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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kads_8302



Ladki kitni baar bimaar hoti hai... jyada nahi saal me bass 12-14 baar...aur iss me meri koi fault nahi hota...voh hote hote ho jata hai...main jaan bujh ker thode hi na kuch karti hun...Ouch

kuch leti kyun nahi... Waise jarur kisi ki sunti nahi hogi aur apni marzi ki karti hogi tabhi aisa haal hai.. arey nahi...main to sab ki sunnti hun...aur sabhi itna bolte hain ke...meri samajh me kuch bhi nahi aata...aur yeh sab ho jata hai...😃

Chalo get well sooon and take care of ur health.. haan care toh karrna hi padega...varna ye medicine bhi na...cheee...kitne kadwe hote hain yaar...!!! main ek hath me chochlate aur dushre haath me medicine rakhti hun...aur med lene ki turant baad choc muh me dalti hun...varnaaa... khair chodo...Ouch

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710



Madam...ye kaunsa record hai jo aap todne ki koshish kar rahi hai? Itna bimaar koi padhta hai kya?😲 nahi padta mujhe pata hai...par main uparwale k liye spl hun na...isi liye sari spl chizain mujhe de rakhi hai unhone...😆

Guess apne aap ko heroine ki jagah kuch zyada hi literally imagine kar liya tumne...barish me bhigti rahi & sardi ho gayi...
Jaldi se sudhar jao...warna Raj ko complain karungi tumhari...samjhi? plz complaine karo na...kabb se main uss ki daant sunn ne ke liye tarash rahi hun...!!! baki sab toh roz ke routine se de hi dete hain...par Raj ne aaj tak nahi diya...😆
And pls do take care of urself well...UD ki fikr mat karo...we can w8!!😊 Take ur tym...and just get well soon. (ye phrase maine zindagi me sab se zyada tumhe hi bola hai😲😆) he he he...sayad haan...😆

Sumi. 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
Yupe...bass kuch hi der me karti hun...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanksss dear...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

Tera RESERVED kabhi khatam bhi hoga kya...😆


oye madam !! tere update karne se pehle toh ho hi jaata hai haan...😛

Ankahi ke peechle updates check kar...tune toh abhi mere iss thread ke first comment ka reply bhi nahi kiya..huh!!

khair...

Pehle imp kaam...yaane ki comment !!

toh...ab update kaise tha yeh toh tum jaanti hi ho...yaani ki Mindblowing...SUperb...outstanding...etc etc !! 😃


priii !!!! yeh tune phir se ekbaar kiya na?? Tu mere bheje mein kaise jhaak sakti hai yaar...

maine yeh waala song RN scene keliye MS mein likha tha...
koi gal nahi...yeh waala yahapar bhi bahot superb lag raha tha...😊
such beautiful and awesome song...isnt it?

phir woh sweet sa dhaabe waala scene jo itni bhayanak way mein end hua ! 😲

Yudi shal ka scene bahot hi matured hai !! bravo !!

Bomb yusuf ne nahi rakhwaya??? tab toh yeh zaroor hamare captain sahab ki harkat hai...😛

he he he...😆 toh pooja ne toofan mail bankar jhappi maar hi li !! 😆

maine comment kar di na? chal...ab jaldi update kar...😛😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
yupe...karr rahi hun yaar...tum 10 min ruko...main ek ghante me karti hun...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nainaahsingh

ab ke baar tu gummi na... tooo !!!!😡😡😡

main nahi gummi...main hun...aur jaldi hi iss ka proof dungi...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez


oye madam !! tere update karne se pehle toh ho hi jaata hai haan...😛 haan...kabhi kabhi aa jata hai...aur kabhi kabhi mujhe tere intezaar me 'lambi judai' song gana padta hai...😆

Ankahi ke peechle updates check kar...tune toh abhi mere iss thread ke first comment ka reply bhi nahi kiya..huh!! hello ma'am...aap zara double chk kijiye...iss thread ke first comment par maine rply bhi kiya hai aur aap ne uss par Like button bhi press kiya hai shreya ke sath...samajh gayi...huh...jab dekho...ladti rehti hai...aur voh bhi sherni se...huh...😆

khair... koun sa 'KHER'... Anupam uncle. ya Kirron Aunty ya un ke suputra...Sikander Bhaiya...kis KHER ki baat karr rahi hai...😆

