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**Banner credits go to Nori!!Thanks a ton!! <3
Heya!!!
Well..Its my vacations these days so having nothing better to do, I decided to write a fan-fic! The length...well I have clearly no idea how the story will proceed or what will happen. I am just follwing my instincts and hopefully the result would come out good.(Fingers Crossed). I am new to the forum so I have no experience whatsoever about how to make friends and stuff. So this is just gonna be my writing spree these hols and for the rest, I hope you guys will help.
Before I start blabbering even more- here goes the story:-
INDEX :
1. Ready to meet your opponent??- Page 1
Ready to meet your opponent???

"Oh my good God! How can a normal human possibly shout so much?" Riddhima was frustrated with her sister Anjali yelling on her for the past 15 minutes. One, she loved her sleep; two, she was in the middle of a great dream where she was just gonna win her first case in the official courtroom but lo and behold, she was woken up. And to top it all, they were in Rome for the holidays before she would start her graduate program at Harvard Law School. She had decided to enjoy the trip before being buried under the books and her career for the rest of her life. But from the moment the journey started, she had been regretting asking her elder sister Anjali and her husband Atul to accompany her. They both would begin cuddling and start going all hushy mushy in front of her, which practical "no time for love" "soon to be attorney" Riddhima Gupta disliked from the bottom of her heart. So here she was, probably the first tourist, who was sleeping in her hotel room instead of seeing the architecture of ancient Rome for the past two days.

"That should presumably be my phrase Ridzy. Oh my good God! How can a normal human possibly SLEEP so much?", Anjali yelled yet again emphasizing on the sleep! "What kind of person sleeps on his vacation Ridz? Wake up and get ready. It's already evening and we have to reach the large monument with the horse-rider before 7." "It's called Monument of Vittorio Emanuele II, Di", Riddhima stated unenthusiastically, after listening to her haywire explanation of a popular monument."Whatever! We are going there, its final and remember we also have to meet Nikita?? And don't make excuses, coz I am listening to none." , she said, as soon as she saw Riddhima opening her mouth to retort.(And refuse of course).

"Well alright! But I am not going to step out of my room tomorrow!!"was the only thing Riddimma could state before Anjali left for her room to probably go around and romance a bit with her husband. Yet again. Anjali did reply with a "we'll see" before banging the door, but Riddhima just refused her brain to process those words.

Anyways, after a lot of mental tantrums, she decided to get ready just to not disappoint her Di.She didn't want to spoil the trip for her Di and Jeeju just because of her laziness. And moreover, she wanted to meet Nikita, or Nikki, as she was fondly called. They were, no, they are best friends. She used to be her neighbor and they became the thickest of friends along time. Same school, same friends, same hangout spots, they were inseparable. After graduating from school, Riddhima chose law as her profession while Nikki being the kind of person born with a painting brush in her hand chose art. She had come to Rome three years ago for studying about architectural heritage and sculpture and ancient art and lots of weird stuff which Riddhima could never seem to comprehend(or name for that matter!!!), though they still 'skyped' and 'facebooked' with each other throughout. So now once she was here, of course she had to meet her bestie!. She was ecstatic and enthusiastic about only this part if the whole trip, though she was sure she was gonna be bored as Nikki was engaged to someone called Abhimanyu, a winery owner or something and he was going to come with her! Just imagining herself stuck between two lovesick couples made her feel sick and want to puke. "This is going to be SOME night!", Riddhima mumbled to herself in exasperation. Little did she know that her life which was devoid of any emotion, was going to undergo a full U turn from tonight!
This was surely going to be a SOME night!!!!!

After muttering silent curses under her breath for over fifteen minutes, Riddhima finally mustered up enough energy (and brain!) to go and change. And the person who usually takes at least an hour to just select her wardrobe, got ready in just 15 minutes, just to show her rebellion. Who said a grown up adult has to be always matured! Looking into the mirror, she was pleased with herself for being that way. The way...which reflected her mood.(Not hard to guess how that would be!)

