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PART: 8

Geet busy in her cabin . she is checking the files. Adi entered her cabin. "good morning geet?"

Geet:" good morning adi sir?.i had one doubt can you help me"

Adi: " tell me?.geet"

Geet" adi sir just have a look on vender file and this account file. There is one crore difference is there. How can account dept so much of irresponsible. "

Adi shocked he took the file ,yes geet is right how can it will be. He had a doubt with accountant but it is not confirmed. But today geet caught him with proof.

Adi" we have to inform maan sir immediately. "

Geet " nahi sir, this is not a small amount. Somebody cheating such a huge amount it means the well known person behind of all. I should collect some more evidence against him. First we have to caught him."

Adi surprised the way of her thinking. Really he want to appreciate her. "geet you are really good"

"stop stop not now after catching a real thief. But you have to help me."

"ok" Adi went out. Geet disturbed who will be cheating such a huge amount to company. she ask office boy to give her old files.

Geet go through the old files .all most every month they are cheating some huge amount to company. How come any one can cheat to Maan singh khurana. What he is really not aware about this .she started to underline important lines and started to make a note.

Maan stand near the blinds. His look stuck on geet. The way she leaning back to her chair , the way she is deep thinking about something , the way she holed the pencil in one hand and another hand she is checking the file. Again and again a slight small cute smile appearing on her lips. He lost on her cute smile. her pink color suit is giving strong competition with her cheeks. Some thing is bothering him. his heart commending him to move near to her. But his mind is protesting. totally he lost in her.

He really don't know how long he is watching her. His eyes filled with unknown desires. Where he couldn't control it. He came to reality when accountant Mr.Chatarji enter the cabin. He brought some cheque books and accounts file with his hand. Adi find that chatarji enter the cabin soon he given the information to geet.

Geet immediately enter the maan cabin. When maan about sign those cheques she stopped him.

"sir, pls don't sign the cheques. Still I am not check the accounts properly." Maan knotted his eyebrows. Chatarji give her evil look .

" geet madam, I am working here last twenty years. Nobody insulted me like you. Khurana family trusted me more."

Geet didn't care him. "maan sir pls you check here???." She handled the files to maan.

She showed the imp lines where she underlined and started to explain what she found. Same time adi also came inside even he complain against chatarji. Finally maan found the truth. His eyes were now splitting fire on chatarji.

His anger made scare not only for chatarji even geet scared. He tighten his jaw. "how dare you to cheat me such a big amount Mr.chatarji. I am trusted you peoples so much how can you do this. Adi call police?."

Chatarji felled on maan feet. " sir pls forgive me. dev sir and nayan tara done all this .they blackmailed me to do all these. Your money is going to their accounts. Pls sir pls forgive me"all most he is crying. Maan shocked. Dev he is in Canada how come he will do?..he hold chatarjis collar and blasted him.

" don't dare to put all this on dev. He is in Canada how he will come to here?.."

" no sir believe me.. one minute??" he went out side and he brought all the records which is depositing every month to dev account.

Maan free zed. Ithna bada doka?how come maan singh khurana will be so much irresponsible in his job. Here he cheated by his own brother.

Chatarji went out while crying. Geet is too scare to speak with maan. She gulped her saliva." Maan sir don't you handover to police"

He look geet pain fully . "no geet dev mera bhai how can I do this?"

Adi-" maan sir how long you will be fighting against all these. "

Maan -" what to do adi?he is my brother?if I throw him out hundred present next day he will be on road. Where it will hurt dadima. Dadima sacrificed for me so much. How can I hurt her. Better we will drop the matter here itself."

Adi went out. Geet some where she didn't like maan decision. .

Geet "Maan sir don't you think your decision is wrong."

He moved to near. How dare she is questioning him. geet scared with his angry attitude .

"Geet suno?dadima ko kuch mat bathana..pls.. I don't want to hurt her? "She nodded and all most she run to her cabin. His eyes are making her scary.

again evening pinky geet to leave office with her but geet refused that she can't come until maan finished his work. Pinky made baby face and left.

Today she don't want to sleep like yesterday , so she decided to work with maan. She went to maan cabin.

"Geet you still you are here?"

" sir , can I help you?"

