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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks, Hari! You make a good continuation of the story. I am glad Dev's father took under his protection, Radhika, knowing that the heart of his son loved, will be chosen just her. Although, in the past, Dev did not realize that he loves so much Radhika, now hi is convinced that his heart will not be mastered only by Radhika.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: instcris

I am glad Dev's father took under his protection, Radhika, knowing that the heart of his son loved, will be chosen just her. Although, in the past, Dev did not realize that he loves so much Radhika, now hi is convinced that his heart will not be mastered only by Radhika.

its not devs father dear its dev's grand mom
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Posted: 14 years ago

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thanks for replying hari
waiting for next one may be in weekend😊😊

u guessed right but not at weekend i will give it tomorrow because i don't know where this weekend may lead me to
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Posted: 14 years ago
Excuse me, Hari! I read between the lines and I deduced the story, because I don't know Hindi.So, all adult Dev's family did well to Radhika. It's good.
Edited by instcris - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: instcris

Excuse me, Hari! I read between the lines and I deduced the story, because I don't know Hindi.So, all adult Dev's family did well to Radhika. It's good.

cris sorry yaar i just wanna clear ur confusion and what u are saying is correct and i will try to update important lines in english from next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u guys thank u all for ur wondreful support and the commentary u made
ruchibabbly, Nabesa, masumasrilanka, imissouri, instcris, radhika5, fatssrilanka, palak13, set_raj, -Shankar-, anu17, thank u for the like button😉

and i hope i will continue the ff keeping all ur expectations alive
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Posted: 14 years ago
hav read all the updates...waitng 4 the next...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry guys actually i was supposed to give this part on the day when i got my accident but as it was not possible for me on that day i didn't give that and even today also i am able to give it only because of ashritha. hope u guys like my part today

PART 8 RADEV FIRST CONVO

Dev woke up and fpound the time to be 7:00pm as it was dinner time he rushed to bathroom to change his clothes and went down to the dining room.All the elders RP,Susheel, Rajender(Varun's father), Daksh( arshad and nickies father),Suresh(ria's father) were sitting along with vivek chating abt some buisness where as ria,soniya,piya,nikki,asmi,mrinalini sat beside chatting abt soem thing and the other side were the eswar,armesh,arshad,rickie,varun,manoj chatting about soem vehicles.
Dev sighed at them and went to sit beside dadima.

Mr.Purohith:hi dev how did u rest

Dev:well cool dad, the climate is very pleasant which made me sleep sound

Daksh:So Dev, Hows ur studies

Dev:well they are fine uncle and this year is last semister

Dash:how many days are ur holidays

Dev:Actually we got a time of one month uncle but as we went to armesh's house to spend a week days we still have a time of 21 days only

Dadima looked at Dev in confusion as he said her that he will stay his last year here and was abt to ask something when dev sighed her to be silent

Dadima whishpered "dev u said me some thing inroom"

Dev:"That's true but for now keep quite becoz me and dad planned a surprise for all of u guys so please"

Dadima:okay okay

Rajender:waise Dev u know Varun ,Ria and Aanchal are leaving for U.S to do last year along with u

Dev:ohhh

Dev glanced at his friends and his dad who were giving a guesturing look at him

Soniya:waise aanchal aur radhika kaha hain aunty

Vaishali:Wo donom mandir gaye hain abhi tak aate hi hoge

"aate hi hoge nahi,aa gaya tha" both aanchal and radhika came inside room and radhika came to sit baside dadima for dinner.

