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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 14 years ago

Naina calls off the mrg. Abhi will be silent. All at home will be doubtful. Naina and mom plan to go back to Darjeeling. Daksh, Ayi and Baba will be in confusion. Daksh strongly believes that Naina never try to hide the truth and do the mrg as he knows Naina does not love Abhi. All will be in a discussion that they never thought Naina will try to do such a wrong thing. Rohini will be in front of all in tellling so. Hearing the talks Abhi will feel guilty and say there is no fault in Naina's side as she already told the same to him and Ayi.. the person who hid the matter is himself. Moushi will understand her fault. Daksh will scold Abhi in being silient at that time when Naina and her mom were getting insulted in front of all. All family (esp Daksh) feel bad in naina's absence. Daksh plan to go and search for them. All will understand the fault is not in Naina's side and they feel bad. At last Daksh finds Naina. naina will show her gratitude in standing for her in all situation. Naina will be in regret and ask whether he is angry in not telling the things to him before. Daksh tells he is not at all angry but regret in not doing anything when they were insulted. And he tells that he feels more respect about her that she smiles and tries to make other happy always evethough she is vulnerable in her heart. They both talk openly then. Naina tells him about their first meeting and further things. Thus they understand each other more... the relationship grows stronger

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Masooma Bukhari

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Posted: 14 years ago

hhmmm good one...!!!

but i really think abhi will not speak up... i guess he's thinking that naina to haath se gayi ab aayi k samney hi acha ban jata hoon.. hence abhi won't speak i guess...

but further what u said... i think the same

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movie_sb

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: ntsindia
Naina calls off the mrg. Abhi will be silent. All at home will be doubtful. Naina and mom plan to go back to Darjeeling. Daksh, Ayi and Baba will be in confusion. Daksh strongly believes that Naina never try to hide the truth and do the mrg as he knows Naina does not love Abhi. All will be in a discussion that they never thought Naina will try to do such a wrong thing. Rohini will be in front of all in tellling so. Hearing the talks Abhi will feel guilty and say there is no fault in Naina's side as she already told the same to him and Ayi.. the person who hid the matter is himself. Moushi will understand her fault. Daksh will scold Abhi in being silient at that time when Naina and her mom were getting insulted in front of all. All family (esp Daksh) feel bad in naina's absence. Daksh plan to go and search for them. All will understand the fault is not in Naina's side and they feel bad. At last Daksh finds Naina. naina will show her gratitude in standing for her in all situation. Naina will be in regret and ask whether he is angry in not telling the things to him before. Daksh tells he is not at all angry but regret in not doing anything when they were insulted. And he tells that he feels more respect about her that she smiles and tries to make other happy always evethough she is vulnerable in her heart. They both talk openly then. Naina tells him about their first meeting and further things. Thus they understand each other more... the relationship grows stronger

ntsindia u know what the main thing which will happen now as i feel wud be that the bigrail sonakshi will get back home and let her parents learn about the happenings in naina's marriage...now this is where i guess supriya overwhelmed with emotions may not be able to hide her feelings and anguish for naina and may get back to the patwardhan house to be at naina's end...ab emotions jab flow ho raha hain har taraf kahin aisa huya ki supriya blabbers all her past and the forgiveness session follows to naina...mujhe maaf kar do beta...'n all...dhan-ta-rang...(music hain doston...climax emotions waala...😆) bas rahi-sahin kahani mein aur twist...and as we have seen before the spoilt brat sonakshi has made it clear she wud'nt like sharing her mother with anyone...it will be another maa-beti scuffle...(i mean supriya and sonakshi)...kuch din isi mein storyline ghumegi friends...kyun sahi na...and then in between ntsindia i feel daskh and naina may come closer...sonakshi jal-bhun jayegi...may have a round of brawl with daksh...and yaha gusse mein aakar daksh confesses his real feelings of having the least interest in marrying her...and then what...sonakshi's father avenging his beti ka beijjati...some twists and twirls...(waise i was thinking agar daksh ki sonakshi se shadi huyi to daksh thahra divorce lawyer...do din mein divorce bhi ho jayegi kaun bardasht karega us sonakshi ko...hahahahaha) friends overall total confusion and jumbled state philhal mahaul ka...waise we know dakshna will be united...magar sabke beech mein did u all see KAKA i mean sridhar patwardhan kya maje lekar was seeing the melodrama...abhi Akruti episode bhi khulegi...he'll once again not spare Naina...Daksh once again at Naina's end...so bahut kuch hona hain in the coming weeks...sequence ko arrange karke NTSINDIA likh daalo ek new story...we all waiting buddy...👏

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Masooma Bukhari
hhmmm good one...!!!

but i really think abhi will not speak up... i guess he's thinking that naina to haath se gayi ab aayi k samney hi acha ban jata hoon.. hence abhi won't speak i guess...

but further what u said... i think the same

Yah... but I want to see Moushi's pale face after knowing the truth. Today, Ayi talked very strongly to her sister rite? Moushi made Ayi,Baba and Daksh etc.. to satnd on a needle point rite? Rohini is also in her succeeded point. I want in this case, Ayi, baba and Daksh should not down thier head. And by knowing the truth the Moushi should know the real "Sanskar" she taught to her son. For that I want Abhi to speak up or show the letter.

