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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome yaar ...loved it !!
i guess now geet ll not agree for the marriage with prem ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
so, maan desn't know anything
d cntinue soon
and ty 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Poor geet.
I hope the wedding doesn't happen.
I hope maan finds out the truth.
Please dont make her pregnant.
Please x continue soon x
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update...
i really dont know what to type...
its awesome...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART- 16

Marriage...what a beautiful dream she dreamed from lost one month .she totally forget about marriage. She remember prem. Her eyes are not stopped to flow tears. Thinking about her faith She hugged her knees from her arms and kept her chin on knee. Now she is hating her favorite babhaji also. Why babhaji ...why what wrong I have done ?why you are punishing me in this way. Her non stop tears made her knee pant wet.

She just think about prem. How can I face him... she covered her face. Her phone is started to ring. It is prem...she didn't dare to pick his phone. Continuously she is getting messages from him. she didn't replayed at least one.

Anni came sat next to geet. She observe the miss calls from prem. "geet what you think...about prem."

She looked her with painfully. Anni put her head down with helpless. Geet hugged anni.

" geet , for god sake stop it. How much you will cry?."

It is almost one week. Maan is very happy in UK. His almost business meetings are succeeded. Mr.Petterson is very happy about maan idea and his project. they have signed final agreement for project. maan finished all his works in hurry, some how he want to attend geet wedding. At lost day he planned to buy gift for her. He went to shopping mall. But he don't know what to select for her. At the end he choose diamond ring with platinum for her. Just he imagined how it looks on her tiny figure. Some where it is paining in his heart but still he ignore it.

When he catch his flight in heathrow airport he is very exited to attend her wedding. When he reached KM it is almost evening. He shocked when he entered the KM. there is pin drop silent in KM. no lights, no decorations, no guests, nothing is happening here. On the way he found anni and he ask about marriage.

Anni: " marriage cancelled bhai." He shocked. He didn't expected . he remember when he leaving India geet is not well. He worried about her health. He went to geet room. Before going he stop himself listening conversation between geet and prem.

Prem: " geet think once again..."

Geet: "sorry prem...i can't marry you."

Prem: "geet just tell me why you are cancelled marriage." His voice almost cracking. It seems he is ready to cry at any movement.

But geet face is in stubborn. There is no expression in her face." Prem pls don't force me...i am not happy to marry you?I don't think ill be honest for you. Pls prem don't think too much just go?"

Prem still he is begging her to convince at last she screamed on prem " just leave me alone."

Prem stood near her and he hold her hand" geet I know you , you are better then others. We are not only engaged we are best friends also. But I don't know why you are doing all this...still I hope you will change your mind to marry me. I am waiting for you..." he come out with tears. He saw maan and he dipped his head down and left the place. maan felt very bad for prem .

geet move to near the table where her dream house miniature placed...looking that she couldn't control her self. When she about to cry maan entered her room.

His eyes splitting fire on geet. This is the first time he is angry with geet. He pulled her elbow and he stared on her eyes. so much innocent eyes ,how it will cheat others..." Geet are you mad?why you cancelled the marriage."

Geet trying to remove his grip " maan sir leave me...what are you doing..."

Maan still holed more tight and pulled her close" geet what are you thinking about your self. You think you are too smart compare to others. I can't believe this. How can you cheat him .you don't have any right to play with anybody life ." looking his anger graze chill air passed in her spines. Still she is struggling to come out from his grip.

geet is in fear of his anger. Some how she wants to escape from him. " maan sir you are hurting me." tears rolled on her eyes.

but maan don't have any mercy on her. He pulled more close. His jaw tightened and she can hear his teeth gritting sound clearly. He is treating her like his own. His anger she couldn't take any more. Same time dadima enter her room. She looked her for help.

Dadima: "maan beta...what are you doing leave her..."

Maan:" dadima why she cancelled her wedding... How can she do this to prem. How can you agree dadima..." still he is holding her tight. Geet looked at dadima with tearful eyes.

