sitting in the floor roll in a ball, his head was placed on his knee along his hand. Rahul knew something was wrong between Maan and Geet.

"Maan" said Rahul and bent down in front of him. Maan tilted his head and saw Rahul. Rahul has noticed he was crying, his eyes were puffy "why were you crying Maan?"

"Bro she hates me"

"What's her name?" asked Rahul

"Geet"

Rahul's eyes were wide open, he wasn't able to believe his brother has played with his going to be sister-in-law's feeling and he was also happy that she has changed him. "Maan, you mean Kashish's sister, how can you play with her feeling? Now I understand why she was asking those kind of questions" Rahul sighed and shook his head.

"Bro, I really love her, I don't know what to do so that she believes me" asked Maan helplessly

"So at least you finally realized you love her. Maan just listen your heart and please don't hurt her again as I am going to side with her. And just give her some time, she won't able to trust you again and that too after she got her heart broken by you"

Maan nodded "I promise bro I will never hurt again even if she doesn't forgive me." said Maan "bro can you sleep with me like old time, please"

Rahul smiled, he was getting his true bro back "Is this even a question to ask?" Rahul stood up and helped Maan to stood up. "And by the way tomorrow we are going at Kashish's house to ask my hand" Rahul said with a smile.

Maan lowered his head, he wasn't able to face to Geet he had hurt her a lot "bro, I won't be able to come"

"Maan come on, we are going to take my marriage proposal there. Please for my sake" Rahul asked Maan like a cute baby that Maan wasn't able to say no so he agreed, then they went to sleep.

The next day, in the evening, everything was ready for the dinner. Geet was roaming around the house and talking on the phone, she wearing a pink baby top with jean till her knee. She was looking sexy and hot yet cute and adorable.

"Thierry she throw me out of the room, can you imagine?" asked Geet

"Hehe" Thierry laughed uncontrollably "So where did you slept last night?" asked Thierry when he was able to stop laughing

"I slept in the room with her, it's just now she was going to get ready for Rahul so she kicked me out, anyways when are you coming?"

"Well I don't, my last exams is three-four days and then I'll come for as soon as I got ticket"

"Ok but I gotta be soon"

"Yeah don't worry sexy"

As Maan, rahul and their dad reached at their house, Maan was amused to see the bungalow and the cars parked, he wondered 'why Geet traveled in taxi?'. "Bro you sure they live here?" asked Maan

"Of course Manu, now come"

"Bro it's not..."

Rahul interrupted "It's not Manu it Maan, now shut and come Manu"

Maan sighed and made his way toward the house along Rahul and his dad. He rang the bell and waited.

On the other side, Geet was still talking to Thierry when she heard the bell. She made her way toward the door "Thierry I'll call you in a minute, I think Rahul and his family has arrived". By the time she hung up the phone, she was already near the door. She opened the door and saw the three man, she was confused to see no woman but 'does it matter to me?'.

Maan was left amazed, he has seen her for the first time in this kind of dress. He couldn't deny but she was looking beautiful. His eyes were stuck on her while he knew that she wasn't paying any attention to her and it hurts her but it's was he deserved.

She saw Maan was standing there and his was looking handsome but she didn't looked at him instead she said "namastey' and touched rahul's dad's feet and said to Rahul "Hi jeej". Finally she said a quick 'Hi' to Maan and led her in the living room.

"You guys sit here, I will call everybody." saying that she left and called everybody. In no time everybody were there expect Kashish.

Rahul was getting impatient so he asked Omi uncle "Uncle, where is Kashish?" Rahul asked hesitating

"Jeej, you are really impatient, chill yaar, I'll bring her right now" saying that she left toward Kashish's room.

In no time, Geet came down with Kashish. Rahul was left amazed, she was looking beautiful in that blue salwal kameez, his mouth was wide open. Geet made Kashish sat next to Rahul. Rahul turned his face toward her with his mouth still open, he was completely mesmerized seeing her.

"Jeej close your mouth otherwise mosquito will make it's way in your mouth" Everybody burst out laughing hearing this expect Maan who was too much sad to even smile, Rahul who was embarrassed and Kashish who was smiling and looking down.

"Omi Bhai Sahib we'll come straight to the main point. Actually my son Rahul loves your Kashish a lot and We too like her, so we want to ask her hand for Rahul"

"Arre why only hand you can take all Kashish" said Atul, Geet and Atul Hi-fived, and the rest laughed making Rahul and Kashish shy. As Geet's mobile rang, she looked at her mobile and saw Thierry was calling her 'Oh shit I completely forgot to call him'. She quietly left in the garden.

"So yeah like Atul was saying we came here to ask Kashish for Rahul, Are you ok with the proposal?" asked Rahul's dad

"Of course we are, all we want is that my children to be happy and that's all" said Omi with a smile.

All the elder were discussing about the marriage, a pandit to come there in few minutes. Maan just wanted to be with Geet. After every second, he looked toward the garden where Geet was sitting on the swing.

"Guys, you carry on, I'll be back in a minute" everybody nodded and proceed with their discussion.

Geet said bye to Thierry and turned to enter in the house, in the same time she saw Maan and her eyes which contains happiness were full of rage. Seeing that Maan lowered his eyes.

"Geet, I want to talk with you, please just give me a chance"

"Mr Khurana, there is nothing left to be said or be listened" said Geet with a rude tone

"Geet please, I know I made a mistake but please forgive. In the last days, I have died million deaths." said Maan with tears, it was making Geet weak, but she knew she has to be stronger and not give in.