Pehle imp kaam...yaane ki comment !! chalo aap ko yaad toh hai...😆

toh...ab update kaise tha yeh toh tum jaanti hi ho...yaani ki Mindblowing...SUperb...outstanding...etc etc !! 😃 haan...voh main janti hun...kyoun ke dosti ka farz nibhane tum sab toh hamesha first line me hi khade rehte ho...vaise Thanks bolun kya...chal bol hi deti hun...Thank youuu mana...😃


priii !!!! yeh tune phir se ek baar kiya na?? Tu mere bheje mein kaise jhaak sakti hai yaar... he he he...😆 main khud surprised hun tere iss sawal se...sachhi...Tongue kai baar main jo likhna chati hun...tu voh MS me add kar deti hai...toh main bhi teri tarah sochti hun ke iss ke dimag me yeh scene kaise aaya...jabb ki yeh scene toh mere dimag me tha...he he he...!!! sayad hum dono sahi hai ke...hum 'kumbh ke mele' me bichdi hui behn hain...😆

maine yeh waala song RN scene keliye MS mein likha tha... koi baat nahi...koi aur song choose kar lenge...mil ke...thik hai...😃
koi gal nahi...yeh waala yahapar bhi bahot superb lag raha tha...😊
such beautiful and awesome song...isnt it? aur nahi toh kya...iss movie me yehi ek chiz toh tha jo achha tha...varna Vivek obrai aur antara mali ko main kaise bardast karti yaar...😆

phir woh sweet sa dhaabe waala scene jo itni bhayanak way mein end hua ! 😲 Maj aur unn ki junior pyar me itne khoye hue the ke mujhe unhe zameen me lana pada...😆

Yudi shal ka scene bahot hi matured hai !! bravo !! ab Yudi ko bada bachha toh banana hi padega na...sabhi bade ho gaye hain...sirf yehi bachha bann kar reh gaya...

Bomb yusuf ne nahi rakhwaya??? tab toh yeh zaroor hamare captain sahab ki harkat hai...😛 capt...kis capt ki baat karr rahi hai...yahan toh capt koi hai hi nahi...!!! vaise tu guess karti ja...main hun na...😆😉

he he he...😆 toh pooja ne toofan mail bankar jhappi maar hi li !! 😆 haan... baki ab Maj saab ko sirf main hi bacha sakti hun...😆

maine comment kar di na? chal...ab jaldi update kar...😛😉😆 voh toh main karr hi dungi...tera tonic jo mil gaya...Tongue

Thanksss Doc...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

I appreciate your kindness
More than words can say
The very nice thing you did for me
Really made my day...

