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Suhanie

@Suhanie

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Posted: 14 years ago

Is that for real?? This should be happen, you are so good.

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Naina :)

@NainaSengal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

Pls continue and pm me amazing Start dear!!!!

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

loved it so cute .. do pm me when you add next part ...loved it ...

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Angad_Diwani

@Angad_Diwani

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

u know wat... lagta hai u took a page right out of IPKKND's

Creative team's diary !!!!!!! Aur kuch dialogues Geet kay lagey . For eg that part about Chup Bilkul Chup. But phir bhi.

Too gud ... bilkul real lag rahi hai ... agar puri nahi toh atleast 75% apki story to agey jakar on screen kisi na kisi epi mein humain visual form mein bhi dikhay gi ...

CLAP CLAP... do give us the next epi. You wrote well. Bravo!!!!

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Flame.

@Flame.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

Hey thank you for the PM. The extended part is awesome too. Woh roshni hain aur mein sirf andhera, beautiful lines 👏 👏

Awww Arnav babu is crying. Thats sooo cute 😳

Please update the 2nd chapter soon 🤗

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stardust-

@stardust-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

cute yaar..
i love your hindi lines..
keep up the writing...

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@-SilverAngel-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

OMGG... this is sooo funny and nice...I'll absolutely faint if Khushi gets talli and talks to Arnav like that!!...very very nice...just one piece of constructive criticism hun... try to keep a flow between the lines... sometimes it felt like you were rushing through the moment/scene... otherwise very very well thought out and nicely written!!