The girl next door - Ch 103 - pg 108; note pg 109 - Page 22

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Posted: 14 years ago
WHAT??? Naina nahiii Dol don't do this to me 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
ewww! I hope Krt didnt see this...

u had my heart racing n then like a bomb the moment was ruined. ergh!
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG... SH** that was Naina...WTH...

cant he just see who it was... Damn it, it wasnt Keerti... and all the while he was kissing even I thought it was bloody Keerti,...


Damn!!!!

Now what is he gonna do????
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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 46

He pulled himself from her with such strength that she jerked and stumbled a step back and hit the wall...he continued to take steps backwards until he collided with the wall across from her. His mind was still blank...he was finding it hard to bring himself out of the stupor. He simply stood still as he watched her with disgust...he was disgusted that his first kiss was for her...for her?

With much effort she straightened herself and managed to stand steady. After what he had done, how could anyone...anyone be able to stand on their feet? She had initially frozen when he kissed her...that was the least she had expected of him...ever. She had always known that even their friendship was forced and one-sided...that he didn't really care for her as much as she did. But she didn't want to lose on the only person who didn't care about how alluring she looked...or how rich she was.

She didn't have any real friends...she was always surrounded by guys making passes at her or friends who sought her out for financial help. In the midst of all the people that surrounded her like bees to honey, she found him the most amicable...and she did everything to keep him close...even to a point where she followed him everywhere and tried to attract him by hurling her body over his. He had always maintained his distance with her...and now...seeing him get close to her in such a manner, all she could do was take it in...

She straightened her top and closed her eyes as she ran her hands through her hair to set them properly again...she knew he was watching her which is why she didn't look at him directly...she just opened the door and stepped out without saying a word.

When the door closed behind her he sighed in relief...he was mad at her...he had never liked the kind of attention she gave him but something always stopped him from telling her rudely that he didn't give a damn about her...that she should stop following him around. He started moving towards the wall against which he had pushed her and stepped on something...he saw it was an envelope...he picked it up and opened it to read...

Friends
bring happiness
throughout the year!

Especially
a friend like
YOU!

Happy New Year!


Something made him turn the card to its back and there he saw...in very small writing she had written 'May every day of the new year glow with good cheer and happiness for you and your loved ones...I miss you!' He knew why she chose to write on the back..that there were less chances of anyone reading the back of a card. With that, she had conveyed the message and hid it from him too. Ever since Simran and Keerti came into his life, he became less and less accessible...she had gotten the hint and with a heavy heart, she had stopped her desperate attempts to get in touch with him every now and then...and with the three words...she was letting him know how much he meant to her...

The anger soon turned into guilt as he realized it wasn't her fault that his first kiss was with her...that she had not made any move on him...he was the only one responsible for what had happened between them. He had become so intoxicated with Keerti's memories that he imagined her everywhere...even in her...so why was he being angry at her?

He opened the door knowing she would still be standing on his porch pulling herself together...and sure enough he saw her sitting on one of the steps at the entrance. She heard the door open behind her and got up to say "I'm sorry...I was just leaving.." still not looking at him.

As she began to walk down the remaining steps he called out to her "Naina wait..." and she stopped. Although he couldn't see her face he knew she was taking this time to wipe her tears...she took a deep breath before turning around to say "Happy New Year Rohan..." and before tears started flowing again, she turned back to walk away...
Edited by dolphinUSA - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ahhh...why are u making all the characters nice...who can i blame now,...
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Posted: 14 years ago
feel sad for Naina as well😭😭😭 why do you turn all your characters sweet?????
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Posted: 14 years ago
You made me feel guilty for hating Naina. I was thinking only from Rohan's POV :( I actually do not know wat else to say...plz update soon (w/ a happy one or at least a semi-happy one lol) cuz im in a very sad mood now...

Luv ur writing! :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
What now I really like Naina, just from that one update, wow!
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As soon as I got the "1 New Private Message" msg...I had hurriedly opened and read the 44th Chapter 😃. I started commenting thinking Yeh I'm gonna b da first to comment. 😊 I finish writing and I click Send. Just Then ...Poof! & LIGHTS OUT! ...

Oh Well... Hah I'm boring u wid my Tragic 😆 The Chapters were all pretty Nice. I think now, compared to my previous balanced position, I go for Rohan 😛 Poor Naina...Must hav been embarassing for her. She just wanted sumbody who was true to her - n was attracted to her heart's buty. 😔 Not just the physical n wealthy her. I pity her alot. & so do I pity Sharan. But well Now itz Rohan...❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
I feel bad for Naina...she seems to be a nice girl...

Hey Dolphin why are you making all of them so confusing...

already Kits was little confused abt her relation with Sharan and Rohan... and then she realized that she loves rohan...and then rohan was also in love... then you make Sharan all sweet sweet... then now Naina... why????

I dont want to turn into a diabetic patient with all these sweetness...

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