"ok..".

she leaned little front and she try to understand the designs. Maan started to explain her. Explaining his dream project both forget about the time. Even geet given some suggestion where maan is happy. He wondered that the way how she understanding her work and giving hundred present of her. They both lost with their work . finally they wake up when dadima called them.

"geet its already 9:00 pm, challo jaldi?.."

When geet hurried to move she slipped in front of maan holed her arm tightly. She is too near to him. her back is facing to maan. he can found her small black mole on her nape. Just he want to touch that mole. His lips slowly blushed her nape slightly. Geet still un aware about his desire and his touch in one jerk she moved front. Her pure sandal perfume is still covered him. Maan rubbed his temple. He hate him self what he did to her.

Geet: sorry sir?" she rubbing her arm how tight he hold her. She found red mark there.

Maan : its ok?but he is blasting himself. How can he do this to her.

Geet: " maan sir, when is new project will start ."

She is totally unaware about maan thoughts. How can she doubt on him . she worship him like god. After that dark night even today she can remember that how he take care of her. Maan is dying inside what just he is done. But some how he succeeded to come out from the guiltiness.

"Still it is not finalized geet?client still not approved the project?this is the very big project in KC history. It is about 1000 crores project. It is my dream project?"

Geet: "don't worry sir .this project will come to us. Why can't we try in different way to get this project?"

Maan: " geet what you mean?"

Geet : " I mean when presentation we have to present the project in different way. Where we can impress client."

Maan: " meeting is next Saturday. How can we submit presentation with that short period."

Geet: " you don't worry ill take care of all this?."

Pre cap: Geet knows about Sangeetha.

Hi friends once again I request you all ,as this is my first ff I might have done lots of spelling mistakes, grammar mistake, and etc If you want me to continue this ,please leave your comments.

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Edited by varsha-sharma - 14 years ago
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Part -9

Geet thinking in her room roaming that end to this end. She went to maan room. Maan still working in his laptop. " Sir can I use your laptop.." he simply handled. He didn't dare to look at her. Geet sat there itself started to work on it. Maan don't want to see her but some how his heart is not willing to obey his order. But without his knowledge his gaze is following her. Her innocence face reminding him sangeetha. He closed his eyes. " maan pls kiss me once?." Her demand is tickling to him .Maan is teasing her . " no jaan?. I don't want to loose our first night excitement. I want to make our first kiss some thing special.you have to wait?pls hamari suhag raat hamaarileye bahuth special hoga. You have to wait till our marriage." She pushed him" maan tum bahut buri ho. Ek kiss karne mey kya hota hai?"she made baby face .

Maan opened his eyes. Geet is very seriously working in his laptop . this is really mental torching to him. suddenly he moved to study room. He close the door.

He hold sangeetha photo . his eyes filled with tears. His heart is paining. He couldn't control anymore. Tears rolled from his eyes. " kyu sangeetha muje se dur hogaya?.pls come to me?." silently he is crying like a kid. Nobody are there to share his pain. he leaned back on the couch holding sangeetha photo and closed his eyes.

Geet really unaware about her effect on maan. Still she is working. Some how she wants to gain new project. So she searching in Google for better information. She made some imp note. Finally when she wakeup it is already mid night 1.00am.she searched for maan. He is not in his bed. Where he went. She opened the study room door.

maan heard giggling sound. He opened his eyes. Hole room covered by white smoke. Geet standing in front of him. wearing white angel dress. Her long hairs are opened. Her front short curly hairs touching her cheeks. There is some different glow on her face. Her eyes shining like honey dew color diamonds. Her rosy lips teasing him .it is inviting him to test her softness. Looking her his hidden desires are waking. His mind is demanding him to taste her soft skin at least once.

Maan: "Geet tum?."

