CHERISHED LOVE...A 'MAYUR OS'(part4 pg6)

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avani sharma

@avani_mayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

HEY GUYS!!!! this is my first attempt to rite an OS ...plz 4give 4 any mistakes...😊

CHARACTERS...

"GIRLS"

nupur bhushan
gunjan bhushan
dia bhushan
christie joseph(CJ)

"BOYS"

samrat sharma
mayank sharma
uday bhushan
benjamin swami

"PARENTS"

shashi bhushan
sugandh bhushan

sameer sharma
shilpa sharma

raviendra swami
ratna swami

STORY UNFOLDS...

Its a beautiful december morning...a cool breeze is blowing...a sheet of snow is covering the greeny vegetation...birds are chirping n welcoming now-a -days rarely visible sun...its a perfect morning...
in such baeutiful atmosphere 3 girls are sleeping in their room peacefully n r having sweet dreams that no one knws abt...their room is painted in different shades of pink,white,cream...their beds r however of lavender colour...teddys, dolls, other soft toys r embracing their beds...freshly potted flowers r spreading their fragnance everywhere in the room...n suddenly...

NUPS!!!!! GUNJI!!!!! DIA!!!!! a loud voice is heard along with banging up of door...!!! gunjan stirs up n says in a sleepy voice..'kya hai UDAY bhaiya??? v r sleeping!!!!!😡 '

UDAY-'Gunji its 8am already..get up fast or u will miss the break fast n get a good scolding from mom!!!😲'...hearing this gunjan sees the clock n wakes up..she tries to wake up her other two elder sisters nupur n dia who still r in deep sleep..

GUNJAN-' utho nupsi di!!! 8 baj gaye hain. mom bula rahi hain. dia di utho plz...!!'

Dia stirs makes some noises abt y to wake up early even on holidays but Nupur is still fast asleep...

Dia n gunjan get out of their beds n go to washrooms to freshen up🥱.

after 10 minutes..
Dia n gunjan come out of their respective washrooms n find nupur still sleeping.

GUNJAN-' di ko uthane ka purana tareeka hi apnana padega!! kyun di??'

DIA-' rite!! ye aise nahi uthne waali!!!!..😉.'
they together fetch a jar of water n pour on nupur..n shout "GOOD MORNING NUPS!!!!!"
Nupur gets up getting shocked😲😲 n then seeing her sisters puts up a sad😔 face n says "kya yaar di aap aur gunji tu!!! kyun uthaya mujhe?? pata hai main kitna achacha sapna dekh rahi thi...mera DREAM BOY bas mujhe apna face dikhane waala hi tha...aur tabhi pata nahi kahan se aap logon ne poore sapne pe paani daal diya!😔😔...
GUNJAN-" haan haan!!! aap aur apka dream boy pichle 21yrs se woh aapke sapnon mein aa raha hai par aaj tak shakal nahi dikhai usne!!😃 toh aaj aaapke dreams mein kaise dikhata??😉"

NUPUR-"gunji ki bachi!!! ruk tu!!! abhi bata ti hun tujhe!! mere dream boy ka mazak bana rahi hai!!!😡"
both of them start running in the room...then Dia interferes n shouts..
DIA-" STOP IT U TWO!!!...roz ka tum dono ka yahi hai...chalo Nups jaldi se fresh ho jao..we all have to get ready..OMG!!! its already 8:25😲...mom toh maar dalegi...chalo jaldi karo!!!"
the trio gets ready..DIA is wearing a white pullover n a denim jeans,NUPS is wearing a light pink jacket n white top over blue jeans.GUNJAN is wearing a green pullover n long skirt. they looking gorgeus... they 2gether enter the dinning room n greet their family.

in dinning room..."good morning mom!!"-the trio shouts together n hug their mom from behind.
MOM-"good morning!! arey waah!! aaj toh ek ki awaaz lagane mein he aa gaye..kya baat hai???"

NUPUR-"kuch nahi mom! aaj hum logon ne socha ki aap ko surprise kar dein...toh kaisa laga??"

MOM-"achacha tha...chalo ab jaldi se break fast kar lo bcoz then i hv a surprise 4 u!!"

"SACHI MOM!!!" ALL SHOUTED!!!
MOM-"haan...but first finish ur breakfast."

all set down 4 breakfast. Uday was already eating it. Gunjan came n sat next to him n said in a low voice "thanx bhaiya" Uday was munching sandwiches so just nodded in rply..

after breakfast all were eagerly waiting 4 their mom to tell abt the surprise jst then their dad came out from his study n stood near their mother... All was quiet...

