MG OS: Kamasutra Mehndi Design - LAST PART p26!

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#211

She wished that her friends would not tease Maan for money if he wanted to see his bride. Instead, she hoped that her friends would shove a wad of notes into his hands and make him leave his bride alone.🤣🤣🤣

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#212

awesome part!!! i'm gonna miss having this "hot" fan fic to look forwad to haha! please write another one soon!! :))

Congrats on such a successful fan fic!

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Tia

@tes_v1

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#213

"To mat pakriye na, varna dekhne ke baad, pata nahi kya kya pakar ne ka dil karega" OMG!!!

That seriously had me ROFL!!!

"I'm sure we can think of a more enjoyable way of fixing a lasting colour onto those lips Geet." Oui… Never had thought of Maan as such a naughty person…lol! That was a fab dialogue!

"I only came to return this to you." Maan finished with a questionable innocence lacing his words. Awww, he's so innocent!! Is he?!!

"Open your eyes Geet". He commanded in a deadly whisper. Ever in command, eh?!

When he outstretched her palms however Maan was unsure how to react to the open invitation.

The tables had turned. ROFL!!! Maan deserved that!!

*Dilwalon ke dil ka karaar lootne... me aayi hoon IF se pyar lootne * After this rocking FF, ye toh banta hi hai!!!

They were unsure whether they should silently clear away or apologise for stupidly thinking that they could bully Maan Singh Khurana into paying them. So damn true!!!

Any second her door would creak open, and her predator would have his prey. Oui… that's what Maan Singh Khurana has lately become, a predator!!😲 😆

Geet was the only woman who had unknowingly gained a hold on Maan Singh Khurana. Incredibly true!

He was drunk with the intoxication named Geet. Ahem, ahem…

This was seriously one awesome FF and woman, don't you dare ever say you can't write! The number of LIKES at the end of each of your posts just left me stunned! (PM coming your way soon, for more…)

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#214

awesome part...actually hot part...

u described it very well...

u and nadia both did a great job...

loved it...

thanks for pm..

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Hetal

@ibelieveinpink

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#215

Part 1: OMG!!! SO hot...I loved it!!! What a start!

Part 2: Nadia did a fantastic job! Reading her Beast aka MSK one right now...this girl gots talent! Holy crap 34 sexual positions...ROFL!!!🤣

Loved it...so awesome...girlfriends ho toh aisi! Dupatta pulling...EPIC!

Part 3: Her back made him powerless...wonder what will happen when he sees her palm!😆 Hopefully he has full power where it matters on SR!😉 This was my fav line: Mujhe koi faraq nahi padta!!!! Honestly all that kissing was hot!!! Will Get succeed? SR before wedding? Hopes are high!!!!😆😆

Part 4: All this teasing is making me hot all over!!!😆 A big bravo and tip of my hat!!!👏👏 OMG...innocent little Maan and the dupatta scene...He's the best! He knows his position...YAY! He wants to test them...then test away!!!!

Part 5: The ending...it has to end?!~ NOOO!!!!!😭😭😭

Please continue, na...so hot and steamy...I think I went to my place after reading it!😉 The manhood is aching...YES! He's in the right direction! He choose...can you tell which one?!😉 Oh man...perfect ending!!

I WANT MORE!!! I DEMAND IT!!!! But OMG...I wish you write more and more!!! So awesome!!

We both love Gurti and highly sexual writing...are you my twin?!😆

BTW: Your name is Saz so where did you get chotii from?! Cute name, but still wanna know!!!

I LOVED IT!!! And you ROCK!

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#216

hey i jus read ur ff n i totally loved it

itz awsome

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#217

.....dear...😛

...4 PM me...😃..

dear...in all updates...👏👏👏..khafi beshram ho gayi hai tu...

ur updates r n

......😳

4 ur ..👍🏼..

all ur updates...

... really

...just

... n

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... sorry 4 being late n short comment..but dear it's my exam plz forgive me......

tons of ...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

again i said that...

..😃.

update soon dear...

lov,❤️

Tama

P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only mae it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself my componets donn't coppied it...😡

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#218

awesome ... superb ...

loved it ...

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..Naina..

@..Naina..

Alumni

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#219

SAZZZ!

hi :)

I fell in love with this. Holydamn girl, it's hot in here 😆 horrible attempt at a joke, don't throw chappals at me! 🤣

But seriously though, that wsa damn good, and I absolutely positively agree with everyone else who said you should start a sizzling new FF soon :) How about it? 😉

It was awesome awesome AWESOME though! Totally loved reading all the parts! :)

Cheers!
-Naina