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Posted: 14 years ago
EPISODE:-24
Maj Rajveer ne dekha...unn ki bahon me koi aur nahi balke Lft Pooja Ghai thi...
samne se Naina ke sath aa rahe baki ke officers bhi kafi hairani se unhe dekh rahe the...
...par Salim Khan hass raha tha...
...Naina kya kare kuch samajh nahi pa rahi thi...par phir bhi Maj Rajveer ke xpressions ko samjhne ki koshish karr rahi thi...
...Maj Rajveer ke chehre par pareshani...aur hairani...aur pata nahi kya kya...sab kuch saaf saaf jhalak raha tha...
...par Pooja...khushi ke mare chillati hui boli...
Pooja:-"sir...main baht khush hun...mere Veer ki shadi jo ho rahi hai...
voh Maj Rajveer hug karte hue chiila kar boli...
Maj Rajveer ne situation ko sambhalte hue Pooja se kaha:-"main bhi baht khush hun Lft Ghai...lekin hum mere qtr me chal kar baat karen...
Pooja ko jaise kuch sunai nahi de raha tha...voh bass bole ja rahi thi:-"Saharukh shaadi karr raha hai...yeh toh vohi baat ho gayi...ke nokia ne dual sim wala mobile banana suru kar diya...
Naina ke sath aa rahe ek army officer ne kaha:-"lekin Saharukh Khan toh barshon pahle shadi karr chuka hai na...!!! toh kya voh phir se shaadi karr raha hai...???"
ek aur army officer bola:-"sayad karr raha ho...ab Salman khan toh shadi karr nahi raha hai...toh uss ki kasar baki ke sare stars karr rahe ho...do do sadiyan kar ke..."
ek aur army officer:-"vaise kis se karr raha hai shadi...Saharukh Khan...???"
Pooja chakti hui boli:-"ohooo...aap samjhe nahi...apna Saharukh(uss ne Maj Rajveer ki taraf ishara kar ke kaha)...Naina se shadi karr raha hai...
Maj Rajveer ne pooja ke muh par apna hath rakh kar kaha:-"Lft Ghai...yeh bhi koi tym hai game khelne ka...
ek army officer...Pooja ki baat na samajh kar bola:-"Saharukh khan...Lft Naina se shadi karr raha hai...
sabhi Naina ko ghurr rahe the...!!! Naina...Maj Rajveer ki aur dekh rahi thi...hairani se...
Maj Rajveer ne usi tarah se Pooja ke muh par hath rakh kar kaha (par Pooja khud ko chudane ki koshish karr rahi thi):- "yeh ek game hai...officer...jo hum log jab KMA me the...toh akshar khela karte the...!!!"
one army officer:-"kaisa game...sir...???"
Maj Rajveer:- "yeh ek ajeeb sa game hai...hum ek sentence dete hain...aur samnewala inshan use mobile ke language se bolta hai...examaple...jaise...'Shayam gana ga raha hai"...toh uss ka mobile lingo hoga...'sam-sung'...ya phir 'homework kia'...toh uss ka hoga 'NO-KIA'...!!! iss tarah se...yeh sab ek game khela karte the...!!! par Lft Ghai yeh kya koi time hai...game khelne ki...mujhe vaise bhi aap se ek baht hi jaruri baat karni hai...!!! aap mere sath mere qtr me chaliye...!!!"
Maj Rajveer ne Salim Khan ko ishara kiya...unn ke sath chalne ko...aur Pooja ko khinch kar apne qtr ki taraf le gaye...
Naina khud hairan thi...Maj Rajveer ke iss jawab se...dil hi dil me boli...'vaah...kya excuse diya hai...'
Naina ne baki sab se kaha:-"main chalti hun...kafi raat ho chuki hai...kal main ghar ja rahi hun...toh packing bhi karni thi...!!!"
one army officer:-"Lft Singh...yeh game akhir hai kaisa...matlab...kaise khelte hain... voh toh aap ne kaha hi nahi...!!!"
Naina:- "actually na...main iss game me akshar haar jaya karti thi...!!! champion toh Maj Rajveer hua karte the...toh aap unhi se iss game ke bare me puch lena...!!! thik hai...abhi main chalti hun...gud night...!!!"
Naina kafi tez kadmon se pahunchi...Maj Rajveer ke qtr me...!!! knock kiya...toh Salim Khan ne dorr khola...aur ankhon se ishara kar ke kuch dikhaya Naina ko...
Naina ne dekha...Pooja baithi hui thi...apne honth par apni ek ungli rakh kar...jaise bachhon ko punish kiya jata hai...
Pooja:-"par sir...
Maj Rajveer ne phir se bhari awaz me kaha:-"maine aap se kaha na Lft...muh se ungli nahi hattni chahiye...!!!"
Pooja phir se chup ho gayi...par jaise hi Naina ko dekha...bhaag kar uss ke paas aa kar boli:-"dekh na Naina...tere Saharukh ko...maine aisa koun sa bura kaam kar diya hai...jo...
