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Posted: 14 years ago
ossum update dear
sorry geet
for u
but i knew everything ll be alright
good progress dear

ove,
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb part... loved it
Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wowww u have updated... Great part..
poor maaneet fighting with their own emotions...
Plzzz don't geet to go...plzzz...precap sad sad.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...
plz add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it continue soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART-22

Suddenly maan found opposite vehicle rushing to them. It is too near to hit them ...maan turned his car he put sudden break. Car stopped with big jerk. Geet scared and she hold maan arm tightly. Maan turned his gaze to her. She closed her eyes. hole body is shivering with fear. In one hand she covered her tummy. Now maan controlled his anger himself. "geet ...geet.. look at me..you are fine...don't worry..." still she is not dare to open her eyes.

He pulled her some more close. Now her head is on his chest . he wrapped his arms around her protectively. After some time geet come out from his hug. She look at his eyes. it is dreamy. His dark eye balls are shining like diamonds. She lost in his eye lock. Suddenly her stomach started to pain. she hold her tummy with both hands and try to control it. After some time she felt it is not a pain. Some thing is moving inside her . she scared. Started to cry. Her act made maan to scare." Geet...what happened... " he worried. She didn't answer him. he too touched her tummy even he can feel some movement In her tummy.

Still she crying. She felt no of mice running in her tummy. Maan surprised about her action. Again and again he kept his hand on her tummy. Baby is jumping in her stomach feeling mama and papa touch together. After ten minutes she relaxed. Maan still not understood. Now she wants to speak dadima but in front of maan how...her gaze moved here and there.

She found golgappa shop next to some feet away from them. Geet mouth is watering looking golgappe. "maan sir , I want golgappe..." Her finger pointed on shop like a kid. maan knotted his eyebrows. Right now she suffered from stomach ache again she is asking for golgappe that too road side...what is happening her..what I felt on her tummy something like moving...

Maan: " geet tell me truth. What is happening to you. Now you are asking road side golgappe. No its not possible .first you need proper medical check up. Nowadays your health is upsetting too much."

Geet gaze is not moving from golgappe. It is mouthwatering. Golgappe's are teasing her. She couldn't control her self. " maan sir pls pls I want to eat golgappe...take me..." she moved to shop her self. Maan with angry he followed her. She ordered to sale man and she started to call dadima.

Dadima: "Hello ...geet where are you..."

Geet" dadima, we are going to visit noida site today..."

Dadima : "maan is with you.."

Geet : "ha dadima ,...maan sir with me...dadima I want to tell you some thing." She make sure that maan is away from her."?.before ten minute I felt no of mice running in my tummy. I am worrying about baby. " now her voice is low.

Dadima burst the laugh at phone it self. Geet get angry" dadima, ...how serially I am talking to you ,but you are joking... "

Dadima controlled her self: " how dare you to call my grand son mice..." She shown fake anger.

Geet: " ha..." Her mouth open.

Dadima" geet beta, it is not mice, it means your baby started to move..."

Geet exited "oh really...dadima pls inform to anni. Wo kya hena mera dust danav mere sath hain...I can't inform her..." she cut the call. She started to touch her tummy again and again. Now baby is silent. Now she is craving for same feeling. Maan still observing her ...he didn't understand her properly about pain and smile.

Maan called her to have golgappe. Geet had happily count less golgappe. Maan surprised to see her eating count less golgappe at a time.

Maan" geet its enough..lets go" she made baby face. But he grabbed her to car.

They moved to site. They examine every thing it is quite satisfied. They return to delhi. There is another two kilometers to reach delhi. it is already night 1'0 clock. Geet still feeling her golgappe taste on her tongue.

She is looking out from window. Maan observing her by his eye corner. "maan sir stop the car.pls..." maan stopped .he looking her for next demand.

Geet is tensed." Maan sir...look at there...it is our go dawn right... now it is already 1 'o clock midnight.still what they are doing there." Even maan also surprised. As per KC rules and regulation godawn should be close this time . who is there...he stop the car and entered. Watchman observe maan , he went back immediately called to NT .

She is in sleep. When she heard the news from watchman in one jerk she came out from her sleep. She looked at dev. He is sleeping. She ordered "you finish both ... buried them at any our new construction building foundation. You will get your payment tomorrow as usual." Again she slept. She know very well thy are pakka prophsenal. They won't leave maan and geet alive at any cast. Some how goons close their chapters.

Maan and geet enter the godawn. He him self not believed. Lakhs of rupees materials are transferring to other godawn with out his knowledge. He holed watchman collar tightly he barked" what is happening here..."

Before he answer geet screamed" maan sir..." But already it is late. Another goon attacked from backside. They are ten members and prophsenal. They started to beat maan. first maan struggled ,even he fought them hardly.

At the same time geet informed adi and police. Goons couldn't stand more in front of maan . all are injured including maan. blood oozing from his wounds. They heard police siren. While escaping maan try to hold , but they pushed him. at the same time they pushed geet on iron rods and ran away.

"Geet" maan shouted loudly he reached her. He found bleeding between her legs. She is crying bitterly.

She is holding her tummy" maan sir, ... baby...pls save .. baby..." she feared loosing her baby. pain is not controllable. Within in a minute she is in blood pool. Maan mind totally blocked. He don't know what to do. He picked her from his arms. Geet felt something her own part of her body is separating from her. "mama?.papa?." she can here her baby .she can feel her baby. suddenly her hole body shivered huge pain. She fainted.

Police rushed inside and try to catch goons.

Precap: geet fighting for her sole.

Dear friends, when writing this part I my self couldn't control tears. When in original many of them request to cv's for MC , but every day I used to fight with them not to MC. Unfortunately in my story at any cost I couldn't change my story track for any reason. I want to move my story line what I think before. Pls forgive me if this part hurt you.

Hi friends once again I request you all ,as this is my first ff I might have done lots of spelling mistakes, grammar mistake, and etc If you want me to continue this ,please leave your comments

Edited by varsha-sharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh me first to comment and pressed the like 🥳
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was shocking update ,

me crying 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update.
love it.
poor geet.hope baby is okay.

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