FanFic: Koi Mere Dil Se Pooche(Updated(24

This is my first time writing it. I hope everyone likes it!
FanFic OneTwo days after their marriage

Kunal was sleeping on the bed and Nimmo was sleeping on the ground (cause she must have fallen of the sofa.) Nimmo woke up went to the bathroom token a shower. Wore blue and pink sari. Than came out and sat front of the mirror and put on her match choodiyan, her mangalsutra. Just about to put on the Sindoor Kunal woke up and staring at Nimmo.N: Kunal why are you staring at me?K: Nimmo you look so different?

N: What do you mean? Kunal!
K: Nimmo I mean to say that you look more beautiful than the first time we met.
N: Oh!
Just than Nimmo was about to leave. Oscar comes barking in to Kunal's room.
Nimmo started to run all over the place even on the bed and Kunal was trying to stop them but, couldn't. On another hand Nimmo was screaming (HELP KUNAL) and than she went running into the closet. Oscar went running downstairs cause dadji was calling Oscar. When Kunal turned around and saw Nimmo hiding in the closet behind Kunal's clothes.
K: couldn't stop laughing at Nimmo.
N: Just yelled out shut up Kunal!
K: was trying to stop laughing at her.
After Nimmo came out of the closet their was a knock on the door. Kunal went and opened the door it was K.K. K.K came inside with chai and put it on the table and said good morning Sir and Mama.
K: Good morning K.K
N: K.K it's not a good morning, instead it's a bad morning.
KK: Kya! Anyway Kunal Sir DadiMa has called you?
K: K.K tell DadiMa I'll be there soon after I fresh up.
KK: Yes Sir!
Kunal was thinking in his head (why did DadiMa call me).

Preview: Kunal went to see DadiMa. He was in there for along time with DadiMa.All of suddenly they heard a big noise from Kunal's room.

Please tell me if every one like it!
From Kashish
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gr8 👏 ..its nice 2 see such good stories 😳
do continue 😊

Thank you i'll post more tomorrow after school.

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can't wait for more!

Kajal

pls continue the fanfic 😊
its awesome 👏

Naina

it was really gud 👏 👏 .plz continue 😊

gr8 wrk, plz continue 👏

jst one request plz dont use that bright blue colour, it hurts my eyes 😭 hope u dnt mind

Here his 2nd episode:

Recap: Nimmo was running away from Oscar. Than KK comes and tell Kunal that Dadi
Ma has called you.

After Kunal freshens up he went to see Dadi Ma.
K: Dadi did you call me?
DM: Yes Beta
K: Kyon
DM: Beta aja tumhair shaadi ke do din hoga.
K: Dadi I didn't understand what you are trying to say?
DM: Beta aja you and Nimmo have to go to mandir.
K: Aja!
DM: Kyon! Koi problem hai
K: Nahin, but if you say then we will go.
Just than they heard big noise from Kunal's room. Kunal went running into his room and everyone followed him. They found Nimmo standing on the coffee table.
They all asked her to come down but she refused to come down. Every one asked why?
N: First make that mouse go away.
K: Like what mouse?
N: On your bed!
K: Ok, then he told every one to go he will handle this matter.
So every one left even Kanta Bahen. After Kunal made then mouse go away.
Then he asked Nimmo to come, but she still refused to come down.
K: Please Nimmo the mouse his gone.
N: I don't trust you.
K: this time you will have too.
N: then Nimmo came down from the coffee table.
All of suddenly she see the mouse on the sofa.
Nimmo turns around and hits Kunal and they both fell down on the floor. Nimmo just stared at Kunal for a long time.
Just than KK and KB comes in Kunal's room.

Preview: Kunal say to Nimmo we have to go to the Mandir. At the Mandir Kunal see his X-girlfriend's brother there?

sach really bad morning.
good fan fic plz continue

cute fanfic...plz do continue soon