FF:Mehrbaan saayein(chapter6,page7) - Page 5

hey Rubal dear realy nice up date, wow Avi got married to Arpi at last, happy for them n even happy with Sonali , chalo ladki ne ek kaam to acha kiya haha,

n i m not surprised with Avi;s behavior, may b he knows about RV that's y he is behaving like that.

will wait for ur next up date sweety.

chapter6

Avdesh's mood was off,he was sitting in the front seat.Arpita was crying in the back seat,whiile Mohit was driving.Avdesh saw Arpita crying ,through the car mirror.Why the hell she is like a school girl,thought Avdesh.

Mohit: Par kyun bhai?

Mohit stooped the car.

Avdesh:tu bahar nikal ,mujhe Arpita se kuch baat karni hai

Avdesh: nahi Mohit,tu bahar nikal mujhe abhi baat karni hai

avdesh:arpita...pause... main jaanta hoon ,jo hua wo accha nahi tha.Par ab yehi sach hai ke tu meri patni hai,aur ab rone se koi fayyada nahi hai.chup ho ja

Avdesh :Arpita main tujhse baat kar raha hoon,ab is sab mein meri kya galti hai

Avdesh: (in an angry voice)Kya theek hota,tujhe court ne notice bheja tha ,ke teri behen pehle kidnap ho jayi gi aur 2 ghante baad wapas aayegi.Zindagi mein sab kuch hamare hisaab se nahi ho sakta.Aur tu Ro kyun rahi hai ,ab to teri behen bhi wapas aa gayi hai

avdesh :tu andhi hai,dekha nahi wo aadmi usse shaadi ke liye pooch raha tha

Avdesh: o hello,main tere ghar walon ko tujhse zyaada acchi tarah se jaanta hoon,isiliye to tu yahan par hai

Avdesh:Matlab yeh ki tera sadhu baap ne...

avdesh:Haan ,tere Pita samajhdaar insaan hai,wo teri behen ki shaadi zaroor kara denge... us bhale insaan se

Avdesh:teri behen pakka maan jaye gi

avdesh:(smiled little)Kyun ke wo teri tarah aansoon bahane waalon mein se nahi hai,apne aanso ponch aur chehre pe hansi laa ,Daayi maa tujhe dekh kar khush hongi

avdesh:Tu apna Dimaag itna mat chalaya kar

avdesh:to chal rahe hain na apne ghar

Suddenly mohit knocked on the window and said he is coming.

Mohit: Main radio on karta hoon,ab apni bhabhi ka mood bhi theek lag raha hai

Saraswati ye tera ghar hai mera ghar,

nahi nahi ye tera ghar hai mera ghar,

kis ne ghar yeh diya diya hai,

kis ne pakka kiya kiya..(avdesh was smilimg)

(arpita was looking outside the window,trying hard not to look at dutta)

aisa kaise huya huya hai

sab kuch tujhko pata pata

main bhi jaanu tu bhi jaane jaane jaana

Mohit was first enjoying but then felt embarassed because her newly married bhabhi was also in the car and he thought after that fiasco happened he shouldn't have put the radio on ,So he swithched off the radio.

avdesh: Tune Daayi maa ko bata diya ,meri aur arpita ki shaadi ke baare mein

avdesh:tujhe kisne kaha ,main ispe chila raha tha

Mohit:kya avdesh main tujhe bachpan se jaanta hoon,choti choti baat par to tu gussa karta hai,aur aaj itna bada ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,chalo chodo,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

mohit: Areh ,bhabhi ,aap bolti bhi hai ,aacha hai maine aapko kam bolte huye dekha hai.Aap kya pooch rahi thi,wo kya hai aapki volume kuch zayaada hi kam hai

avdesh: Avi tune kuch kaha kya?

arpita:(a little bit louder) maine poocha Rajgarh kitni door hai?

Arpita was getting nervous,because avdesh's daayi maa seemed to be very nice lady but again she was expecting sonali dii as her Daughter in law,Hey bhagwaan ab kya hoga arpita said in her heart.They reached the big haveli ,it was huge ,more bigger than Raj Mahal .Raj Mahal was alike a old Mahal's but this Mansion was looking new like not so old ,There were so many cars ,the garden was so beatifull.Arpita was feeling good entring the Haveli.

Daayi maa:Avdesh aaj tune mere sapna poora diya,kitni sundar bahu laya hai is ghar mein,hum bohut khush hai.

Daayi maa: yeh kya bol raha avdesh ,abhi bahu ghar aayi hai aur tu jaane ki baat kar raha hai

Arpita was looking at avdesh.

Avdesh left the haveli

Mohit:(to make arpita feel comfortable)bhabhi chodiye avdesh ki to aaddat aise hi sadda hua mooh lekar rehne ki,aaye main aapko poora ghar dikhata hoon

Daayi took arpita with her in a big room that was devided into two parts.In first part there was sofa and near it a big balcony.In the 2 part ,there was a bed and a door to bathroom.

In Raj Mahal

Rv:ji ,meri apni powder ki factory hai,usi maamle mein yahan aaya tha

Dadi maa:Areh tum log use arram karne doge ya nahi

Now sonali and RV were alone in their room.

RV:main thodi der ke liye dar gaya tha

RV:tumhara plan accha tha

Rv:tumne khhud hi to bola tum arpita ko pasand nahi karti

RV:chodo in sab ko baaton ko aur yeh batao,mumbai wapas kab chalna hai

RV:exactly kitne din?

Raja Sahib's room

Rani maa:arpita ke baare mein,uski shaadi jis tara se huyi...

Rani maa:Accha insaan hai,dekha nahi aapne kaise baat kar raha tha

Rani maa: maine arpita ko bola pahunch kar caal karne ke liye

Rani maa:nahi ,bas yeh jaan ne ke liye wo wohan theek ho.pata nahi kaisa ghar hoga avdesh ka,kaise log honge...

Rani maa:uske savbhaav se toh nahi lagta

Rani maa:ji ,Ranvijay bhi accha lagta hai

hmmm.

Heyyy Rubal🤗🤗

sorry to unres it soo late

isnt Avi bit rude to Arpi...He shld give her some time😳


Poor Arpi is really feeling uncomfortable

Dont Wry..Avi will soon fall in love ith her😳


Update was Fab Rubal👏👏👏

That song😆


Love ya

Hugs to you😳

Great update Rubal, Poor Arpi is feeling awkward due to her unexpected marriage. Avi should give her a break, the girl was forced to get married. Wow, Avi leaves his wife for some business trip. Arpi will begin her life as a bahu without her husband. I knew that Sonali planned all of this, she thinks Arpi is in trouble because of her marriage. However, I know that this mistake is the best thing that ever happened to Arpi. Avi will come around and realize how special Arpi is. Rani Ma thinks RV is a better SIL, she will be shocked to find out RV and Sonali's true faces. I just hope Avi comes back from his meeting very soon.

its awesome rubal ...

Hye rubal,
readed all the parts of your ff,
its a bit different and nice.

May be when everyone including avi's dai maa will know about the prediction on Arpita's birth,dat she is not good and all dont know what will happen then.

Sonali and rv are realy acting very smart.
Congrates on ur first ff.

Rubal !!!!!!!🤗🤗

Sorry..I am so late in reading ur FF...I was having exms..

First of all congratulations for ur first FF..🥳🥳


I read all the parts...& must say I am in love with ur FF.

The story is very interesting...I love all the characters..

Awesome..& brilliant work !!👏👏

Am so eager to read next...

Plzz update soon..😳😳