Maj Rajveer thoda rudely bole:- "Shut up...Lft Ghai...soch samajh kar baat kiya kijiye...!!! aap sayad bhul rahi hain ki aap iss waqt apne senior ke samne khadi hai... aur unhi ke bare me aisi baat karr rahi hai...
Pooja ko thoda bura laga...Maj Rajveer ka uss par iss tarah se chillna...uss ke ankhon me halke se anshun aaye...uss ne dhire se kaha:-"sorry sir...mujhe laga ke shadi mere best frnd ki ho rahi hai...toh khush hone ka haq mujhe bhi hai...aur sayad isi liye main thodi jyada...khair...sorry sir...ainda se main iss baat ka khayal rakhungi...!!! good night sir...
Pooja door ki taraf jane lagi...toh piche se uss ne phir se Maj Rajveer ki awaz suni:- "Pooja ruko...
Pooja ruki...par Maj Rajveer ki taraf nahi dekha...
Maj Rajveer ne Naina ki taraf dekha...Naina...ne ishara kiya...'yeh sahi nahi tha...'
Maj Rajveer mushkuraye...phir kaha:-" apne senior ko pith dikha kar baat nahi karte...Lft Ghai...turn kijiye...aur yahan aayiye...
Pooja ne turn kiya...sar jhukaye...Maj Rajveer ke paas aayi...
Maj Rajveer:-"meri taraf dekho...
Pooja ne dekha unhe...Maj Rajveer ne dekha...Pooja ke ankhon me halke se anshun the...
Maj Rajveer ne Pooja ke ankhon se anshun apne hatho se pochte hue dhire se kaha:-"sorry... mujhe tum par chillana nahi chahiye tha...!!! par tum hi socho...kya yeh sahi tha...matlab...iss tarah se sab ke samne baat karna...!!! tumhe kisi ne nahi kaha ke...yeh baat abhi puri tarah se bahar nahi aani chahiye...jabb tak ki shadi nahi ho jati...??? tumhe pata hai na Naina ki jaan khatre me hai...ek baar attack ho chuka hai uss par...
Pooja ne dhire se kaha:- "nahi...vo main puri tarah se Yudi ki baat nahi suni...sirf shadi ki baat suni...aur bhaag kar aa gayi...
Maj Rajveer:- "toh puri baat mujh se sunn lo...!!! baht hi kamm logon ko iss bare me pata hai...aur jyada logon ko pata na chale yehi thik hai...Naina ki safety ke liye...!!! aur tum toh Naina ki best frnd ho na...toh tumhe toh puri choot hai...khush rehne ki...par yeh choot sirf hum sab ke samne hi rahe toh behtar hai...Naina ke liye...!!! samajh gayi...na...!!! ab chalo...hass do...tumhari best frnd ki shadi hai na...
Pooja ne thoda dhire se apna chehra Maj Rajveer ke kareeb la kar kaha:-"aur voh bhi aap se...hai na...
Maj Rajveer thoda jhijhke...akhir voh unn ki student thi...Pooja kafi zorr se hassti hui boli:- "hayeee...marr jawan...Rajveer sir...sharmate hue aap kitna cute lagg areh hain...!!! aur aap toh ab mere jeeju bhi bann ne wale hain...toh aap par sab se jyada haq mera...
Maj Rajveer ne khud ko sambhalte hue kaha:-"iss me koi shaq hai tumhe...Pooja... ab chalo jayo...ja kar so jayo...baad me baat karte hain...!!!"
Pooja:- "lekin sir...aap ki shadi ho jayegi...Naina se...toh phir toh yahan saab ko khabar ho jayegi na...phir hum chupayen kyu...??? kahin aap party dene ki wajah se darr toh nahi rahe hain na...???"
Maj Rajveer:- "dekho...shadi nainitaal me hogi...right...toh kahin...vahan par kuch galat na ho...isiliye main abhi yeh baat kisi ko nahi bata raha...!!! jab shadi ho jayegi...aur hum sabhi sath me wapas aa jayenge...toh yahan par ek badi si party rakhenge...aur tab aap chilla chilla kar kuch bhi keh sakti hain...main kuch bhi nahi kahunga...!!! kyoun ek aap Naina ki best frnd hai...isi liye aap ka sab se jyada haq bann ta hai mujh par hai na...???"
Pooja kafi khush lagg rahi thi:- "jee sir...voh toh hai...mera matlab hai ke...(dhire se...)...Rajveer sir tab kuch aur bann jayenge...jaise ek hi phone me 3g ki facility...
Maj Rajveer ne apni ankhen bandh ki...chup chap baithe...ek jagah par...yeh suruwat thi...unn ke band bajjne ki...
Maj Rajveer ne khud se kaha:- "raha saha kasar...pura ho raha hai...pyar bhi hona tha toh voh bhi apne hi cadet se...Alekh ki language se sochun toh meri watt laggnewali hai...
tabhi darwaze par dastak hui...Pooja vaise bhi ja hi rahi thi...toh uss ne door khola... samne Huda aur Alekh khade the...hath me kuch papers thame...
