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Hey frnds😳😳

welcome to the new thread of one on one🤗

plzz be with me in this new thread too like u were in the previous one😛...thank you for all ur love and support😳😳








They are poles apart...one loves to break rules and the other loves to break the rule-breakers...!!



Geet handa the cute, naughty,adorable, beautiful and not to forget sexy 😉moniter of 9th B. Her life revolves around her friends meera, pari, vicky, yash, nt and her sweet sam di. She is the life of DPS and her family...!!...Her friends can go to any extent to help and protect her. She is pampered by one and all. Her life is smooth and soft ride untill she face her not so friendly neighbour.






Maan singh khurana, the name speaks for the owner. He is the hot, handsome, hunk ☺️and deadly head boy of DPS. His life involves only one rule and that is discipline is above all. His friends sam and adi are his class mates. He is a dedicated and hard working student with a killer intelligence which left his enemies aghast...!!



Both have vowed to make the other's life miserable in every way resulting in their weekdays tom and jerry show...😆



ok here is a quick recap of the story till now...😊



The story contains a lot of twist and turn making the whole journey a bumpy ride...!!...From the very beginning maan is an enigma for readers as he has a lot of secrets hidden behind his heart, mind and his cupboard😉...story takes another turn when a jerk useless rahul😡lays his dirty eyes on geet bringing out a totally different aspect of maan which was hidden from everyone...his highly POSSESSIVE attitude for geet...!!...Another twist brings out a surprising truth of maan and geet's childhood friendship...the unbreakable bond between maan and his mishty😳😳😳...!!


Rahul's incessant failure in luring geet agitated him to the core and tried to force her on their after exam party which brought out the beast inside maan thrashing him ruthlessly...!!



The insult was too much for rahul to endure and he waited for an opportunity to take his revenge on maan and geet. He got the opportunity and framed geet in a drug addiction case bringing her on the verge of expulsion from school. But maan backfired his plan and expelled him from the school...!!


The incident evoked new feelings in geet for maan. She realized that something changed between them specially for her and thus in confusion of her own feelings and maan's ignorance she started stalking maan...!!



Will geet understnd her new feelings for maan or will brush it off as a mere crush...??

What's maan's secret...??...does he feels the same for geet or not...??

What happened in their past...??

How is their relationship going to change in future or will they remain the same...??

Are they going to continue this one on one fight or will they ever get on one side...??😉


To get the answers for all these questions keep reading You n Me...One on One...!!



love u all🤗

anupam

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when r u gonna updat ...
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chapter-21





Rohan was nervously eyeing vicky who was sitting right infront of him while geet stood there with her hands on her hips and tapping her right foot in a curious way...!!





So, are you ready...??...she finally asked after getting bored waiting for rohan's reply who was merely gawking at them as if his mind hasn't registered a thing she said






Rohan still didn't said anything and kept looking at vicky who was slightly getting the idea of what exactly was going on in his mind. Vicky looked at geet and then at rohan and came forward...






Ah, geet...he interrupted...would you mind if I talk...??...he asked hesistantly






Geet got fed up with rohan and replied raising her hands in the air...






My pleasure...she passed him a fake smile and get back to the bench stomping her foot






Hey rohan...he thought of starting a conversation...whats up buddy...??...he smiled at rohan who simply knitted his brows in confusion as well as tension






Vicky sat beside him and put his arm around his shoulders to which he fearfully looked at his hands and bend backwards, away from him...






Wh...what are you doing...??...he asked paniking while vicky rolled his eyes and took a deep breath calming his awakened anger with his continuous fattoo act...!!






He again put up a smile and said clutching his shoulders...






Rohan, you are my best buddy, aren't you...??...he asked with a stern expression to which rohan gulped and nodded in denial while saying yes






Oh I knew it...vicky smiled widely and continued...thank you rohan...vicky hugged him tight confusing him like anything...you will be geet's dance partner...!!






As the last set of words escaped vicky's mouth rohan eyes popped out while he looked at him in cmplete horror...!!






What...??...rohan stood up in a jerk...what are you talking about...??






Geet had had enough. She stormed towards rohan and pointed her index finger directly at him...







Look rohan, just listen to me carefully. I am participating in the group dance for the lead pair and YOU...are going to be my partner...!!







