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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ginny09

loved the part :)

cont soon :)



thanks a lot dear...😊


Originally posted by: -moona-

the Promise was BeauTiFul..Nice Part



thanks alot dear...😃
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thnaks ...😊
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PART 7:

M: I promise nupur mai tumhay aaj k baad kabhi akela nai choro ga.kabhi nai''.will give u loads of happiness'''thts my promise to my love and to my life'''he lean down and kissed on her forehead'''


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Shilpa aunte: nupur uthjao kitna soogi''.12 bajh rahayi hai..

N: uth rahi hu mom'bas 2 min''..

S.A: kab se 2 min ker rahi hu'' tiyari nai kerni hai reception ki'..

Nupur abruptly got up from bed and muttered'reception'..??? dia ki shadi hugayei ''😔

Vo chali gayei mjhey chor k'''her eyes filled with tears''.😭

S.A: kiya soch rahi hu nupur?

N: kch nai mom'.removed her tears''.thn went to washroom to revive herself''

Everyone was waiting for nupur at lunch''

Dadi: kaha reh gayei nupur'.ek tu yeh ladki''kab apni zidariyoo ko samjhyei gii'.mai tu kehti hu k aab iss k liyei bhi aacha sa ladka dhoond k shadi kerdoo''

S.A: waisey maa jii ap sahi keh rahi hai ''..ab tu kher se dia bhi apnai ghr ki hugayei hai''.

Dad: itni jaldi kiya hai aap logo ko ''.abi kaun se uss koi omer nikli ja rahai hia'''jab kismet huga tu hujayei gii'..

Dadi: tu nai hi itna saar pai bithaya hua hai ussko''mai keh rahi hu tujhey kal ko kch hugaya na tu hmay mat kehna phr'''

Dad: shubh shubh bolo maa ji kaise baatai ker rahai hai ap''.mjhey apni beti pai pura bharoosa hai''..

Mean while nupur arrive..

N: mera wait huraha hai''she excitedly said'.

Dadi: aur kaun mahaa rani hai iss ghr mai jis ka wait karay gai hum''.keh rahi hu nupur sudhar lai khud ko''.

N: sudhri hui tu hu dadi''.aab kiya galay mai label laga k ghoomo'..nupur bhusshan sudhri hui hai''..pls. note'''.😆

Dadi: daikho zaraa kaise bolti hai badoo k samnay''..tooba tooba''hmaray zamany mai tu baap k aagay bolna tu dur ki baat un k ankhoo mai daikh k baat nai kertai thei '''.itni sharam hoti thei'''aur aaj kal k bachayai''''..tooba hai'''.

N: dadi vo aap ka zamana tha yeh hmara hai''..aur aaj kal ki generation apna rite laina janti hai''😊'..

Dadi: soch liya maine mai terei liyei aaj hi se ladka dhoonda shroo kerdoo gi''.

Nupur was drinking whn she choked'..

N: maine shadi nai kerni'..keh diya hai maine'''annoyed

Dadi: teray buhat baat maan lei''aab aur nai''.

Nupur smiled and went to dadi''enclose her arms around her neck'''

N: dadi kiya ap mjhey se tang agayei hai''..kiya mai itni buri hu''..crying like face''.aagar aisa hai tu theik hai jaisa aap kahayei gi waisa karoo gii'''..maine soocha tha k koi aur samjhey na samjhey par meri dadi mjhey zaror samjhey gii''''par mai ghlaat thei''😭

She knew tht her dadi is very mch emotional.she easily caught by her'..

Dadi: hayei hayei meri bachii''samnay aa meray''..tumjhey kis nai kaha k mai tujhey samjhtei nai'..

Meri tu jaan hai tu'..par beta shadi tu ek na ek din kerni hai na''

N: theik hai dadi'''jaisa aap kahey ''.maine tu socha tha k ap ki wish puri karoo gi aur dance classes mai admission loo gii ''aur ap meray sath jaya karoo gi but ap tu'..she praising herself..wah nupur kiya demagh paya hai tu nai''u r too gud'''👏

Everyone was surprised'

S.A: wht r u saying nupur''.? Dance classes''..dadi ki wish'''.wht is going on'''..?

N: yes mom'''.maine dadi ki cupboard search ki thei mjhey uss mai se raikha ji, heema malni ji ki pics aur sath ghoogroo bhi milay thei'''..q dadi''..winked'.mai sahi keh rahi hona''

Dadi was hell embarrassed'.

Dad: maa ji kiya keh rahi hai nupur''.

