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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it...thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey!
i loved it! :D thanks for the pm and update soon! :)
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wow just caught up and this was superb! please add me to the pm list and cont super soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ssidra

hey!

nice intro... plz cont soon and do pm me😊

Hey!
Thanks for commmenting and even more for being the first one!
Glad you liked it😳
P.S. Sorry for replying so late...actually its the holidays and I was just caught up with some trips and stuff!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: trouble_006

hey,

thanks for the pm
nice part
luvd the ridz-anjy bond
and poor atul,stuck b/w two gabbars😆😆
luvd his dialogs
"pooh bear"-nice name
continue soon

Sorry for commenting so late...was caught up with some stuff!
Thanks for commenting! It means a lot!
Keep commenting and yeah...who doesn't love Atul's punchlines and his innocence!
Bisous!
Neha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fantasia.

wonderful writing!! .. and so they both already know each other !! .. great ..
looking forward, continue soon neha! ..

Glad you liked it! and they don't just know each other! they have a LONG history!!!
Thanks for commenting...looking forward to your comments even more!
Sorry for replying so late...was caught up in some work!
Bisous,
Neha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dear...

totally loved the part...

but why did ridz snapped at armaan??

oh ammy is so so so cute...

will love to read further...

cont. soon

love

aditi

Hey Aditi,
Glad you liked the part!
Why Ridz was hostile towards Ammy is a mystery...u'll know soon!
Thanks for commmenting...keep commenting and encouraging me!
Bisous,
Neha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HEY DEAR
its interesting
awesome updates till now
loved them
do pm me
continue soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ciao people. A long time since I last updated and well I have no excuse; the truth being that I am the personified specie of what you call "lazy bones". Now finally I decided to spend some time on writing and this is what I came up with!

Face-Off
Riddhima Gupta was always a really good conversationalist, especially when she would talk to her best friends. The amount she spoke and chattered would be a serious competition to all the blabbermouths in world. And though she would not admit it, in the matter of talking, she was in the league of the cheerleaders, the Tiffanies and Brittanies, in fact she was fit to be their head blabbermouth. But today wasn't the normal 24*7 Radio Mirchi Riddhima day. And this did not go unnoticed by her companions. Nikita could guess that Riddhima was missing something today. She could read Riddhima well and right now she could see that she wasn't really ecstatic about someone or something was bothering her. She could sense that Riddhima's talks missed the usual knack of sarcasm and sardonic twists. And she knew that Riddhima without her usual spark and flair of speech wasn't a very happy person!
"Hey Ridz! Kya hua? The kind of expressions you are giving and the amount of attention you are paying towards me kinds indicates that something is amiss. You're not really happy to see me, or is it Abhi? Don't you like him??", she asked skeptically, crossing her fingers that her fiance would pass the scrutinizing test of her best friend, because believe it or not, though she would ask her whole family for any decision, she would finally adhere to Riddhima's opinion. Anyone would be surprised to see the kind of bond they shared even though they were absolute specimens of chalk and cheese. Nikki was the sweet, bubbly, never hurt anyone kinds while Ridz was the strong-headed, practical and talkative but only for those close to me kinds. But well, you know God; he has the weirdest ideas of companionships ever! As they say, 'Ram Milaaye Jodi'.
Riddhima finally realized that her behavior was giving out wrong signals to her friend and the kind of frightened looks Abhi was giving seemed extremely funny to Riddhima. Even he knew that her acceptance was like the stamp on his marriage documents. Riddhima stared at the couple for a few seconds and began laughing hysterically when she finally processed Abhi's helplessness and skepticism. Everyone was stunned with her sudden outburst and looked at her expectantly with questioning looks on their faces. This was just the final bullet needed to trigger her laughter to an even higher pinnacle'if possible. Seeing the confused glares she had succeeded in gaining, not only of her friends but also all the guests in the hotel, her laughs subsided and finally she decided to end the lines of tension from Abhi's forehead. "Errr'..You know Nikki, Abhi is so short-tempered and kinda Hitler sorta personality'I mean he seems like the male-chauvinist types." Seeing Abhi and Nikki's horrified faces, she was satisfied with the response she wanted and continued, "but he seems like a genuine guy and well, he's well-built so he'll protect you from the hundreds of ex-boyfriends who are gonna sulk as soon as they know you are going to get hitched "giggle"and yeah most-importantly, the way he has held your hand below the table and seems to think that no one will ever know, shows that he really loves you!!!"Abhi and Nikki, who both had started to smile as they heard Riddhima, now turned into a blushing Nikki and flushed Abhi. Hearing her Anjali and Atul who were feeling left out began laughing too. Soon the tension in the air vanished and the group began enjoying the dinner.
But Riddhima's life without some blunders and problems is like having hot chocolates without marshmallows. So in between the whole banter, Abhi, who was already having a bad day with a certain dictator called "Riddhima" got an intensified glare from her when he "accidentally" spilled his glass of Chianti(a kind of wine), on her. He just gave a sheepish smile and looked at her innocently. Riddhima gave him a forced smile too and kept on mumbling in her head about what Nikki liked about Abhi and why in the whole wide world did she find just him to get married. "Guys, I'll just come back in a sec. I need to get this mess cleaned up!", she said aloud and seeing all of them nod, she got up and began walking towards the washroom.