Rohan gave her an incredulous look and suddenly began to run away from there, but before he could reach the exit vicky and geet caught him...






Leave me, you both are lunatics...rohan shouted trying to free himself from their grip while geet and vicky held him tightly






No ways you moron...geet spat...you have to become my dance partner...!!






Rohan try to understand, geet wants you to be her partner when she could have got anyone...vicky tried another way...you are the lucky one dude, don't miss the chance...!!






Yeah right, and get myself a bed booked in the hospital...he replied irritating vicky and baffling geet







What do you mean...??...geet knit her brows looking suspiciously at vicky and rohan






Ah, nothing geet...vicky interrupted while clutching rohan's mouth with his palms...he is just a bit shy, you see...he looked at rohan's suffocating face and said...just give me five minutes, infact why don't you go to others and wait for us. Till then I'll make rohan UNDERSTAND everything...he gave a dreadful look to rohan while geet shrugged off...






Whatever, but make it fast...she replied before leaving the two alone in the room






After geet left vicky swiftly made rohan face him and said grabbing his shoulders...






Now just shut up and lsten to me...rohan tried to speak, but vicky's deadly glare prohibited him...!!






Good...vicky said as both sat down on the bench...rohan, whatever happened before was a misunderstanding, and I am sorry for that...!!






Rohan still gave him uncertain looks which made vicky sigh...






Ok, lets make a deal. You help geet and I'll help you in getting closer to pari...vicky offered






What...??...rohan's eyes sparkled at pari's name






Of course, see as I said before you are my find friend and its a duty of one friend to help the other...vicky smirked and asked...so what say...??






Rohan thought for a while and finally replied...






Ok, but what I have to do...??






Vicky grinned widely at his acceptence and said...nothing much dude, a very nominal work...!!






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Dev...meera beckoned him from behind






Hey meera, what happened...??






Uh, would you do me a favour...??...she asked hesitatingly while dev smiled






Of course dear, anything for you...he replied giving one of his famous charming smile







Um, woh, actually I...she didn't knew how to ask him as she never approached anyone else for anything apart from geet






Oh, come on meera, you can ask me. I am your friend, ain't I...??






She gather her strength and replied slowly...woh, actually I am having a problem in understanding a chapter in physics and you scored maximum in it, so I...she looked at him and then suddenly said...if you are busy its ok, actually geet is also busy with her practice and shukla sir is on leave so...






Ssshhh...dev pressed his finger on her lips to quieten her while she felt a bit uneasy with the sudden touch...meera, usually you don't utter anything, but sometimes you truly become geet's twin sister...he chuckled while meera felt embarrased on ranting so much before him






It will be my pleasure to help you...he replied giving a sweet smile while removing his finger from her lips






She smiled back...thanks dev...!!







Ahan...!!...don't thank me yet...he interrupted...I can be a real pain when it comes to teaching...!!






Meera giggled at his remark and dev continued...






My place, 5 pm sharp...he said while meera nodded and went to carry on with her work






All the while sasha was watching them from behind seething at meera's closeness with dev...I have to keep this behenji away from dev at any cost...she thought and stormed off from there...!!






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Next day, maan reached his classroom to find a super excited alisha marching towards him...






Hey maan, we have to give our names today...she said with a cheesy smile while maan rolled his eyes and kicked himself mentally for getting into all this






Uh, yeah...we will go after second period...maan replied with a avoiding tone






Oh, great...she caught his hand...we will be the best...!!






Maan jerked his hand out of her hold and said maintaining some distace...sure, see you then...!!






With that said he moved to his seat where adi and sam were busy discussing their assignment...






Adi looked at maan who was really irritated by alisha and asked...






What happened...??...you look a bit disturb...!!






Maan pressed his temple with his fingers replying...






Dude, this alisha is getting on my neck...his face expressed a very displeasant look at her name






Well, you should have thought about it before consenting to her for the competition...adi replied






Sam who was sitting beside adi listening to them and suddenly jumped into the conversation...





Yeah, and if you had been a bit sensible, you could have had my sister as a partner instead of that intolerable creature...she twisted her lips showing her utter disapproval on maan's decision






Maan rolled his eyes at sam's never ending sidings with her geet and replied back...