Dadi: tu nai meri almarii( cupboard) kis ki ijazat se daikhii'''.

N: dadi pls baat mat badloo'batao na''ap q itna shirminda hurahi hai''suppressed her smile'..but she knows how she controlled herself'''

Dadi: mai q honai lagi shirminda.teerai moo mai khak''.mjhey shadi k baad shok hua tha jawani ka shok tha jab tera baap bahaer padhnai chala gaya tha.terai dada ji bhi ghr nai hotai thei tu mai tv daikh k time guzarti thei''..issi shok mai maine ghoogroo liyi thei.but teri dada jii nai kabhi permission nai dei''''😔

N: tu theik haina''aab se mai apki wish puri karoo gi'''..magar aab tu meri shadi hugayei gi'''sorry dadi aap ki wish mai apni beti se puri karao gii''..

But dadi m sorry again''.pata nai tab bhi ap ki wish puri hu na hu''

Dadi q nai hugi''?

N: dadi jii''.zindgi ka tu pata nai hota tha''..kiya pata ap'''.supressed smile

Dadi: hayei hayei'''.daikha tu nai apni beti ko'iss ka bas chalay tu mjhey aj hi maar dai''teray dada jii aaj hai acha ha''nai tu vo bardast nai kertai''

N: dance ko na'''???vohi tu mei kehna chati hu k dada ji aagar hotai tu vo kabhi bardast nai kertai k unki begum dance classes mai ajeyi''major attack aajata unko''..🤣'

Dadi: daikh nupur khabardar tu apnai dada jii ko hmaray bech layei tu'..baat badalnai ki koshish na ker''..

N: hmmm''dadi''.possessive''ohh hooo'kiya piyar hai'.wah wah''.dadi smiled'..uff 'kiya sharam hai''..🤣 🤣

Dad: controlled himself''..nupur'.behave''.lol''

Aaray dadi mai tu mazak ker rahi thei''..she huged her''.ap u meri sab se piyari dadi hu''kissed her''.

Dadi: tu mai kaun sa serious thei mai bhi tu mazak ker rahi thei'..tu dance class mai admission lai phir mai teray sath jaya karoo gi''

S.A and nupur dad was amazed''.

Dad: maa yeh ap kiya keh rahi hai'''.aur nupur ki shadi''.??

Dadi: aaray abhi bachi ki omer hi kia hai'hujayei gi sahadi'''she winked at nupur''..

Nupur shouted'''..dadi'''..u r the sweetest , janu dadi in this whole world '''she tightly huged her''.

Dadi: hayei mera saans nai arahi ''.chor mjhey''..

N: mai ap ko kch nai honai do gi abb''.

Every one burst out in to laughter''..

N: I love u dadi''.

Dadi: lub u'.

N: lub u nai dadi ..love u'''.🤣

Dadi: haa bhai samjh tu agaya nai'''.angraiz(foreighner) bani phirti hai''.😆''

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Reception:

Everyone was getting ready for the reception. Whn nupur received a courier.she was quite surprised as there is no name mentioned on it'

N: kaun husakta hai''? She opened it and stunned''she found a beautiful white gown, with silver bracelet & silver long earings.it was the same dress she wanted to buy whn she went for the shopping with mayank. She was more thn happy but also curious to know who send this'.

She found a note attached on it'.. she opened it;

Hi Patakhaa,

Surprised!!...i knew u would be surprised to see this''actually whn I saw ur eagerness and excitement for this dress at mall I couldn't stop myself and decided to gift u.

So here it is ur fav dress'.hope u liked it'I want to see ur happiness nupur in any case'..and I can do anythg to make u happy''..now shut ur mouth nupur'kch chala gayei ga.lol'

( nupur was surprised to the top and her mouth was hang open''shut her mouth'..yeh kharoos'pata nai isi kaise pata chal jata hai''J)

I knw u r thinking tht y m doing this all for u'rite? Nupur nodded''

Well u got to know tonight..there is a surprise waiting for u miss patakhaa'..i want u wear this white dress'''.cant wait to see u in this dress'.cum soon'.

Yours monkey, kharoos😉

Nupur has becum really confused''she don't understand her own feelings''

N: yeh kiya huraha hai? Y am feeling so different''us ka note padh k, uska gift daikh k y m reacting soo weird''..? whts going on with me'''..

M not wearing this dress'..not at all''..

Dad: nupur beta we r getting late''hurry up''..v r waiting for u''.

N: m ready dad'..lets go''.