"Are you seriously gonna come out in these clothes Ridzi? I mean we are going out with friends, on a dinner not on some unpleasant funeral!", Anjali yelled as soon as she opened the door of her chamber and saw Riddhima standing outside! "Anjali.Anjie. Calm down. Don't shout."Atul was trying to cool down Anjali's temper which was just going to erupt and he knew that once this happens, not just them but the whole hotel would burn down into ashes, but one glare from Anjali was enough to shut him up. Justifying what he said earlier he said, "Arre baba, We don't want the whole hotel to know about your fight right? And right now we are in the corridor. So please be cool." But instead of soothing down, this dote from Atul received him a "Shut up Atul! I don't care. Why don't you put some brains into this mad woman's head?" Sighing Atul turned now towards his sister-in-law. Standing in a black and grey suit like dress she looked like she was preparing herself to go to the courtroom and fight a case right before the dinner. Before saying anything, Atul noticed the facial expression of Riddhima which had the "Oh! If you open your mouth or even utter a word I make you face such circumstances that you would curse the day you were born" look written all over! And after years of experience of handling Anjali, Atul knew better than attacking over the lioness. So saying a "I have to make a call" excuse, he left the premises of what he thought, was going to be the venue of World War III. The sisters were so indulged in giving each other dead glares, that they missed what Atul said next(though even if they would want to listen they would have needed bat or moth ears!) A tired Atul had muttered "Pata nhi kahaan phas gaya inn do Gabbar behnon ke beech mein! Khud ladte hain aur beech mein mera sandwich banate hain. Arre yaar, itni buri kismat hai ki sandwich mein bhi kisi cucumber ya ham ke slice ki jagah, cheese ban gaya hoon. Jo bhi ho, mujh bechare ko toh melt hona hi hai."

But what Atul didn't know was that both the sisters were laughing their heads off in his own bedroom. "Ah Di! My stomach aches'you were so right when you said he is afraid of you. I mean its not that difficult to believe that but you should have seen his face. Another moment here, and he would have fainted!!!Oh my God, he really thought we were gonna fight with each other!", a laughing Riddhima stated. A straight faced Anjali replied, "hey!!!!!Don't make fun of my poor Pooh Bear." In between her laughing session the only word Riddhima could say were, "Pooh Bear????Really Di?" This got even Anjali cracking up. For around 10 minutes, they kept laughing. Anjali then stopped and looked over at her sister. The twinkle in her green eyes and the sound of her musical laughter brought another wide smile on Anjali's face. Till the afternoon, she was fed up of Riddhima's irrelevant behavior. But after returning from her room, when she found that Atul had gone to book reservations for the restaurant for the dinner, she didn't have anything to do. So she pondered over the last two days and it struck her like a lightning bolt or rather a lightning thought that Riddhima was just feeling left out. She was always someone who needed heaps of attention and got it 99 percent of 100 times. Of course, she was a star student, had nice facial features, a sports person and to top it all, a hot topic among boys, though that was the only area where she didn't want to attract much attention. But the main point was that nowadays she wasn't getting her drug dose of attention to which she was addicted. She was so busy in her newly married life, that she had just forgotten to pamper her baby sister. She felt embarrassed to be ignoring her these days. Her chain of thoughts was broken by a teary-eyed Riddhima who surprisingly instead of making fun of Atul said, "I miss you Di." The moment she heard this she knew that the tears in her eyes were not of happiness. "I miss you too. And I promise I am gonna spend 24*7 of these holidays with you, just you. I am soo sorry Ridz." "Sorry for what Di? I know you love me. I just miss spending time with you!!", Riddhima said, hugging her Di. After a really long hug and a bit of tears as soon as they broke the hug, Riddhima retorted with a glint of mischief in her watery eyes, "Aur waise bhi I don't want to be the cause of your divorce. And as much as I would like to be fighting my first case, I don't want it to be your divorce with Jeej." Seeing her sister's brows questioning her, she added, "Arre bhai. If you spend 24*7 with me, where will my poor Jeej go huh???" They both started giggling again, and before her sister could hug her again, Riddhima resumed her strict show and said, "Now don't get all mushy and hushy and senti with me!!!!" Anjali replied with a smile and moved back but was surprised to be taken into a sudden hug by Riddhima again. Thinking about it, she could just wonder how her sister was all prim and proper in front of the world, but was vulnerable inside. She pretended to hard but who was she kidding? Anjali knew that she was just a naive girl who though didn't show it, needed love. "Chal. Let's go and change this sucking wardrobe of yours for something nice." This phrase from Anjali brought a frown on Riddhima's face but just to go with the flow and to keep up her Di's spirits, she decided to just leave the matter. But having the typical lawyer kind of personality, she retorted," Stop behaving as if something special is going to happen tonight for which I need to dress up." "Anjali replied with a "Maybe'You never know Ridzy. Probably you'll find your knight in shining armor tonight", while picking up an indigo colored knee-length gown from her cupboard and handing it over to her sister who was blabbering something like "Yeah sure! Leaving the whole world behind, he would want to live in this city. And fall in love with a person like me. Puuuhlease Di, my knight in shining armor probably forgot his way and is fighting some small moth or bug with his sword, that too, in the forbidden chamber ofHogwarts." Anjali just closed the door and went to search for her hubby but not before muttering, "Oh!For crying out loud Ridzy! One. What you are wearing is an insult to woman dressing sense, so the person needs to be blind. And two if you keep retorting and fighting and act all frustrated, he will probably even have to be deaf and dumb. So if you can please grace me with your presence tonight in a more amicable manner, I would be obliged and so would your prince charming!" Riddima knew that her sister last nerve had been touched, which was finding the perfect soul mate for her. But she knew better. She knew that something like soul mate didn't exist. She knew that finding the last piece to her life's jigsaw puzzle, her love, would never happen.