On second thoughts, I am glad I didn't chose her...he made a face...who knows when she would step on her partner's feet impeding the poor guy from participating in any more events in future...he smirked






Sam smirked back at maan spatting back...






Oh really, then I guess that will be decided very soon as geet is also participating in the competition and you...she pointed her finger at him...and that alisha would have to compete with her to get through the final selection...!!






Maan was utterly surprised at sam's relevation as he never expected geet to pair with anyone else. A tinge of jealousy pinched his heart while rage seeped through his blood at the mere thought of someone else touching geet. Composing his demeanor maan asked again hiding his real emotions behind his straight face...





Uh, who is the guy she is pairing with...??...sam was amused at his question as she knew she hit the right cord






Why do you want to know...??...she raised her brows teasingly while maan groaned inwardly at her teasings






I was just asking, don't assume anything...!!






Maan replied and turned back to his book at the desk while adi was enjoying his plight alongwith sam






Relax maan, you will get to know that in the audition...adi smiled while maan gave one look to both adi and sam before getting back to his book






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Look rohan, I know you are a good dancer and that is the most important reason that I chose you , but what we need right now is good co-ordination and sizzling chemistry ...geet explained rohan who was doing his own steps without even touching geet's hand






She brought his hands close to her resting them on her waist and kept her hands on his shoulders. Rohan gulped at her act and looked around not wanting to be caught by pari even though she hardly give him any looks. Just then maan entered the practice hall where students were giving last touch to their practice, and thats when he saw geet standing very close to rohan with her arms around his neck...!!






His palm curled into a fist when his gaze fell on rohan's hands that were daringly resting on geet's waist. He felt liking ripping rohan apart from the middle as the heated blood ran through his veins...!!






What the hell is geet doing...??...and how dare rohan...??...he thought fixing his fierce gaze on the two.






Geet began dancing with rohan on the music in a beautiful way enjoying the music totally oblivious of the deadly effect it was having on maan. The beast within him was burning in unmeasurable fire and was ready to set ablaze anyone on his way...!!






Maan...alisha called him from behind...you should have informed me that you are coming here, we could have come together...she whinned, but nothing reached maan's ears as his whole attention was fixed on geet






Alisha looked in the direction in which maan's gaze was fixed and burned with jealousy seeing geet grabbing his attention. She thought of something evil and smirked...






Oh my god, just look at geet and rohan. So cheap, they can atleast show some decency in their dance, but I guess they are doing anything but dance...she made a disgusting face and looked at maan to see his reaction.






Vicky was looking around for maan in order to execute his plan and then he saw maan standing at the corner continuous staring at geet and rohan. If eyes could kill, rohan would have been dead by now. Vicky smirked seeing his plan already in action and thought of adding some pepper as catalyst and with that purpose he moved towards maan...






Hey bhai, you here...??...his voice distracted maan and he instantly averted his gaze making vicky chuckl






Oh yes, I heard you are also participating...vicky said reading maan's face very carefully...but I guess you have a strong competition, geet and rohan are just mind blowing. They are the best couple...!!






Maan shot a glare at vicky which made him gulp and restate his statement...






I mean best dancing couple...!!






How come you are supporting geet and rohan vicky...??...maan looked skeptically at vicky...I thought you hate rohan...!!






Vicky was startled by maan's sudden question...






Damn...!!...why the hell bhai has to be so sharp...??...ab kya karun??...vicky thought cursing his overexcited nature






Uh, bhai...woh...yeah, actually I misunderstood rohan...vicky said faking confidence...he is...he is really a nice guy...!!






Maan was about to question him again, but alisha interfered them indirectly and thankfully saving vicky...






Hey, however good they may be, maan and I are going to overshadow everyone...she boasted while raising her already stretched neck






We will see that...vicky said and moved back to his initial place not wanting to get into another interview session with maan






Soon roshini mam arrived and ascended the stage...






Attention everyone...she beckoned the students and everyone stopped their practice and turned their attention towards the stage except maan whose eyes were not ready to leave geet for even a second. Geet too turned her gaze to the stage and caught the sight of maan standing on the other side staring at her with an intense fire in her eyes...!!






