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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowww awesomeee
luved d passion of maaneet
it set d dance on fire
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
Congrats for new thread
Awesome part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats !!!!!!!! 4 d new thread ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maan's jealousy was so well written.
Thanx for a fun read.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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First of all...Thanx a lot for updating..despite being unwell 😊

This update was worth waiting for so many days... Really loved it...

OMG!!!! I had never thought dat Vicky cud be so sweet;) Just loved the way he was talking to Rohan!!!!! Awww poor Rohan... He was hell scared N his expressions were really worth watcing wen Vicky placed his hand on his shoulder:D:D:D Today I really got impressed by Vicky... So sweet of him to help Geet... Aakhir bhai kiska hai!!!!!!

Today I felt my mobile could burn any moment by the anger n fury in Maan's eyes... I cud really feel the heat in his blood which was boiling seeing Geet with Rohan... I thought he might just end up doing something dangerous... But thank God.. Geet came to him in the last few minutes which eventually eased him...

Ufff!!! That Alisha is so chipku... Just hate her:@:@:@ But I guess she learnt a good lesson today... She deserved all that Maan did to her unknowingly... Acha hua saara gussa uss par nikaal diya;>

The dance sequence was just mind blowing just as the other ones:*

I wonder now wat will Maan do..as he is supposed to dance with Geet!!!! Hehee

Awww poor Geet... Atlast she realised that kuch zyada hi ho gaya as Maan was not only jealous but also hurt by Geet's behaviour... N I think its good dat Geet realised it!!!!

I think its the longest comment I've ever given... Ufff Im tired!!!!:p

anyways update was awesome... N thanx for the pm...

Do cont sooon...
Take care...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Maan's jealousy was so well written.
Thanx for a fun read.


thanks arzoo
its been so long I have tlked to u
how r u...??...n how is jiju...??...hope he is giving u some more attention😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
Loveee the part!
Yipeee!!!!! Maneet will be dance partners!
I'm feeling pleasure while reading abt alisha's jealousy!!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Dakoo_Minzy*

awww 😳 😳

Note: I am the first one to reply...i reserved the post... 🥳 now edited it... i am the first...yaye 🥳

I really really loved the update Anu 🤗 It was worth the wait... 😃 I hope yu are feeling good now... 😳 You care about us so much that even amidst feeling unwell you did manage to put in a update... 😃 thanks dearie... 🤗

now...did i say before that i love vicky?? 😆 well...i do..his character is just the best...i have read many FF's but this vicky the one in yur FF is simply the best... 😃

wat all i liked...<top one's..> actually i liked everything...but these hav to be mentioned... 😆

Rohan 🤣 he had to be Geet's dance partner 😆 😆 I was laughing seeing the way Geet and specially Vicky was threatening him 😆 vicky said he will help him with pari.. 😆 wow...vicky ko maan na padega...aakir bhai kiska hai... 😉 aur neighbout kiski? friend kiski? 😆

and then Maan's shock on knowing Geet is tere in competition...and Sam and Adi teasing...🤣 Sam knows Maan loves Geet..tat's wat i love so much here... 😆 i loved it wen she said yu cud hav chosen my sis instead of that irritating girl 😆 you are aweome sam... 😃

Then maan feeling jealous...Vikcy was right Rohan should have been dead by Maan's looks... 😆 😆 and then to the stage...

awww! 😳 poor chudail...haha 🤣 Maan can't control jealousy... 😆 yu bought this all on yurself boy..now suffer..suffer.. 😆 Geet felt bad seeing Maan suffer...girl he loves yu..everything's fair in love..yu r just making him realize and admit the fact that his lfie is you 😛 😉

and Vicky haha...now he sees the love in Maan's eyes... 😆 😆 heyy boy yu don't need to make Maan like Geet...he is already in love with her... 😆 😆

then twisting of partners... ☺️ Maan and Geet...lost in each other... 😳 I was having goosebumbs reading them dancing... cudn't help... 😆 😆 it was lovely...so now we know the lead pair... 😳 😳

and now Maan...hahahahahahhaaa 🤣 I love this... ☺️ he was trying to go away from her now he has to be with her... 😆 😆

waitng eagerly for next update... 😃

take yur medicines on time and take care of yur health anu... 😳


hey dear can u plzz tell me ur name or should I call u DAKOO😆

nyways just loved ur comment🤗

u gave a beautiful description of this part

I m glad u all liked it, but I am not that much satisfied as I had plan to incorporate some other things in the dance sequence which I couldn't due to my untimely sickness😡

vicky is my fav character too😳😳...I m glad u liked my potrayal of vicky😛

rohan didn' t had much option n the prize of his help was quite precious for him😉

sam and adi wants their frnd to be happy as they knw his happiness lies with geet only😳

I am planning some beautiful stuffs for mannet so lets see whats in store for them in future😛

n thanks for the reminder...but I hate medicines🤢
love u

anuapm

Edited by shining_moon - 14 years ago

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