Huda:-"punjaban itni raat ko tu yaha kya karr rahi hai...??? chal chal rashte se hatt...
Huda ne use side karte hue ander aanewala tha ke...Pooja ne uss ka coller khinch kar bola:- "oye...kameene sunn...aaj ke baad izzat se baat karna mere se...varna tu nahi janta mujhe...!!! Rajveer sir se complaine kar dungi...persionally janti hun unhe...rishte me hain voh mere...samjha...!!!"
Pooja itrati hui chali gayi...!!! Huda aur Alkeh ne hairani se ander dekha toh...Maj Rajveer sarr pakde baithe hue the...aur Naina unn ke paas pani ka glass le kar aa rahi thi...
Alekh ne gehri saansh le kar kaha:-"hamare bichare Rajveer sir...
Huda ne bhi ek gehri saansh li aur vohi kaha...'haan...hamare bichare Rajveer sir...
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J&K,
railway station...
Huda:-"yeh aaj train itni late hai ya hum jaldi pahunch gaye hain...???"
Ali:-"Huda bhai...train toh sahi time par hai...par hum jaldi pahunch gaye hain... sayad abhi train aati hi hogi...!!!"
Huda:-"jab tak train nahi aati...tab tak koi soni kudi hi nazar aa jaye...thoda ankh toh sek hi sakta hun...!!! vahan camp me pakk gaya hun yaar...ek bhi dhang ki chiz nahi milti...ek hi thi...jise Rajveer sir uda kar le ja rahe hain...!!! apni toh life hi bakwaas bannti ja rahi hai...
Alekh thodi dur hi khada tha...Neelu uss ke kareeb aayi...aur kaha:-"kafi khoye hue lagg rahe ho...sab thik toh hai na...!!! Naina ki wajah se pareshan ho...???"
Alekh:- "haan...ek baar uss ki shadi ho jaye...aur voh Rajveer sir ki responsibility bann jaye...apne dimag ka adha tension khali...!!! tu nahi janti...iss ladki ko le kar kafi paresha rehta hun main...!!!"
Alekh ne Naina ki taraf dekh ker kaha...
Neelu mushkurayi...phir kaha:-"baht pyar karte ho na uss se...???"
Alekh ne Naina se nazar hata ker Neelu par dali...phir kaha:-"haan...baht pyar karta hun main use...aur tujhe bhi...!!! par tum dono hi alag type ke ho...voh mere pyar ko samajhti hai...aur tu nahi samajhti...!!!"
Alekh ne uss ke ankhon me straight dekhte hue kaha...Neelu ne nazar ghuma li...aur kaha:-" janti hun...baht time ho chuka hai hamari shadi ko...aur maine abhi bhi...tum se kafi duri bana rakhi hai...par sach kahun toh...
Neelu ki ankhon me halke se anshu dikhe...uss ne use chupane ki koshish karte hue aur kuch nahi kaha...
Alekh:-"bol de...jo bhi tere dil me hai...main hun tere her baat sunn ne ke liye...
Neelu ne ek pal tak Alekh ke ankhon me dekha...phir kaha:-"main chah ker bhi iss baat ko bhul nahi pa rahi hun ke maine kya galati ki thi...!!!"
Alekh:-"koun si galati...aur kaisi galati...!!! tune jo kiya voh anjane me kiya...par tujh se shadi karne ka faishla mera tha...iss ke liye mujh se kisi ne zabardasti nahi ki thi...!!! aur apun sach bole...toh apun tujh se usi roz se pyar karne laga tha...jab se tujhe dekha tha...apr apun bachpan se hai hi aisa...koi bhi baat jaldi apne muh pe nahi la pata...!!! ek baat bata...agr kisi jung me mere hath ya pair katt jate hain toh kya tu mujhe chod kar chali jayegi...???"
cut to Naina...
chup chap...ek book stall ke paas khadi thi...!!! thoda udaash bhi thi...aaj subah voh gayi toh thi Maj Rajveer ke room me...par mil nahi payi thi...!!! rashte me Salim Khan mila...jiss ne kaha ki...voh kisi kaam se subah subah hi nikal gaye hai...sayad aate hue late ho...
Naina ne dil hi dil me kaha:- "phir bhi ek call toh ker hi sakte the na...janti hun ke hamari shadi ho rahi hai baht jald...par phir bhi...kafi miss karr rahi hun main yahan aap ko..."
achanak Naina ne mehshush kiya ke koi uss ke piche khada hai...voh turn kar ke dekh pati...usse pahle uss ke piche se uss aadmi ne uss ke muh par hath rakh ke... khinch ker le gaya...Naina chilla bhi nahi payi...
cut to Neelu n Alekh...
Neelu :-"tumhe sach me aisa lagta hai k...main tumhe kabhi chod ker kahin ja sakti hun...!!!"