But don't we say that to expect the unexpected??? So probably all the things Riddhima knew were things she thought she knew!

##This is more sort of Riddhima's introduction. Armaan's entry and meeting(hopefully) in the next part!!


Lots of love

Neha

*Please...pretty please-comment and like the posts coz like someone intelligent once said, "Work which is not appreciated is like love which is not reciprocated!"(wait...that 'someone intelligent' would be me😉)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey!

nice intro... plz cont soon and do pm me😊

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hey,
nice concept and great start..
luvd the title
i would love to see the practical and soon-to-be-attorney ridz in luv wid armaan
really interesting
continue soon and do pm me
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hey,
thanks for the pm
nice part
luvd the ridz-anjy bond
and poor atul,stuck b/w two gabbars😆😆
luvd his dialogs
"pooh bear"-nice name
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hey!
Wonderfull part!!
Loved Angie Ridzi sisterly bond
And poor atul is stuck between two Gabar sister!!
Thanks for the pm!
Continue super soon😃
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so we have another wonderful writer on I-F! .. 😃 .. welcome .. 😃

The introduction was amazing! , i loved the bond of the sisters .. so so natural and their emotional talks did bring tiny tears to my eyes .. 😳 ,.. (i'll be repeating this sentence on every emotional scene .. 😳 😆) .. Atul was a sweetheart! .. <3 ..

as it is said ... "there is nothing untold left in this world", so the story is somewhat heard, but it's your different presentation that i am going to read this ,

waiting for the hero .. and i wholeheartedly agree with ur philosophy, being a writer myself i understand what comments mean.

Continue soon and God Bless
KInza ..

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simply awesome Neha :)
continue soon

and u live in Rome? wow gal..i love that place..i wish i visit it sometime
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Thanx for ur comments...!I love it😉
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ooh nice beginning!! cant wait to read more :) sounds interesting!
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Realising Existence

"This is one nice place!", was all Anjali could say after seeing the huge palatial hotel in front of her. They were here to meet Nikki and her fiance at the hotel's restaurant. Seeing the open mouths of Atul and Riddhima, she could guess that they were also in awe of the place. "Why aren't we living here, Atul???", Anjali asked Atul, when realization struck her that they were living at a place which resembled a small stable in front of the structure standing before her. Atul knew well the expression of disdain on his not-so-benevolent wife, so before she would lose her temper for the second time in the day (he still doesn't know what happened before was a Bakra episode by the sisters. Poor him!), he replied cheekily, "Anjie, you didn't think I didn't try to book a suite here, do you?", just to find that the expression of fury was now replaced with a frown on her face. "Arre baba, you need to reserve a suite here atleast 4 months before you actually need it. And we decided this trip just 2 weeks ago, so we didn't get it!"

"But Atul you could have...". The rest of the conversation was just another blur for Riddhima, who had already seen this scene of Atul manaofying Anjali, several times in the past two days, more times than she had even blinked her eyelids. She had this bored look on her face which was soon replaced with an embarrassed one, when it dawned upon her that they were standing in front of the hotel and the doorman was patiently waiting for them to enter the hall. She gave a cheeky smile to the doorman who seemed amused to observe this ridiculous banter in a language he could never comprehend. She knew she had to stop the duo before they could take the hotel over their heads. But she found it weird to interrupt their conversation, so she kept on looking for an excuse or rather an explanation, to shut them up.

