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itzMYattitude

@itzMYattitude

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#121

omgggggggggggggggggggggg

dear first of all a tight slap for saying its not good

its perfect

amazingly written

was totally lost while reading it

great job

n the beauty of the story was its simple story

story was ordinary but ur writting style made it extra ordinary

*thumbs upppp*

awwwwwwww

mayu was extra cuteeeeeee

loved their simple innocent love story

n then the ending omgggggg

standing ovation for writting it beautifully

the lines dialogues feelings

just hats off

do write more =)

n sorry for late reply

was a lil busy

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#122

lovely os!!!

thanks 4 the pm

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sruthi

@mayur.forever

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#123

wow...great one...thanx for d pm....😊

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ginny munjal

@ginny09

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#124

superbbbbbb part bas ab next part ki w8 hai :D

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#125

kucch is tarah-

wow

so cutee

10th standard mein love

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Nish

@nish0910

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#126

Tashu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗

lovely OS!😊

loved it!❤️

great job!👍🏼

thanks for the pm!!😃

*anisha

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EdgeOfCredence

@EdgeOfCredence

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#127

Tasfu! 😆
Read all your Os's. . loved em girl! =]
I'll comment individually later, too sleepy to type much now! 🥱
I must say it's a really nice gallery to freshen the MJHT-ism! 😃

That's it for now! Promise you a lengthy one next time! *To-keep-promises-wala-face*😳

Love,
C!

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556195

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#128

The Confession

It was a normal day for me….Well every day is normal for me isn't it?…I looked at the side table filled with so many photos …oh god! Not again… I said to myself…my mom just want me to get lost as soon as possible that's why she gives me so many photos and doesn't she get tired?..i mean I always reject each and every boy showing some reason but then again next morning she again comes up with photos!.. am is such a burden for them?..i am just 23..and they want me to get married! Gosh..should I run away?!..come on I just joined a hospital for my internship.. and now marriage!..i just don't want to get married!!

Come on nupur don't lie..you also want to get married don't you?…may be you are still waiting for him to confess?… girl pleas can you get out of your dream… I mean what the hell do you think of yourself?… can you please tell me since when you are waiting for him to confess but till now did he once gave you a signal that he loves you or something like that? No! then why wasting time… marry the boy whom your parents chooses for you and then get lost!… I just don't understand that you show you are very practical and strong..but then why are you being so stupid like a film's heroien… can you please give me a break!

Oh god! Not again…please that's not the reason that I don't want to get married its just that I am not ready… and moreover that was a chilhood crush and now I have no feelings like that for him… I will marry..but not now I still need some time!

Oh really?…hmm…then tell me if tomorrow morning when you wake up your mom comes and like every morning tells you that a proposal has come for you and that boy is mayank Sharma then… what will you do?.. you will still need time right?… her inner voice questioned her..well more than question it was a taunt for her!

Nupur got up and sat… hmm this was a big question… nupur sighed in helplessness .. no she will never ever refuse… may be her inner voice was right… she still wanted him to confess.. may be she was still hoping that some miracle would happen and mayank will tell her that he loves her but was this possible?..may be no..may be yes!

Nupur and Mayank!… they shared a family relation.. mayank's mother was best friend of nupur's mother… this was not the end ..their father were business parthner too… the relation between this two families was really close.. they used meet every other day and naturally mayank and nupur also met!… first nupur and mayank both being quiet didn't get too much friendly… but when mayank was in 16 and nupur was in 12 things started changing… nupur was a cute and quiet girl while mayank was a handsome teenage… they knew each other from the very early age but never interact with each other so much! But after nupur was in 7th she wanted a math tutor and mayank was in 11th and being the topper was best in math… so nupur's mom told him to help her a bit!

Firstly they used to talk only about studies and slowly they became best friend.. for other both were quiet and good childrens but they both knew each other well that how naughty they were… the friendship was unbreakable … no one could come between then…. Even their age difference also couldn't make any differece… mayank used to share everything with nupur while nupur was the answer for his all the problems… mayank was a guide for nupur… but then with passing time nupur realized that not only friendsip but there was something more… she started feeling jealous when mayank talked about any other girl… she started blushing if mayank ever gave her any compliment… she felt nervous when mayank hold her hand… first she ignored this thing but then she realized that she was in love with mayank… in her college also she could never looked at any guy..whenever her friends shows her any boy she used to compare him with mayank and at the end of the day she found mayank in all her mind and heart

Rejection was her biggest fear!…she was scared that mayank will reject and her and her frienship will also break..she always thought that she wasn't capable for mayank … mayank after completing his engineering got a job in very well and reknowned company..he was perfect… dream boy of any girl!… may be nupur felt that she was not a good match for him… but then she never got away from mayank..she continued her friendship like the way it was before..she didn't let mayank ever know her feelings… for mayank and others their friendship was like they way before but only nupur knew that what a big changed had come in her and in this friendship! But we cant stop our heart…nupur's love for mayank was increasing and her hopes were dying with each and every day… but still a part of her was still waiting for a miracle and stoping her to marry some one else.