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: movie_sb
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ntsindia u know what the main thing which will happen now as i feel wud be that the bigrail sonakshi will get back home and let her parents learn about the happenings in naina's marriage...now this is where i guess supriya overwhelmed with emotions may not be able to hide her feelings and anguish for naina and may get back to the patwardhan house to be at naina's end...ab emotions jab flow ho raha hain har taraf kahin aisa huya ki supriya blabbers all her past and the forgiveness session follows to naina...mujhe maaf kar do beta...'n all...dhan-ta-rang...(music hain doston...climax emotions waala...😆) bas rahi-sahin kahani mein aur twist...and as we have seen before the spoilt brat sonakshi has made it clear she wud'nt like sharing her mother with anyone...it will be another maa-beti scuffle...(i mean supriya and sonakshi)...kuch din isi mein storyline ghumegi friends...kyun sahi na...and then in between ntsindia i feel daskh and naina may come closer...sonakshi jal-bhun jayegi...may have a round of brawl with daksh...and yaha gusse mein aakar daksh confesses his real feelings of having the least interest in marrying her...and then what...sonakshi's father avenging his beti ka beijjati...some twists and twirls...(waise i was thinking agar daksh ki sonakshi se shadi huyi to daksh thahra divorce lawyer...do din mein divorce bhi ho jayegi kaun bardasht karega us sonakshi ko...hahahahaha) friends overall total confusion and jumbled state philhal mahaul ka...waise we know dakshna will be united...magar sabke beech mein did u all see KAKA i mean sridhar patwardhan kya maje lekar was seeing the melodrama...abhi Akruti episode bhi khulegi...he'll once again not spare Naina...Daksh once again at Naina's end...so bahut kuch hona hain in the coming weeks...sequence ko arrange karke NTSINDIA likh daalo ek new story...we all waiting buddy...👏

Oh.. you also write stories yaar.. in fact I know, I am not a good writer. Then why I write like this is just for activating our forum. I have a feeling that this show does not have enough attention that it deserves. So I just write so...
Anyways, the stroy u said is already written a week before i remember. From Sonakshi, Supriya will come to know the mrg mess up incident. Meanwhile Aku will feel the heat about knowing the past of Naina and what happened to her now eventhough she is very good. And she will understand that why Naina is this much concerned abt her. She will cry on what happened and Naina and Daksh come to know all the truth. Whike solving, this issue will be revealed to the family and everybody will point towards naina as she the responsible person. Now they have stroger points as she is illegitimate. Daksh will speak up for Naina as she and himself already told her not to meet that guy. And Aku will admit that it is her own mistake and she lied to them. Naina will give strenght to Daksh for handling the issue. Dakshna will behind the issue. Meanwhile Supriya will come to clear her doubt and finds that it is her daughter. But Naina will hesitate to meet her by whom she had to suffer a lot throughout her life and by whom her momma's life spoiled etc. At last Supriya's situation to leave her will be revealed. May be Mr Joshi had a role in it. Throughout the life she also was suffering.. knowing all that Naina consoles and say that she appreciate she is her mother but will not ready to leave her momma. etc. between all these, Dakshna relationship becomes stronger which Sonakshi makes jealouse. She will try to separate them... etc

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Asma Begum Ullah / Shahida (Shay)

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Posted: 14 years ago

ntsindia, i think u r a very gud writer

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: storytellerSSBN
ntsindia, i think u r a very gud writer

Oh.. really!!!! Thanks a lot..!!

I know you are a good writer... why don't you write new stories nowadays? it is very nice to read... pls do write for us...

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Asma Begum Ullah / Shahida (Shay)

@storytellerSSBN

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Posted: 14 years ago

i hav no idea which way the trak is gna go nemor, thats y i don't write ne mor, myt write sum stuff 4 pretending wen they get together. but maybe at one point when the whole truth is out, joshi wil tell daksh to stay away from naina, which he wont, or daksh wil knw supriya left naina b/c of him

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Neethu

@ntsindia

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: storytellerSSBN
i hav no idea which way the trak is gna go nemor, thats y i don't write ne mor, myt write sum stuff 4 pretending wen they get together. but maybe at one point when the whole truth is out, joshi wil tell daksh to stay away from naina, which he wont, or daksh wil knw supriya left naina b/c of him

It is a good one. We are not writing this as what excactly happen in the serial rite? Just writing thats all.

my thought is slight different.. ;) I think and wish Daksh Sona mrg breaks up.. but it is not because of Naina. like Abhii-naina mrg broken up due to any other reason it should break.

Dakshna stand for each other. Sonakshi feels insecure as said in the article. Eventhough Dakshna understand their feelings each other, Daksh will try go ahead with Sonkshi as he promised to marry her. When they feel that they are getting too close with each other which will make problems, Dakshna will try to keep distance by themselves that they never can. In btn Ayi may find out Naina's feeling as Anjali found Daksh's feelings ;) . In btn Mr Joshi wins the case on their property and he asks Daksh and family own the property as Kaka may make any problem in future... and his daughter will be in trouble. Hearing that Daksh will oppose. Mr Joshi will challenge Daksh he will find another good and eligible guy for her daughter which will good for us... ha ha ha..