Breaking the silence their dad said " i n ur mom hv decided to take u all on a trip to LONDON!!!"..after a moment of silence a blast of "HURRAY!!!" was being heard...

all of them hugged their parents and showered them with questions. "when? hw? y? 4 hw long?"...stepping a side shashi bhushan said " i hv decided it becoz v all hvnt gone out as a family 4m a vry long time. n v r leaving day after 2mrw..so all ur queiries answered???"

4 of them nodded n hugged their parents once more...

MOM-" ok!! nw hurry up n go 2 ur rooms n start packing!!!"

on hearing this all 4 ran upwards like small children n went to their rooms.

IN TRIOs ROOM...

GUNJAN-" y r u smiling so much di?? (she asked nupur who was smiling in herself) "
NUPUR-" m smiling bcoz i knw i am gonna meet my dream boy on this trip..."
DIA-" hw cud u b so sure nups??"

NUPUR-" i dnt knw di..bt i jst hv this gut feeling..."

GUNJAN-" plz di!! aap toh rehne do!!! aap aur aap ki gut feeling!!😆"

NUPUR-" dekh gunjan plz mera mazak mat bana!"😡

GUNJAN-" theek hai! gussa mat karo!!! mujhe pata hai aapka rajkumar aake aapko le jayega woh bhi bilkul filmy style mein!! kyun Dia di??"😉

DIA-" rite gunji!! hamari nups hai hi itni pyari ki iska rajkumar isse jaldi se aake le jayega!"
NUPUR-" di plz...😳 aur gunji tu dekh lena mera hi nahi tera aur Dia di ka rajkumar bhi humein isi trip pe milega!!😊" mujhe pura yakin hai..!!

so, in this way NUPUR blurted out something which she herself didnt knew wud come true on this trip...she n her sisters didnt knew that their lives wud change after this trip...😊😊

precap-bhushans in LONDON

HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT...SORRY 2 THOSE WHO GOT BORED.. do rply me n post ur comments!!!

INDEX

PART I-PAGE1

CHARACTER SKETCH-PAGE1

PART2-PAGE2

PART3-PAGE3

PART4-PAGE6

Edited by avani_mayur - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Avani
its wonderful start dear

really very nice update
Do cont. it and try to pm me

take care and all d best

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avani sharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

thanx guys for ur support!!! so, here i am again with part 2 of my MAYUR OS...enjoy!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey avni..its really nice..!!😊

cont it ...😊

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avani sharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey guys!! thanx 4 ur support!!! i hv nt given u the character sketch ot the characters so. here it is!!

CHARACTER SKETCH...

"PARENTS"

SHASHI AND SUGANDH BHUSHAN-parents of nups,dia,gunji,uday. shashi is MARKETING HEAD in sharma industries and sugandh is a simple hosewife. both r loving parents n wish gud life 4 their children.

SAMEER AND SHILPA SHARMA-parents of samrat and mayank. owners of sharma industries. caring and loving but strict too.

RAVIENDRA AND RATNA SWAMI-parents of benji. close friends of sharmas. have their own restaurant buisness

"GIRLS"

DIA BHUSHAN-25 yrs old. fashion designer. doing work in Delhi. she is quiet stylish n out going. very causious of her diet n all. loves her family a lot.

NUPUR BHUSHAN-23yrs old. has done MBA in finance from Mumbai.planning to do a job. she is very outspoken,bubbly,chattering and beautiful. she waiting for her prince charming. fav. hobby is dreaming abt her prince and reading romantic novels. loves dancing.attached to her family vry much.

GUNJAN BHUSHAN-21yrs old. doing B.tech from Mumbai. she is shy,innocent,reserved person. her fav. hobby though is teasing nups. but loves her a lot. a very good singer but afraid of stage.

CHRISTIE JOESPH-22yrs old. doing B.tech along with Gunjan. both r close friends.

"BOYS"

BENJAMIN SWAMI- 25yrs old. fondly knw as BENJI. childhood friend of mayank and samrat. quiet outgoing n full on cool person. looking after his family buisness.

MAYANK SHARMA-24yrs old. M.D. in sharma industries. though he is a workoholic, but is a golden person from heart. fondly knw as MAYU wid frnds n HITLER wid staff. he is mature,intelligent, smart,arrogant(bt a little only),cares for his family n belives in lifetime relationships. a good dancer but only few knw abt that.

SAMRAT SHARMA-22yrs old.doing B.tech from Mumbai n is in same college as gunjan but both hv nvr met. very cool, smart,flirty,less interested in studies. a very good guitar player. loves all. a little afraid of mayank but cudn't digest his food widout teasing him.

