A Stone's Throw Away - *complete* Pg 14 - 02/01

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: aimin
Yeah I know, I'm here, the shock, eh? :P Just came around & saw this, had to comment even if a teeny one. You know how much I love your writing though I confess, the moment I saw this thread I wondered why the mini eyedrop dose-sized drabbles? (seemed so unlike you >_>) But well, after reading it, let's just say you've given a whole new meaning to short & sweet. :)

You're awesome as always, Lil. ^_^

I wasn't shocked shocked, but I did raise an eye 😆 And oh, I like the way you call them eyedrop sized drabbles, lol! Given my record with brevity (not) 😳

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sharneil92

@sharneil92

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

wow. JZee... make ur posts as dramatic as the last one! I absolutely love it! Yes, you're right... Gul does feel the importance of kesar in her life. I hope she'll not break it..😳

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sharneil92
wow. JZee... make ur posts as dramatic as the last one! I absolutely love it! Yes, you're right... Gul does feel the importance of kesar in her life. I hope she'll not break it..😳

😳 Thankz Shalu! Gulaal does feel the importance, equally like Kesar does, she's only got that gap to cover where she begins to consciously comprehend it's place in her life.

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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Jzee...OMG is this for real⭐️...are you some ...What amazing style.👏.I always knew you were gifted but my my...Your writing is something which has tremendous potential...Its like an oasis in the desert...I am totally smitten by your talent😳

IF walon...I hereby declare that I am the craziest fan of jzee's writing😉...Bravo,superb...How can someone write stuff like this amazing👏

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: manzilmukul
Jzee...OMG is this for real⭐️...are you some ...What amazing style.👏.I always knew you were gifted but my my...Your writing is something which has tremendous potential...Its like an oasis in the desert...I am totally smitten by your talent😳
IF walon...I hereby declare that I am the craziest fan of jzee's writing😉...Bravo,superb...How can someone write stuff like this amazing👏

🤗🤗🤗 Thanks Piu!

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Incense

@Incense

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

omg jzee thats amazing...r u a writer by profession ???? if not do consider it ...u write fantastically well... i feel connected with your write stuff.. it touches my heart its like my thoughts are saying these amazing words to me ...i see this show through ur write up...i absolutely loved ur FD brilliant and keep writing !

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: arti07
omg jzee thats amazing...r u a writer by profession ???? if not do consider it ...u write fantastically well... i feel connected with your write stuff.. it touches my heart its like my thoughts are saying these amazing words to me ...i see this show through ur write up...i absolutely loved ur FD brilliant and keep writing !

You're a very encouraging reader Arti - thank you for sticking around and dropping in comments! I'm not a 'writer' by profession... yet? But at least I'm studying to do something along those lines, one day 😆 My professor did warn our class on the first day of undergrad, that aspiring writers in bulk end up becoming cabbies in NYC ... so I try not to lose sight of the warning and keep alter options open anyway 😆

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

First Things First!

She has a way of barging into my life... so that every chapter begins with her.

First to sprout a water spring in my drought hit homeland. First to make my brother, the Vasant Bha, fall in love. First to undo the animosity between my family and her own. First to challenge societal norms and take 'wrong' decisions because they are 'right' for me. First to put herself on line when stakes come calling for sacrifice.

First to become my confidential equal. First to make me want to change. First to rid me of my fear of dark. First to spend a day in my wait outside paathshala. First to cover up my tracks. First to cane me. First to come see me at the boarding.

First I gambled for. First I languish after. First I wrote secret letters to. First I accused of betraying me. First face I wished to see upon my return. First to demolish my defenses. First to mesmerize me. First to see me drunk. First I nurse all night. First I feel responsible for. First in my hate list. First I wall out of my life. First I beg to come back in.

The first person who made me and broke me, spoiled me and stood me up, sheltered me and shut me out. My very first love…

Gulaal.

The first I have a past with. The first I see in my present. The first I seek in my future.

First, and only.

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A/N: Please please like-review?! I confess writing for the heck, but feedback reallyhelps. I also admit I'll probably write anyway given my current obsession with these characters and the show... but well!

Edited by JZephyr - 13 years ago

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prachurya

@prachurya

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Ohhh...Jzee...u make me emotional with Kesar's POV- i almost cry whenever I watch Kesar scenes- I just remember ur description...lovely writing...stays wid me and makes me more emotional watching the show. Thank you 😊

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: prachurya
Ohhh...Jzee...u make me emotional with Kesar's POV- i almost cry whenever I watch Kesar scenes- I just remember ur description...lovely writing...stays wid me and makes me more emotional watching the show. Thank you 😊

☺️ That has to be one of the best kind of compliments to receive. Kesar is such a brilliantly carved out character, I can only strive to justify it! Thank you tons! 🤗