CHERISHED LOVE...A 'MAYUR OS'(part4 pg6) - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi lovely os
beautifully written
do pm me next
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice CS
Nupur is dreamy and bubbly and Myank is intelligent and smart...I loved mayur CS..

Wow - so mayur were in same hotel- upur as usual was dreaming abt her prince charming...
loved Gunur and sayank convo..
wonderful update
keep it up

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Posted: 14 years ago
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mindblowing. plz continue soon. I love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Love it!!😃
Plz continue soon😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice..Plz pm me when update😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely OS dear
I loved Both parts
Waiting For Mayur meeting
Cont soon and Plz Pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanx! thanx! thanx!...i love u all n here i m again wid 3rd part of my OS...enjoy...


PART 3...1st MEETING..

The next morning was beautiful as always and 4m TRIO'S room a lot of noises were coming...Nups,Gunji,Dia were getting ready for there site seeing...Nups as always arose late n was getting ready hurriedly...it was already 8:30 n their mom had instructed them to 2 b ready by 8:45...so, she was getting hyper as she was unable 2 find her things..

N-Gunji!!! where did u keep my red turtleneck??

G-(from washroom) i kept it in upper drawer of almirah!!!

DIA entered the room. she was wearing a cream kashmere pullover, short skirt and knee length boots...as usual she was looking stylish n hot!

D-Nups!!! u havnt got ready yet?? we hav 2 leave in15 min.!! wat r u doing!!..??

N-di! plz nw u also don't start!! m already tensed...

D-y cant u get up early?? n save all this hotch-potch!

N-plz di! i'll get ready in 10 min.

Gunjan came out of washroom..she was wearing a light pink pullover and jeans n with little makeup she was looking beautiful n gorgeous...

N-di..aap aur Gunji chalo n tell mom n dad that i'll cme in 7 minutes..pakka!!

G-theek hai di..main aur dia di chalte hain aap bhi jaldi se aa jao. k?

N-k!!! plz mom ko samjha lena!!...

D-k.. but come fast...

Dia and Gunjan went out n Nupur went to get ready.

IN BOY'S ROOM

Samrat and Benji r continously staring at the mirror n admiring themselves..

S-sam! tu intna handsome kaise ho sakta hai?? its nt rite!!😉

B-oh hello!! m also smart!! dnt 4get me!! girls stare at me also!!

S-ya benji! u r also smart bt i had hav more girl friends then u so m d BEST!!😃

B-k..but it was bcoz of me only that u got their phone no.!!

S-yeah thats true! thats y v r a great team!!

Just then Mayank came out of the washroom n started getting ready as he had a meeting at 9:00. n it was already 8:40...so he started getting ready.

after sometime...

S-wow bhai!! u looking great!! aisa lag raha hai that u r going 4 a date rather than a meeting!!😊

Mayank was wearing a white sweater along wid black coat n jeans. he was looking completely...SEXY(sorry 4 language bt cudnt control after visualizing Mayank in such a dress)

M- Sam..tu aur tere faltu ki baatein!! achacha m getting late..so m going!! wats ur plan..?

S-abhi toh me n Benji r here only bt r planning to go out at around 10-10:30

M-k..bt text me abt where ever u r going..if i becum free.. i'll join u for lunch.

B-thats a gr8 idea Mayank. v wil definetly text u!😊

S- ya bhai..dnt worry n bst of luck 4 ur meeting..!!😊

M-thanx Sam!! ok bye!!😊

wid this Mayank left his room..and started going 2wards lift.

on the other side Nups had gotten ready...she was wearing a red turtle neck sweater n black low waist jeans n high heeled boots...she didnt like a lot of make up so had just put on kajjal n lipgloss. she was looking heart breakingly beautiful. to add more to her beauty she had left her long hairs which were of shades of black n brown open...they were caresing her face adoringly...
she then locked her room n started going 2wards the lift...

Nupur reached near the lift but found it temporarily out of service...so as she was already late she started going down through stairs...suddenly she tripped over sumthing n was abt to fall...she closed her eyes bcoz of fear... she didnt knw bt 4m sumwhere a pair of strong arms got wrappred around her waist n prevented her 4m falling...😊

Nupur had closed her eyes to avoid seeing her fall bt she opened them now to c herself securly in arms of a handsome guy...she jst kept looking at her saviour..😳

Mayank was hurriedly descending down when he had seen the girl in front of him tripping over..he himself didnt knew 4m where the impulse came 4m but nxt moment he was holding her waist n had prevented her from falling...he then looked at the face of the girl he jst nw saved...

Mayank had nvr imagined sum1 more beautiful..a perfect glowing face wid big beautiful eyes...perfect nose, perfect lips n most importantly the innocence on it...he cudn't help looking at her...beauty in its true form...😳

both were lost in each other when suddenly sum1 bumped into them n brought them to their senses. Mayank suddenly realized where he was n as he was getting late he said to her.."if u hav enjoyed this then can u plz stand up str8?? m getting late!"

Nupur also realized that she was in arms of a stranger so started to get up..

N-i m getting up! n who said that i was enjoying myself??

M-i said bcoz u were nt making any move to get up..

N-hello!! it was u who didnt let go off me!!

M-wat?? r u mad or sumthing?? y wud i nt let u go??

N-i dnt knw!! possibly bcoz m looking beautiful😊

M-who told u that u were beautiful?? ha ha!! wat a joke!!😆

N-i need no body to tell me. i knw it myself!!😡

M-(laughing)😆😆 k!! k!!! i undrstand!!

N-wat do u understand??😕

M-it happens!! dnt worry!! when people r in initial state of madness they start imagining things!!

N-hw dare u call me mad!!😡 u r an idiot urself!!😡

M-u called me an idiot!!

N-yes i did!! wat wud u do?? m nt afraid of boys like u!!

M-u!!😡 m nt going to leave u like this!! u insulted me!!

N-yes i did!! so wat??

M-nw things r getting out of control!!

N-m also nt going anywhere n wil c wat can u do??

b4 anything more cud happen, DIA came looking 4 Nups n called her out from bottom of stairs...n at the same time Mayank's mobile buzzed up...

N-bcoz of u i got late!!

M-i was also going 4 a meeting n got late bcoz of u!!

N-i hope i nvr evr c u again!!😡

M-same here!! i never want 2 even think abt 2day!!😡

wid this both of them parted ways...but didnt knew that 4m nw onwards they had 2 go together...bcoz GOD had sumthing different planned for them...


so guys i hav written the part 3...hopefully wil write part 4 soon...bye!! n dnt 4get to leave ur comments!!


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Edited by avani_mayur - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
hey dear, pls edit the title every time you update mentioning the chapterno. and page no. otherwise people wont know that you've updated.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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why did nt u pm me? plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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just read all.the three..parts..very very nice..ff...
please pm me..
i would love to... read ,more..parts.. and updates...

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