Engrossed in cursing Abhi for the hundredth time in the day, she made her way towards her destination, wondering why she met Abhi today of all the days, only to make the bad day even worse. And of course our dear God played match-maker yet again and she tripped on Lorenzo's trolley only to fall into the arms of '.(no need to tell you who it is'enough experience of Bollywood movies!) But this wasn't the very typical kind of fairytale fall. So well, both, Armaan and Riddhima graced the shining marble floor with their bodies, and in the process of saving Riddhima(and falling!), Armaan toppled over Lorenzo and one thing led to another. So the end of this accident resulted in the luggage falling in one direction, Lorenzo in the other and Riddhima on the floor with Armaan lying over her. The residents of the hotel had a really engaging scene to witness nonetheless. Riddhima who had her eyes closed due her fear of landing on the floor opened her eyes only to stare right into the blue eyes.

Recognizing the eyes in a jiffy, she gave a silent thought, 'Oh for the love of God! Why do the people I DON"T want to meet come in front of me today itself! Maine aapka kya bigaada hai Bhagwaan!"But it turned out that her silent thought was not so silent after all! Armaan was not really surprised with what she said. After all he had already witnessed this ironical way of Riddhima greeting him. "Huh?", was all he said because even after all the experience he had, he still couldn't believe that Basket was in front of his eyes after all these years and was cursing him as usual. "Would you mind getting off me? As much as you would like to stay over me, I do not really like this marbled floor as my mattress and you as a comforter!", she replied sarcastically looking straight into those eyes. Armaan who had by then returned out of the memory lane, put himself back together and got up. Being the perfect gentleman he was, he gave her his hand and offered his help for getting up just to get a retort of, "Ha! Ironical how you made me fall and then act with all courtesy and stuff. Keep it to yourself Mister!". Saying so she got up and brushed off any dirt which could have come on her. Armaan had had enough of her blabber so he replied with a "Still attitude Basket! I did NOT make you fall, in fact I was trying to SAVE you. And yeh jo tum invisible dirt nikaalne ki koshish kar rhi ho, let me tell you that my hotel is more cleaner than her gracious highness's house!" Riddhima knew that she couldn't argue with him on that, after all they had all been enchanted by the place. So without replying, she turned around and resumed her journey back to the washroom.

"Hey Basket! Won't you even greet me?", Armaan asked her from behind even though he had already gotten a really good dose of "typical basket greetings". Riddhima turned back and putting on a confused expression asked him, "Excuse me! Are you talking to me? Coz if you are let me tell you that neither do I know you and nor do I like flirts like you so you don't stand a chance if you are trying to you know''trap me!" "Oh so Queeny is playing this denial of knowing me game! Well Basket!, Two can play the same game, I am on!", he thought and smirking to himself he got back to Riddhima who had again turned back and walked a few steps ahead. "Uhm, Well I know I am SOOO charming that I do NOT need to flirt and the only reason I was giving importance to you was because I thought you were the same bumblebee who used to sting me the whole time during high school. The "Goonj" who annoyed me with her shrill voice, the Tinkerbell who tried to help the whole school and ended up getting them into a web of trouble, the evil Cinderella stepsister who had gone out with every guy at school, leaving me of course, coz I have great choices and you'.well lets not go over there!, but never had even kissed a guy! And yeah the Basket, who loved playing basketball with me but lost EACH and EVERY time!", and owing to the fact that he knew her, he knew she was bound to react! Riddhima was known for her temper with Armaan, and all the things he recounted were her weaknesses. And Armaan was never wrong. He gave himself two imaginary pats on his back when he saw Riddhima turning back and walking to him with her usual red face, flaring nose and deep frown on her face.

