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Posted: 14 years ago

Part -23

Maan rushed out picking her . within few minutes even his body sucked with her blood. He feared ,he didn't feel so much of fear in his life . her unconscious made him mad. He drive his car madly to sanjeevini. He is crying from his heart. He is feeling like somebody plucked his own precious thing from him which is only his own. It is very painful. It can not be explain, it can not be express with anybody. While driving he call dadima. When he reach sanjeevini. Anni rushed with ward boys to him. even dadima with her.

Anni and dadima both scared observing geet condition. Anni took geet to operation theatre. She confirmed she can not handle the case independently. Her fingers shivering when she checking her. She called her hole team to help her. Dr.Arman mallik and Riddima rushed to help her. Even senior doctor shashank joined them. Looking her friends anni couldn't control her self she started to cry. After some time Dr.Shashank ask Riddima to take anni away .

Dadima waiting out side. Maan standing near operation theater. He can find geet from small glass window .

only with few seconds she gained her sense. Her eyes are filled lot of pain . she is holding her tummy protectively. Her gaze stuck on maan from window. There is lot of pain, emotion, expression is there in her eyes. All these days what she couldn't share with him all those she shared it in few seconds. Again she lost her sense. Shashank and armaan moved her stricture to inside. Maan couldn't find her any more.

Anni came out with Riddima. Anni is about to faint. Her tongue stuck in side her throat. Her voice is cracking. Dadima rush to Riddima" how is geet..."

Riddima: " dadima , god should save her.lot of blood lose. We can not save baby at any cast but we have to try for geet." Maan still in shock. Dadima started to cry. Riddima left anni with dadima and rushed to operation theater.

Dadima couldn't control her self. She forget that she is elder, she has to control anni ...she has to be brave . Dadima started to cry loudly. When geet called afternoon how much she is happy about baby . how much happy she is when her baby movement started first time in her tummy. why her faith is not letting her to leave peacefully. "hey bhagawan iss bachhi kya galth kiya, kyu ithana saza de rahi hu..."

Everybody are there in their own pain. No one can share their pains with anybody. Maan mentality is totally different. lot of question is raising in his heart. Nobody is are ready to answer those questions, but first he need geet's recovery. He holed dadima hand with pain. Dadima pain is busted. She started to blabber " maan ye kya hogaya maan. wo bachi ka kya galthi hain. Geet had only hope on her baby. ...but today her bhabhaji taken her lost hope also...today how much she happy when baby moved in her. Hey bhagavan..."she is crying . maan mental condition is no body can judge it.

He is thinking lot. That means that day I have abused geet it is true. Geet till today she hided every thing about our relation ,about our baby everything she hide with me. he don't know where to pour his anger. He bite hardly his lips. Blood oozed. Slowly he is getting answers about geet behavior. That's the reason she cancelled her marriage. She made me fool hiding full truth from me, not only she anni ,dadi every body knows but made me fool... he rushed out to car. He banged his hand on car glass. It is broken.

Anni ran behind him. "maan bhai ruko, pls ruko..."

Maan: " anni ..everybody cheated me. about the truth. " he is in pain. He is the cause of geet pain today. He started to bang car madly. Anni holed his hand tightly. "bhai, pls listen me, your anger scared her to hide truth. She know very well when you come to know about truth you punish your self. Pls right now behave your self. This is not the time to discuss . Now geet is fighting for her life. pls be moral support us. Already Dadima lost her control. Pls maan bhai now pls look at geet." Tears are rolling on his eyes. he him self look at his hands. Afternoon he felt his baby touch how much memorable movement it is... Anni grabbed him to inside the hospital.

Maan holding his head and sitting on couch. Suddenly he found bhabhaji photo on reception. He went there. In his life very first time he joined his hand in front of bhabaji.

"bhabhaji, always geet trust you, always she will advice me to trust you ,adore you, pls don't break that trust very first time I came here to ask something to you ,pls save her..." tears rolling on his cheeks with uncontrollably. the great Maan singh khurana is begging , crying today.

He himself not sure what is running in his mind. How to control this pain. Geet what a wonderful word. He remembered when he is in gym how she seduced him. it means even she loves me lot. She hided her pain, emotions, desires, dreams every thing for me. when I proposed she rejected bcoz she know how much I love sangeetha. Some where she respected my love more then me. how much I misunderstood her . did I deserve her love??..bcoz of me today she is in this condition. He remembered when NT blackmailed, ?..i am the fool all these days I thought I am protecting her but no she protected me. he is feeling to kill him self. Sangeetha given her life to save him, geet ruined her life to save him. he is continuously started to pray.

At lost operation door open. Maan rush to door. All are looking at Dr.Shasank and Dr.Arman . they both dipped their face down. "sorry Mr.Maan singh kurana, we couldn't save baby?." he paralyzed. Dadima touched her back to wall. Anni holed tightly dadima arms in the fear of if she felt down. Maan without his knowledge asked about geet." Geet right now she is better then before. But still she is unconscious. No idea after she wake what will be the situation?be brave" .

Maan leaned back to wall and closed his eyes. tears are not stopping. Before looking this world baby moved away. Before feeling him he left. Some how only geet remained to me .this time I am not ready to loose her. I want geet at any cost. I won't leave her this time. my baby...again his eyes filled by tears. His blood is boiling. Same time adi called him. He is still police station for some formalities. He given the information police arrested dev and NT. Again NT...she done all these...he forget dev is his own brother. He ask police to not to release at any reason. he made some more complains on both which they can not release by bail .

at any time dadi can loose her control on her self. Maan ask anni to take dadi to home . still geet not shifted to ward.

Pre cap: Did geet will gain her life again...no...

Hi friends once again I request you all ,as this is my first ff I might have done lots of spelling mistakes, grammar mistake, and etc If you want me to continue this ,please leave your comments

Edited by varsha-sharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow its really good l,oving ur ff😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh no.. geet miscariage.. good dev and nt getting punished.. cont soon yaar.
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Posted: 14 years ago
she ll and i m sure that
mann ll make her to be there
if u are in facebook dear
pls post ur link in the pages
where u are
so that
many other people can read ur ff
great going

love,
abi
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor geet she lost the
baby
i'm glad NT & dev are behind bars
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh so beautiful n painful upd
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Posted: 14 years ago

hi varsh

thanks for pm.

buddy u hav talent and u showed that in writing this wonderful ff.

please dont worry abt spelling error.

past two parts were quiet tragic. good to see maan dont wanna lose geet n hope he with complete heart accepts geet.

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Posted: 14 years ago

great update but a very sad part...

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Posted: 14 years ago
ooo😭
feel really bad for geet
plzz do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
sad update...
lvd it though...
plz pm me next time...
chao

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