A Stone's Throw Away - *complete* Pg 14 - 02/01 - Page 4

Originally posted by: JZephyr

First Things First!

She has a way of barging into my life... so that every chapter begins with her.

First to sprout a water spring in my drought hit homeland. First to make my brother, the Vasant Bha, fall in love. First to undo the animosity between my family and her own. First to challenge societal norms and take 'wrong' decisions because they are 'right' for me. First to put herself on line when stakes come calling for sacrifice.

First to become my confidential equal. First to make me want to change. First to rid me of my fear of dark. First to spend a day in my wait outside paathshala. First to cover up my tracks. First to cane me. First to come see me at the boarding.

First I gambled for. First I languish after. First I wrote secret letters to. First I accused of betraying me. First face I wished to see upon my return. First to demolish my defenses. First to mesmerize me. First to see me drunk. First I nurse all night. First I feel responsible for. First in my hate list. First I wall out of my life. First I beg to come back in.

The first person who made me and broke me, spoiled me and stood me up, sheltered me and shut me out. My very first love'

Gulaal.

The first I have a past with. The first I see in my present. The first I seek in my future.

First, and only.

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A/N: Please please like-review?! I confess writing for the heck, but feedback reallyhelps. I also admit I'll probably write anyway given my current obsession with these characters and the show... but well!

Originally posted by: chweetu

Amazing..description of kesuda..Jzee..U said it all...ur analysys is a mirror of kesuda's heart...had tears...at d end of ur post...amazing post...👏

Originally posted by: sauris

Oh no i wanted to be the first to comment but... Anyways your firsts are well written😆

Originally posted by: sukriti19a

First thing first... wow brilliantly written... hope this writting of urs cud be used as a kesar's letter... each word so real... awesome...

Originally posted by: arti07

though i not he first to comment on the this wondeful FD ( poor me 😭😭)but first one to demand next FD plz.😳...piyu u have tough competitor here ! not so easy huh

OMG arti.😲..main to competition se dar gayi😆...Oh ho leave na yaar we can share it...being the craziest fans of Jzee's writing🤗

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

OMG arti.😲..main to competition se dar gayi😆...Oh ho leave na yaar we can share it...being the craziest fans of Jzee's writing🤗