Nupur turned around and saw the table clock…. It was 3 in the moring and sleep was far away from her eyes… she again looked at the pillow which was wet due to her tears… she closed her eyes and tried to sleep… she had decided that she will marry the boy her parents want her.. she didn't want to live in anymore false hopes… and moreover she should not act like a stupid girl!

Next moring was different… today there was no photo in nupur's mom's hand..nupur was a bit surprised but then she thought may be they wanted to give her some time…she ignored all the thoughts and did her breakfats and was about to leave for hospital when her mom told her that some guests are coming and she should come home early… like a good girl she obeyed her mom and came home early… she never liked this guests and all but she had to be social too otherwise her mom would make her.. she wore her favourite white and came down and was amazed to see mayank and his family… her mom told that guests would be coming but mayank's family?.. well they were not guests right?

Just look at him nupur he is just so hot!..and black..he is wearing black??…haww! I wish I could touch him… *blushing*…see he is smiling at you… and why?… hmm… may be he didn't look at you… come on see he's such a handsome and you want you and him?…pls now you know why I was telling you to stop day dreaming…by the way how about I kiss his diples once *wink*

her inner voice disteracted her… pls just shut up!..she told her inner voice but then she couldn't stop herself looking at him.. hmm..she was actually nothing infront of him.. he was wasy too good then her..no no he was the best… .she also returened the smile..after freeting his parents she sat wilth them… today mayank was acting strange… normally he drag her to the terrace and tell her a huge stories what he did..how he impressed his clients ..and bla bla!…but today he was quiet… may be his disturbed about something

don't you dare to go to him…and please don't feel bad that he isn't talking to you..he has finally realized that you don't deserve to be his friend also! And now will you please stop staring at him… have some shame nupur! And did you forget that lats night only you had decided that you will stop thinking about him and marry that boy who your mom gonna chose and now don't get me more angry and just stop your stupidness..!!!

nupur sighed and thought that her inner voice was right so she decided to sit quietly…until she found that their servant handed her a envelop… it was a white envelop with no name on it… only written "for nupur"… she was not sure about it… she aksed the servant but he had no answer so she decided to open it and read it.. and opening it she got the biggest and most beautiful surprise of her life.

Dear nupur!

Don't know how to say..but you know na that I am not good with words..but if you remember once I had told you rhat when I will find my dream girl what will say to her… yes nupur I found my dream girl… well I always knew that she's the one but may be was not courageous to tell her but today I think its time that I should tell her that how much I loved her..more than anything and anyone in the world…I love you nupur I love you a lot!
I don't mind if you say no..well it will hurt a bit but then its fine… because I know you deserve much much better life partner then me..you are an angel and I know that there's always that one person, that will always have your heart.That one person for me is you…will you be mine forever?… can you bear me with all your life?
Would you like to become mrs nupur mayank sharama??..will you marry me nupur?

yours and only yours
Mayank!

That was the biggies and most beautiful surprise ever! Nupur was numb how to react..should she be happy..or cry that after a long wait she got what she wanted… she looked around so see smirk on everyone's face… she ignored that.. well she had many more important work to do now… she searched for mayank but he wasn't there… she knew where would be he…so without waisting any more time she went to the garden and saw mayank sitting there… without wasting time she hugged him… "I hate you..you made me so wait!..tum pehle nahi bol sakte the na..mujhe to laga ki tum mujshe pyar hi nahi karte..i hate you hate you"… "I am sorry nupur..i ddint knew ki tum mujhse..mujhe to humesha yahi laga that you only take me as a friend..but aaj tumhari hsadi ki baat hui to I couldn't take it..maine mom dada ko bata diya..aur tumhe bhi"… he said bending down a bit which made nupur blush… "I love you"… he said taking her in his arms as if never let her go!… "I love you too!"… nupur hide herself on his arms..the most beautiful feeling in the world.. confession

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