She stopped to giggle. Her eyes filled with tears. "maan tum muje bhula dia...mey geet nahi...tumahri sangeet?.its...ok... maan byeee..." she went back with pain. Her image is slowly disappearing.
Before she disappearing "ruko sangeetha ruko pls don't go..."he is trying to catch her but she is moving from him far. "pls ruko sangeetha...jaan ruko..." Still he is trying to catch her. Many times he experienced that. When sangeetha come on front of him he try to catch her but some how she will escape but today he catched her. He grabbed her waist in one jerk. He is very happy he got his sangeetha back. He can feel her. He got his sole back. He tightened his grip on her waist. He hugged her tightly not letting to move a inch in the fear of loosing her again. He wrapped his arms around her he pulled her close. His lips unknowingly touching her lips . he want to take her in...at the same time geet screamed loudly. Gathering all her stamina she pushed him on couch.

Actually geet came inside to wakeup maan. But maan is blubbering some thing in his sleep. Geet try to wake up bcoz the couch is too small to his personality. But unexpectedly maan hugged her started to address sangeetha. Geet shocked. In his grip she lost her strength. At lost when he about kiss her some how managed to push him. maan now realized what he about to do.

That means sangeetha is not here again his happiness vanished. His heart squished with lot of pain. He got angry with geet. Why she came here... barked on geet" what are you doing here. Without my permission how can you enter my room .just get out?he lost his sense. Somewhere his heart is not agreeing that sangeetha dead. Geet covered her lips , her eyes filled with tears .she ran outside.

Geet come to her room and started to cry. she couldn't sleep. She is unaware about what is happening. still her body feeling his touch. Her head is spinning. Still she felt his warm lips on her .again she covered her lips with her hands .Its take lot of time to come normal. Suddenly geet sat on her bed. She remembered that he addressed her sangeetha. How he know about sangeetha. I should ask about di. Mey be he know about di.

Hole night she couldn't sleep. Morning it is 6:00 am. Geet came to maan room but she didn't find him. She know very well this time he will be in gym. She went there. Her heart is skipping bcoz of lost night incident. But she couldn't stop her self to know about sangeetha. She came to near his work place.

Maan working very hard. He is punishing him self for unknowing reason. His eyes are red it seems hole night he didn't sleep. His sweated body is proving that he is working there from long time. Hole room was disturbed with toured sand bag and gymnastic items. Nothing is in its place. every thing is ripped. Geet scare to enter the room. Why he is so angry. Maan punched heavily on wall. His hand started to bleeding. Already in two three places it is bleeding. Geet ran inside. She holed his hand.

"What are you doing maan sir? Why you are punishing your self."

Maan eyes filled with lot of pain and guilty. He kneeled in front of geet. From night he suffering from inferiority complex that's what he done to geet. "sorry geet?what I have done to you very sorry. Pls muje maf karo" his eyes are pleading. He is looking like small kid. Geet wondered bcoz of maan act. Even she sat with him .she don't how to control him. she entangled her hand with his hand. Just slowly soothing his hand . she try to calm him.

"Maan sir pls leave it . now tell me how you know about sangeetha di?"

Till today he did't share anything about sangeetha with anybody. Only dadima and anni knows about her. But even they are aware about her death. They don't know real reason which is behind in her death. Maan closed his eyes. Remembering sangeetha his voice is cracked.

" sangeetha is my life. we met in our college days. Very soon she become my sole, my life, my dream everything. We both really very happy in our own world. We don't want to disturb us anybody. Day by day we are becoming mad for each other. we are not missing even single day to meet her. I am loving her more then my life." his eyes are now dreamy...small smile appeared on his lips. He lost in his past.

"one day sangeetha told me that she is going to hosaipur to meet her parents. I didn't agreed to go hosaipur. she had a birthday on the same day I want to celebrate it. But some how she convinced me and went. I couldn't hold bcoz after we started our love she is celebrating her first birthday . so I want to make something special. I have take the gift and I went to hosaipur , I called her , I asked her to meet me. but I don't know the real reason she is too much disturbed and she didn't speak with me properly. I scared I decided to meet her . finally she came to meet me. I given my gift and just wondering why she is so silent . she I scaring to speak with me . horridly she send back me. before moving the spot brij shooted her. It is totally unexpected . he try to kill me also. At the same time sangeetha parents saved me they ask me to move. But I didn't agreed. Loosing her in front of my eyes I lost my life. my sole in front of my eyes, she left her sole on my hands. I couldn't do anything to her. Somehow they send me back. But even today I can't forget her. When I saw you there is a big hope in my heart that I gained sangeetha again but when I come to know you are her sister again my happiness vanished. Pls I am sorry geet..."

