MG HISTORICAL FF:MYTH-AWALK INTO THE PAST~epilogue - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
amazing start...

maan is in love with the one who has those deep eyes...

n here geet is thinking of running away frm getting married...

loved it...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
hi!
nice concept...grt updt chellam!:D
Chandragupta Khurana!!!!**lolz**
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maan
loved da bong between geet nd her dad
cant wait 4 more
con soon
precap looks interesting
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Thank you all for your comments.😊

Hope you all support me throughout this journey...

PART 2

He was still lukin at the same direction when two college girls called him.
Girl 1: Thank u so much sir.
Girl 2 : These guys were torturing us since last few months.It was unbearable.
MSK: No need to thank.I just did my duty.(to Adi) Adi inhe le jao and make u sure that they learn to respect ladies when they leave the jail.
Adi: Yes Sir!
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Geet went back to her home at Rajouri after 11pm.As she was walking to her home,she saw Rano standing at the gate with a worried luk.Geet went upto her with a cute smile to manaofy her😃.



Geet:mom...
Rano:chup kar Geet.Bohat ho gaya bachpana.Sab humari galti he.Humne hi tumhe bigada he.Ye koi waqt he ghar ane ka?😡
Geet:to kya me chali jau?
Rano:ab bas kar aur chup chap andar ao.
Geet: thats my swee..t mom! Acha sweet se yaad aya apne meri supposd to be saas ke liye kuch to banaya hoga.Sab kuch kha liya ya kuch baki he?Kaise baki nhe hoga unka ladka to aya hi nhe! Oh sorry,she will be my dadi saas rite?
Geet was startled by a voice😲, 'absolutely dadi saas'. She saw an elegant lady dressed in an off-white saree.


Dadi:hum Savitri Devi he.Waise ap hume dadi hi kahiye saas ko bhul jayiye.😊
Geet grinned.😃
Rano(whispered to Geet):say sorry!
Geet: Dadima my mom & dad would hav told u that i will be a perfect bahu.But i'm not that stuff.I hav lots of flaws,jaise gussa,zid,ego...sab kuch.Actually issey pehle bi mujhe dekne log aye the.They all wantd me to stop working or do 9-5 job.But i want to travel & do expeditions like my dad.In fact i hav been learning a lots of facts from him.I didnt hav any intention to insult you.I just wanted to avoid this whole.. I dont feel sorry coz i havent done nything wrong.
Dadi(self-thot): wow! This girl seems to hav much guts.I mean to turn out so late at home without fearing anyone and standing up for herself.She is the one who will be able to withstand Maan & his anger.But how to bring them together?😕

Pratap: Savitriji thank u so much that u waited so long.And Geet is is a single child.Thats y she is so stubborn.

Dadi:oh no Pratap. I liked her very much.Lets giv the kids sometime.

With that she left.
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Later at night,
Pratap: Geet wats ur problem? Huh? Y dont u just agree?
Geet: Dad plzz. U dont understand! I want to achieve something in my life.
Pratap: Its my fault.I brought you in this profession.I had taught you all about expeditions. And hav landed u in some imaginary world😔.Geet these things are not so easy.I still haven't achieved my dream and you know that.
Geet: Yes and you are goin for it next week.
Pratap: Exactly! I'm 50+ . Are u goin to wait that long if u dont achieve ur targets.
Geet: dad i'm not sayin that i vl marry after completing my dream xpedition.But at least i hav to start na? Let me submit the current thesis.Then i vl think.
Pratap: huh,U vl think? 😡These r just xcuses.If u hav someone in your life just tell me! Is that guy...kya naam tha uska Karan kahi wo tho nhe?
Geet: Dad! How could u even think like that? He is my best frnd.Aur ap..fine mujhe aise ghar me nhe rahna jaha meri koi self-respect nhe.I quit!😡
Pratap:fine! Leave then!
Geet packs her stuff and leaves.😲

