MAANEET IF - KAISA YE PYAAR HAI - Page 9

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Part 22

Kaisa ye pyaar hai

Rubina: geet tujhe to kuch pta hi nhi chla tha uss waqt hua

kya tha

Avinash: rubina, issse pta bi kaise hota

Ye kha janti thi college ke baare mein ab kuch

Rubina: aur fir humne btaya

Ek pal ke liye tu kitna darr gyi thi


Geet: aakhir mere future ka sawal tha

Drr lgna to bnta tha na

Rubina: geet

Geet: hmmm

Rubina: jiju se abhi bhi utna hi darr lgta hai kya jitna uss

time

darr gyi thi


Geet slap her hand

Geet: rubina

Rubina: mein to mjak kr rhi hu yaar



Flashback

After the left the place by maan and principal

Avinash, rubina and heena came near to geet.

Avi: geet ye tune kya kiya

Geet: avi, maine kya kiya jo kiya tha tune kiya aur tum sb ne

kiya

Rubina: what do you mean?

Humne kya kiya?

Geet: rubina, mana maine tum sb ki project me help ki hai pr

wo sb material project ka tum sb ne collect kiya tha.

Ab koi kmi rh gyi hai toh mein kya karu.


Heena: tum project ki baat kr rhi ho

Geet: aur nhi to kya

Aur tum sb kya soch rhe the,

Aur waise bhi tum sb class mein jane wale the, yha kya kr

rhe ho?

Kuch to bolo

Kuch bolte kyun nhi.

Avi: tum chup hongi, to hm kuch khenge na

Geet: hmmm, bolo

Avi: phli baat, tum apni file wha bhul gyi thi, hum wo dene

aaye the


Geet: oh''., thanks

Aur dusri baat


Rubina: aur dusri baat ye , jisse tum abhi baat kr rhi thi


Geet: kaun?

Wo khadus

Flashback out


Rubina: hahaha

Geet tum bhi na

Kahdus


Geet: rubina wo us time ki baat thi

Avi: aur is time ki kya baat hai

Haha😃


Geet; tum dono ko bda mja aa rha hai na, mujhe chedke

Tum dono chinta mt karo , mera bhi time aayenga

😔

Rubina: oh geet tu bi na

Chl sorry

Bol na yaar


Geet: it's ok

Flashback

Heena: ha wo hi, tum janti ho wo kaun hai

Geet: ye lo

Isme janana kya hai, tum sb ko dikhta nhi kitna khadus hai.


Avi: tum thode der phli jis trusty ke aane ka wait kr rhi thi,

wo unke grand son hai, yani unke pote hai


Geet: to kya hua

Rubina: to kya hua


Geet: kya

Tum ye kya kh rhe ho

Dekho ye koi mjak krna ka time hai

Asa nhi ho sakta


Heena: asa hi hai


Geet: tumne phle kyun nhi bataya


Avi: tune unhe tk bolne ka mauka nhi diya, to hume kya deti,

Aur waise bhi unhe psand nhi unke beech mein koi bole

Tere sath sath hum sb ki bi samat aa jati


Geet: fir bhi

He babaji, ab mein kya karu, mein to gyi


Avi: hmmm

Heena: geet relax, kuch nhi honga

Rubina: to ase kaise kh sakti hai


Geet: ab to wo mujhse achi trh bdal lenge

Babajiii''..


Avi: geet , asa kuch nhi honga

Aur waise bi bdla kis cheez ka

Tu jaan buzkr thode giri thi

Rubina: acha hua, tujhe unki girl friend ne nhi dekha, nhi to

wo tamasha khda kr deti


Avi:abi ye sb khan jaruri hai kya,

Oh god lecture start ho gya hoga

Sorry geet hum sbko jana padega

Hope you understand.


Geet: hmmm, tum jao

All friends leave the geet alone halfheartedly


Geet: he babaji , please bacha lena, pakka mein unse zagda

nhi krungi,

Pr babaji mein to kbhi zagda krti hi nhi hu. Jo bhi karte hai

wo

hi krte hai.

Babaji please bacha lena

Please

In cabin

Principal Sir: Mr. khurana , savitri ji aane wali thi fir aap kaise

Maan: daadimaa, ko kuch kaam aa gya tha, aur unhone

aapko

bi kaha tha, isliye fir mein aa gya.

Daadimaa jo point discuss krna chahti thi wo hum kr lete hai

You have any problem


Sir: no, not at all

So, start

After 30 minutes


Maan: ok, I will leave. I hope all points were discussed.


Sir: yes, thanks for coming


Maan: hmmm

Maan jane lagta hai


Sir: excuse me Mr. Khurana


Maan: any problem

Any point will remain


Sir: yes Mr. khurana

Ek scholarship student hai, phle seat thi pr ab nhi hai, wo

thoda late ho gyi yha aane mein.

Isliye uski seat kisi aur ko dedi.