Geet shocked. That means brij bhai killed sangeetha. Knowing her truth even her eyes filled with tears. She don't know how to calm him. she cleaned his wounds and bandaged. She patted his cheeks and when about to moved he holed her hand. His fingers moved to her back its reached her nape. Geet again scared. But he removed her chain. He pressed the secrete code ,pendent open. She found both of them pictures inside. Tears rolled from her eyes. Understanding his love with sangeetha .she couldn't bare any more. she came out side. She came back with white and red roses. She placed in front of sangeetha photo. she know very well sangeetha likes those color roses. Once she hugged her photo and placed kiss on her lips where maan kiss her daily in same photo.

Pre cap: Geet gained project.

Hi friends once again I request you all ,as this is my first ff I might have done lots of spelling mistakes, grammar mistake, and etc If you want me to continue this ,please leave your comments.

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Edited by varsha-sharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
wow
me first
dear i want u to suggest that after updating pls send us the pm
so that we can read and send the comments to u
if u cant send pm we dont no dear that u updated so pls send us the pm
dear
and about the update we love u dear
it is too good
geet also knew about her di
i knew that she can achieve anything
and pls show that she is going to college dear...and mann missing her in the office ok
pls pm us


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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome...superb...continue next part...waiting for more maaneet moments
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Posted: 14 years ago
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emotional part
loved it
waiting for next part
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very nice FF. It is going is moving in a steady speed and many things happen every update. I am eagerly awaiting the next part. Would you mind pming me?
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PART -10

Geet busy in her cabin. She is working day and night for new project. After that night incident she is not met maan. She know very well that she is disturbing him more. She is planning to create miniatures of new project. It is really new idea. She felt just showing designs on drawing sheet better to make miniatures. So she is working on that . there is only one day remained for presentation. Geet still working on that. She don't have the time to work on miniatures in office time so she is working it in KM.

Maan feeling guilty on his own act. Still he didn't come out what he did on that night. He is avoiding to see her. He came to late night to home and he leave KM early. That day it is already mid night 2 clock maan entered KM. he found still geet room lights are on. With curiosity he went her room. Geet working with miniature . its very cute & beautiful. its looking very naturally like his dream project. Maan eyes were wondered looking her work. Still she had some final touch up she is painting it. Some of Colors are spitted on her. Her cheeks , her chin hand slightly rubbed with colors. She is looking like small kid who is playing with colors.

Maan moved to near. Her work is really appreciable. she showed her work to him . she is very exited and started to explain. Maan smiled looking her child ness. He asked her to take rest. But she didn't agreed.

" no maan sir still I have to give final touch up. But You don't worry tomorrow afternoon there is presentation. it will be ready."

Maan also interested on her idea. " even I help you?" geet agreed. They finished their work after one hour . Geet still enjoying doing her work. Maan noticing her with eye corner. Her happiness, her bublyness bringing him new feeling on him. Maan went to his room.

Morning when he came to geet room she is still sleeping on table. In front of her miniature is ready with extra fittings mey be after he went to sleep again she worked on that. She is too tired. thermocol peaces are flying all over the room. She sat on chair and she placed her face on front of her table. Colors dried on her cheeks. Her curly hair moving all over her face. When she is sleeping she looks more cute and innocent. Her beauty is attracting him like a magnet. He moved too near. He caressed her forehead, without disturbing her sleep he lifted her and laid on bed. He covered her from spread. In sleep some thing she murmured and she changed her position. Maan couldn't control. Slowly he leaned on her and placed small kiss on her fore head.

He taken the miniature in his hand and he asked dadima to not disturb till she wake up. He went to office to make some arrangements for presentation.

When geet wake it is almost afternoon 2 :00pm.she scared. She thought how long I slept babhaji, and she noticed that she is in bed. Who changed me here. Her miniature also is not there. She hurried to bathroom.

Jumping two ,two steps she came down with hurry. Dadima stopped her" geet go slowly if you fell down..."

Geet: " sorry dadima I have to go for presentation. I don't know what they have done. My miniature and files also missing..."