She felt a dangerous rage in maan's eyes which was setting her whole body on fire. She saw a different emotion in his eyes from what she always witness.







Is it really what I am thinking...??...she thought with a glint of hope in her eyes...is he jealous...??...she instantly looked at rohan who was standing very close to her and then at maan and she knew...






Oh my god, maan is jealous...her heart jumped in joy with realization...she smiled mischieviously and grabbed rohan's hand to confirm her doubts and there, the anger in maan's eyes increased ten folds.







Before she could go ahead with more of her experiments roshini mam's voice broke her thoughts...







Students please pay attention here...roshini mam said holding the mike...now we are satrting the audition, so all the participants come on the stage...!!







The students slowly ascended the stage. There were five pairs of boys and girls. Geet looked at maan and pulled rohan with her on the stage while maan seethed endlessly within...!!






Alisha was trying hard to grab maan's attention, but was poorly disappointed. She finally tapped maan's shoulder as they had to move on the stage and maan was not moving at all...






Maan, its time...we have to go on the stage...she said bringing him back






Maan gave her an angry glare shutting her up and moved to the stage while alisha sighed and followed...!!




Once everyone was on the stage the lights were dimmed and music was put on. Geet watched maan with alisha and twisted her lips bringing rohan close to her. Maan's rage escalated with geet's act of intimacy with rohan and in that wildness he grabbed alisha much more closer making geet equally jealous...!!







click the link for the song...





Ishq toh mast hai

ishq toh mast hai...






Everyone took their place on the stage ready to burn it with their ultimate passion and talent while maan and geet with their jealousy. They passed a glance at each other and then shifted their gaze back to their respective partner and started moving with the beats...!!






Dum dum dum mast hai

kaisi yeh jast hai

Dum dum dum mast hai

kaisi yeh jast hai

teri dhun mein dil hai banjaara





Maan turned alisha making her back slam against his chest and fixed his gaze on geet and rohan who were dancing very cozily on the tune...!!





Dum dum dum mast hai

kaisi yeh jast hai

Dum dum dum mast hai
kaisi yeh jast hai

teri dhun mein dil hai banjaara




Rohan swiftly brought geet closer to himself to match up with the beats which made maan's blood boil and he twirled alisha in such a force that gave her a shock which didn't go unnoticed by geet and vicky...!!




muteyaara pe vaara, ghar jaidaad sab yaara

muteyaara pe vaara, ghar jaidaad sab yaara





Geet too increased her pace getting the hint of maan's escalating envy. She knew maan was feeling something, but denying for some reasons...!!




par maane na maane mann mann ki

par maane na maane mann mann ki

khamakha dewaaana hai yeh





The stage made a thumping sound with the movements of the dancers bringing a life to it...



Everybody was enjoying the beats and the chemistry with which the couples were grooving, getting lost in the whirlpool of music and ecstacy...!!






Dum dum dum mast hai

kaisi yeh jast hai

Dum dum dum mast hai
kaisi yeh jast hai

Kahe chanda mere yaara

main tanha ek taara



Dum dum dum mast hai
kaisi yeh jast hai

Dum dum dum...






Vicky was watching every moment of his brother to see whether his plan of invoking some feelings in maan's heart for geet was working or not, but what he saw amazed as well as shocked him to the core. He knew his brother cared for geet though they were always at logger heads, but maan's very much evident jealousy was indicating to a totally different emotion flashing in his eyes. Vicky was perplexed to see the conflicting emotions in maan's eyes which was very unexpected. Here he was trying to intiate a feeling which was already there somewhere in him...!!



Maan was controlling himself with every ounce of self control and diverting his anger n his dance which was becoming a pain for alisha and pleasure for geet.






ishq hai...


ishq talatum...ishq bawandar

ishq di galiyon mein gehra samandar






Geet felt so elated finally getting some attention from maan. She was dying to see the same craving in his eyes for her which she has for him and his turmoil was quite visible.






ho...ishq talatum...ishq bawandar

ishq di galiyon mein gehra samandar





Maan pulled alisha with great force towards himself dashing her into him, but it was not giving any enjoyment to alisha. Poor chudail had to bear the atrocities of love when she wasn't even acknowledged...!!





aawaara nakaara tar doob doob bechaara

aawaara nakaara tar doob doob bechaara

khamakha dewaana hai yeh...