To ab kya krna hai Mr. khurana


Maan: kya mein uski file dekh sakta hu


Sir: yes,

Mein abhi mangvata hu

Sir ring the bell


Y: ji sir

Sir: jo ladki bahar wait kr rhi hai usse se file leke aayo

Y: ji

Outside the cabin

Geet : babaji itna time ho gya hai mein kya karu


One boy came forward to geet but geet was busy in self talk

with babaji.

Oh god andhe ho kya mere saare paper gira diye


Boy: madam aapka dhyan khi aur tha , aur aap mujhe h rhi

hai

geet (mummers: oh babaji mein )

Sorry,


Boy: it's ok



Precap: maan kya discussion lega

And hospital mein kaun hai

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 14 years ago
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Part 23

Kaisa ye pyaar hai

Outside the cabin

Geet : babaji itna time ho gya hai mein kya karu

One boy came forward to geet but geet was busy in self talk with babaji.

Oh god andhe ho kya mere saare paper gira diye

Boy: madam aapka dhyan khi aur tha , aur aap mujhe h rhi hai

geet (mummers: oh babaji mein )

Sorry,

Boy: it's ok

Geet arrange the papers in file.

Y: mam , wo principle sir file mngva rhe hai

Geet: abhi deti hu

Ye lo

In cabin

Sir: ye lijiye Mr. khurana

File

Maan take the file and say

Isme one paper missing hai

Sir: kaunsa paper

Maan: I mean introduction paper jah isne aapni sari detail likhi hogi

Sir: mein abhi usi ladki ko bula deta hu

Maan; its ok

Marks detail to hai yha pe

Whi kafi hai

Sir: to Mr. khurana aapka kya decision hai

Maan: aap isse admission de dijiye

I will leave, I am late for meeting.

Sir: ok Mr.khurana

Thanks for contribution the precious time.

Maan: it's ok

Outside the cabin

Oh babaji, ye kya ho gya, ye page to mere pass hi rh gya.

Mein abhi jake deti hu.

Maan: ruko'.

Aage se bi koi aa rha hai, dekh liya karo.

Geet: wo mera dhyan

Maan: khi aur tha, hai na

Geet: aap khena kya chahte hai, mera dhyan nhi tha

Maan: aur nhi to kya

Geet: mujhe pata hai aap jan buzkar mujhse badla le rhe hai.

Maan: kis cheez ka bdla

Geet: dekha babaji, a base react kr rhe hai, jaise kuch jante hi nhi hai.

Phle to mujhe admission nhi diya, ye bdla nhi hai to kya hai

maan(think): iska mtlb wo file iski thi''''..

geet: dekha babaji , ab kuch kh bhi nhi rhe hai.

Maan: wo file sach mein tumhari thi

Geet: ye kaisa sawal hai

Maan: ha ya na

Geet: ha

Pr aap ab kyun puch rhe hai

Maan: kyunki tumhe dekhke lagta nhi hai wo file tumahri hai

Geet; aap khan kya chahte hai

Phone rings,

Maan: ha adi

Adi: sir wo mein

Maan: jldi bolo adi

Adi: sir aap meeting ke liye aa rhe hai ya nhi

Maan: ha adi.

I will come.

Adi: ok sir.

Maan left the place

Geet; oh, hello, aap jwab to dete jao

Babaji ab mein kya karu

Ye hai hi pure dust danav

Principal Sir came out of his cabin.

Geet: sir

Sir: congratulation geet, you get admission.

Geet: thanks sir

Sir: thanks tumhe Mr. khurana ko thanks khehna chahiye tha

Geet: sir, Mr. khurana

Sir: ha geet, jo abhi yha se gye , ye unka fasla tha

Tum klse join kr sakti ho

Geet: thank you very much sir

Sir: it's ok

In present

In canteen

Avinash: geet, tum bolne se phle sochti nhi ho. Us din tumne'

Geet: mein kya avi, mujhe kaha pta tha, unhone mujhe admission den eke liye kaha hai..

At other side

In hospital

In doctor cabin

Lady: doctor ab unki tabiyat kaisi hai

Doc: phle se thik hai

Lady: pr unhe hosh kb tk aayenga

Doc: u don't worry, jldi aa jayenga

Hm koi fix time nhi pta sakte hai'

Nurse came into cabin.

Nurse: doc. Patient ko hosh aa gya hai, aur wo baar baar naina naam le rhe hai..

Doc: chlo'

Outside the patient room

Nurse: madam abhi aap bahar hi rukiye

Naina: ji

After few minutes

Naina: doc. Wo thik hai na

Doc: yes, ab aapke pati thik hai,

Aap chahe to unse mil skti hai.

Naina: thanks doc.

Doc. And nurse left the place.

Precap: please jaan aankhen kholo aapki naina aapke pass hai.

previous part 22

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1703085&TPN=18

part 24

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1703085/maaneet-if-kaisa-ye-pyaar-hai?pn=21�

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice updates Priya, 😛but so short,,😕aisa kyunnn??? 😲 waiting for the nxt 😍

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