"See Mr Khurana, you are My sister's going to be husband's brother, so just stay that, don't you dare cross your limits" she said coldly, she glared at him and entered in the house. She turned and looked behind, he saw Maan on his knee and she knew he was crying, her heart too was crying to see him like this but she wasn't able to forgive him, not at least yet, she turned and joined everybody.

They fixed the marriage after 7 days, as a Pandit told them, there was a good mahurat on that day and they agreed. It was Sangeet a day before marriage. Geet hugged Kashish who blushing badly.

Maan too entered and saw Geet's happiness 'I am sorry Geet, I know I caused you so much pain, I can feel the pain on your face, in you eyes, If only I could rewind the time' a tear licked down, he quickly wiped and hugged Rahul and congratulated him 'at least unlike me Rahul got his love'

As they were over with the discussion, Rahul's dad said with a smile"I think we should go now, it's getting late"

Everybody agreed and then Rahul's dad left after blessing Kashish, Geet and Anjali and hugging the men.

Before leaving Maan turned and saw Geet with all the love in the world 'my one mistake cost me to be away from her' Thinking that Maan left with his eyes moist.

The next six day passed so quickly, they were lots of preparations to do and still they were doing the last touches. The sangeet ceremony was held in Kashish's house. All were running here and there. And in an hour all the preparations were complete. Geet looked at all the preparations and sighed in satisfaction. "Now I need a bath, I really stink" mumbled Geet

"No you are smelling fabulous" Geet knew it was Maan, she turned toward him, they were seeing each other after six days, he was wearing a light pink sherwani, she glared and moved toward her room when her mobile rang, she stopped in her track and picked up the phone.

Maan was really hurt to see Geet still angry with him, but he knew after all that he had done this is nothing. He was about to go back but as he remembered why he came here, he just made his way toward her.

As Geet felt someone behind her, she turned and on the same time said in English "I hate you". Maan lowered his head hearing this. "Don't you dare call me again" with that she cut the call.

She was sad to see Maan hurt but it was all his fault that they are so distant "what do you want Mr Khurana?" the word 'Mr Khurana' from her mouth pierced his heart, it held so much anger.

"Atul is calling you" said Maan not able to meet her eyes

"Tell him, I'll come down once I am done with my shower" said Geet and made her way toward her room.

'Geet, I hope you'll forgive me soon, I can't live without you anymore' as he turned he saw a little temple he made his way there, took his shoes out and entered in the temple, he sat on his knee and joined his hand 'I know god, I have never come here for so long but today I really feel like coming here, I have done lots of sins, but god please forgive me please give me a last chance, I promise I'll keep her always happy' prayed Maan with tears running down.

Before Geet entered in her room she turned, her heart wanted to see Maan, she saw Maan in the temple, for the first time, she was surprised but she shrugged of the thought and entered in her room and saw Anjali who was making Kashish ready. Geet smiled.

Maan stood, he wiped his tears and made his way into the party, he told Atul about Geet and Atul just nodded.

She took a quick bath, got dressed into a pink gharara, she was looking extremely beautiful. She aplied some light make up and made her way down. She was not is her usual mood. As she entered in the hall, all eyes were on her she was looking an angel. She greeted the guest, teased Rahul a bit for being impatient and then she made her way to Atul who happened to be standing next to Maan.

Maan was completely mesmerized seeing her she was really looking an angel.

"Yup, Jeej you called me?"

"Yeah, Geet bring Kashish down if she is ready"

"Ok, I'll bring her down in a while" Saying that she made her way in Kashish's room, Kashish was already now, she was wearing a yellow light lenhga with beautiful embedding as mehndi too was supposed to be today.

Ridhima went behind her and hugged her "kissi ki nazar na lage" she put kajal near her ear "you looked breathtaking...Now come down, everybody are waiting for you specially Rahul jeej" said Geet cheekly the last bit, Kashish blushed. Then all led Kashish down.

As Rahul saw Kashish coming down, he was left spellbound. Kashish was now sitting next to Rahul. He complimented her and she only blushed.

Anjali and Atul came to Rahul and Kashish and said "before the ceremony start, I want Geet to dance and she won't dance without Thierry being here, now you two guys have to cheer her" said Anjali threatening both Rahul and Atul. In both eyes, horror was clearly visible.

Maan looked at Anjali and Atul going on the stage he wondered 'what are they talking about?' as his moved toward Geet his eyes halted on her, he wasn't able to move his eyes from her.

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Geet in tears
When he confessed he loves her she would ave jumped
But now sge cant trust him
As he is the one who broke it
She told about rahul in her house n all agreed for marriage
Seeing geet innmodern avtar n being rich maan is confused
Marriage prep going on n geet doesnt leave any chance to tease rahul
Rahul too came to know geet is the girl who maan played with
Geet dance...thierry will join making maan j .I think so
Nice part
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nice ud
rahul knows about geet and maan
maan asking forgiveness from geet
and geet not ready yet to forgive him

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beautIful update..maan was truely repending but its not easy for geet to forgive him.. waiting for next
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fantastic update... you wrote the feeling of maan and geer very nicely... Rahul and kashish are getting married... maan disclosed to his brother about his doings with geet... geet though update and angry with maan but still feeling sad for him...
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maan is regretting but geet is not ready to forgive him well deserve wow rahul n kashis r going to married happy for them nice part thnx 4 pm
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maan beta jo galti tumne kiye uska toh varpai karni hai na...so bhukto... n try try till u succeed...

lovely update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
brilliant update! well written! Geet behaves indifferent! Maan reveals 2 Rahul wt he did! Rahul advises him! Maan stunned seeing the place! Maan admires Geet! she js ignores him! Maan hurt bt he bought this on himself! Rahul n Kashish getting married!
Edited by khwaishfan - 10 years ago

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