Dum dum dum mast hai

kaisi yeh jast hai

Dum dum dum mast hai
kaisi yeh jast hai

Dum dum dum...





Now everyone formed a circle moving at their respective position with their respective partners and danced with perfect lines avoiding any flaws. Maan was right infront of geet and was continuosly lingering his gaze on her while she saw yet pretended to be oblivious of his stare...!!




jhuk jaayiye pyaar pay jhuk jaayiye

haar kar jhuk jaayiye...pyaar kar

jhuk jaayiye pyaar pay jhuk jaayiye

haar kar jhuk jaayiye...pyaar kar





As geet moved her hand softly and sensually over rohan's shoulders maan averted his gaze and curled his pals into a fist almost piercing his nails in alisha's skin who winced in pain, but maan didn't even noticed...!!


He himself was burning in his own rage. But this was his own decision, though now when finally she was ignoring him it was piercing his heart. He knew this pain had to come to him sooner or later, but didn't knew it would be so unbearable





ishq mein kar ke...rab se yaari

dil hai bhoola wahi duniya-daari





Geet saw maan's tensed and painfull expression and felt like her soul was ripping apart. She just wanted to tease him a bit to gain his attention, but this game was getting difficult. She was not able to see maan suffering like this, whatever the reason may be...!!





ishq mein kar ke...rab se yaari

dil hai bhoola wahi duniya-daari





The groups started twirling their partners away from them, passing to another. As geet's hands touched maan's, he pulled her to himself by force trapping her in his stout chest like stage like she was his life which was going away from him...!!





jannat se bhi pyaara...yaaran da chauk chaubara

jannat se bhi pyaara...yaaran da chauk chaubara




Geet too sneaked her arms around his waist tightly fearing to loose him the moment she set him free. Maan felt so pleased to finally have her in his arms so close to him which instilled a new spark and energy in him and he started dancing with a new freshness. Geet also matched beats with him.





par maane na maane mann mann ki

par maane na maane mann mann ki

khamakha dewaaana hai yeh





They swayed with music like never before feeling their heart beats and pulse. They danced with full vigor and chemistry burning the stage and making the audience dazed with their dance perfomance. Vicky couldn't be more happy seeing his two favourite people happy together while alisha burned with jealousy...!!





Dum dum dum mast hai

kaisi yeh jast hai

Dum dum dum mast hai
kaisi yeh jast hai






Maan spread his long muscular arms wide while geet waved her body from bottom to top giving solace to his solitude...!!





kahe chanda mere yaara

main tanha ek taara






They danced with extreme power and expression which were actually true, oblivious of theie surrounding, oblivious f the audience, oblivious of the fact that they were dancing with wrong partners as everything fel so correct and in place when they are together like they are meant to be...!!





Dum dum dum mast hai
kaisi yeh jast hai

Dum dum dum dum...dum dum dum dum

dum dum dum mast hai...





As the music stopped the dazzled audience cheered the performers specially maan and geet irrespective of their blunder to dance with wrong partners. Miss roshini came on the stage with an extremely pleased expression...






Wow, you all were really good and specially you two...she turned towards maan and geet who were still standing looking into each other's eyes oblivious of the fact that the song has ended.






You both make an awesome pair and thats why I have finalized you two as the main leads...she announced making everyone shock as well as bringing the love birds out of their dream land who instantly separated and stood at a distance from each other. Hearing miss roshini both were dazed, but in different ways. While maan was shocked geet was very happy.






Maan cursed himself for loosing focus and tried to interrupt...






But mam, we are not here as a pair...!!






That doesn't matter maan, I want the best for my dance group and you both are the best...she replied ignoring all his resistances






Geet was on cloud nine hearing her judgement, but she kept her excitement under check and simply smirked at vicky who gave a thumbs up inreturn. Alisha was very unhappy with the result and left from there giving a murderous glare to geet.






Maan ran a frustrated hand through his hair and thought...






Damn, I should have controlled myself. In order to push her away I agreed to alisha and now the situation has become even worse than before...he looked at geet who was being congratulated by her friends...this is going to be really difficult now. How am I going to control myself when she'll be so close to me...!!