Dadima looked her in mercy" maan leave her?.marriage is her own decision? don't force her .."

Maan : "how can you support this dadima...if she don't want to marry him why she committed with him. no dadima...I won't agree. Right now call prem and his parents. Ill make their marriage. She has to understand that cheating somebody is not so easy." Finally he declared. Geet looked his face. His face proving that he will do what he said.

Now she is become more then wild him. she lost her sense. he vanished her smile, He ruined her life , her dreams , now again he is forcing her to do what she don't want to do. She lost her patience. She barked on him " who are you to interfere in my life?."before thinking she said those words to him." tum mere liye khone hain?.leave my hand. You don't have any rights on my life." she told furiously . which hurt more maan. suddenly he left her hand pushed her roughly. Dadima hugged her before falling down . he was shocked. how dare she will speak with him. he banged the table in anger. Her dream house miniature fell down and brooked. Both look at the miniature??he potted his foot on floor angrily and he went out. Dadima scared of their fighting.

Geet kneel down and gathered her miniature with pain. Dadima come to close touched her shoulder. She is sobbing, looking broken dolls and miniature. Dadima teary , she know very well know about her dreams.

Tears also not remained to cry with geet. She is just looking at her dream house. How much she dreamed to be with prem, how much she dreamed about her dream house. But finally every thing vanished by maan. whom to blame. It seems her pains are not end forever.

Maan is very angry. How to control himself he don't know. Did he expect any day geet will cheat prem no...how can she cheat and more ever she questioned about his identity in her life. he remembered very first day when he met her. Like baby she lied in his arms. He treated her like a baby. but today...his eyes become red...it is burning. How can she question him ...he holed the glass tightly. Its become several peaces. Its hurt him. blood oozed from his hand.

Some where he didn't like her protest. She is mine. She has to obey what I say..." ill see you geet, till you have seen me in one side. But further you will better know about Maan singh khurana."

Some days passed. Maan completely stopped to speak her. Dadima and anni convinced geet to go office again. Even she want to move it but she scared about maan. still she agreed to go office.

Morning at KC. Geet is busy in her files. She found maan entered his cabin. She went to Pantry she made strong coffee to maan according to his taste. She went to maan cabin and she kept the coffee cup on table .usually how she will serve it. Maan didn't bother to look her and he didn't touch the coffee. When geet try to speak with him his angry look stopped her. He call the office boy and ask him to throw the coffee and to bring another cup. Where it is hurt her more.

She stood there for ten minutes but he didn't given her any work . geet tired of his act. She went to her cabin. Office boy brought another cup coffee .maan tasted and throw the cup in angry. Coffee taste is not good. He called adi to bring accounts file. When adi open his mouth to explain that all the files with geet, he ask him to collect every thing.

Geet really hurt of his act. Through out the day he behaved same. He didn't call her for any meeting. He didn't ask her to do any work. He didn't speak with her one word. In accounts he didn't sign the cheque which is approved by geet. He is not even trusting her any more.

Maan himself he surprised of his own behavior with geet. She is right?..she can decide about her self in her life. He is thinking why he is bothering her so much. He didn't like when geet protest him. why he questioned him self. His gaze moved to her cabin. Geet leaned back and looking at roof. He found too much of pain in her eyes. what she is thinking. Why she is disturbed so much. Unwontedly his eyes scanning her tip to toe. Her usual smile is disappeared. Her dress sense also decreased .She looks so week all these days. What is bothering her. But he decided not to be soft with her. His ego is cooling when he hurt her.

pre cap - black mail

Hi friends once again I request you all ,as this is my first ff I might have done lots of spelling mistakes, grammar mistake, and etc If you want me to continue this ,please leave your comments.

Edited by varsha-sharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update
poor geet...
hope maan will get to knw truth soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part..
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...i'm not liking the high-handed behaviour of maan...who is blackmailing whom?
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Posted: 14 years ago
That is so awful...Poor Geet...one her dreams and life is destroyed then maan is acting this way...please make Maan know the truth soon...please please...ths is too much pain for her.

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