Dadima:waise aaj kaisa hua mandir ka dharshan

Radhika:pata hain dadima aaj kanha bahut ache hain aur chacha ji toh mujhe hi kanha ko sajane ke liye kaha tha

Vaishali:oho radhika tum kab bhi yaha aao tum hi apne kanha ko sajate hain na, waise bhi vo tere baavuji ka mandir hi na, toh shastri ji tujhe sajane se kyun mana karenge

Radhika:lekin maa aaj kanha bahut acha tha

Asmi: vo isliye kyun ki vuski radha vuske paas aagayi na isliye

Radhika smiled and purohtih:"okay lets start sinner"

Every one started dinner and their common chatting went off like that

After dinner Radhika excused herself to sleep and went into her room. Dev sat in the living room chatting with elders. After sometime he to went back into his room making some excuse.

Radhika was standing in balcony seeing towards the moon which was glowing between the mountains near by. Suddely two warm hands came from behind and closed her eyes.

Radhika:"Dev"

The hands were taken off and radhika turned behind to see Dev standing there smiling.

Dev:How does u know it radhika , do u have some eyes on ur back side too

Radhika:"Dev! jab humaara dearest ones humey touch karte hain vuska sparsh se hi vusko jaan sakte hain"

Dev:"means am i ur dearest"

Radhika:"of cousres u are my best friend and how come u here, i locked my front door"

Dev:"u only said na i am ur dearest in order to meet my dearest i don't need ur room doors to be opened"

Radhika:"Devvv"

Dev:"okay baba ab sach bolunga, tum apne room ki door ko lock kiya tha lekin u forgot to lock the connecting door":

Radhika:"oh! so Mr.Dev purohith got his room back

Dev:Hey what u mean by getting it back its always mine and will be mine for ever

Radhika:Ohh acha agar teri shaad hone ke baa bhi tum vahi room me ho tho i has to change my room yaar.

Dev in his mind "don't worry radhika if ever my marriage happens then it will be with u only"

Radhika:Hello where are u , i just said npormally and u start imagining abt ur mariage

Dev:Nothing like that and if so my marriage happens i will only change my room

Dev in his mind "to ur room"

Radhika:oh! cool thank god

Dev:waise Radhika if ur marriage happens first then what will u do

Radhika:Dev! You knnow that i doesn't like marriage that make me lead my life with an unknown person

Dev:Oh! shall i ask u somehing

Radhika:did i ever said no

Dev: Hey u are saying that u don't like a marriage which leads u to live ur life with an unknown person , agar tmne kis se pyar liya toh vo tumhe known person hi hoga na then u can marry him na

Radhika lost in trance "ha"

Dev:so will u love any one in future

Radhika still in trance "Pyar toh maine ek baar karliya vo shayad Phir se nahi hoga"

Dev:what?????

Radhika came out from trance and recollecting words what she said :Yeah! i already had a first love"

Dev felt like earth under his feet crushing down "wwwh.o ..is..he"

Radhika:"mera kanha"

Dev trying to believe what he heard "what"

Radhika:"Yeah dev ! i Love my kanha meri krishnkannayaa vus se bina aur koi ta hi nahi mere man mein."

Dev:"Oho Radhika ufeared me a lot yaar i thought u really love some one else"

Radhika in her mind "dev mere kishn kannayya tum hi ho, tum soch rahe ki main bhagwan ke baarein mein bol rahe ho lekin mein tere m=baarein mein bole rahe hain ye baat tum kab samjhoge"

Dev In his mind"Radhika Jo Viswas tum apne bhagwan par liya tha vutna hi viswaas main hi karta hun aapki kanha par, teri kanha hi hum donom ko ek din ek karega"

Radhika:ok leave abt me now tell me who is ur first love

Dev in his mind "u"

Radhika:kya tum ne kuch kaha

Dev:tum ne kuch suna

Radhika:nahi lekin sun na chahti hu vus ladki ka naam

Dev:agar ter pyar apni kishankannayya toh mera pyar apni radharani hain

Radhika:Dev please stop kidding

Dev:when u said did i say that u are kidding no na tum jitna serious ho main bhi vutna hi serious hun

Radhika:Tum radhakishna ke bhakt kab se bangaya

Dev: Bachpan se hi maa toh har din aarthi gaati hain na ghar mein aur vo traditions sab dekhtey hi main bhi bada hogaya tha