Neelu ke ankhon me Alekh ne ek dard dekha...Alekh ne dhire se kaha:- "toh phir apna le mujhe...thak gaya hun tujh se durr reh ker...!!! mere liye sab kuch bhul ja... main tujh se voh sara pyar pana chahta hun...jo mera haq hai...!!! tujhe voh sari khushiyan dena chahta hun...jo tera haq hai...
cut to Naina...
uss ka chehra pura paseene se bheega hua tha...ankhen badi badi karte hue voh apne baht hi kareeb khade uss inshan ko dekh rahi thi...jo use iss tarah se dekh ker kafi maze se hass raha tha...
Naina diwar se satt kar khadi thi...aur uss ke behad kareeb Maj Rajveer khade the...jinn ke dono hath diwar par the...aur bich me Naina apni ukhdi hui sansho ko sambhalte hue dhire se kaha:-"mujhe dara diya tha aap ne...
Maj Rajveer:-"chalo...meri cadet kisi baat se darti toh hai...lekin mujh se...yeh baat thodi si ajeeb hai...nahi...
Naina:- "maine kab kaha ke main aap se dari...voh toh aap iss tarh se piche se mujhe khinch ker le kar aaye ki main kuch pal ke liye kuch samajh hi nahi payi..."
Maj Rajveer:-"aur kya karta...aise hi agar na aata tum se milne...toh tumhare pyare dost...baht hi gentel tarike se khinchai karrne lagte hain...
Naina hassi aur kaha:- "ab yeh toh unn ka haq hai...nahi...
Maj Rajveer:- "aur tumhar kuch haq banta hai ke nahi...!!! yaar...kamm se kamm unhe samjha toh sakti ho na...kitna embarassed ho jata hun main...unn sab ke samne...!!!"
Naina hassi...phir kaha:- "main iss bare me kuch nahi ker sakti...ye aap ki prob hai...!!! vaise aap aaj subah se the kahan...main aap se milne bhi gayi thi...par salim khan ne kaha ke aap subah subah kahin bahar gaye the...sab thik toh hai na...???"
Maj Rajveer halke se mushkuraye aur kaha:-"haan...sab thik hai...!!! tum apna khayal rakhna...aur...
Maj Rajveer kuch pal ruke phir kaha:-"academy days me kuch frnds hua karte the...unhone kal raat achnak se phone kar diya...aur meri shadi ki baat puchne lage... main samajh hi nahi paya ke unn sab se tumhari baat kaise karun...!!!
Naina:-"kyoun...meri baat kyoun nahi keh sakte unhe...
Maj Rajveer:- saale...baht khinchai karte meri...khaash kar ke agr unhe yeh pata chalta ke tum Naveen ki behn ho...!!! isiliye soch hi nahi paya ke agar voh puchte toh kya kehta main...
Naina pehli baar Maj Rajveer ko yun dekh rahi thi...uss ke honthon par ek halki si mushkaan aayi...
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chand rehta hain
kabhi kabhi aas paas
shaam rehti hain
aao na aao na
jhelum me behne de
waadi ke mausam bhi
ek din toh badlenge
kabhi kabhi aas paas
chand rehta hain
kabhi kabhi aas paas
shaam rehti hain
Maj Rajveer ko iss tarh se kisi ko gali dete hue dekh...Naina ko hassi ayi...uss ne kaha:-"khinchai kyou karte...???"
Maj Rajveer:- "hostel me jabb bhi apne gharwalon ki batain hoti...toh Naveen hamesha sab se jyada tumhari batain karta...!!! meri gudia ye hai voh hai..ek ladka tha Rahul... tumhari tarifain sunn sunn ker voh itna impress ho gaya tha ke...uss ne kaha tha k jab voh army officer bann jayega toh tum se shadi karega...!!! toh Naveen ne uss ke muh par ek punch marte hue kaha tha ke agar use uss ki behn ki shadi karni hogi toh voh...
Maj Rajveer ruke...thodi der ke liye...thode khoye hue aur sharmaye hue lagg rahe the...Naina ko maza aa raha tha...!!!Maj Rajveer ne naina ko dekha...voh mushkura rahi thi...kafi kareeb hi thi unn ke...voh mehshush karr pa rahe the uss ki khushboo ko...
Male:-
aau toh subaha
jaau toh mera
naam sabah likhna
barf pade toh
barf pe mera
naam 'tu aa' likhna
zara zara aag waag
pass rehti hain
zara zara aangdi ki
aanch rehti hain
kabhi kabhi aas paas
chand rehta hain
kabhi kabhi aas paas
shaam rehti hain
kuch pal ke baad Naina ne kaha:- "kya kaha tha bhaiya ne...???"
Maj Rajveer ne Naina ki ankhon me dekhte hue kaha:-"Idiot ne sabb ke samne yeh kaha tha ke...use agar uss ki behn ki shadi karwani padi...toh voh mujh se karwayega...kisi aur se kabhi nahi...!!! aur kuch din ke liye Naveen ki wajah se meri kafi khinchai hui thi academy me...