Though she didn't have to use the reins of her mind for long, because her thoughts were interrupted by a shrill cry of,"Ridzyyy!!", and before she could understand she was engulfed in a rib-crushing hug. She knew the voice, she knew the arms, she knew the love, so she surprised the doorman, who was trying to understand this unusual commotion in front of this posh hotel, by shouting "Nikkkiii!".
Armaan was living the monotonous kind of day yet again. The same waking up, the same working out and the same coming to the hotel for the same boring work! 'Pathetic! I detest my life'.F*L!!', was the chant recurring thought in his 'usually-happy- but not-right-now' brain!! He was just passing the lobby, talking to his extremely daft headed bellhop who needed a three-day leave attend his son's first day of school!!! I mean give him a break! Why would someone need such a long break for a school's first day?? Where did his son go to school?? The moon??!! This stupid argument was occurring and he was gonna bargain with the bellhop when a commotion outside the hotel caught his eye. The people were shouting- A good-looking man was trying to talk to woman, who for some reason was looking quite pissed off and it doesn't take a genius to figure out what that meant. But what caught Armaan's attention was not the fight but something else, rather someone else- A beautiful girl, standing with the couple. He was amused to see the display of a variety of emotions on her face. From disinterested, to bored, to embarrassed and finally confused! Then the look changed from confused to happiness, as she was taken or rather forced into a hug and then she just gave a huuuge shriek! 'She looks like someone's muse with all her enchanting expressions! But she has something more appealing than just that! What is it???', Armaan was still trying to figure out what about the girl attracted her by looking at her continuously.
But his reverie was broken when the girl suddenly looked up and saw him staring. Embarrassed, he abruptly looked away and pretended to be really interested in the bellhop's son's school, which he now got to know was some play-way school called "Bambini Felici". Involuntarily, a smile appeared on his face! No, not because of the school's academia or something but because he found the answer to his question. The answer to the riddle was- her green eyes mixed with a shade of hazel!!! Even he had no idea how his brain could calculate all the minute details about her eyes in a micro-second! But then'.he was Armaan!!! Well that wasn't the real reason, though that is what he thought! And somehow, somewhere he thought'.and felt- "Those eyes look familiar!".
This really noisy hungama of the four people would have gathered a very big audience of the tourists if Nikki's love would have not raised his voice and said, "NICE TO MEET YOU TOO GUYS! NOW IF YOU WOULD PLEASE SPEAK LIKE NORMAL PEOPLE RATHER THAN SHOUTING LIKE BLARRING HORNS!!" Embarrassed, they all shut up at once and stood in a straight line as if they had been reprimanded by their teacher. "Now that is like a perfect group of friends. So let me introduce myself- "Hey guys! I am Abhimanyu, Nikki's fiance.""Uhmm. Sorry Abhi! Woh''.Chodo! Meet my best friend in the entire world- Ridzie", she said side-hugging her "and Sweets, meet Ab..", Nikki replied but was cut off by Riddhima, who was not really happy to scolded by someone, "He already introduced himself Nikki, and a very good introduction that would be. Right ABHIMANYU??"Abhimanyu was taken aback for a second but recollecting what Nikki had told him about Riddhima's self-obsession and her belief of never being ticked off , he just shrugged his shoulders and mumbled a "hmmm..!" Nikita was too ecstatic because of meeting her bestie after three long years to even notice this exchange and Atul was too busy trying to search for the umpteenth reason to explain Anjali, why he couldn't book a suit at the "hotel-resembling-a-palace", but Anjali was very much in her senses. "Riddhima!", she scolded or rather shouted, while Riddhima knew that whenever her sister called her 'Riddhima' instead of the usual 'Ridzy', it wasn't a time to test her fierce temper, so she gave a forced smile and said, no, whispered a "Sorry". Anjali then indulged herself in making up for her sister's behavior and started talking to Abhi and Nikki about the weather and many other irrelevant topics while Riddhima was thinking why the earth couldn't open up and gobble her like Goddess Sita was taken in. At least it was better than being stuck in between the whole tumult. But somewhere her sixth sense, which she considered her best friend (though after Nikki!), started giving her weird sensations. She felt as though, someone's gaze was fixed on her. She looked at the bellhop, only to realize that someone standing behind him was staring right at her. Someone with deep blue- grey eyes. A normal person would have looked away or at least felt uncomfortable. But this is Riddhima who we are talking about-she was far from being normal! She, being who she was, stared back at the man, who inverted his gaze as soon as he saw her looking back. But this was ample time for Riddhima's quick brain to process his looks. He looked like a charmer which good looks and physic. But what Riddhima was thinking was far from his appearance. She knew that look!! Her memory skills were working faster than a cheetah running after his prey. And suddenly it stuck her. 'No. no!! Please don't tell me it's him. No! It can't be. It couldn't be the person she wished she had never encountered in her life. It couldn't be'''.ARMAAN!!!!', her mind was yelling inside. Her turmoil was interrupted by Anjali, who was, for some reason shaking her. "Huh? What?", Riddhima replied to which Anjali answered with an amused look, "Kab se keh rhi hoon! Where are you lost? We should go in now, ryt??". Riddhima just nodded and the five of them turned to the door to go to the restaurant, with Riddhima trying to hide behind Anjali, surprising and confusing the rest with her odd behavior. The doorman was dejected, as he led them in. Of course, who wouldn't be?? This was free entertainment and he had wished it would go on forever!!"
Have fun reading. Please comment or atleast press the like tab!!!!
Neha
Edited by SurrealFantasy - 13 years ago

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