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uff...finally updated
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anupam

Edited by shining_moon - 14 years ago
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awww 😳 😳

Note: I am the first one to reply...i reserved the post... 🥳 now edited it... i am the first...yaye 🥳

I really really loved the update Anu 🤗 It was worth the wait... 😃 I hope yu are feeling good now... 😳 You care about us so much that even amidst feeling unwell you did manage to put in a update... 😃 thanks dearie... 🤗

now...did i say before that i love vicky?? 😆 well...i do..his character is just the best...i have read many FF's but this vicky the one in yur FF is simply the best... 😃

wat all i liked...<top one's..> actually i liked everything...but these hav to be mentioned... 😆

Rohan 🤣 he had to be Geet's dance partner 😆 😆 I was laughing seeing the way Geet and specially Vicky was threatening him 😆 vicky said he will help him with pari.. 😆 wow...vicky ko maan na padega...aakir bhai kiska hai... 😉 aur neighbout kiski? friend kiski? 😆

and then Maan's shock on knowing Geet is tere in competition...and Sam and Adi teasing...🤣 Sam knows Maan loves Geet..tat's wat i love so much here... 😆 i loved it wen she said yu cud hav chosen my sis instead of that irritating girl 😆 you are aweome sam... 😃

Then maan feeling jealous...Vikcy was right Rohan should have been dead by Maan's looks... 😆 😆 and then to the stage...

awww! 😳 poor chudail...haha 🤣 Maan can't control jealousy... 😆 yu bought this all on yurself boy..now suffer..suffer.. 😆 Geet felt bad seeing Maan suffer...girl he loves yu..everything's fair in love..yu r just making him realize and admit the fact that his lfie is you 😛 😉

and Vicky haha...now he sees the love in Maan's eyes... 😆 😆 heyy boy yu don't need to make Maan like Geet...he is already in love with her... 😆 😆

then twisting of partners... ☺️ Maan and Geet...lost in each other... 😳 I was having goosebumbs reading them dancing... cudn't help... 😆 😆 it was lovely...so now we know the lead pair... 😳 😳

and now Maan...hahahahahahhaaa 🤣 I love this... ☺️ he was trying to go away from her now he has to be with her... 😆 😆

waitng eagerly for next update... 😃

take yur medicines on time and take care of yur health anu... 😳
Edited by *Dakoo_Minzy* - 14 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread!!
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sorry for the late comment anu... 😳
coming to the update...!!!
it was an outstanding update... 👏
poor rohan...he was hell scared to sit next to vicky also...cz he was beaten up badly...!!!
vicky was shocked out of his wits to c this side of his elder brother...but happy too for both of his important people in his life...i.e:maan n geet...!!!
oww loved seeing the jealous maan...he was burning in jealousy n anger was running thru his veins...!!!
it proves that he loves her madly...that he cant bare sum oda random guy to touch her also...!! it makes him mad wen sum1 touches her...just loved the caring n jealous maan...😳
geet cudn't c maan so hurt...after seeing the anger n fuy in his eyes...she can't bare to hurt him...owww chooo chweeet...😳
loved wen maan n geet were dancing together...maan sighed in relief wen geet was in his arms...next to him...close to her...they danced really well which made them a pair for the final dance...!!!! still maan was blaming himself for not controlling his feelings infront of geet...!!!
alisha got a bounce of not gaining attention from maan...😡...chudail kahiki...😡...but she got a good feedback...😆

well m being a chatterbox now...for talking sooo much😆
wot else can i say...
it was just awesome n beautiful...
lovely lovely lovely...
😛
😉

Forgot to congratulate u...😲
Congratulations on the new thread anu...🤗
Edited by bansipatel - 14 years ago
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plzz wait I m colouring
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ab kya haal hai tumhara anu ???????????


itni garmi main tumhe cold ho gaya tha !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hey, I have read your fanfic.Its simply amazing too good to be expressed in words.You are a superb writer...

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One Girl. A Hundred Journeys.|Mrina's Index

Hello people, This is me, Mrinalini , aka Mrina or Mina . And here is the Index of my stories. Now it would be easier for you all to find my...

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