Radhika:lekin dadimaa ne kabhi mujhse nahi bola

Dev:ismein bol ne ki koi baat nahi hain humaare ghar mein jo bhi sadasy hain vo sab radhakrishna ke bhakt hain

After a long balbbering of radev radhika started getting tears in her eyes

Dev:arey kya hua tujhe kyun ro rahe ho

Radhika :i am sorry dev

Dev:Sorry? but for what

Radhika:that day when u came to meet me before u leave i misbehaved a lot with u really sorry yaar, but what to do i was really upset and angry on u as u were leaving me ad if i sawed u at that time i won't resist my self from tears which may gets u dissapointed.I don't want my best friend to be dissapointed during his journey

Dev:Arey pagal! main tho vo baat bhul gaya, aur ab tum kyun ro rahe ho won't ur best friend feel bad now

Radhika hugged hi, and said sorry, Dev who was stunned by her suddenreaction soothebed her by embrassing her and finally Radh spoke out did u get my gift

Dev:kauns gift

Radhika:birju bhaiyya ne tujhe nahi diya lekin vo mujhse bhola ki vo tumhe diya tha

Dev: i Got the packet but i didn't open it because i wanna open it infront of the person who gave it to me

Radhika:What???

Dev:haan i wanna see that excitement in ur eyes when i was opening ur gift.

Radhika:okay maha maananeey dev purohith atleast ab isse open karo

Dev:haan i will open it in the balcony come to balcony.

Radhika:okay ,

they went to balcony and the full moon now completely came above the mountains

Dev:aj toh chand bahut acha hain na

Radhika:haan chanda humseha acha hi hota hain

now u open ur gift

Dev opened the gift box in the moon light infront of radh and found a silver idol of radhakrishna and als a goldchain having a locket D

Dev:bahut acha tha radha krishn ki moorthy ye toh bahut sundar hain main ise humesha mere saath hi rakhunga aur this chain was fantastic now it will be on my neck always.

Dev tried to keep the chain in his neck but he was unable to cope up with the hook

Radhika smiled seeing his fight with hook :"gwait i will help u

she went to dev and helped him in keeping hook of chain. they both sat there for sometime enjoyng the cool moon and radhika yaaned feeling tired, dev realised her sleepiness and said good night to her and left to his room.

Dev on his bed holding his locket in hsi hands with his mind filled with thoughts of radhika. hethanked kanha for his day and went into his sleep.

Radhika went near the alter and sat infront of kanha and spoke "kanha vo mere sab se achi dost tha aur hain , lekin main vus se pyar karti hun ye baat vus se kaise bolu. agar vo meri is baat se inkaar kiya toh main sehen nahi pavungi kanha. main vus se kabhi nahi batavungi ki main vun se pyar karti hun kyunki vuse ye bolkar main vuski dosti ko thodna nahi chahti hun . vaise bhi meri jaisiek anah ladki komohan baabuji aur devki maa ne ek parivaar diya aur vun log k marne ke baad dadima ne mujhe mrnalini ki didi se samaan roop mein pyar diya . vun log ke liye main humesha rungraat tha aur ab purohith parivaar is parivaar ne mujhe vunki beti se bhi jyaada pyar dethe hain ye pyar ki ek baat bolkar main in sab logon ki viswaas thodna nahi chahti hu kanha. waise bhi mujhe vuske saaamne kamjor mat bano kanha please "

Radhika slept near tha altar only asking kanha "mujhe vuske saamne kamjor mat bano kanha"\\

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this is enough guys for today i think i am on track now and i think u like this update of me

if u like his don't forget to presss like button and comment down. and if u don't like this feel free to yell on me the wrong i did.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Thnx for lovely update& PM. Enjoying your FF a lot. Waiting for the next one.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hari really lovely thanks a ton yaar

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