ff is pyaar ko mein kya naam do chapter 7 pg13

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😆😭😆😭ok lets get dwn 2 buisness yeh dat is me being hysterical crying n laughing ok thnig is dnt knw if anyone reconises me anymre as i have kinda left da forum i used 2 be da one who wud update my ffs quicker den lightnenin den stopped 😆and even still i have cum up wid a new plot in my head n my mind is saying dnt post dis dnt and hear tis saying do it maybe den i can complete my 3rd ff khoye ho tum kahan if i start dis here hoping huh😆
ok if u guys wud like me 2 start like my oder 2 ff's dis story obviously will have no similarity wid da current track of ltl and old will have da old dutta ak mishal n nakku and a few oder characters only but story will be diff so shall i continue i knw many old members have left so might seem like a stranger let me knw and i shall rite a rough outline😛
okkk sooo hmmm
dutta :a daku bandit 😆guys imagine him wid dark colured clothes wid his face hidden 😉
nakusha:a spoilt rich brat who is arrogant proud rude has no manners wat so ever but luvs her father alot 😆
nana saab: nakusha's father who does illegal buisness's loves his daughter alot wud do anything 4 her 😆
baaji rao:dutta's loyal friend also a daku
dev:another daku in dutta's gang
laxshimi kaki:nakusha's nanny who luked afta her since she was born n afta her moms death
tammana: nakusha' best friend
yuvraaj : an inspector
chapter 1 :pg 1
chapter 2:pg 3
chapter 3 :pg 5
chapter 4: pg 5
chapter 5 :pg 7
chapter 6:pg11
chapter7:pg13
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Posted: 14 years ago
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me first
new ff 🥳
wow nakku spoiled daughter of NS 😆
dutta dakku great 👍🏼
... interesting track
waiting sana



