OS Abhiya:She is all mine(part 3 updated pg9) - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
omg shrishti i m speechless...ur os is beautifully written...u knw u should convert it into FF...i enjoyed both parts like nything...they were simply awesome...i loved d way u av defined abhay's love, his pain n d moment where pia was feeling his pain...dat was just wowww...i wish cv's tumse khuch advice le lete...reli they need it...n for a change i loved jay also in ur story...n abt neel😡...
hey shrishti pls i would love to read more...
thanx for d pm..
continue soon



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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After reading all the comments I m speechless I never thought u guys will lke my OS so much.So I decided 2 make 1 last part & thn this OS will b end.Dont request me 2 make this OS FF.But ya I'll update part 3 now which is last part 4 sure
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I was not in mood of making 3rd part but so many ppl requested so I was left wid no choice.Guys this is last & final part of myu OS now plz no more request I cant convert it into FF.I hope I did justice.Thnx 4 love & support🤗

Part 3

Abhay took his princess 2 Raichand massion.Watching her son wid Pia in his arms Haseena came running 2 thm.She caressed Pia's hair wid affection just lke a mother.Thn she put her hands on Abhay's shoulder giving him moral support.Abhay laid Pia on his bed & Haseena covered her bare body wid white sheet. Abhay's eyes met his dad. He was happy 2 c him alive but Pia's condition was not allowing him 2 show his emotions 2 his dad.Chand came 2 Abhay. For the 1st time he put his fatherly hand on Abhay's shoulder giving him assurance everything will b f9.This little gesture made Abhay emotional.He hugged his father 4 the 1st time & streams of tears came out frm his eyes. They lighted all the candles in room & started wid ceremony. They applied ayurvedic ointment on her body 1st & thn rubbed her injuries wid Neel's blood. But no effect.They continued the same process 3-4 times but all in vain.They enchanted mantras but condition of Pia was still the same. Abhay was completely shattered watching his Pia lke this. He was torn apart. He was feeling suffocated. Evn haseena & chand seems 2 lose all hope but somehow they control their emotions so they can support Abhay. Haseena hugged his son saying 'Abhay don't worry I m sure she'll b f9.May b she is human thts y her injuries r taking time 2 heal. Let's wait 4 morning & I m sure this ceremony will show it's effect on her. If morning never stays so this night will also end soon'. Chand asked haseena 2 leave wid him so tht Abhay can spent some time alone wid Pia. Raichands left the room leaving Abhay & Pia behind.

Abhay'Pia my baby plz wake up.Ur Abhay is incomplete widout u.I know I hurt u but I promise I'll never hurt u agn. U can't leave me, U have 2 b wid me. I won't let u go, I m not allowing u 2 die Pia wake up'. Abhay was crying continuously, pleading her 2 comeback 2 life. But Pia being stubborn child reject all his request thn suddenly wind blew & Abhay could c white light. It seems something strong was on his way. May b something lke spirit. Yes, it is a spirit Abhay thought. To his utter surprise tht spirit was none other thn Pia's mom sugand. Abhay was staring at her. He asked 'Are u here 2 take my Pia frm me? I know she is ur daughter but let me tell u I won't allow u 2 take her frm me. Sugand smiling 'No Abhay I m not here 2 take Pia away fm u.I never wnted 2 do tht it was always u who send Pia away frm u.This is wht u always wnt Pia staying far away frm u.Thn Y u r not letting her go?' Abhay ' I never wnted Pia 2 die. I stayed away frm her for her own benefit. I m sure u must b knowing who I m so how can I allow my darkness on her life'. Sugand 'Really Abhay? U really wnt 2 c her happy.? U wnt her 2 live her life.? Like every mother evn I dreamt of a suitable life partner 4 my daughter who will love her, support her. If I would have been human I would have rejected u.I know u r inhuman but I can't deny the fact tht no one can love my daughter the way u love her.Do u have any idea ur stay away frm me attitude is killing Pia every second. I guess No. U were saying 2 jay tht he used Pia like a toy 2 reach u. But now u tell me wht u did wid her? U made her puppet. U impose ur decision on her life. It was not only ur life u shud have given her fair chance 2 make decision. How will she feel whn she'll come 2 know tht 2 ppl whom she love & trust so much betrayed her. How can u & misha play wid her emotions Abhay?.Jeh is nothing 2 her but u r her everything Abhay' Abhay was luking down.He was unable 2 luk at Sugand's eyes.He was feeling guilty 4 wht he did. Sugand' Now u don't evn have courage 2 luk in my eyes.Y shuld she come back 2 life? 4 whom she shuld come whn she know u'll agn leave her. Abhay I know u love Pia. U wnt her 2 live 4 many years. But Abhay it's not important how many years u live but how much u r living in few years & Pia is not living,the gift of life which u wnt 2 gift her is actually torturing her,she is bearing it & not living it Abhay. Plz Abhay if u really wnt her 2 c happy thn be wid her. U mean everything 2 her. Each fiber of her body loves u,crave 4 u. Don't make her puppet. She wnt u 2 b happy,she wnts herself 2 b happy.In process of ur staying away mission she is losing herself.Give Abhay back 2 Pia,give Pia back 2 Pia.Abhay plz' Abhay' I m sorry 4 wht I did.But I really need her.Plz do something save her.She will listen 2 u. She loves u a lot.Ask her 2 come back 2 me' Sugand smiling 'Abhay I don't know whether I shuld b happy or sad but the moment u entered her life u became her 1st priority she luvs u more thn me.. She will listen 2 u.Only ur love has power 2 bring her back. When her love can free u frm cold grave so can ur love can bring her back 2 life.Previously also u brought her back in life.Try agn I m sure she will come back.But promise me now u'll not feed her wid lies.U will tell her truth.And remember my words Abhay' Saying this Sugand left.

