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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

i have read this poem before & it was not on IF!😕

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Manal Ali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Sharmila im sorry buh i had to do this !!

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Anywys When i read this poem i felt i read it somewhere 😕 ! n thn i remember this is where i read it !!

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My Love Whispers
By Jessica Hines

Listen to the sunset,
Can you hear its quiet sigh?
Listen, the sun is falling,
Watch it toning down the sky.

Soon darkness shall surround me,
Though twinkling stars will dare smile through,
While you are far away from me,
They'll frown a humble hue.And as the sunset spreads its colors,
Horizons of gold and red,
I lie here all too much alone,
In this great, vast chilling bed...

For my world has stopped revolving,
'Til you return, time's standing still,
And the cold has settled 'round me,
With its stinging, breathless chill.

But my love for you keeps growing,
Standing fast to fight the cold,
Reminds me of your body's warmth,
And the story of love, untold.

So listen to the sunset,
Look up, hear its quiet sigh,
Though' we're apart these lonely nights,
My love whispers across the sky.

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And now this is urs !!

Sunset's Whisper

Listen to the sunset

Can you hear its quiet sigh?

Listen the sun's falling;

Watch it toning down the sky

Soon Darkenss shall surround me

Tho' twinkling stars will dare smile through

While you are far away from me

They'll frown a humble hue

And as the sunset spread its colors

Horizons of gold and red

I lie here all too much alone

In this great, vast chilling bed

For my world has stopped revolving

Till you return, Time's Standing still

And the cold has settled around me

With its stinging breathless chill

But my love for you keeps growing

Standing fast to fight the cold

Reminds me of your body's warmth

And the story of love untold

So listen to the sunset

Look up hear its quiet sigh

Tho' we're apart these lonely nights

My love whispers across the sky.

all u did was changed the name !!

hmm last time i checked this was called 'Plagrized' !!

if u dnt believe check the Poem here

https://www.mydearvalentine.com/love/poems/sweet-love-poems.html

Im Sorry i hurt ur feelings buh i cant take any1 takin any1's wrk n give NO CREDIT !

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Hey.. I really dono if I should say this, cause, I posted this poem a few months ago itself! I posted it in another thread in writer's topic... I'll be giving you a link if you want... but I must say.. the poems are similar! I'm seriously shocked! in fact they are the same! Yes, if i have read it some where and if this where i got the idea from.. then it shud be considered copying! but I haven't even been to this site before! 😲

Wait... I'll check again!

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439538

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Sharmila hun i quite shocked myself, This was plain plagarism.And there is no way you can just come with the words of her poem same to same, it impossible.

This poem is not only on that site its all over the net, just type in the name on google and it'll come up, i'm sure you read it.

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BIackSwan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: -Sharmila-

thanks a million Di! 🤗
Its always these words of yours that push me to write more and better!
I'm planning to post my OSes here one by one, you've already them, the others haven't so.. wanted to post them! You think that'll be good?

Thanks again for the comment!
Love you endless!

Muaaahhhxxx!

wow! seriously?!?!?! dats aaawesome!!! do post all ur os's here... im sure they'l love dem😃

im gonna read dem all over again!!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

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https://peperonity.com/go/sites/mview/sweetlovepoems/33407954

https://www.marthas-vineyard-vacation-tips.com/sweet-love-poems.html

https://www.romancelovepoems.com/mylovewhispers.htm

sharmila this poem is everywhere and you possible say a established writer plagarized you? You took credit for someone elses work and that is entirely wrong on your part, and deciving your friends like this its not right.

And your other Poem is plagarized also! I can't believe it, trust crumbles within seconds sharmila you ought to consider your actions wisely, i'm very hurt and dissappointed though i have know you for a little time its still makes me sad.

&& if you were right on your part, lets suppose these poems were entirely ur creation than u wouldn't have edited without a fight, its only the guilty mind that scrambles when push comes to shove. I hope you learn from this write from your own heart, whether good or bad, its your and your pride will lie in it.

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Manal Ali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Sharmila u wrote ur poem months back ! where the actual poem is years old 😕 !! hmm so the writter plagarized ur poem 😲 ?

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Manal Ali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: -Sharmila-
Will post it again, after I have checked the link given by Manal and only if it dates after my earlier post!
Sorry for all the confusion! But looks like I am getting over-inspired! 🤣 Or may be I'm over-inspiring ppl! 😛

Dont get why u edited 😕 !? hmmm my onli question ... why would a famous writter copy ur work 😲 !!? Woow u must be awesome huh 🥱