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@storytellerSSBN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

i thought so it was u. maybe soon.

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

How if it is like this?

Daksh catches Naina's hands and she is filled with happiness but she does not show it. She

admires Daksh in her heart. Like their Pune trip, they both come back. By reaching, Aku's

issue has already come out. Everybody will be shocked in hearing the news. Naina tries to

console them by telling that guy is promised to marry Aku. Aku pleaded for apology to Naina

that she was lying and he cheated her. Naina gets shocked and Daksh becomes distroyed. She

comes near Daksh and asks him not to be upset but it is the time to find Ayush and do

anything. Daksh gets up and goes to meet him. Ayush will not be ready to admit his faults

and Daksh has a fight with him and tells him that it is a cowardice who runs away after

cheating a girl but a real man will show the strenth to admit his fault and regret on it.

That will affect Ayush and he confesses. Knowing the truth his family will be ready to

accept Aku.. and her engagement is happening. Mr Joshi and family also attend it as it is

their would be realtion. Naina's mom also comes for the fn. Everybody becomes happy but

still there is something uncomfortable btn Dakshna eventhough nobody else notices it. In the

function Naina is busy with serving the drinks. Suddenly she gets shocked in hearing

somebody calls "Supriya.." and the thing in her hand gets dropped. Daksh notices it. He

helps her. Seeing that Sonakshi rushes there and behaves too closely to Daksh. Naina notices

it and leaves there quickly. Anjali happens to see and feels something strange. After

completing the funtion Naina is in the room wearing off her earings but she is lost in the

thought of Daksh-Sonakshi. Anjali comes there and asks what happend.

Anjali: Kya huva Naina?

Naina wakes up from the thoughts and hides the eyes: Kya huva? ku.. kuch nahi..

Anjali looks at her and smiles: Kya.. tum dono ke beech jagda huva hai? tum aur Daksh ke

beech?

Naina: nahi.. aisa kuch nahi... kyo aap aise poochti hain...?

Anjali holds her hand with love: Kyonki muje kuch teek nahi lagta hain.. Daksh bohot udas..

aur tum usse door bhagne ka kosis karti ho... aisa lagta tha...

naina surprisingly looks at Anjali and tries to divert the subject: kya mamma.. main kyon

Dkash se door bhagna hoon.. ? aap yeh batayiye ghar mein sub kaise hai?

Anjali catches Naina's intension: ghar mein sab teek hain... batem change karna mat... kya..

kya huva... Daksh tumse kuch keh diya? [Naina gets nervious but silent. outside of the room ayi come with water to thier room and she reaches at the door and overhears their convrstn ].. mein isliye yeh pooch rahi hoom... ki tum us din mujse yeh keh diya jab Sonakshi Daksh ki zindgi mein ayi to tum use khone lagta tha aur darti bhi thi. Voh ladki ab khud usse door..? kyon? aisa to nahin haina... tumhare mann mein kahi uske liye pyar...?!!!! [Naina stunned and speachless]

Anjali smiles: main bhi na.. kya kya pooch rahi hoom... [Naina gets up and thinks what to say..???]

Anjali continues with a sharpen voice: voh kya haina... tum itne mahinom se yeha rahti hai.. uske saath kaafi vafth guzarti hogi.. achi tarh se samajthi hain... usse zyada tumne keh diya voha tumari har mushkilom me tumhara saath diya. naina... muje surprise ho raha hai ki tum ek baar bhi use pyar nahi kiya..?? [Naina's heart beat increases] .. tumhari mann mein kabhi bhi uska thoughts nahi aaya?

Naina looses her control and runs and hugs Anjali. and cries: Karti hoom na... mein use bohot pyar kariti hoom... bohot... par kya karoom.. mein kaise usse yeh pata doom? voh kisi aur se shaadi karnewala hain na? yeh.. teek nahin hoga...

Anjali wonders and calls: Naina...?!!!

[naina gets up and tells]: Par momma yeh baat Daksh ko batana mat.. voh muje bohot pyar karta hai... agar voh yeh baat jan gayi to Sonakshi se shaadi tod dega... abhi abhi mei shaadi toot jaaye par ayi-baba bohot upset hai.. abhi Dkahs ka bhi.. nahi..aise nahi hona chahiye.. mom pls... pls not to let him know this... uski shaadi ke baad hum Darjeeling vaapas chalenge.. phir Daksh apni zindgi mein Ok ho jayenge..

Anjali in tears: tumhe jo sahi lagtha hain... [outside Ayi gets shocked...]

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luv_virmaan

@luv_virmaan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

the scene which u have written is really gud... i hope sumthing like this happens...

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Ayi goes back without putting the jug of water in their room.. her eyes with tears...

In Ayi-baba's room.

Baba: Vibha.. kya kuva.. tum to bohot pareshan lag rahi ho.. ab to tumhare chehra par khushi dekhna chahiye.. Akruthi ka problem teek ho gayi... hamara Daksh ka shaadi ki tayyariyam jor se shuru hona hai...

Ayi: Aho... kuch teek nahi hai... muje lagta hai... hum hamare bache ko samajne mein bhool ho gayi..

Baba: vibha... ye tum kya keh rahi ho.. sab to teek hai... par tum to udaas ho gayi... ab kya problem hain?

Ayi explains what she heard...

Baba (gets shocked): Matlab Naina Daksh se pyar karti hai.. Kya Daksh bhi usse? hamare ankho ke saamne hote par bhi hume dekha nahin...?

Ayi: Aho.. ab kya karem? aap zara Joshiji ko baat kar leejiye na...? par phir bhi us ladki ka aasoo dekhna padega... (worried)

Baba: vibha... muje lagta hai hum pehle bacho se ye baat confirm karna hai... agar bachon ke mann me aisa kuch hote to usse bada khushi ki batem kya hona hai.. [little bit confused] oh anh... shaayad yeh sunne mein joshiji ko achha nahi lagega... (sighs) par voh samaj payega muje lagta hai... tum fikr mat karo... hum kal Daksh se batem kare..

next day..

Anjali feels bad and she wants to spend some time with naina . she wants to give what she didn't give to her daughter in her childhood. Anjali and Naina went for an outing... Ayi looks profound... In the evening Daksh comes early... Seeing Daksh
Ayi: Chint.. tum aa gaye... muje tum se kuch baat karni thi...
Daksh: Ha... ayi.. boliye..
[caling bell rings and Daksh goes and opens the door and with happily]

Daksh: Sir...?!!! aap..??
[the new one is Daksh's very senior advocate who always helped him to give directions, who visits his favorite junior Daksh whenever he is been in Mumbai - lets name him Adv Manjeet ;)]
Manjeet with a pleasant smile]
Daksh invites him with respect and happiness: Ayiye Sir... baidiye..

Edited by ntsindia - 14 years ago

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Asma Begum Ullah / Shahida (Shay)

@storytellerSSBN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

ooh what role wil this new guy have in uniting dakshna. reaaly ayi-baba are so blind to dakshna. i wonder in actual serial naina remebers the kasam she gave to ayi. I think thats y aai-baba are blind to dakshna, because aai did think of dakshna b4 that. But just b/c naina said she doesn't luv daksh doesnt mean daksh cant luv naina.

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