Sugand's words were banging Abhay's head. Everything around him was asking him 2 give Pia's memories back. To bring her into life. He was in dilemma & thn he took Pia in his arms, he caressed her hair 'Pia u always used 2 tell me tht ur heart is enough 4 both of us thn now Pia make ur heart beat. I wnt 2 live through u Pia. If u will die how can I live. Live 4 me. Trust me this time I won't leave u.I'll tell u everything. Will keep u safe frm this cruel world' saying tht Abhay kissed her forehead,cheeks,eyelids & thn Lips. His kiss made Pia shiver. She came back 2 life agn & gave a weak smile 2 Abhay.Abhay could not hold himself. He hugged her tightly like he'll never let her go. Thn he caressed her hair agn. Looked into her baby brown eyes & thn Pia agn went back 2 her sleep. Abhay was not tensed this time as Pia heart was beating. He gave her memory & it was difficult 4 her 2 hold this so she fell asleep. Abhay knew in morning he have 2 face many question as Pia will get her memory back. All night he was holding her hands & staring at his princess without blinking his eyelid wid a fear moment he will close his eyes Pia will vanish.

Sunlight woke Pia frm her beautiful dream.It caressed her face gently. Pia slowly opened her eyes. Watching Pia coming back 2 her senses Abhay immediately asked' Pia r u..' b4 he could complete his sentence Pia gave him a tight slap on his face. This reaction of Pia or better action of Pia shocked him completely. He was wondering whether Pia still not remember anything. While Pia was luking at him angrily ' Abhay I remember everything thts Y I slapped u. Don't give me these confused luks. How could u do this Abhay?How could u snatched my most cherished memories. Do u have any idea how badly I was hurt wid ur rude nature? I was craving 4 u since years. How can u make decision of my life without evn informing me' saying this tears came out of her eyes. Abhay hugged her tightly.Pia was trying 2 push him back but all in vain. He cupped her face gently' Pia I m sorry I know I did wrong wid u. But I did all this coz I love u. I never wnted 2 lose u. I know I m ur's culprit but trust me evn I was burning in this whole process.I swear I'll never make this mistake agn. Pia hugged him back.They had their eye lock & now Abhay was completely over her kissing her continuously' U have no idea Pia how much I was craving 4 u. How much I was missing u? I love u & will always love u' Pia' I love u too now Plz I m in white sheet Abhay & I m here since night I guess Mom-dad must b searching 4 me'. Abhay' Ya Mom will inform ur parents saying u had an accident. As 4 white sheet I won't mind & now v will not hide our relationship' Pia'Promise me Abhay now u will never leave me alone otherwise I'll die' Abhay put his finger on her lips' Abhay 'Pia I promise u I'll never leave u.U belong here(pointing 2 his dead heart)' saying tht Abhay gave her a hard,long everlasting kiss'

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Edited by cuteshrishti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
👏 i seriously wish k kaash aisa kuchh serial mein hota!! Par cv's.. 🤢
i liked sugandh-abhay scene,sab log to shayad bhool hi gaye the Piya ki mom ko..loved dat scene where Piya slapped Abhay...i'd love to watch dis scene in near future..
Waise mujhe tumahaari previous dono O.S ki link chahiye..i wana read dem too...plzz!! 😳
i hope k aage vi tumhaari writing padhneko milegi..chalo ff nahi,O.S hi sahi..😊
Edited by ANTARA-2244 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
amazing superb luv d second part...
fantastic,
i like it so much dat i am reading it again nd again...
luv u
vrtika
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
Oh my god... You are awesome...
Please continue, i m very eager to know what will happen next.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68

Part 3 updated guys😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

hey part 2 is also brilliant. pls make this into FF and continue.

Thnx dishu isse maine FF toh nahi banaya lekin sabhi request pai part 3 likh diya😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Wow..All the chapters are awesome...👏

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