Dadima: "don't worry geet...maan hay na..he will take care. Actually morning maan came to your room and he is taken your miniature and files. He ask me to not to disturb."

Geet freezed . her mouth open . that means he is lifted me and made me to sleep on bed. Her cheeks turn to dark pink. Dadima squished her cheeks. " geet you look so beautiful. Your cheeks changing their color again and again it looks more beautiful."

She shied and hugged her. "dadima...bye I have to go" dadima nodded.

When geet enter KC , maan is waiting for her in conference room. The client Mr.sharma and associates entered the meeting hall Meeting is started. Sasha started to describe about the project. Adi explained about finical support. Now it is geet turns to explain about project geet scared . bcoz this is her first project and she is not prophsenal educated related subject. But still with confidence she open the screen. Everybody are wondered looking geet miniature. She started to explain. every body under the magic of geet. Maan totally lost on her. but Mr.sharma stopped in mid.

Maan and all the staff shocked. Geet face dried. Some where client not agreed her project. Even maan feel same thing. But unexpectedly Sharma hugged maan. He is very happy about their project.

"Mr.Mann singh khurana and Ms .geet no need to explain . your work is perfect ?what a talented staff you are having ? Mr.Mann singh khurana really amazing. You people are satisfied me very much. With out any confusion they made me to understand the project. they have done wonderfull job. Project is yours?"

Including maan everybody happy bcoz this is the very big project of khurana construction history. they congratulated each other. Mr .sharma specially congratulated geet . he is very much impressed about geet work . his voice cracked.

" geet you are full filled my wife wishes. This is my wife dream project. now she is suffering from cancer. I am not sure whether she can be alive till our project complete. If you don't mind can I take this miniature at least she could see her dream project in this miniature." geet looked at maan.

Maan agreed. Sharma very happy so he decided to throw the party to khurana construction staffs and khurana family.

Geet had some work in KC. So she couldn't reach home on time .when she reach everybody left to party. Dadima called her and informed her to come soon and she is sending the vehicle to pick up her. Geet agreed.

When geet reached party hall it is too late. Mr Sharma eagerly waiting for her. Once again he congratulated. "gee...finally you arrived...he is my partner Mr.Rahul...Rahul this is geet... I have told u she is very brilliant in KC." He introduced him. Rahul lost in her simple beauty." My god can anybody will be so beutifull ...he is self thinking .

Maan noticed geet from far he freeze there it self. Un knowingly the word slipped from his mouth" sangeetha..." his graze is not moving from her.

Geet wearing long barbi doll dress , and her long hairs are freely moving. she pined her hairs with white stones broach. She is looking beautiful with wearing minimum jewelries. and makeup. Anybody can be so much beautifu... no... eyes closed. her eyes ,Her pink cheeks , her juicy lips , ...disturbing too much. Same dress same way sangeetha come in his dreams. Once again he closed his eyes and open. Again and again he is remembering her bcoz of geet. He couldn't stand there anymore. He left the party.

Geet is not comfortable with rahul. So she moved from there searching dadima. Finally she found dadima & anni. Anni hugged her and kissed on her cheeks. "Geet you are so beautiful..." dadima agreed her comment pinching her cheeks. After some time Sharma came to near and asked geet about maan. To sign the final agreement. Geet ask him to wait and she went to search maan. She found him out side standing alone looking at stars. Geet two times called him . he didn't turn her side. Without any option geet touched his shoulder. Maan turned his eyes smirked" sangeetha..."

Pre cap: Geet Engagement.

Hi friends once again I request you all ,as this is my first ff I might have done lots of spelling mistakes, grammar mistake, and etc If you want me to continue this ,please leave your comments.

FRIENDS PLS DON'T FORGET TO PRESS LIKE BUTTON

Edited by varsha-sharma - 14 years ago
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beautiful & efficient part
dear
really great
amaazing oh god
geet enagement with whom?
pls update soon dear
hope u soon give us link as pm
and dear where u write the page number try to give there the link i mean take the link from address bar and post there so that we cant search for page
directly we open the link so that it ll be easy my dear
hope i m saying how to use if


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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
nice part

pre -cap ??????Geet's engagement??????????? with whom??????????
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loved ur ff...
Amazing story...
plz add me to ur pm List

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