S.A: nupur yeh tu nai kab liya''?

N: mom yeh dress mjhey meri frnd nai diya tha''..confused'..

Dad: chaloo bhai late hura ha hai''..

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Whn they reached at hall''all are astounded at the decorations.Theme was black and white. Stage was filled with white flowers along with net drapes'

M: Namaste'..

S.A: Namaste beta''kaisey hu'..?

M: mai theik hu ''.looked at nupur'.ap kaisey hai miss patakhaa''.?? smiled

Mayank glimpse making her confused''m fine'.

M: app log bethyei na''.

Nupur was abt to move whn he hold her''.ap kaha chali miss patakhaa''she felt a strong shivering''..mai vo'.leave my hand''..angry''..wht r u trying to do''.?

M: well mai kiya kerna chata hu vo tu tumhay aj maloom hu hi jayei ga'''😉

N: oh hello''..achai se janti hu tumhari harkatoo ko'''itni aasani se tumharay baato mai nai aani wali'''.

M: vo tu mjhey bhi malom hai k tum itni asani se mania wali nai hu..iss liyei tu aj'''he stoped''..

N: issliyei tu aj kiya''?

M: nothing''.waise I must say u looking gorgeous today''..thanks for wearing ths dress nupur'''

N: yeh maine tumharay kehnai pai nai pehna.iss khush fehmi mat rehna '''vo tu mera dress kharab hugaya tu yeh pehena para jaldi mai'''.

Mayank smiled and left''

N: y he is behaving so differently today'..confused'''anyway I don't care''she met jia''

dia: u lookin awesome nupur''.oh god''..

N: thanks jia''

M: waisy thanks mjhey kehna chayei coz yeh meri choice hia'''winked'..q miss patakhaa''..

Nupur gave him angry look''

Aadi: tu baat yaha tak puhanch ayei''.ahem ahem''..

N: aisei koi baat nai hai''.

dia: tu phir kaisey baat hai'''? 😊'

N: pls dia''..

M: waisey I have a surprise for both of u''.

N: lagta hai aaj iss nai puri dunya ko surprise dainai kai socha hai''.( in a low tone)

Mayank took out an envelope and pass it on to aadi'''.

Aadi: whts this'''?

M: khud daikh lai'''

Aadi open it and surprised to see two ticketes of Malaysia''

M: yeh tum dono ka honey moon gift hai .meray aur nupur ki taraf se'''he smiled''.rite nupur''?

N: nupur shocked to see this as this wasnt planed by thm''..she just noded''

Jia huged both of them '''..

Aadi: thanks yar''..this is the bestest gift of our lives'''..

M: aab aachay se enjoy kerna aur tujhey pata hi waha ek jagah hai jaha he winked at aaadi''jia saw thm''..

dia: yeh kia huraha hai aur kiya chupaya raha hai mjhse'''

Aadi: kch nai darling''.jab jayei gain a tut um khud samjh jao gii''.

All are burst into laughter '''..nupur still lost sumwhere''..

M: I know nupur tum kaha gum hu aur kiya soch rahi hu'''.m also desperately waiting for tht moment'''he smiled'''

Hope u like it''.. 😉

Edited by drmaha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely part...can't wait for the surprise...cont soon please...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
he's going to confess isnt he? omg! its gonna be so exciting! gr8 update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
ye aapne Dia ko Jia kyun bana diya??😕 update likhte waqt mere baaremein soch rahe the kya??🤣🤣

I "lub"-d the update😉😆🤣
Mayank is going to propose, haina??😍😳

continue soon!!🤗

~jiya😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi maha
its a beautiful update dear
veryyy nice
hehehehehe nupur is too smart yaar
she knw well how to manofy dadi
by GOD drama queen kitna drama karte hai

u know i loved d name tha was given by mayk to nuour- pathaka...lol

loved mayus surprise gift... hehehehe nupur ne decide kya na- ko wo ye nehi pehenegi...pher???????

oye something is going on nups mind- kuch badal rahe hai


lovely update sweetu...
Do cont. it


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: --jiya--

ye aapne Dia ko Jia kyun bana diya??😕 update likhte waqt mere baaremein soch rahe the kya??🤣🤣


I "lub"-d the update😉😆🤣
Mayank is going to propose, haina??😍😳

continue soon!!🤗

~jiya😆


@Bold:maha what is this??? tumhare + jiya ki biz kya chal rahe hai
chi chi sudhar jao...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovly update dear
waiting for the next part...cont soon
thanks for the pm

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