Coming nose to nose(yeah I know its face-to face usually but Armaan Riddhima are well' Different!). "Listen Mallik, I never was behind you, YOU were the one following me. And I do NOT sting ok'. I have really nice voice and YOU of all the people know this better than anyone, I helped everyone coz I have a soft heart, unlike you who instead of helping, used to pour oil into the fire and then witness the poor people in trouble. Yeah and you were right about one thing that you didn't stand a chance with me because it turns out'the whole school was behind me and you have a really bad choice just like the fluorescent green sneakers you had and most importantly- I NEVER EVER lost any basketball match especially while playing with a loser like you.", she replied back, swallowing every word as she uttered them, attaining frightened looks from the onlookers in the lobby, except for Armaan, who smiled inwardly and putting on an innocent expression asked her, "And kiss?". "Oh yeah, about that, I have kissed several times during high school and I was an extremely good kisser by the way. And if you don't believe that you can ask Siddhant!", she answered and seeing the winning smile on Armaan's face, replayed the conversation in her mind and soon it dawned on her that she had indirectly accepted that she knew him. Biting her tongue, she put on a sheepish smile which turned into a confused one when she heard Armaan speak to the bellboy, "Lorenzo, Could you call the Guinness World Record office and yeah, also the nearby hospital staff!", he said animatedly. Lorenzo showed an expression which seemed like a Xerox of Riddhima's expression and asked his suddenly spirited boss, "Perche?"(Italian for "Why"). Riddhima's face soon had a glare and a frown together when Armaan replied by saying, "Oh Lorenzo, Didn't you just see what happened? This lady here", he said pointing towards Riddhima, "didn't even remember me a few moments ago. And now suddenly she not only recognizes me but also knows my name and even the color of the sneakers I wore during high school Lor! And that too because of the few lines I spoke. How cool is that???So don't you think I should get recognition for curing someone's amnesia in less than five minutes? Huh Lorenzo??", he asked in mock seriousness. Lorenzo understood that they were just old friends. And well, that was all of what he could catch from the conversation, so he decided to leave the couple alone to catch up while he went to gather the fallen luggage.
Armaan smirked, went up to Riddhima and keeping his elbow on her shoulder, said, "Well Well. Who do we have here? Basket, no bumblebee, oh no Tinker or should I say Ghajini Gen-next??" putting on a confused expression on his face while Riddhima looked at him and led out a huge sigh! Her day just got worse''.Abhi was a much better option was all she could think.

Thats about it! Finally they met. Even I was bored when I read just the before updates and well if you guys felt bored...well nothing can be done! But now that they have met...no prizes for guessing what happens when Armaan Riddhima meet- sparks fly!! Oh and yeah...they share a HUGE history with each other and a hell lot of problems in their life. Hmm- the story will be set in the backdrop of law schools and courts and senators and lawsuits, so before you blame me of disfiguring the laws and stuff, I'll just clear that I do NOT have any experience with that stuff. I'm just fifteen and trust me- the closest I have seen a court is the Supreme Court in Delhi that too from almost a kilometre away. So the ff is purely fictional. Nothing happens the way it happens in this ff and all of the idiotic stuff is just a figment of my over-functional imagination. And lastly I don't know if anyone paid attention but the story has the extreme example of kabaab mein haddi-Siddhant, in it. And he has an important role to play- protagonist or antagonist is still to see...

(Don't know if I succeeded in creating suspense but I sure tried too. So if it didn't effect you, just put on an expression of confusion and fright!😉)
Please comment!! I wouldn't have it any other way!😆
Loads of AMOUR
Neha
Edited by SurrealFantasy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Srslyy Interesting ff !!
Wud Love to read further!! Do Pm me :)

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