Naina apni badi badi ankhon se unhe mushkurate hue dekhe ja rahi thi...Maj Rajveer ne halke se uss ke cheek touch karte hue kaha:- "ab tum kaho...main kaise kehta ke main usi ladki se shadi karne ja raha hun...!!! thoda ajeeb lagg raha tha... tum yeh keh sakti ho ke... main thoda...
Naina ne mushkurate hue dhire se kaha:-"sharma rahe the...???"
Female:-
shaamein bujhane
aati hain raatein
raatein bujhane
tum aa gaye ho
Maj Rajveer Naina ki baat sunn kar thoda mushkura diye...
Female:-
jab tum haste ho
din ho jaata hain
tum gale lago toh
din so jaata hain
Naina ne achanak dhire se kaha:-"can i hug you...
Maj Rajveer ko yeh sawal thoda ajeeb laga...par Naina ki ankhen kuch keh rahi thi...Maj Rajveer ne mushkura kar Naina ko apne kareeb laye...
doli uthane
aayega din toh
pass bitha lena
kal jo miley toh
mathe pe mere
suraj uga dena
(zara zara aas paas
dhup rahegi
zara zara aas paas
rang rahenge) - 2 (Movie:- Yahan)
kuch pal yun hi unhe hug karne ke baad Naina ne...un ke kanon ke kafi kareeb dhire se kaha..."I...
Maj Rajveer thoda excited lage...sayad Naina vohi kehna chahti hai...jo voh sunn na chahte the...par pata nahi kyoun aaj tak kabhi use force nahi kar paye kehne ke liye...
par Naina ne aage kuch bhi nahi kaha...kuch pal yun hi rehne ke baad ...Maj Rajveer ne use khud se alag kiya aur Naina ko hairani se dekhne lage...
Naina ne mushkurate hue kaha:-"kya hua...aap ko aage bhi sunn ni hai...
Maj Rajveer ne kuch pal use kafi gaur se dekha...phir kaha:-" jee nahi...Lft...agar aap bolna nahi chahti toh rehne dijiye...mujhe bhi koi jaldi nahi hai...jab bhi dil kare bol dijiyega...aur agar na bhi bolo toh bhi chalega...vaise main dikhne me itna bhi bura nahi hun...kafi ladkiyan line me khadi hai kehne ke liye...
Naina:- "ajeeb inshan hai aap...aap ko toh zidd bhi karna nahi aata...aur upar se kisi aur se sunn na chahte hain...??? kisi aur ne agar mere samne kaha bhi na toh...voh kafi bura hoga...aap ke liye bhi uss ladki ke liye bhi...
Maj Rajveer ne mushkurate hue kaha:- "achha...lekin mujhe jahan tak pata hai Lft...aap meri zidd dekh chuki hai...hai na...!!! aur rahi baat kisi aur ke kehne ki toh Lft...main jarur dekhna chahunga ke...tab aap ka reaction kya hota hai...
Naina:-"reaction agar action me badal gaya toh...mujhe phir matt kehna ke maine pahle warning kyoun nahi di thi...
Naina ne unhe ghurte hue kaha...phir thodi der chup reh kar phir se kaha:- "phir bhi...aap ko sach me kabhi voh nahi sunn ni hai...???"
Maj Rajveer ne Naina ke chehre par ek bachpana dekha...voh thode se mushukraye phir Naina ke chehre ke kafi kareeb apna chehra la ker dhire se kaha:- "toh kaho...
Naina:- "I...se aage sunn na hai...toh jaldi se barat le ker aayiye...main jyada der wait nahi karungi...!!!"
Maj rajveer ko hassi aayi aur unhone kaha:-"jyada der wait nahi karogi matlab...kisi aur ko keh dogi kya...
Naina:- "oho...aap bhi na kuch nahi samjhte...!!! mujhe jaldi se shaadi karni hai...aur aap hamesha ki tarah late nahi aayoge...!!! chaliye promise kijiye...
Naina ke chehre par ek narazgi thi...Maj Rajveer ne uss ke forehead ko kiss karte hue dhire se kaha:- "promish...ab khush...???"
Naina ne kafi big smile dete hue kaha:- "bahhht khush...
tabhi kuch logon ke bhaagne ki awaz aayi...aur Maj Rajveer ne Naina ko khud se alag kiya...!!!
Maj Rajveer aur Naina jahan khade the...kuch hi der me...unhone dekha ke...
Alekh...Huda...Yudi...Ali...aur Pooja sabhi apni apni gun dikha kar unn ke paas... hairani se khade the...
Maj Rajveer ne unn sab ko sarr se pair tak dekh rahe the...aur baki ke sabhi hairani se unhe dekh rahe the...
phir Maj Rajveer ne unn se kaha:-"yeh rahe voh soilders...jinhe maine Naina ki hifazat ke liye bheja hai...!!! Naina ke gumm hone ke 15 min baad aap sab pahunch rahe hain...!!! aap ko pata hai inn 15 min me baht kuch ho sakta tha...!!! vaise aap kya kahte hain Lft Sharma...