As she left,
Pratap: dekha tumhare beti ko!
Rano(staring at him): dekh to me tum dono ko rhe hu! 🤔
Pratap:wat?
Rano: Stop this drama u two! Har baar jab koi rishte ke baat hoti he,tum dono ko pata he ki mera mood kharab ho jata he.Is liye mere kuch kehne se pehle tum log ye fight ka natak shuru karte ho aur apki beti ghar chodke 1km dur apni frnd Meera ke ghar chali jati he.Aur ek ap ho jo kal sham se pehle apni beti ko miss karne lagte he aur usey wapas le ate ho! Kab tak chalega ye sab?😡
Pratap: Relax chellam(dear). I think Savitriji is rite.We should give them some time.
Rano shooks her head and leaves.Pratap smiles.
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Meera:kyu aj bhi koi rishta tuta he kya?
Geet: arey tut jata to problm nhe na.She said we can talk after sometime! 😒
Meera:hmm.. Interesting
Geet: kya interesting? Help me with these bags.
Meera:ek din ke liye itna kyu lati ho?
Geet frowns!
Meera:ok baba!
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Next day, evening 4pm. Geet in a shopping mall. She knew that her dad would come to take her back home.But mom? Well she had to make up for it. She knew her cute smile will melt Rano easily.But still...a nice gift will make it easier.


Maan was there in the same shopping complex.He had to be there as a mediator between two shop owners to solve some business related problem.He was again in his grey n blue attire.As he entered the lift and the door was about to close he found those eyes...deep brown eyes...which had the power to twirl his emotions.


She was tryin to open the door of the lift with her leg and hands.As the door opened,his heart beat raised as he saw that angelic beauty...Mahiii..mahiii..maaahiii...Mahi ve mahi mahi ve...Mahi ve mahi mahi ve...😳
He couldnt help himself but stare at her.Geet realised only later(when the lift closed and they were left alone) that this was the same dusht danav whom she saw at the bus stop the other day😲. Looks like he is a high profile goon.Better stay away from him,thot she.
Maan couldnt take his eyes off her.He was drinking her beauty with his eyes...her eyes...her curls...her lips...her..her curves...her slim waist...he wanted to slip his hand around her waist...feel her...devour her...drink her beauty...He was getting hard just ny looking at her.



Maaan wats wrong with you? U r a cop man! Keep ur brain straight,he warned himself.But again ended up looking at her.
Geet saw him through the corner of her eyes. She felt disgusting as the goon was staring at her like he had never seen a woman in his life. Babaji is dusht danav se bacha lo mujhe,she prayed.
As if babaji heard her prayer they reached the top floor.Maan was disappointed.But she ran away as soon as the door opened.As Maan stepped out he found an anklet lying on the floor.He took it and ran to her.Geet was terrified seeing the goon following her.
Maan: Xcuse me, Ma'm!
Geet froze.😲
Maan came closer.
Maan (showing the anklet): I think u missed this.I got this near the lift.
Geet: This is not mine & u better dont try this on me.Aur ha dobara mera peecha karne ki koshish ki to..i vl call the police!
And she left leaving a dumbstruck Maan😲.He was a man born with power and no one even talked louder in front of him...ok except dadima but still... Here this girl was threatening ACP MK himself that she vl call the police!
Just then a girl came to him, "Sir this is mine"
Maan: oh!
Girl:thank you (and she left)
Maan again turned to look Geet who was busy in a gift shop.He shook his head and smiled.


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PRECAP: They meet again!
Hope u like this part.Thnx for all the encouragement.I vl try to live upto your expectations.Plz go through CS. A new character info is added.More to be revealed later.And yes their journey will start soonnn...

Edited by madhubala123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
wow geet threatning maan oops ACP maan 2 call d police...
awesome upd...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
hahahahhahaaa... she wil call d police.
awesome update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
that was a great update...
maan completely smitten by her beauty...
geet toh ekdam bindaas type hai...
love the dad- daughter rapport...

so overall a fabulous update
keep writing
love u and ur ffs

reva
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
awesome part.
loved it.
geet giving dhamki to Acp Maan Singh Khurana.
interesting.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
awesomeee!!!
LOL!...geet was threatening ACP about the police😆
continue soon!

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