UDAY BHUSHAN-23yrs old n is twin of nupur. loves food n body building. doing a job in a M.N.C.

SORRY GUYS DUE TO SOME URGENT WORK I HV 2 GO BT WILL WRITE PART 2 SOON...LUV U ALL...

Edited by avani_mayur - 14 years ago

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Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice starting. pls pm me when you update.

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aswathy

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice concept dear..pls continue soon...

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avani sharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 2- BHUSHANS IN LONDON

BHUSHAN's family has arrived in LONDON and they have checked-in in a hotel. they hav got rooms on 3rd floor. they arrived late in the evening so decided to call it a day n went to their rooms.

IN TRIO'S ROOM( I 4got to tell u bt the 3 sisters fondly call themselves TRIO)

Nupur was standing outside in the balcony viewing LONDON in night light n was in deep thoughts. Gunjan saw that n decided to tease her a little as Dia was busy arranging their wardrobe...

gunjan tiptoed to the balcony n hugged nups from behind which caught her by surprise..
G-" kya soch rahi ho di?? apne dream boy ke baare mein??"😛

N-" nahi toh...main toh bas.."

G-" kya di?? bolo!"

N-"kuch nahi gunji...bas soch rahi thi ki apne country se door hum is anjaan desh mein kaise manage karenge??"

G-"kyun di? darr lag raha hai??"

N-" nahi...darr nahi bas thoda ajeeb lag raha hai...mom-dad hain, tum log ho..par phir bhi..."😔

Gunjan got little worried for Nups..so decided to cheer her up...

G-" di..yaad hai yahan par aane se pehle tum ne kya kaha tha??"

N-" kya kaha tha?"😕

G-" yahi ki tumhara rajkumar tumhe yahi par milega!! tum bhool gayi!!"

N-"par is baat ka mere darr se kya lena dena hai??"😕

G-" arey!!! lene dene kaise nahi hai!!! jab tumhara prince charming yahan par hoga toh woh tumhe poori duniya se bacha kar rakhega!! so tension mat lo di..!!!"😉

N-" kya kaha!!! tu meri taang khench rahi hai!! ruk abhi batati hun tujhe!!!
after this nupur and gunjan start running in the room..after some time they got exhausted and decided to go to sleep.

Nupur while lieing in bed started thinking abt her conversation with Gunjan and dozed off to sleep that what her prince charming wud b doing rite now n where he was currently...on the other hand Gunjan and Dia were talking in whispers so not to disturb Nups...all the 3 were unaware that their PRINCE CHARMING were checking-in in the same hotel and had got rooms near their own...DESTINY isn't it ????

in hotel lobby...
Samrat, Mayank ,Benji..were checking-in the hotel and were being directed to their rooms. but only Mayank was listening to wat the manager was saying...Sam and Benji were busy checking out the foreign girls...😃..
Mayank saw wat they were doing and glared at Sam..😡..

M-"SAM!!! agar tumhara important kaam khatam ho gaya ho toh can v move up to our rooms??? i hv a vry important meeting 2mrw..m nt free like u n Benji"

S-"relax bhai! ab main se sab kaam iss umar mein nahi karunga toh kab karunga?"😉

M-"SAM!!!"...

S-" ok ok!!! m going!!! aap bhi na!!!"

meanwhile they reached their rooms..after settling down Sam decided to tease Mayank a little so he said...

S-"bhai...mujhe lagta hai ki mom se baat karni padegi..."

Mayank was bsy wid his laptop nso carelessly asked Sam.."kis baare mein?"

S-"aapki shaadi ke baare mein.."😃

M-"KYA???" 😲

S-" haan kyunki aap hamari baat toh sunte nahi ho..bhabhi ki baat zarur sunoge!!"😉

M-"Sam!!! tu jaanta hai na mujhe se sab bikul pasand nahi hai...!!"

S-"toh aap batao ki aap ko kaisi ladki chahiye??"

M-" theek hai..mujhe ek aisi ladki chahiye jo smart ho, intelligent ho,mere buisness mein meri help kare aur family ka khayal rakhe"😳

S-" bas!!! aur kuch nahi?? aap love marriage karoge ya arranged?? waise mujhe arranged ke chances zayada lag rahe hain...!!!"😆

M-"kyun nahi ho sakti??? love marriage??..aur main in sab ke baare mein abhi nahi sochna chahta...jis mere liye GOD ne chuna hai woh apne aap mere paas aa jayegi...tu tension mat le aur ab so ja!!"

S-"par bhai suno!!!"

but didnt listen to himn switched the lights off...unaware that lights of their lives were sleeping next door n GOD had already choosen girls for them...

Edited by avani_mayur - 14 years ago