Edited by eternity_of_luv - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh sounds really interesting
do continue sana ...
but can u also update the other ones lol ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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chapter 1
a man is shown early in da mrning sat down in his house dressed in a black expensive suit reading a newspaper his face is nt shown a maid is shown cuming near him wid a breakfast tray she places it dwn on da table b4 pouring out tea b4 saying sir aap ki chai da man places da newspaper dwn b4 reaching for da mug he is nana saab a multi millionare who's buisness involves illegal guds as he takes a sip of his tea his expression changes b4 luking at da maid wid a strange luk wid a calm expression he tips da mug and emptys da tea onto da clean marble floor shocking da maid who is shown baffled wen he finishes he turns 2 luk bk at da maid still in da calm manner but his voice furious how lng have u bin here he asks da maid who luks scared out of her wits she stutters 2 weeks sir nana saab luks at her wid a hard expression den tumney meri chai mein kitni sugar dali da maid stutters 2 sir nana saab luks at her still wid a hard expression mein hamesha ek chamach shakar ki leta hoon suba ko his voice nw calm i hate mistakes whether in buisness or small things kal sey kaam par na aana he luks at da maid briefly b4 turning away widout luking at da maid he says jaoo jaa kar laxmshi kaaki ko lekar aao usey kehna meri liyeh chai bejh do da maid wid her face dwn walks away tears rolling dwn her face as da maid leaves laxshami kaki cums an old lady in her 60's comes near nana saab wid tea in her hands she places da cup dwn widout speaking nana saab who is reading the newspaper again picks up da cup n sips it widout speaking still reading da newspaper he realises laxshmi kaki is still stood der silently widout moving his gaze frm da newspaper he speaks mujhe pata hain aap kya kehne wali hoon kaki lekhin aap ko yeh bhi pata hain mujhe galtiyan pasand nahin hain whilst saying dat he goes bk 2 reading his newspaper as laxshmi kaki walks away silently in thought b4 nana saab stops kaki nakusha ney nashta kaa liya laxshmi kaki turns around n says nahin abhi nahin so rahey hain kal raat ko dheer sey ayeh ti na party sey nana saab smiles usey soney do jab jaag jaye nashta bejh dena laxshmi kaki nods but luks concerned b4 walking away
it hits 12pm a bedroom door opens laxshami kaki is shown cuming inside da room 2wards da bed da duvet is wrapped around sumone who's face is nt shown kaki goes 2 da window n pulls da blinds revealing light inside da room da figure on da bed flinches and a voice speaks soney do na abhi toh subah hain da figure rubs her eyes as light hits her face it is nakusha nana saabs only child she is 18 years old rich spoilt arrogant n proud laxshmi kaki cums near da bed n moves da duvet as nakusha pulls a face saying kaki kya kar rahi hoon aap mujhe sona hain kaki in a calm voice says baara bajh gaye hain uth jaoo nakusha gets up alarmed her eyes poppingout of her head she is dressed in a white night dress she is slim wid big blue eyes her hair is messy and is shown wid bags under here eyes she holds her head which is paining arey bara bajh gaye mujhe toh tammana key ghar jaana ta uthaya kyun nahin aap ney nakusha asks wid anger laxshmi kaki says nana saab ney kaha ta tumhey uthana mat tum raat ko dheeyr sey aaye ti na party sey nakusha rolls her eyes b4 holding her head again laxshmi kaki luks at her wid concern mein chai laati hoon tum naa do kar teyar ho jana teek hain laxshmi kaki walks out of da room as nakusha in her hangover n tired state drags herself out of her bed n goes 2 have her shower
nana saab is shown talking 2 sum men in da huge hallway seated on da huge leather sofa's lunch is getting served 2 dem by sum maids as laxshmi kaki is shown wid a breakfast tray in her hands and sum tablets as she is about 2 walk up da stairs nakusha runs dwn dem scaring laxshmi kaki who barely manages 2 grab da tray frm falling 😆nakusha who is shown nw in a better state ofter her shower is dressed in a light blue short dress wid huge heels laxshmi kaki luks at nakusha saying beta tum subah subah kaha baag rahey hoon nashta toh karlo nakusha rolls her eyes n rudely says kaki tumhey kitni bahar kaha hain mein na chai peeti hoon na dhoodh mujhe sirf juice chahiyeh laxshmi kaki says pata hain beta lekhin dhoodh sehat key liyeh acha hota hain nakusha frowns at kaki b4 walknig away meri paas time nahin hain aaj kaki lecture suney ka mujhe dheer ho rahey hain mein bahar jaa rahey hoon pata nahin khab aaongi teek hain mera intazzar mat karna she runs 2 her dad nana saab who is still talking 2 sum men in a meeting she hugs her dad wid a huge smile on here face as everyone luks on nana saab smiles n hugs nakusha bk saying meri beti uth gaye nakusha says haan papa mujhe ab bahar jaana hain nana saab says nashta kar liyeh nakusha laughs nahin papa aap ko toh pata hain mein chai ya dhoodh nahin peeti na jo kaki banati hain kahan bohat oily hain nana saab laughs saying teek hain beta lekhin kuch kaa lena nakusha kisses her dad b4 running away bye papa luv u nana saab smiles at his daughter lovingly tc beta nana saab den turns 2 his buisness meeting n says so where were we b4 a man frm da meeting speaks aap ki beti bohat pyaari hain nana saab ,nana saab smiles saying kyun na hoon akar meri beti hain da man speaks lagta hain aap apni beti sey bohat pyaar kartey hain nana saab luks at da man b4 saying haan bachpan mein iski maa guzar gaye maine isey pala bara kiya bohat pyaar diya yeh sab meri beti ka toh hain meri beti ko koi cheez ki kami nahin hain na mein honey deta hoon usey jo pasand hain acha lagta hain usey mil jata hain agar usey koi cheez pasand nahin hain toh wohcheez phir dekhti nahin hain he luks at da man who luks a bit uncomfy😆b4 nana saab says where were we they continue der meeting
a man is shown near a white horse in da jungle dressed in a black suit*guys same as he wore at da begining of da serial yaad karo nt da blazer n jeans da oder asain suits*😉his face nt revealed yet another man is shown cuming near him dressed similar but in blue his face nt revealed yet untill he turns around it is baaji rao who is a daku he just speaks bhau ab kya karney ka hain woh sala maana nahin kitni baar usey samjhna pareyga lekhin maanta nahin hain bhau lagta hain woh humsey darta nahin hain bohat ameer hain na security our paisa bohat hain uskey paas isliyeh da oder man dressed in black scrunches his hands up b4 turning around it is dutta sri ram patel dutta bhau for short he is a daku bandit also but da leader he luks at baaji wid an expression of hatred b4 speaking his voice seething ameer hain toh kya huwah baaji agar maanta nahin hain toh uski security paisa sab kuch meri agey kuch nahin baaji smiles at dutta saying haan bhau woh toh sahi hain lekhin kya karey dutta turns around thoughtfully uski kamzoori kya hain baaji, baaji luks thoughtfull but confused bhau aap uski kamzoori kyun jaana chahtey hoon dutta turns around wid a smirk on his face kyun baaji har insaan key paas ek kamzoori hoti hain jo usey kamzoor bana deta hain yeh woh ek jazbaat hain jo insaan ko taba kar sakta hain baaji smiles haan bhau bilkul sahi kaha apney lekhin us saaley ki kamzoori kya hain mujhe nahin lagta hain bhau key uski koi kamzoori hain siveyeh uskey buisness's ki dutta luks thoughtful as well as baaji b4 a 3rd voice speak bhau kamzoori hain dutta n baaji turn around 2 face da voice dat has spoken it is one of der gang memebers who again is dressed in a similar dress sense in white it is dev he speaks in a seething voice kamzoori hain us kaminey ki uski beti dutta luks at dev wid a hard 2 read expression uski beti nakusha dutta turns 2 luk at baaji kaha ta na baaji har insan key paas hoti hain ek aise kamzoori jo usey kamzoor bana deti hain baaji smiles as well as dev b4 dutta turns around and covers his face wid a black cloth untill his eyes r only shown ab mein bata ta hoon nana saab ko key mere mana karney key baad na maney ka anjaam kya hota hain
acha guys i am finisheddd how did u like da first chapter comments r most welcum n feedbk hit da like button if u liked da update😛
still updating
Edited by sana786a - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

me first
new ff 🥳
wow nakku spoiled daughter of NS 😆
dutta dakku great 👍🏼
... interesting track
waiting sana



aww bless u yes a new one will be nuthing like ltl n dis ff as usual will have mishal😆
thnk u hope u like da story😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: daya0628

oh sounds really interesting
do continue sana ...
but can u also update the other ones lol ...

thnks daya😛😆der is only khoye ho tum kahan left hopefully dis will motivate me 2 update it😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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mein aa gayi update read karne
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Posted: 14 years ago
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NS ki chai mein chinni ke jagah zaher kyu nahi dala 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
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😲😲😲😲 omg sana writing a new ff????

Yuvika faints, sana comes running and sprinkles water on Yuvi...lol...
so al the talks abt u retiring after kkht went down the drain sana...i knew u cudnt start a new ff... u n shilpi no matter hw much u 2 say u jus cnt stop writing!! hehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wah re kya baat hai phir toh nakku dutta ki zid kar de woh bhi mil gaye ga😆

Edited by eternity_of_luv - 14 years ago

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