Alekh ne sarr jhuka kar kaha:-"sorry sir...voh apun Neelu ke sath thoda busy ho gaya tha..uss se baat karr raha tha... aur...yeh apni galati hai sir...aage se aap ko koi shikayat nahi hogi...
Maj Rajveer ne Huda ki taraf dekh kar kaha:- "aur aap Lft Huda...aap kis ke sath busy the...jo aap bhi thoda sa careful nahi reh paye...
Huda:-"sorry sir...main voh Yudi ke sath thoda busy ho gaya tha...
Maj Rajveer ne un dono ko harani se ghura...vo dono kafi paas-paas khade the...
Maj Rajveer ke dekhne ke dhang se dono ne ek dushre ko dekha...phir jaldi me ek dushre se alag hote hue Yudi ne kaha:- "Huda ka matlab tha ke hum dono baat karr ne me busy the sir...aur kuch nahi...
Maj Rajveer:- "hmm...yehi better hai...!!! lekin aage se agar koi bhi choti si bhi prob hui toh...
Ali:-"aisi galati...dubara nahi hogi sir...
Maj Rajveer:- "thik hai...
phir Naina ki taraf dekha..."take care" keh ke...chale gaye...
Naina ne dekha...Maj Rajveer ne jate jate turn kiya...n winks her...aur mushkura te hue chale gaye...
Naina ko kafi zorr se hassi aayi...
usi ne hi kaha tha Maj Rajveer se...'voh sab aap ki prob hain...iss me main aap ki koi help nahi kar sakti...'!!! aur Maj Rajveer ne yeh sabit ker diya ke unhe unn ke students ko ullu banana bhi aata hai...
Naina ko iss tarah se hasste hue dekh kar Huda ne dhire se alekh se kaha:-"yaar... yeh kahin khushi ke maare pagal toh nahi gayi...
Alekh ne kuch der dekha Naina ko phir kaha:-"nahi...voh hass is liye rahi hai kyoun ke...Rajveer sir hum sab ko bana kar chale gaye...aur hum...bann bhi gaye...
Yudi:- "kya matlab...kya bana ker chale gaye...???"
Alekh:- "ullu...!!! kuch samjha...
Yudi:- "yupe...ullu...aww...matlab owl...hai na...jo raat ko nikalte hain!!! par tu pura samjha na...
train ne signal de diya tha...Alekh ne kaha:-"train me samjhata hun...chal...
Alekh ne Yudi ko khichte hue train ki taraf le ja kar bola...
******************
after 2 days...
Railway Station
J&K
platform par Maj Rajveer...Naaz, Shalini aur Gunny ke sath khade the...
Shalini ne dekha...Maj Rajveer kuch khoye hue se lagg arhe hain...!!! Shalini unn ke kareeb aayi aur kaha:-"kya baat hai Maj...mujhe aisa kyuon lagg raha hai ke aap iss shadi se khush nahi hain...!!!"
Maj Rajveer ko hassi aayi...unhone shalini ko dekha...phir dhire se kaha:-"doc...aap ko sach me aisa lagg raha hai...ya aap meri khinchai karne ke mood me hain...???"
Shalini:- "50-50...kya hai na...Maj...aap ke chehre par voh khusi dikhayi nahi de rahi...jo asusall ek inshan me honi chahiye...jo apni GF se shadi karne ja raha ho...
Maj Rajveer:- "Shalini...tum na patients ke bich me reh reh kar...dimag tumhara phir gaya hai...tumhe ek long holiday chahiye...wapas aa jane do...main apne superior se baat kar ke tumhe siachin bhej dunga...tumha dimag puri tarah se thanda ho jayega...!!!"

Shalini:-"ha ha ha...very funny...huh...
Maj Rajveer:-"doc...aap batayiye...main koi 24-25 saal ka ladka toh nahi...jo apni shadi ke liye chahake...hai na...!!! aur mujhe apni khusi apne tarike se manani achhi lagti hai...bina kisi shor sharabe ke...
Shalini:-"matlab...aap ka bass chale toh...aap Naina se shadi kisi bhi mandir me bhi ker sakte hain...jahan jyada log na ho aur shor sharaba na ho...
Maj Rajveer ne Shalini ke kandhe par hath dala...dhire se unn ke kareeb aa kar kaha:- "aap ne bilkul sahi kaha...aur meri shadi bhi aisi hi ho rahi hai...!!! baht hi simple tarike se...
Shalini:- "this is not fare...aap aisa nahi ker sakte...!!! arey shadi hai...hungama toh hona hi chahiye na...
Maj Rajveer:- "par aap janti hain na ke Naina ki jaan khatre me hai do baar attack ho chuka hai...toh iss time me mujhe sab se jyada uss k security ki chinta karni hai... aur baki ke sabb kaam toh hote hi rahenge...hai na...!!!"
Shalini:- "hmmm...yeh bhi sahi hai...
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cont in next post
Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 14 years ago

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